Agatha, Whodunit?

An anti-social father visits the home of a famous murder mystery writer as part of a Christmas present from his daughter, only for strange events to occur.
The short story is taken from the book 'A Jury of Narcissists'. Available from Amazon. See the links below.
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[@carrie-ann8121]

Wonderful story , well done !! Will definitely keep listening to your story's

[@hrhqueene]

Thoroughly enjoyed this delightfully creative story-within-a-story, game-within-a-game.

[@2msvalkyrie529]

He read all of Agatha Christie's novels ? Too bad he didn't learn anything about
the technique of writing short stories ..

[@gabi8557]

AI crap

[@tjannarra1279]

At 13 minutes I gave up I'm afraid. Boring narration and an even more boring story!

[@2msvalkyrie529]

I made it to 20 mins before lapsing into
a coma .

[@rosainecalmeyer4428]

Sorry to say this, but this is not well written or narrated

[@2msvalkyrie529]

Classic understatement . !

[@lynnefisher8583]

No inflection, automated speech. Not good,

[@mwatts-riley2688]

It's free, someone made the time and put out the work to upload and post this story...
What have YOU DONE? M. 📻. IL

[@rosainecalmeyer4428]

@@mwatts-riley2688everyone is entitled to their opinions; that’s what comments are for. Keep your nasty words to yourself, please.

[@bonnierussell9798]

Much better narration than jason fraser

[@malina1239]

Your rating AI against each other now?
They are all shit😂😂😂