𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐠𝐢𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐜𝐨𝐥𝐝 𝐛𝐨𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐢𝐥𝐞𝐧𝐭 𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐭𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭 - Jungkook BTS Oneshot ff Fanfiction

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  • Опубліковано 16 вер 2024
  • (Fanfiction, BTS, Jeon Jungkook, Imagine, Oneshot, Clean, Cold, Crush, University, School, Love, Slice-of-life)
    Music:
    Scott Buckley - Undertow
    ??? - Still
    Sleeping at last - Arctic

КОМЕНТАРІ • 51

  • @divyanshisisodiya4305
    @divyanshisisodiya4305 3 роки тому +36

    I love the authors way of keeping
    Y/n's feelings for herself and Loving herself. Many other fanfics doesn't care about self respect or the true feelings of y/n. I really love it when author makes her feel her importance.
    Keep it up dear , I love your fanfics💜💜😘😘

  • @rhea3767
    @rhea3767 3 роки тому +36

    Damn wow the writing and vocabulary of this ff was beautiful -

    • @blank7368
      @blank7368 3 роки тому +1

      yh I had to search some words up lmao but that's why I love this author

    • @rhea3767
      @rhea3767 3 роки тому

      @@blank7368 I knew most of them lol but this video stepped up from the others. :)

    • @hyenamajesty8094
      @hyenamajesty8094 3 роки тому

      I agree with you!

  • @keki7069
    @keki7069 3 роки тому +18

    If you do make a part 2 they should get back together it's not like either one of them did something really unforgivable

  • @abbydivine1698
    @abbydivine1698 3 роки тому +3

    I feel bad for Jungkook. His cold behavior is because he is obviously scared of being left and hurt. Having that feeling is so lonely and so scary. It causes you to push people away no matter who it is. It’s a massive fear, and no one deserves to have it.

  • @shammyves
    @shammyves 3 роки тому +4

    Author how the heck do you make an ff so beautifully? Like I read the language you wrote and it's beautiful!! Don't mind my language it sucks. You are one of the best authors I have ever seen! Thanks for taking your time and making a unique ff like this!

  • @kekiwa2683
    @kekiwa2683 3 роки тому +5

    Thank you for this beautifully written story. I really like your choice of words, they way you built the story and that you care about your writing. Like in, complete sentences, orthography, no vulgar language.... Wonderful! Aaaand you give your readers the actual time to read before blending to the next paragraph. Thanks for that.

  • @mharseneee7187
    @mharseneee7187 3 роки тому +13

    For the first time, I'm early. I love u and your works, really!

  • @tamartenenbaum5997
    @tamartenenbaum5997 3 роки тому +7

    IM LITERALLY CRYINGGG PLEASE MAKE A PART TWOOOO

  • @eshaal3459
    @eshaal3459 3 роки тому +3

    Just one word to describe this story....... Exquisite. You don't see a lot of FFS like yours. They are unique and have mysterious aura in them. They pull you in, leave you dead and wanting more. Just a question, how old are you, @Seafics.

  • @hyenamajesty8094
    @hyenamajesty8094 3 роки тому +1

    Author i am in love with your language.. I have read a few story of yours and I can ultimately say that I am really impressed by as well as admire your work. It's just the way of your words are so calming. Do not stop and keep fighting!

  • @pr.jiminsqueen1182
    @pr.jiminsqueen1182 3 роки тому

    Why are your ff so sad and Incomplete but at the se time Its So Complete and Realistic too..💜💜

  • @princessduran4931
    @princessduran4931 3 роки тому +3

    I really love your ff's you know, you nice keep going👍🥺

  • @nishthaanupam1473
    @nishthaanupam1473 3 роки тому

    "You scored the highest Mark again?"
    "Could have done better"
    *ASIAN RIGHT THERE!*
    Edit: P.S: Your writing skills are amazing! I've never found an author who has perfect grammar too! Loved it!

  • @OT7FOREVERr
    @OT7FOREVERr 3 роки тому

    The vocabulary is just so good !!! Love the ff 👍🏻💜

  • @serendipitymin7935
    @serendipitymin7935 3 роки тому +7

    This looks interesting~
    Also author can we be friends ?? What is your name ?? My name is suri 🙆🏻‍♀️💜

  • @kamyapentakota
    @kamyapentakota 3 роки тому

    omg you write better than my school english paper

  • @rainduos_only
    @rainduos_only 3 роки тому +3

    oh my god hi edit: i literally just finished an ff by you 2 seconds ago and i saw this notif

  • @savannahkupukaa8216
    @savannahkupukaa8216 3 роки тому +1

    When your name is Savannah:👁👄👁💧

    • @Seafics
      @Seafics  3 роки тому

      it’s a pretty name hehe :)

  • @rajashreebtsarmy4366
    @rajashreebtsarmy4366 3 роки тому

    This needs part 2

  • @missgirl8166
    @missgirl8166 3 роки тому

    Period- Yep that's me, Y/n best frann

    • @Seafics
      @Seafics  3 роки тому

      woahh what a coincidence, that’s so cool, I love you name 😂

  • @F_M20
    @F_M20 3 роки тому +1

    yooooo.....👍👍👍
    any thoughts of a sequel? 🤔
    if no welll....didnt mind hanging there.....
    remebered of a manga title Parfait Tic. she loves this cold guy,
    a broken heart say 'i love you' mutual but broken

  • @rrr_iiiaaa
    @rrr_iiiaaa 3 роки тому +1

    please do part two 😭

  • @saanvisubash1061
    @saanvisubash1061 3 роки тому

    Omo I love this sorry I’m late

  • @kookieinfinite9251
    @kookieinfinite9251 3 роки тому +2

    Keyword : Yet

  • @chairbrand2343
    @chairbrand2343 3 роки тому

    I'm not super early, but woah, like wow. I really loved it, will there be a part 2 in the future?

  • @nocamss
    @nocamss 3 роки тому +1

    YAYAYAY IM HEREE

  • @sitiadani3940
    @sitiadani3940 3 роки тому

    Honestly im just a big fan of your story.. almost every story u made was just good😍

  • @vveyaah
    @vveyaah 3 роки тому

    Otornem, saranghae.

  • @mariamehboob8467
    @mariamehboob8467 3 роки тому

    We need part 2

  • @leeheeseung1417
    @leeheeseung1417 3 роки тому

    I jimin today 🤧✋

  • @14_deboparnabhattacharjee_15
    @14_deboparnabhattacharjee_15 3 роки тому +2

    this is the fastest i have been... :"((((

  • @Yunisse_cleofe
    @Yunisse_cleofe 3 роки тому

    Hereee

  • @liensofea3798
    @liensofea3798 3 роки тому

    Yesss...10 minutes 💜💜💜💜💜 I'm early....uwuuuuuuuuuu... excited 💜💜💜💜

  • @btsarmys4723
    @btsarmys4723 3 роки тому

    Pt2 happy ending pls!

  • @Lylielu
    @Lylielu 3 роки тому

    Hoiii

  • @milky1378
    @milky1378 3 роки тому

    Don't tell me this doesn't have a part 2 😭😭 I wanna know what happen to both of them

  • @gialenae6478
    @gialenae6478 3 роки тому

    I personally don’t think Y/N should have any physical description, because Y/N is the person reading the story. And not everyone has short black hair and pale skin. I’m black, I can’t relate to that lol. When Y/N’s physical appearance is described it makes it feel less real, and you begin picturing a character rather than yourself. Just my opinion though 🤷🏾‍♀️

    • @Seafics
      @Seafics  3 роки тому +3

      I never said the lead female was a Y/n though... I don't give her a name, but I do give her a physical and psychological description. Following the logic that my main character should be relatable, that means I shouldn't give her a personality/age/gender and shouldn’t make any precise settings as it doesn't fit everyone’s reality. So I think that Y/n thing kinda takes creativity off while writing a story and that's why I don't use it. I could make a black main female, she could be anything actually.

  • @ia8275
    @ia8275 3 роки тому

    3:30 but jungkooks eyes aren't blue?

  • @jiminsnevermind5833
    @jiminsnevermind5833 3 роки тому

    Author plz teach me some grammar 🙌💜

  • @alfredocruziii7364
    @alfredocruziii7364 3 роки тому

    hiiiiii

  • @bo-alee1597
    @bo-alee1597 3 роки тому

    Early

  • @jiyasmart9611
    @jiyasmart9611 3 роки тому

    Yayyyy early

  • @Crocodileluver
    @Crocodileluver 3 роки тому

    Early

  • @kristarein
    @kristarein 3 роки тому

    Hereeeeee

  • @victoriagarcia4133
    @victoriagarcia4133 3 роки тому

    Early