Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line and the character development however I don't like how it takes forever for everything start to piece itself together I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part two and keep up the good work
I feel like the title isn't entirely true. He did get revenge but much later which is not the video itself. The issue with old fanfics like these they lack some details we know today about the plot. For example who is Tobi.
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line and the character development however I don't like how it takes forever for everything start to piece itself together I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part two and keep up the good work
Part2
Part 2
I feel like the title isn't entirely true. He did get revenge but much later which is not the video itself.
The issue with old fanfics like these they lack some details we know today about the plot. For example who is Tobi.