This had the potential to be a good story but it keeps going back and repeating itself. Whoever is putting these garbled stories out is definitely failing when it comes to the editing.
I gave up three minutes in. I have no reason to care about the few characters I've seen so far, and the plot seems to be developing fairly predictably towards the outcome suggested by the title.
Constantly repeating and stepping back and changing
Why do you change the story?
This had the potential to be a good story but it keeps going back and repeating itself. Whoever is putting these garbled stories out is definitely failing when it comes to the editing.
I gave up three minutes in. I have no reason to care about the few characters I've seen so far, and the plot seems to be developing fairly predictably towards the outcome suggested by the title.
sorry i just cant listen to this story - had to check if it it was just on repeat going over the same things over an over
Try publishing a story with an actual timeline not just a bunch of paragraphs thrown into a pot
Huge plot holes, numerous redundancies, horrible editing.