Life must work real different on that alien's world if it thinks killing their enemy's offspring would cow them. On earth children cause most warm blooded creatures to get protective.
@ryanlaurie8733 works sane as always here on earth. Terrorists, and oppressive governments use violence and more violence towards families too control adults behavior
Yes a great story. It's about time in these stories when earth uses all of its resources. I'm waiting for the story where earth is so threaten that everything even the titans mutants. Creatures from the deep , angels demons, etc all see the treat and come together to tackle the threat head on and making the enemy really see earthlings come together.
The human brain is hardwired to force a person to act in the presence of a distressed child. (A person who doesn't have this I question their humanity)
It is an interesting idea for a movie. Alien invasion. They can't be stopped. Until they encounter werewolves. The aliens aren't using silver weapons, so no matter what they do the werewolves heal and keep coming.
Perhaps humans willingly make themselves into werewolves in order to strike back at the invaders. Displaying the unyielding defiance of mankind, to sacrifice ourselves and who and what we are in order to achieve victory.
Good story. Could just do with more emphasis in the voice. Doesn't seem like the right growling voice/angry voice for humans. Seems a bit monotone. Just constructive criticism ❤️👍
Thanks for taking that the way it was meant. Sometimes we all need someone to say "have you tried it this way" I have had that many times in the construction industry. IM STILL LEARNING. there is always something to deal with that provides unique problems...
If there ever is a galactic counsel I highly doubt they would provoke earth like that. To think they pull something like that all of earth would cry for war. Good story
@@theman487 come on homie it was a good story it’s not cool that kids get murder in the story but it’s just a story for entertainment so just chill and don’t use my jokes that just makes you look like you have a 2 in the intelligence stat
Another story where Human technology seamlessly interfaces with Alien tech.. I'll use my tablet to download all their data and give this unknown computer OS a nasty virus.
Please make sure you balance your audio, having to turn the volume up to account for the quieter parts, then getting my eardrums blasted when it suddenly gets louder, HURTS!
I've been listening to stories like this one for about six months. What I have noticed is that there is never any doubt of the outcome for the good guys. As soon as they're introduced, you know they are going to win. You know that all of them are going to survive and probably without getting wounded. There is no question that the enemy will be defeated. Another thing I noticed is how two dimensional the characters are. Bad guys are bad because they're the bad guys. There is nothing else to them. The good guys are good because they're from Earth. End of story. No reason beyond a want of power is necessary for the aliens to invade Earth. The aliens are ALWAYS arrogant. I've never listened to one of these where they are provoked into attacking Humans. They just decide humans are "prey". If you want to make these stories better, don't make the aliens such pushovers. Let them be dangerous. Let them be actually threatening. Let them wound and kill some of the good guys, and I don't mean side characters. I mean let some of the main characters be killed or wounded. Let some of the main characters sacrifice themselves in service of Humanity. Add some tension to the plot. Add more realistic dialogue. Take the chance that your audience is actually fairly smart and you don't have to spoon feed them the plot.
@@luciparadise6781 Are you saying that in 25 minutes there cannot be good dialogue? The motivations of the enemy do not take more than a minute to outline. I don't see any reason the main characters could not be injured or killed in 25 minutes. Your argument fails to change my position.
AI is just dreadful at writing stories, imo. Oh, and we let monsters kill our children all the time, and even imprison people who get angry about it. So there is that.
"CRY HAVOC! AND LET SLIP THE DOGS OF WAR!!!"
-Julius Caesar
its said by marcus antonius, julius caesar is the name of the play.
Galactic Council: *hurt children*
Humans: FETCH ME THEIR SOULS
why did i hear this in the black ops zombie voice lol
Galactic Council: "We shall subjugate them with fear."
The Humans: Tell me... How versed are you in Cryptozoology?
Council: Cryptozowha---OH SHIT
The Council should be asking: Who let the dogs out? XD
Haha, exactly! But these ‘dogs’ aren’t playing around-they’re out for blood!
Alien: kills human child.
Humanity: I cast level 9 war crime.
Who, who, who?
The council F:ed up when they angered the "Spacewolves".
Please a sequel is needed.
@@Fenris77 For the sons of Rus!
@@kalebb1226 God damn furries.
“And I’ll give the space-wolves the wrinkly faces of pugs!”
Space wolves and space orcs. Lol they messed with the wrong planet
Space wolves and space orcs. Lol they came to the wrong star system
Life must work real different on that alien's world if it thinks killing their enemy's offspring would cow them. On earth children cause most warm blooded creatures to get protective.
Not in my case.
@ryanlaurie8733 works sane as always here on earth. Terrorists, and oppressive governments use violence and more violence towards families too control adults behavior
Yes a great story. It's about time in these stories when earth uses all of its resources. I'm waiting for the story where earth is so threaten that everything even the titans mutants. Creatures from the deep , angels demons, etc all see the treat and come together to tackle the threat head on and making the enemy really see earthlings come together.
Great story line idea 🎉
That or humanity with the SCP foundation and they unleash them all on the aliens, like in Cabin in the Woods
Just read the Dresden files by Jim Butcher
People that slaughtered helpless, crying children totally don't get to call others savages.
I would like to think that humans would go to war for even a single child.
We would. There's a. Old saying. Don't poke a sleeping bear
The human brain is hardwired to force a person to act in the presence of a distressed child. (A person who doesn't have this I question their humanity)
@Houndmaster3665 that's why most people hate loud noises because if they hit the pitch and frequency of a babies cry it triggers this response.
@stock_movie1875 precisely
@Houndmaster3665 those that don't respond to it are usually between 15-20
It is an interesting idea for a movie. Alien invasion. They can't be stopped. Until they encounter werewolves. The aliens aren't using silver weapons, so no matter what they do the werewolves heal and keep coming.
Perhaps humans willingly make themselves into werewolves in order to strike back at the invaders. Displaying the unyielding defiance of mankind, to sacrifice ourselves and who and what we are in order to achieve victory.
I think a sci-fi novel series did similar except it was Dracula and a horde of vampires suddenly appearing to save humanity from the aliens.
@@shadizersilverhand2113 Makes sense that the vampires would do that. cant have your only food supply getting wiped out now can you?
@@shadizersilverhand2113David Weber's "Out of the Dark" first book in the Shongairi series.
It is a great story also it reminded me of a story call starwolves I readed great book
Just the likes of when under plasma fire this way sounds like a mildly pissed off girlfriend 🤣🤣
Good story. Could just do with more emphasis in the voice. Doesn't seem like the right growling voice/angry voice for humans. Seems a bit monotone. Just constructive criticism ❤️👍
Thanks for taking that the way it was meant. Sometimes we all need someone to say "have you tried it this way" I have had that many times in the construction industry. IM STILL LEARNING. there is always something to deal with that provides unique problems...
If there ever is a galactic counsel I highly doubt they would provoke earth like that. To think they pull something like that all of earth would cry for war.
Good story
Or it’s how you make 40k a reality
A galactic counsel that has been around for a while has a certain problem: a galactic sized ego.
And what comes with a large ego?
arrogance
Absolutely Awesome 👏🏻
Glad you like it!
Cry havoc and let slip the dogs of war
Great story, what about a follow-up.
They kinda sound like the original SAS
bout time, now that 40k has been sold to wokemazon we need a new set of spacewolves.
Good story. This is the second story of children being slaughtered. I don't like that.
Get off the internet
Innocent Children are being brutally slaughtered today!!!
Ya for real don’t be soft bro
Such a good comment. The two replies are the ones that are soft.
@@theman487 come on homie it was a good story it’s not cool that kids get murder in the story but it’s just a story for entertainment so just chill and don’t use my jokes that just makes you look like you have a 2 in the intelligence stat
Thesaurus! I lost count of how many times "precision" was abused. Otherwise, nice story.
Another story where Human technology seamlessly interfaces with Alien tech.. I'll use my tablet to download all their data and give this unknown computer OS a nasty virus.
😂😂😂
😂😂😂😂😂
They killed Tyni Things! Pack, form up : Spacceship !
The council will know Fear, they will know to fear the Wolfpack 🐺
Please make sure you balance your audio, having to turn the volume up to account for the quieter parts, then getting my eardrums blasted when it suddenly gets louder, HURTS!
Are you serious? Yesterday I found one of these with exactly the same premise except it was Dracula.
wtf?
Wow Nice
Thanks
And from this day the world awakens and the aliens chose death for the earth is angered the deathworlders have reawakened
Somewhere around 5:30 the audio goes funny.
It starts earlier than that. Was wearing earbuds, and the constant switching audio levels resulted in my ears ringing!
I've been listening to stories like this one for about six months. What I have noticed is that there is never any doubt of the outcome for the good guys. As soon as they're introduced, you know they are going to win. You know that all of them are going to survive and probably without getting wounded. There is no question that the enemy will be defeated.
Another thing I noticed is how two dimensional the characters are. Bad guys are bad because they're the bad guys. There is nothing else to them. The good guys are good because they're from Earth. End of story. No reason beyond a want of power is necessary for the aliens to invade Earth. The aliens are ALWAYS arrogant. I've never listened to one of these where they are provoked into attacking Humans. They just decide humans are "prey".
If you want to make these stories better, don't make the aliens such pushovers. Let them be dangerous. Let them be actually threatening. Let them wound and kill some of the good guys, and I don't mean side characters. I mean let some of the main characters be killed or wounded. Let some of the main characters sacrifice themselves in service of Humanity. Add some tension to the plot. Add more realistic dialogue. Take the chance that your audience is actually fairly smart and you don't have to spoon feed them the plot.
The story is basically 25 minutes long for heaven's sake. Geez.
@@luciparadise6781 I agree .why not do a series of the same story.....
@@luciparadise6781 Are you saying that in 25 minutes there cannot be good dialogue? The motivations of the enemy do not take more than a minute to outline. I don't see any reason the main characters could not be injured or killed in 25 minutes. Your argument fails to change my position.
AI is just dreadful at writing stories, imo. Oh, and we let monsters kill our children all the time, and even imprison people who get angry about it. So there is that.
Space wolves.
Jesus Christ an inccest Baby Hero
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Galactic Council: Kills a child. Humans: Send the Werewolves!!