Although I think the writing might have benefited from a second draft, I thought the technical work, musical choices and atmosphere was fantastic! The jumpscare and ending genuinely unnerved me, great work!
Actually little fun fact this was the third draft of the story. Before i just had it be Duncan getting back at Peter Sam like in the original Duncan get spooked; then to it being Duncan taking Peter Sam to the bridge where the both would see Proteus. I settled on just Peter Sam when me and Suddery were messing one writing night where then boom this version popped out.
Admittedly I was not expecting much from this as most Thomas ghost stories follow the same format but I was presently surprised by how good this was. The engine teleporting to Peter Sam on the bridge spooked me a bit and it was honestly my favourite moment in the video. The jumpscare, in my opinion, felt a bit lacklustre, but other than that this video was great! Especially loved the cinematography! Great work! 💚
I love this video, it tricks you into thinking Proteus was Good then makes you feel true fear at his capabilities. Why did Proteus help Peter Sam in the first place? Why did he give him a Nightmare? We’ll probably never know, unless we get a Sequal next year!
My Arthur, dumbstruck: "Well i-... ieeee don't think Ol Peepe Sam ain't gunna mess with the paranormal anymore right Murdoch..." "Murdoch?" My Murdoch: *Shaking in fear as he stares ahead* My Arthur: *Looks forward and sees Proteus floating right in front of him* "Aaaaah nuts- :D" *Proteus jumpscare*
the ending is quite a twist espeshilky knowing in there buffers there not safe from such a ghost becase that ghoste knows where they live meaning if they wanted to they could hant the sheds if they so seeen fit
I think the ghost got pissed that Peter Sam tried to say he was not real. I think the ghost was telling him yes I’m real and you trying to say I’m not after I pulled you across the bridge is bullshit. Wonder if an engine were to fall of the bridge if the ghost would stop them from falling down if they believed the story
Could use some work, specifically on the pacing of dialogue, its weird when there is no narration, talking, or anything despite hte moment seeming like it would have just that.
I've got a conspiracy theory. Once upon a time, the Mid Sodor Railway and Skarloey Railway were connected via the Mountain Road. This is why in TTTE Skarloey and Rheneas could be seen working on the Mid Sodor in "Granpuff". Still it doesn't make any sense how Duncan appeared in "Bulldog". I think a good title for a story would be "A Spook for Skarloey".
special thanks to…
NO ONE!!!
But thanks to the viewers
And me lol
Duncan would be the engine who would swear. Nice touch!
Well, Duncan swearing is canon to the RWS, as he's described as "foul mouthed"
I'd love to see that more. And in general, railway themed gags like "go shunt yourself" which I've only heard once from this fandom
Indeed XD
1:17 HOLY SHIT, THE PLACMENT OF THAT WHISTLE IS PERFECT
XD YEAH Renese is collegant and bleeping. The thrower is funny.
Although I think the writing might have benefited from a second draft, I thought the technical work, musical choices and atmosphere was fantastic! The jumpscare and ending genuinely unnerved me, great work!
Actually little fun fact this was the third draft of the story. Before i just had it be Duncan getting back at Peter Sam like in the original Duncan get spooked; then to it being Duncan taking Peter Sam to the bridge where the both would see Proteus. I settled on just Peter Sam when me and Suddery were messing one writing night where then boom this version popped out.
What jumpscare?
😂😢😮 Thanks for the warning. Last video before bed time.
I've always been led to believe that Proteus was a good spirit, So having a twist there he makes Peter Sam fall off the bridge surprised me
Admittedly I was not expecting much from this as most Thomas ghost stories follow the same format but I was presently surprised by how good this was. The engine teleporting to Peter Sam on the bridge spooked me a bit and it was honestly my favourite moment in the video. The jumpscare, in my opinion, felt a bit lacklustre, but other than that this video was great! Especially loved the cinematography! Great work! 💚
1:17 Thanks for the censor, Rheneas!
5:56 change them smoke alarm batteries LMAO
Thats the scariest part of the video lmaoo
@@sudderyproductions there is no mistaking that horrifying sound.
Now I can't unnotice this
I love this video, it tricks you into thinking Proteus was Good then makes you feel true fear at his capabilities. Why did Proteus help Peter Sam in the first place? Why did he give him a Nightmare? We’ll probably never know, unless we get a Sequal next year!
I think he did it to show he was real and if Peter Sam had said he is real he would have left him alone but proteus decided to teach him a lesson
Either that or he didn't want engines poking around in his business and wanted to scare him off.
I keep finding myself going back to this video. I love it so much. The analog horror esque jumpscare was so cool
Legend has it,the poltergueist of sodor still haunts to very day and i think he need someone continue his Legacy,make sure it wasn't you this time.
This is too good, the one thing I hated most how it was sitting there in broad daylight as it slowly went backwards to the wall, Oh hell no.😮
Bet he just wanted to give him a snickers
W. D. Gaster's face.
My Arthur, dumbstruck: "Well i-... ieeee don't think Ol Peepe Sam ain't gunna mess with the paranormal anymore right Murdoch..."
"Murdoch?"
My Murdoch: *Shaking in fear as he stares ahead*
My Arthur: *Looks forward and sees Proteus floating right in front of him*
"Aaaaah nuts- :D"
*Proteus jumpscare*
Nate did horrifyingly well in portraying a horrified individual who seemed to have witnessed a near death moment
the ending is quite a twist espeshilky knowing in there buffers there not safe from such a ghost becase that ghoste knows where they live meaning if they wanted to they could hant the sheds if they so seeen fit
The episode after Duncan get spooked
The engine who speaks in buffers
love the Gaster face on proteus :>
Really just a fantastic piece of filmmaking.
I already had PTSD from someone who made the same topic of this video out petersam never came home an another version were Duncan goes by by
I remember that second one, duncan just happened to cross the bridge at the wrong damn time, but paid the price
that was Brilliant. Thankyou.
I like to think it takes place in Season 5 after the events of Duncan Gets Spooked.
6:09 W.D. gasters face
Why didn't Mr. Percival just close that stupid bridge? Unless it was impossible
The message seems the same as Family Guy’s Spider-Man message: “Everybody gets one” 😂
(6:07) blud turned in Gaster
This was fantastic and indeed spooky!
And how did Proteus know Peter Sam's original name? Did he used to work on the Mid Sodor Railway, too?
Yep, he used to work on the MSR
I think the ghost got pissed that Peter Sam tried to say he was not real. I think the ghost was telling him yes I’m real and you trying to say I’m not after I pulled you across the bridge is bullshit. Wonder if an engine were to fall of the bridge if the ghost would stop them from falling down if they believed the story
6:29 playdoh lookin ahh
And is that the freaking FNAF Security Breach Jumpscare noise?
Peter Sam has Sir Handel's whistle :O
P.S Love Duncan's voice here xD
2:42 chicken
I wasn’t expecting for Peter Sam to meet the ghost engine on the bridge and gave him a horrifying freight luckily he’s alive
The same way that blossom and buttercup sabotaged each other🤔
Peter sam gets spooked
If Sir Handel Saw this he wouldhave been Terrified by his brother Proteus
Petersams panic attack
yooo Duncan swearing lmao
Bro turned form good to evil
Wait a second thats a fnaf sb jumpscare
W D GASTER looking ahh
You gave Peter Sam the wrong whistle sound. You gave him Duke's Original Season 4 Whistle.
Woah … the face on proteus was WOAH wierd
And rusty saying kapeesh is kinda funny acctually 😂
Oh god Proteus is Gaster’s sodorsona
W.D Proteus
AND THIS FLAT FUNNELED f*peep*k OVER HERE
haha
Could use some work, specifically on the pacing of dialogue, its weird when there is no narration, talking, or anything despite hte moment seeming like it would have just that.
I like Rusty in this video so much! And good job on this! Lovely story, can't wait for more! But, where did you get the ghost engine?
That doesn't sound like Rusty at all
@@MarshallRedmon01 I like it
Where did you get the wind sound from at 6:33?
And why does Peter Sam not have a head lamp?
6:27 FNaF Security Breach Jumpscare But Glitched
12 novembre 2023 Peter Sam "s poltergeist 😅😂😅😅😂😅😂😅😂😅😂😅😅😂😅😂😅😂😅😅😂😅😂😅😂😅😂😅😅😅😅😂😅😂😂😂😊😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😊😂😂😂😊😊😂😊😊😊😊😂😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😂😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
6:11 undertale
4:12 I've heard that song before. What is that?
Why did Proteus throw Peter Sam off the bridge?
Why is rusty a girl but the driver says " come on BOY"
I have no idea bocothespacediseaselstudios that's so wierd
Because Rusty isnt a girl
@@sudderyproductions but rusty sounds like a girl
Ghaster from undertale
1:16 A censored swear?
Nope.
Yooo that face was so messed up
I've got a conspiracy theory. Once upon a time, the Mid Sodor Railway and Skarloey Railway were connected via the Mountain Road. This is why in TTTE Skarloey and Rheneas could be seen working on the Mid Sodor in "Granpuff". Still it doesn't make any sense how Duncan appeared in "Bulldog".
I think a good title for a story would be "A Spook for Skarloey".
Series 5-6(1998-2002)
Narrated by: Alec Baldwin
Why is Rusty’s voice a gurl. 💀
Rusty is known as a gender neutral character
12 novembre 2023 Cartoonito Thomas yoodles all engines go! Thomas yoodles thoodles
Series 5(1998) and 6(2002)
Narrated by: Alec Baldwin
Instead of the jumpscare used in fnaf SB, maybe use gasters glitching noises
I'll keep that in mind for future videos
No >:(
No Undertale >:(
That damn games been done to death already >:(
@@raptorrixx99-wv2hl what's wrong with quality? I was just saying that sud should use undertale/deltarune SFX, is your reading skills ok?
@@railfandepotproductions *Snaps 180° degrees* *Speaks in a demonic tone*
I have misread nothing.👿
> dead batteries in a smoke detector
> swearing Duncan
These two combined alone make this video not scary. Lmao
Is rusty trans in this vid?
Nope
I laughed at this comment 🤣🤣🤣