it was really good considering where you at and how much you have been studying on this stuff....but as always there is more for improvement. The music at times was not that appropiate (for example at the beginning , it seemed like a very small , condensed place but the music was too elaborate , you could have kept it simple with something basey and with a little bit of rythem to build suspense) and during talking (like the part where they are in the bedroom the boy and the girl, the music could have been on a lower volume so it does not distract the viewer from what the subjects on your screen are saying) The fighting was excellent even the sound effects were good and synchronised I hope you dont take this as critisism , it was meant to help you to improve :) It was a really interesting short film and it kept me to watch it till the end, and after all that's what it is all about Keep it up guys :)
Nice Kug !!!!
Wow great film
Thanks, glad you like it! There is the sequel as well if you want to check that out :)
Ok ill check it out
Nice one!
it was really good considering where you at and how much you have been studying on this stuff....but as always there is more for improvement.
The music at times was not that appropiate (for example at the beginning , it seemed like a very small , condensed place but the music was too elaborate , you could have kept it simple with something basey and with a little bit of rythem to build suspense)
and during talking (like the part where they are in the bedroom the boy and the girl, the music could have been on a lower volume so it does not distract the viewer from what the subjects on your screen are saying)
The fighting was excellent even the sound effects were good and synchronised
I hope you dont take this as critisism , it was meant to help you to improve :)
It was a really interesting short film and it kept me to watch it till the end, and after all that's what it is all about
Keep it up guys
:)
Thanks a lot! And we will keep them in mind. We will accept it even if it was criticism. That will help us improve ;) I'm glad you like it!
good stuff :) (y)
Proset Proset.
Daxter. Is the moustache real?
Nope! haha
Thank fucking god.
I look like a really young Sully.