I Kicked The Door, The Lock Cracked, The Door Hit The Wall, And I Burst Into The Room. First Thing

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  • @davefurzer6320
    @davefurzer6320 Місяць тому +4

    Great story loved it

  • @anthonymiddlebrooks9853
    @anthonymiddlebrooks9853 Місяць тому +3

    Awesome eye for an eye story!!😮

  • @RogerWalters-es1tv
    @RogerWalters-es1tv Місяць тому

    This story is worth every minute you spend reading it is one of the best that I have come to. Congratulations on a great story fantastic plot and super ending I would awarded five stars I couldn’t ask for more.! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

  • @albertbarnes5844
    @albertbarnes5844 Місяць тому +11

    I know they wish to .ake money with these tales,but when the commercials last longer than storys, that is unusual!😮

    • @zaynevanday142
      @zaynevanday142 Місяць тому

      It’s down right anger inducing 😂😂😂

    • @CoachEJKIII
      @CoachEJKIII Місяць тому

      What commercials?

    • @kjarman7790
      @kjarman7790 Місяць тому

      The commercials are added by UA-cam to keep the site “free”

    • @obmit1982
      @obmit1982 2 дні тому +1

      Your getting something for free. If you don't want ads get premium. Alot of other good shit comes with it.

  • @truemegahertz6929
    @truemegahertz6929 Місяць тому +1

    great story

  • @JEFFDUNN-it3wm
    @JEFFDUNN-it3wm Місяць тому +4

    Well if they have done it several times before they got to his wife obviously they would have kept on going even though it's not moral to take another man's life but they would have came back for her so a man is supposed to protect his family

  • @dougwheeldon
    @dougwheeldon Місяць тому

    Finally a real man

  • @zaynevanday142
    @zaynevanday142 Місяць тому +2

    Do they even realise that advertisement’s turn people off their products if I see an ad I won’t be spending money 💵 on it 🔥 🔥 🔥

  • @Ivy-jx2jy
    @Ivy-jx2jy Місяць тому +2

    Story is from Literotica titled "Hell Followed With Him" by IronDragon.

  • @TiberiusMagnum
    @TiberiusMagnum Місяць тому +1

    A real man forced to do what had to be done because the so-called “Justice” system failed ….. AGAIN!

  • @rodneytownsend7047
    @rodneytownsend7047 Місяць тому +3

    Take Bill Walker and his company for everything

  • @codysmith7939
    @codysmith7939 Місяць тому +3

    I'd go hunting.

    • @Isildun9
      @Isildun9 Місяць тому +1

      Gentlemen, Prepare for The Hunt!

  • @constipatedinsincity4424
    @constipatedinsincity4424 Місяць тому +2

    I guess that I married Dexter! White Boys please

  • @nellynelson965
    @nellynelson965 Місяць тому

    This was a realy great story, till the end and the locked room. Everything about the story up to this point made sense and linked. And then at the end it just gets stupid. Forensics would have been able to tell he has duct tape and no gunpowder residue, so yea, he would have been beleivable. Unlike this part of the story. And as for the Lawyer? shes not going to get 10 years for that and proving it, not even going to get to court. Its not illegal to know someone. Could of been a strait 10/10 but the ending was pathetic. Not the revenge, the plot and reality.

  • @mariehabersatt5695
    @mariehabersatt5695 Місяць тому

    Justive

  • @ilbercgross4736
    @ilbercgross4736 Місяць тому

    Older story.