1:08 1. Less is more. If you add too much detail in a drawing, it will have a hard texture, as if you were touching metal. A tip is to have blur effects to soften the image. 4:44 2. You don't have to draw things accurately and tediously. Saitou-sensei used a building as example. He only drew the silhouette and the windows but it already looked like a well-drawn building. 8:15 3. Divide the background into three parts: Foreground (in front of the character), midground (next to the character), background (far away and behind the character). Make sure the different parts overlap to express 3 dimensionality. 11:43 4. Add brightness when you draw a dark and heavy illustration. It's hard to see the focal point of the image if it is dark. 14:47 5. It's better to draw the background because it tells the story of your illustration much better. Without a background, the image could become uninteresting. Thank you!
Ohoo we have a quick summary! But I think you forget to add the last at 15:00 (it's better to draw the background). Anyway thank you so much for this! :D
wow it's so great.. In result, after watching this video, i realize that i have to jump over the perspective tool someday. now i'll try to draw the backgrounds for what i want to express. i'm always rooting for u sensei!!😊😊😊
3:29 (regarding the translation) around this area I feel that it would make more sense to interpret the advice as, become aware of areas that do not require adding extra detail and deliberately pick where you’re putting down the detail
The buildings thing reminds me of something someone once told me: | It's not about "drawing the detail" but about drawing "the effect of detail" | It took me a while to understand it, but the part of the buildings in the dystopian future in this video explain that idea quite simply. Applying this idea is a completely different story tho XD
i want you to show us, how do you correct picture. like what step you go by when doing it. i want to do it with my old art. but i cant understand how to go about it.
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1つめのポイントでご紹介頂いた鉄機です。
以前、【気まぐれ添削130】で取り上げて頂けただけでなく、今回はリメイク後のイラストまでご紹介頂きありがとうございます！！とても嬉しいです！
あの添削を経て、絵の塗りに対する新たな視点が生まれ、結果としてより自分が描きたい方向性の絵柄に近付くことが出来ました。
「縁取り癖」や「同じ明度変化の連続」といったワードで課題点をあそこまで分かりやすく言語化して貰えなければ、自分はいつまで経ってもイラストの見栄えを損なっている原因に気付けず、今でもモヤモヤとしたまま時間を浪費していただろうなと思います。
重ね重ねにはなりますが、本当にありがとうございました！
そもそもメカやロボットしか描けなかった自分が、去年の春以降キャラクター絵をまともに描けるようになったきっかけも、先生の提唱されていた三ヵ月練習法を実践したからこそだったので、それも含めて感謝してもし切れません…！
紹介されていた他4つのポイントも含めて吸収し、これからより上達できるよう頑張っていきます！
（先生のこれからのご活動も応援しております！どん兵衛CMの件もおめでとうございました！）
こだわり強いひとほど描き込み量増えちゃうよな……ビルの描き方真似してみたい凄い
たまにこうして過去添削の要点を
まとめてくれるのメッチャありがたい
それはそれとして鉄機さん凄すぎる…
言語化が上手すぎる。
反則技の解説を聞いてから添削前後の絵を見たら、見映えが上がっているポイントはそこにあるのかと実感します...！構図や背景での工夫の大切さが改めて分かる...
1:08
1. Less is more. If you add too much detail in a drawing, it will have a hard texture, as if you were touching metal. A tip is to have blur effects to soften the image.
4:44
2. You don't have to draw things accurately and tediously. Saitou-sensei used a building as example. He only drew the silhouette and the windows but it already looked like a well-drawn building.
8:15
3. Divide the background into three parts: Foreground (in front of the character), midground (next to the character), background (far away and behind the character). Make sure the different parts overlap to express 3 dimensionality.
11:43
4. Add brightness when you draw a dark and heavy illustration. It's hard to see the focal point of the image if it is dark.
14:47
5. It's better to draw the background because it tells the story of your illustration much better. Without a background, the image could become uninteresting.
Thank you!
Ohoo we have a quick summary! But I think you forget to add the last at 15:00 (it's better to draw the background).
Anyway thank you so much for this! :D
@@mocchillaohh I totally forgot 😂 sorry. Thanks for reminding me
言われるとその気になるから
「馬描くの簡単ですよ〜」とか「駅描くの簡単ですよ〜」とか嘘でも言ってほしい
蛇のクオリティーの出し方凄すぎます！！！まさに目から鱗…
すごく書いてみたくなりましたw
あとどん兵衛の新cmのキャラデザ採用おめでとうございます！！！🎉
過去添削の要点をまとめて説明して頂いてとてもタメになりました。ありがとうございます😭
先生の動画いつも参考にしつつ私も頑張って描いてます！
人物については動画によくされてますが、アクセサリーや服にある装飾など小物の書き方も知りたいです！
捨てる、描かない、それっぽくは他の講師の方も言っていて本当に大事だと思う！美大友もそのまま描けるのは当たり前でそこからどう魅せていくかが大事と言っていた。要高技術だけどぜったい習得したい。
あなたのアドバイスは非常に役に立ちます、ありがとう 😃😃😄
ビルとヘビ描きたくなっちゃった笑笑
本日も配信有難うございます
捨てる・・・これが本当に難しいです。
鉄機さん！ この人本当に凄いです！！ シンプルに効果的に進歩されています。
鉄機さんの地力修正凄すぎて草
自然に描き込み量を
増やしていました
wow it's so great.. In result, after watching this video, i realize that i have to jump over the perspective tool someday. now i'll try to draw the backgrounds for what i want to express. i'm always rooting for u sensei!!😊😊😊
ビルやヘビ
確かに描いてみたくなりますね👀✨
ありがとうございます！！！！
3:29 (regarding the translation) around this area I feel that it would make more sense to interpret the advice as, become aware of areas that do not require adding extra detail and deliberately pick where you’re putting down the detail
おぉ...そうか。技術の足し算に目を奪われがちだけど、時には引き算も必要ってことか。
とりまビルと蛇の下りは自分用にっと（7:05）（13:34）
The buildings thing reminds me of something someone once told me:
| It's not about "drawing the detail" but about drawing "the effect of detail" |
It took me a while to understand it, but the part of the buildings in the dystopian future in this video explain that idea quite simply. Applying this idea is a completely different story tho XD
You're probably talking about Stephen travers
Here you are! I've been looking for you!
Random question but has Naoki Sensei reuploaded his old videos or is he gonna do it bit by bit?
添削で伝えたことをわざわざまとめてくれるのか・・・親切なお方だ(｀=ω人)
Does someone know If he made a video talking about how to improve drawing expressions?
添削してもらうにはどうしたら良いんですか？
添削動画の概要欄に応募方法が書いてありますよ！
i want you to show us, how do you correct picture. like what step you go by when doing it. i want to do it with my old art. but i cant understand how to go about it.
Tysm 🙏
「書く」は、文字や文章、あるいは記号などを紙などに記すことを意味します。
「描く」は、「えがく」とも読み、絵や図などを表現することを意味します。
いきなりどうした笑
cảm ơn tác giả và người sub video này sang tiếng việt
この動画本当に無料？
後から家に請求書とか届きませんか？
まぁ来ても払うけど
小4だけどアイビス使って絵描いてます
この講座はすごくよかったけど、絵描けない人間が気分で眺めてるだけなんで、ウロコとかビルの描き方の「簡単」が「ねっ簡単でしょ？」を思い出して笑ってしまった。簡単じゃねーんだわ
サムネ変わった？？
先生がいない！？