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  • Опубліковано 19 гру 2024

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  • @agnesulijn
    @agnesulijn Рік тому +15

    I think it’s a very well made short horror film. Hat off to the main character! Love his performance!

  • @danthieman7858
    @danthieman7858 Рік тому +11

    I'd box that demon up and take him to the nearest UPS store for a hassle free return and never look back.

  • @vadimc2144
    @vadimc2144 Рік тому +3

    This guy's attitude was the scariest part. Good movie, thank you

  • @marjoriegoodwin9121
    @marjoriegoodwin9121 Рік тому +4

    My favourite part was the tires squealing in the snow! 😂

  • @pennypincher7383
    @pennypincher7383 Рік тому +44

    My mother's house was exactly like this. You would hear footsteps throughout the house after 3am. I told her about it, she didn't believe me. It wasn't until she had a friend stay with her for a year and her friend witnessed the same thing. My mother eventually had the house blessed by a priest inviting friends and family to help with the blessing. It helped because the footsteps stopped. I will never forget the terrifying experience.

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому +10

      Wow, that’s very spooky. I’m glad the footsteps stopped and I hope you’re doing okay.

    • @pennypincher7383
      @pennypincher7383 Рік тому +5

      @EyeComeInPeace2U My mother's house doesn't have an attic. The previous owner, who also built the house, hung himself in the garage.

    • @aivarasz
      @aivarasz 9 місяців тому

      Stop lying 🤥🤥 you can believe your own legend, but don't try to convince anyone. Life is not a short movie.

  • @vegasrocker58
    @vegasrocker58 Рік тому +106

    I watch a lot of horror shorts, It's my favorite genre. I usually don't comment on horror shorts, but I must say the scene where the character gets pulled out of bed was very well done, and original. As a whole its definitely 4.5 stars out of 5. A must watch. 👍

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому +11

      Thank you so much! That shot took a lot of work so your comment means a lot. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

    • @donniegreenway8401
      @donniegreenway8401 Рік тому

      I agree a great scene, but who was the ghost, was he evil, or just didn't know he was dead and didn't like the guy in his house

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому +8

      @@donniegreenway8401 The way I viewed it was that the former owner had passed away in that house, but his spirit was lost and confused. He didn’t even realize he was dead and didn’t take lightly to a new person living there.

    • @barback103
      @barback103 Рік тому

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    • @dolz3112
      @dolz3112 Рік тому

      Wats the actor’s name ?

  • @konstantinoskaragiannis1596
    @konstantinoskaragiannis1596 Рік тому +4

    This is an excellent and very well made short supernatural horror film!

  • @struggleboy2927
    @struggleboy2927 Рік тому +8

    I'm so confused because I didn't understand the ending. He got in an argument with the entity. Got Beat up. Then He was driving wrecklessly down the road.
    I know there's a cold twist because this is such a good one. Can someone please enlighten me. I'm going nuts.

    • @annapapantidou1455
      @annapapantidou1455 Рік тому

      The ghost got the house and the man left the house to save his life!!

    • @struggleboy2927
      @struggleboy2927 Рік тому +4

      @Anna Papantidou Yeah I'm not sure that's all there is to it. That's alot of emphasis on someone just driving away. Why focus so much on the backseat? Why All the intense music as He's driving away? Yeah I think there's a little more to it than that.

    • @annapapantidou1455
      @annapapantidou1455 Рік тому +4

      @@struggleboy2927 I've noticed that too.Probably the ghost was sitting on the back seat of the car!!!!

    • @struggleboy2927
      @struggleboy2927 Рік тому

      @Anna Papantidou Yeah he kept looking back😨😱

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому +6

      @@struggleboy2927 I think I can help. The ending is purposely ambiguous. Holding the shot for so long on the backseat creates a sense of discomfort and tension. The audience is left to decide if the entity is truly in the car or not as the man is forced to leave his home.

  • @Elittarius
    @Elittarius Рік тому +62

    The fact that you managed to scare the audience without actually showing any ghost.

    • @prophetofhorror
      @prophetofhorror Рік тому +5

      Indeed. I was telling the character to not pull the sheet off because he would not see anything, and then it got worse for him.

  • @HorrorGameLibrary
    @HorrorGameLibrary 11 місяців тому +2

    Somehow it is really very Simple and full of Quality! The acting , Atmosphere , Story Everything is Fine! :) Great Job

  • @jamesmccoysr.3595
    @jamesmccoysr.3595 Рік тому +3

    OUTSTANDING!!!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

  • @KAZ132
    @KAZ132 Рік тому +2

    Absolutely loved this.. Great video and very scary.. Thank you for sharing!

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому +1

      Thank you so much Karen!

    • @KAZ132
      @KAZ132 Рік тому

      ​@@menziesproductions7758 I've just subscribed to your ChanneI and looking forward to watching what you have posted.. I'll be doing that today! Many thanks ✨

  • @miclowgunman1987
    @miclowgunman1987 Рік тому +6

    was the blue light in his shirt his mic and they just forgot to tape the led? I thought it was a pacemaker at first and it would come into the story somehow.

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому +3

      The blue light was indeed a mic. My lav mic broke on me on our shooting day and it was unfortunately the only option I had at the time to get clean audio. We taped over the light but it shined right through it. You live and learn.

    • @coletteporee
      @coletteporee Рік тому +2

      hey but we could always say it was a pacemaker now😭

  • @benrumble383
    @benrumble383 Рік тому

    Very, veryyyyy well done/original supernatural thriller, hats off to you guys!!!...

  • @mr.mediocregamer9653
    @mr.mediocregamer9653 Рік тому +18

    Just ask the ghost to either have rent on the table the 1st of every month or at least do the dishes and a few other chores to earn his keep. In this housing market you have to make things work.

  • @jeremiahstraight6301
    @jeremiahstraight6301 Рік тому +1

    My "ENTITY 😶" protects me.....💯

  • @Kryptic1046
    @Kryptic1046 Рік тому +7

    Well-acted and nicely shot.

  • @brianeleary
    @brianeleary Рік тому +10

    I enjoyed watching it instead of getting scared , the fight , the confrontation with the entity was epic 100 % 👍👍👍

    • @kurtweiand7086
      @kurtweiand7086 Рік тому +1

      I bought this house and you know l'm boss! Ain't no hank gonna run me off!

  • @Meteosquad
    @Meteosquad Рік тому +1

    A very good short movie and the aching also good 👍

  • @countryboy39051
    @countryboy39051 Рік тому +7

    I really enjoyed this one! The scene where he got smacked around was very well shot and acted!

  • @poppabearskitchen1769
    @poppabearskitchen1769 Рік тому +2

    Excellent story, thank you.

  • @-Daily.Bible.Verse1
    @-Daily.Bible.Verse1 Рік тому +1

    Keep up the great work !!!!!

  • @SusanNoulton
    @SusanNoulton 10 місяців тому +1

    Wow that was very scarrrry and brilliant acting by the young man fantastic.

  • @bezoticallyyours83
    @bezoticallyyours83 Рік тому +3

    Dang that's a nice house! The acting and camera work are well done.

  • @StumpyJoeTV
    @StumpyJoeTV Рік тому +4

    "Dude, let's try to get some free North Face and Amazon shit!"
    Jokes aside, great job. Had a very pro feel in every aspect.

  • @shashank7208
    @shashank7208 11 місяців тому

    Awesome story 👍
    Wait for more horror content from This channel.

  • @latifabakouri2241
    @latifabakouri2241 Рік тому +10

    The Invisible man like the Movie he was watching in the beginning 😮 good work Amazing 🤩 👏👍

    • @coletteporee
      @coletteporee Рік тому +1

      i know right? awesome work of foreshadowing lol

  • @cherrym6599
    @cherrym6599 Рік тому +2

    I have a ghost inside me ...I dont know where to go and reedem this bad soul ...He use to tortured us since 12 years..He can change the our face hair,body,bones,etc.I got pain in my body since 12 years .....

  • @richardsalley9848
    @richardsalley9848 Рік тому +2

    Hell yeah!
    That was dope.

  • @Kapok-Bush
    @Kapok-Bush Рік тому +6

    I did love it! It's "Paranormal activity" with a more energetical atmosphere, with a tougher dark touch, what makes it be a bit scarier. I like it very much. It could easily become a length film.

  • @krista94official
    @krista94official Рік тому +57

    The only comment I will make is that he’s running while it’s snowing with no jacket just with a hoodie and his chest is exposed! Omg brrrrrr I’m cold 🥶🥶🥶

    • @arbjful
      @arbjful Рік тому +3

      It's bad for the heart

    • @amystewart4865
      @amystewart4865 Рік тому +1

      Thanks for the pre warning lol 😂 no jump scare for me lol

    • @macamarlo6992
      @macamarlo6992 Рік тому

      Aunque no lo crean no hace frio y menos porque hace ejercicio . El frío es cuando se derrite la nieve y se descongelan, tíos, lagos, etc.

    • @briannalovely-hz1pz
      @briannalovely-hz1pz Рік тому

      He'll catch pnemonia

    • @MrBennieagray
      @MrBennieagray Рік тому

      I lived in Minnesota for a few years. I would be out in a t-shirt sometimes. As long as it doesn't get windy and it's only snowing. It feels pretty good. Once a slight breeze comes up. Your nipples get hard and you want to run back inside the house for a Jacket.

  • @shelleypenn7577
    @shelleypenn7577 Рік тому

    Oh my, what a great actor! I’m so impressed with the acting and the psychically acting.👏👏🍿

  • @chaucerparks1713
    @chaucerparks1713 Рік тому

    GOOD HORROR SHORT
    😳Inside the house Ghost = Outside the house Human..🏃😁..💯💯✌

  • @katkelly870
    @katkelly870 Рік тому +2

    Nicely done. Great acting❤

  • @endlessperceptions
    @endlessperceptions Рік тому

    Great production. Very effective acting. I subscribed. Thanks.

  • @dulanyemz29
    @dulanyemz29 Рік тому +6

    Well done in so many aspects I loved it!

  • @nathanpayne9903
    @nathanpayne9903 Рік тому +1

    I love the deliberateness of your backward heel drop to the table with the lamp 😂

  • @ilaanisdead
    @ilaanisdead 7 місяців тому

    7:05 did the priest just say "no wait" LMFAO. so funny

  • @macatron69
    @macatron69 Рік тому

    This was fantastic! Wow!

  • @coletteporee
    @coletteporee Рік тому +16

    fantastic film! you really got some interesting shot comps in here, and your editing skills when it comes to sound design and color grading. awesome job!

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому

      thanks colette! we definitely made sound design and shot composition a priority for this project.

  • @ElizabethMills1955
    @ElizabethMills1955 Рік тому +42

    You made a short horror film without a single cheesy jumpscare. I'm impressed beyond words. Just last week, I'd resolved to stop watching YT horror shorts. In the space of two days, every single horror short I watched ended with a "jumpscare."
    I don't know how some (most?) YT indy "filmmakers" think they're going to rise to fame by presenting a string of "horror" shorts that end with the Big Bad jumping out at the protagonist and/or viewers. JUMPSCARES AREN'T SCARY ANYMORE. The trope has been done to death.
    The end of your video is scary for anyone who has an imagination. The best horror is that which you invent in your own mind. You know that, and that makes you a good filmmaker. I look forward to more of your films.

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому +6

      Thank you so much Elizabeth. We definitely didn’t want to have to rely on cheesy jumpscares to deliver an impact. Thanks for the kind words.

  • @Tater4200
    @Tater4200 Рік тому

    The shot where you zoom by him while he's on the phone. Veddy nice

  • @hazelmadalane2029
    @hazelmadalane2029 Рік тому

    I love the interaction with the priest. Great film

  • @shraddhalodhi2542
    @shraddhalodhi2542 Рік тому +17

    It was just like a full movie in fast forward manner. Starting from buying new house and feeling of someone's presence, then using cameras, consulting priest and finally trying to resolve your problem by Ouija board. 👻

  • @LogacysAquaticLove
    @LogacysAquaticLove Рік тому +1

    This was pretty god for a short horror film. I liked it! 🤙🏼💯

  • @LaLa-xh7bz
    @LaLa-xh7bz Рік тому +7

    I was waiting for the twist like he killed someone or he was the ghost 😂 But no twist. Just a ghost whoopin his ass! Well done 👍🏽

  • @thenebraskan6977
    @thenebraskan6977 Рік тому

    Awesome film! Especially you being pulled out of bed, and meeting with the pastor. Incredible film!!👻👁

  • @pjfoltz8810
    @pjfoltz8810 Рік тому +3

    When he bought the ouija board, I knew something bed was going to happen! That is something you do not mess with!

  • @anniebananie7887
    @anniebananie7887 Рік тому +1

    Beautiful house!

  • @Anonymous-qy8ss
    @Anonymous-qy8ss Рік тому +4

    Before the ghost would of come in to the bedroom I would have jumped out the window hearing that noise coming up the stairs would be terrifying

  • @paullevine1813
    @paullevine1813 Рік тому +2

    Loved it , just cause you have money which this guy seems to surely have doesn't always mean you own everything . That ghost was already there & you can't buy them off or fight what you can't see. In the end it was just claiming what was it's home . What guy that lives alone & watches horror films is scared of something he can't see & something that belonged there first. Good for the entity ,adios amigos to sissy boy , at least till he realizes it's in the vehicle for a ride. Who doesn't love a good ghost tale & i must say the sheet was a brilliant bit of tension . Thanks for the ride

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому +1

      Thanks for the kind words Paul!

    • @paullevine1813
      @paullevine1813 Рік тому

      @@menziesproductions7758 Thank you that was fun & i couldn't help but notice the graveyard he drove by on his attempt to get away hmmm , nice of him to give the ghost a ride in his nice expensive Jeep , yea we know who's in that backseat. The sheet segment was awesome & simple ,straight up & out of the ballpark. Nothing as good as fine ghost story. Yea we are the ones to thank you & all the great storytellers that have the knack to gives us great little tales of wonder.

  • @Arsenicosis
    @Arsenicosis Рік тому +1

    Impressed by the leading actor here! Looking forward to more from them.

    • @coletteporee
      @coletteporee Рік тому

      me too! david is such a talented actor and is gearing up for some amazing roles! 👀

  • @magnetdesignandadver
    @magnetdesignandadver Рік тому +2

    Very well done. Great actor

  • @angiemd8920
    @angiemd8920 Рік тому +16

    Did you just tell the ghost to "wait"? Haha!
    This gave me heavy Paranormal Activity vibes. Awesome!

    • @coletteporee
      @coletteporee Рік тому

      I know! i honestly found it refreshing how he just ordered the ghost around😭

    • @TalkBack17
      @TalkBack17 Рік тому

      That’s what I said 😂 “did he just say ‘wait’??”

  • @zero_bs_tolerance8646
    @zero_bs_tolerance8646 Рік тому

    Very good. Thanks. 🍻

  • @mainmaam
    @mainmaam Рік тому +2

    Hey! This is pretty good!

  • @simonl4523
    @simonl4523 Рік тому +4

    Thank you for this movie! I think as a genre, horrors adapts really well to a short movie, and your movie here really shows that. The thing I found that really drew me in was the camera work: it was very fluid and active in a way that almost made it another character. It really helped me empathise with the person being haunted, because I think that is how he was feeling with this entity that was circling around him. The sound of the ghost and all the creaks and bangs worked really well too. The creepiest moment for me was when the two doors opened at the same time. There were a few moments that felt a bit cliched I suppose, with the useless priest one of them. Acting is really, really hard, especially when you are the only character on set but you have to act out as if you are engaging with another character. So super well done to him as well. I think there were some flashes of overacting. I guess like most things there are ways to make something better, but that should never stop us from working with what we’re given, and this was put together really well and I am super thankful for everyone who helped to make it happen.

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому

      Thanks for the kind words Simon. For majority of the scenes it was just myself (the director) and the main actor. We had no crew of any kind. I would set up some lights and then we’d just shoot it run and gun style. Overall I wrote, shot, edited, and even composed the music on this project. So I’m happy to hear you enjoyed it. Plenty more to come!

    • @simonl4523
      @simonl4523 Рік тому

      @@menziesproductions7758 That’s amazing to hear. I hope you get to do more films.

  • @rosalynredwood4542
    @rosalynredwood4542 Рік тому +1

    Absolutely loved the acting!ecery expression was literally perfect!tge fact that we don't see the entity makes it even more scary!

  • @arbjful
    @arbjful Рік тому +2

    He broke so many ouija rules in such a short time

  • @andysdestination8671
    @andysdestination8671 Рік тому +3

    That’s a very good video. And background music is spot on. Love it. Cheers 😎😎😎🔥🔥🔥

  • @image0987
    @image0987 Рік тому

    New subscriber. Love the movie! Thx you 😊😊😊😊😊

  • @sharonshin4574
    @sharonshin4574 Рік тому

    Awesome horror short!!

  • @melb2086
    @melb2086 Рік тому +2

    This is so cool and well done,this has to be full movie,if it's possible. 🙂👍

  • @valiantwarrior4517
    @valiantwarrior4517 6 місяців тому

    Nice job. Keep at it!

  • @ronaldwilliams4954
    @ronaldwilliams4954 Рік тому

    Dammit this was good 10/10 👏👍💯💯

  • @nillieable
    @nillieable Рік тому +2

    The acting is of top class

  • @scottricci5063
    @scottricci5063 Рік тому +2

    A ouija board from a dollar store. How poetic. For a guy who just bought a three story mansion. Lmao

  • @shawnc1716
    @shawnc1716 Рік тому +1

    Whats the blue lights on his chest is it a Bluetooth microphone.havent finished move maby it well be explained

  • @johnshields6852
    @johnshields6852 Рік тому +9

    I couldn't even imagine living in a haunted house, my worse fear is thinking it's right above my face while I sleep. No way.

  • @zolfodor4835
    @zolfodor4835 Рік тому +1

    This was actually brilliant 👌👌

  • @TommyWitDaTone
    @TommyWitDaTone Рік тому +1

    7:24 that looks just like how Sil walks in The Sopranos lol

  • @Msmary98-98
    @Msmary98-98 Рік тому +1

    Awesome film ❤

  • @scottvance3240
    @scottvance3240 Рік тому +1

    What brand camera are used to detect the gh😅sts?

  • @victorjohn9826
    @victorjohn9826 9 місяців тому

    Well made film. We Indians do poojas for new or old house b4 start living there, to drive away bad vibes or just for our spiritual belief 😊

  • @kennethmichael5404
    @kennethmichael5404 Рік тому

    Overall I liked it, well done...with the exception of the sound editing towards the end, tire screeches on snow(?)

  • @FilmmakerSpace
    @FilmmakerSpace Рік тому +1

    Wow 👌

  • @finalomega8894
    @finalomega8894 Рік тому +1

    LMBO at how the lamp was purposely kicked over, and how the entity was already not visible at the bottom, but the cloth was removed.

  • @Msmary98-98
    @Msmary98-98 Рік тому +2

    He’s cute❤ I’ll keep him safe.. 😂😂😂

  • @ElvenRaptor
    @ElvenRaptor Рік тому +1

    One thing I'd have pointed out to the ghost is that even if he chased me out, the realter would just sell the house to someone and he'd be chasing people out of his house endlessly. And if he did it enough times, they'd send people who get rid of him. So either way, he was never going to have the house to himself because the living were never going to give up on it.

  • @timothypage252
    @timothypage252 Рік тому

    Love how he puts on the reading glasses to look over them the whole time...

  • @sirvazo1633
    @sirvazo1633 Рік тому +3

    At 7:20, I thought he was off to buy a can of Ghost-B-Gone spray

  • @Cricket9579
    @Cricket9579 5 місяців тому

    He obviously has money, I'm sure he could afford a hotel til he got so me help lol,, GREAT movie on the whole though! The acting was phenomenal, and the overall creepy feel was REAl. Well done!

  • @hoorejannathealthbeautytip792

    acting skill is superb

  • @aishwaryavijoy1931
    @aishwaryavijoy1931 Рік тому +2

    That's some real horror 🥲🥲🥲

  • @PunchBuggyDreams
    @PunchBuggyDreams Рік тому +5

    That entity was just a big bully. I would've manned up to it and stood up to it and fought it tooth and nail to get it out of my house. I have zero tolerance for such things.

  • @simranlahot3576
    @simranlahot3576 Рік тому +4

    Too good but I can't believe how only one person stay in a big house😂 I'm scared to stay alone like in a big house 🏡 but I like it💜

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Рік тому +1

      I agree Simran! Filming in this house was a little creepy haha.

    • @simranlahot3576
      @simranlahot3576 Рік тому +1

      @@menziesproductions7758 But I appreciate your work💜 well done🥰

    • @odysseja
      @odysseja Рік тому +1

      It's just a horror movie cliché - a family is in trouble so they bought a new house twice bigger than they need, as like it can help them somehow.

  • @CloudySunflowerfield
    @CloudySunflowerfield Рік тому

    He just moved in, the kitchen was empty and looked like he just moved in but then the rest of the house looked like he’s lived there quite long 😂 just a observation.
    Good film mate!!!

  • @JRodriguez-o1i
    @JRodriguez-o1i 7 місяців тому

    Very good! I'm surprised there are no credits. At the very least, they needed several people for the effects, and the priest actor...

  • @Venserql
    @Venserql Рік тому +1

    Why was the Ouija board in the LEGO section? XD

  • @byernlack6868
    @byernlack6868 Рік тому

    Lego ouija looks fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥

  • @pheobusapollo4305
    @pheobusapollo4305 Рік тому +1

    I have a ghost problem. ....better grab the quija board to invite more

  • @heatherclare3474
    @heatherclare3474 Рік тому +1

    A very good short horror story, great actor, the ending was super 👏

  • @Aziza_Nyxie_Jynx_Ashling
    @Aziza_Nyxie_Jynx_Ashling Рік тому

    The way he knocked ov the table with the watering can plant pot and lamp

  • @gretchent7750
    @gretchent7750 Рік тому +1

    Can so,done explain to me what was cashing him at the end, and in detail?

  • @ilaanisdead
    @ilaanisdead 7 місяців тому

    4:52 did bro just say "wait" LMFAO

  • @noryanidurani1494
    @noryanidurani1494 Рік тому +1

    Make it full movie please...love it ❤

  • @Tater4200
    @Tater4200 Рік тому

    I'm waiting for a person to yell "FUCK OFF I GOTTA GUN!!" Like I do when I'm alone in the dark and hear a noise lol

  • @taracollins5597
    @taracollins5597 Рік тому +3

    What a gorgeous house. Is that the house from one of the Paranormal Activity films??

  • @jcsantana6947
    @jcsantana6947 Рік тому +2

    😍😍

  • @comofazervideosanimadospar6206

    Good job. .....................Brasil