Native English speaker here! I just got here so I don't know your goals, but you seem more than capable of communicating your thoughts in English. If your goals are just to live in an English speaking country, then I would say you're already qualified. If your goals are to pass the exam for a certification, then just keep attempting! At your rate, you're bound to pass! I briefly browsed some of your essays posted to your Instagram and your writing proficiency is probably somewhere between the American 7th-9th grade (which is more than enough). But, if you really need something to focus on, I'd work on condensing longer sentences into singular words or phrases, which is usually (debatable) a sign of higher proficiency. For example, " many individuals suffer from not having enough sleep" == "sleep deprivation" (this is an example where you have already demonstrated this skill). Although, honestly, test taking is always super nitpicky and you will most likely have to specifically study the ILETS exam material, even if it won't necessarily make you more fluent (if you get what I mean).
I appreciate your attention and advice! I am working on my writing skills several times a week. I think I have made a lot of spelling errors, which resulted in lower score than I expected. The problem is that I cannot find a reason to write in English, while speaking in English is much more in demand in my country. So, I need to create it need artificially by writing more about various topics. That's the problem. I am going to make it sooner or later😊 Thanks for your time!
Native English speaker here! I just got here so I don't know your goals, but you seem more than capable of communicating your thoughts in English. If your goals are just to live in an English speaking country, then I would say you're already qualified. If your goals are to pass the exam for a certification, then just keep attempting! At your rate, you're bound to pass! I briefly browsed some of your essays posted to your Instagram and your writing proficiency is probably somewhere between the American 7th-9th grade (which is more than enough).
But, if you really need something to focus on, I'd work on condensing longer sentences into singular words or phrases, which is usually (debatable) a sign of higher proficiency. For example, " many individuals suffer from not having enough sleep" == "sleep deprivation" (this is an example where you have already demonstrated this skill). Although, honestly, test taking is always super nitpicky and you will most likely have to specifically study the ILETS exam material, even if it won't necessarily make you more fluent (if you get what I mean).
I appreciate your attention and advice! I am working on my writing skills several times a week. I think I have made a lot of spelling errors, which resulted in lower score than I expected. The problem is that I cannot find a reason to write in English, while speaking in English is much more in demand in my country. So, I need to create it need artificially by writing more about various topics. That's the problem. I am going to make it sooner or later😊
Thanks for your time!
@@mikayil.aliyev Of course! You totally got this!