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- ะะฟัะฑะปัะบะพะฒะฐะฝะพ 5 ะฒะตั 2024
- Link to chapters 15, 16 & 17: www.wattpad.co...
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Plot: Taehyung, aged 28, has gained significant success as a thriller and drama writer.
Jimin, on the other hand, is an aspiring romance writer, fervently searching for a unique style and voice that will distinguish him in the literary world.
One fateful day, Jimin discovers that the renowned horror author is in search of a new beta reader to review his yet-to-be-published scripts.
Encouraged by a friend, Jimin decides to submit his rรฉsumรฉ without anticipating a response.
To his astonishment, a few days later, he receives an email from Taehyung's assistant, confirming his acceptance for the role.
Not only does this position offer an attractive salary, but it also grants Jimin access to the writing expertise of a successful author and guidance for his own projects, paving the way for a promising future.
What Jimin hadn't foreseen, however, was how challenging his life would soon become.
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Link to chapters 15, 16 & 17: www.wattpad.com/1395120632-broken-spirits-vmin-ff-chapter-15-16-and-17-vipers
General link to the story: www.wattpad.com/story/339765543-broken-spirits-vmin-ff
BRO---------U MUST BE KIDDING ME-------I LITERALLY SCREAMED!
Ah that predator and prey depiction in the end was good
Today I continue my work from home. So I will read it tomorrow
I love you so much Jimin And Taehyungi
The worst part of this video is it ends ,so soon. Now I'm more excited for your next update ๐
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vmin l love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu โคโค
I truly can't wait to watch it, but plz don't overwork yourself or anything ๐ค๐
When I am done doing all of my school work and have free time, I will definitely start reading the new chapters!!!! I can't wait to read!!! โค๏ธ
Vmin is the most cute and adorable soulmate forever love you so much โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค
Was waiting for it now going to read the chapterโค
I'm excited for you, honey โค
jimin ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฐ๐ท๐Theyung ๐BTS
I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!!! I am always in love with you videos and pictures!!! ๐ซถ
I read it already...was too eager...but along with teaser every thing was replaying...good work...keep going... fighting
Tae really exaggerated. Let's imagine everyone who is a little annoyed with school pranks reacts so viciously and destroys several lives? I'm not justifying what Jimin and his friends did. But Tae had his revenge long ago. In my opinion he was too vindictive and couldn't draw the line. He, as the spoiled rich boy who has everything, takes a devilish revenge on young people who have a harder time making a career and making money. In my opinion he should have made a cut and not gone so far. He had already changed him negatively and influenced his life and yet he was so bloodthirsty and hateful that he would have wanted to do this for so long if Iseul hadn't told Jimin. I thought Tae would have more sympathy and feelings for him at the very latest after the Dear Daisy chapter. I completely understand Jimin, he manipulated and lied to him to the extent that Jimin believed in a friendship and would never in his worst dreams think that Tae would destroy his life like that. If Tae had done this as an enemy and an unknown, emotionless ex-classmate like he did to the others, it would be less bad and treacherous. But as a friend/employer with whom you share thoughts, feelings and activities, it's already too hard to bear. I hope someday Tae feels something like remorse and pain and Jimin doesn't forgive too quickly. Tae makes it too easy for himself by blaming Jimin for the fact that he is kind-hearted and trusted and followed a friend's advice and opinion. Nobody would think that a person is behind all the bad things in your life. I'm curious if Ari finds out about this from Jimin and believes him, at least it was his fault that she changed and get her new job and had to go to work and leave Jimin on his birthday. Although she is also to blame because you can say no to your superior if he gave permission to have the day off beforehand then I don't care if he calls in the evening and calls me back to work. You can do this the next day too. Not only had she ignored him, but she had shown that Jimin wasn't her top priority and ignored him emotionally for months, Jimin isn't the only one to blame.
My criticism on the sidelines dear Seraphine, can I be honest with you? This chapter is the first that made me uncomfortable. The thing that bothers me is the disrespectful portrayal of God and Christianity. I don't like these blasphemous lines and comparisons. I couldn't read any further and had to ignore them and keep scrolling. It would be nice if one could continue reading the story without defaming religion and hurting other people's feelings.
I want to make one thing clear, with all due respect: First of all, thank you for expressing your opinion and know that I take it into account and I hear you. Nevertheless, I'm not someone who appreciates having restrictions placed on my expression, be it in speech or writing. Emotions are deeply personal, and everyone has the right to feel as they do. However, I won't accept limitations or constraints on my storytelling, whether they stem from religious, philosophical, or political beliefs. My work is a work of fiction, featuring fictional characters and scenarios, and I believe it should be evaluated as such. I implore you not to prioritize emotions over reason. If someone finds my content disagreeable, they are free to choose not to engage with it. But asking me to self-censor in order to avoid potentially 'hurting' someone's feelings, especially in the context of a fictional story on Wattpad, is something I cannot comply with. When I encounter content I don't agree with or enjoy, I simply move on without imposing my views or emotions on others, and I expect the same courtesy in return.
I want to emphasize that I'm not approaching this as an attack on personal beliefs. It's crucial to recognize that the story I'm creating is a work of fiction with its own cast of characters, each with unique agendas and beliefs that play a role in shaping the story's and character's future. Imposing limitations on these characters' traits would hinder their development in a way that doesn't align with my vision for the narrative. I cannot compromise the creative process and the path I've chosen for the story because of potential discomfort related to personal beliefs. I respectfully assert my decision to maintain creative freedom. If you or others find aspects of it disagreeable, you have the right to opt out or avoid it altogether.
@@seraphinerose Thank you for your quick answer. I think you misunderstand me. I won't stop you from expressing your feelings. I'm not restricting you either, I have no idea why you're reaching so far that you feel restricted in your feelings and writing. I know you write more directly, more detailed and more intimately. Everything is good. But mocking a religion why and for what? What's the point of freedom if I know I'm hurting my fellow human beings? That doesn't fit logically, not even for a fictional story. I think the flirting/sexual scenes could be good just as well without the insulting comparisons to the Christian religion. I agree with you that i can ignore content that i don't like and I was close to that too because I was really struggling while reading. Iโm being honest and I hope that you don't take my criticism as one that criticizes your work but rather the topic you chose at that moment. Religion or mocking God is a decision you make and it doesn't make a story or a human more interesting, beautiful or intellectual, so you can do without it if you want. Unless you don't want to, then that's another thing I'll accept. But it's not like we would have been missing something if the story had been written without the religious element. It's not essential to use it, your story won't lose anything if you leave it out, in my opinion and it'll still be great.
โ@@LacostePrincess1 "I won't stop you from expressing your feelings. I'm not restricting you either, I have no idea why you're reaching so far that you feel restricted in your feelings and writing."
When you bring to my attention that my references to religion and the manner in which I address God in my story might cause discomfort to someone, it seems as though you're placing constraints on my expression and requesting that I conform to the sentiments and desires of others. Must I, in essence, tailor my narrative to everyone's individual beliefs and emotions?
"But mocking a religion why and for what? What's the point of freedom if I know I'm hurting my fellow human beings? That doesn't fit logically, not even for a fictional story. I think the flirting/sexual scenes could be good just as well without the insulting comparisons to the Christian religion."
It's important to remember that our individual freedom is balanced by the freedom of our fellow human beings, and this balance is what makes it beautiful. You have the liberty to hold your beliefs, just as I have the liberty to maintain a completely different viewpoint on the subject. One's connection with God or religion is a deeply personal matter and should remain as such. It isn't something that I or anyone else who doesn't share the same connection should be compelled to accommodate.
"Religion or mocking God is a decision you make..."
Religion, having certain beliefs about God, and believing that we all should accommodate these beliefs and act a certain way is also a decision you make.
"...it doesn't make a story or a human more interesting, beautiful or intellectual, so you can do without it if you want. Unless you don't want to, then that's another thing I'll accept. But it's not like we would have been missing something if the story had been written without the religious element. It's not essential to use it, your story won't lose anything if you leave it out, in my opinion, and it'll still be great."
The potential impact of altering or removing certain elements from my story, which I consider important, is not something anyone else but me can know. This is because one cannot predict the direction in which my story and its characters are headed or the purpose they serve. Only I know that because I wrote it. Whether a character's beliefs or their manner of expression make them more intriguing is also a subjective judgment. One person may find them captivating, humorous, and intelligent, while another may perceive them as foolish and disrespectful. In conclusion, I value your perspective, and I'm grateful that you've shared it. The exchange of viewpoints on various topics that impact us is essential for fostering thoughtful discussions and meaningful dialogue.
P.S. The intention behind that particular scene was not to ridicule or mock God, but rather to explore and challenge the character of Iseul. It presents a paradox, where a character with supposed religious background and religious parents engages in behavior that starkly contrasts those beliefs - involving drug use, dishonesty, promiscuity, and exploitation of others. The scene's purpose lies in highlighting and examining this contradiction within Iseul's character.
Excited for the next parts..Most of u said tht Tae did wrong to Jimin..but i felt that ppl who grew alone in such a kind of childhood and mindset..it would be a really deep impact to their mind and ideology,even if u hurt them a little,they are deeply hurted due to the painful trauma they always go through..
Lets see how the story continues..its moving with a unique path..too excited for the next ones..
(I just shared my opinion guys)๐
Love u eonnie..love ur stories as alwaysโคโค
Thank you very much for your opinion. I love to read these type of comments. โค๏ธ
@@seraphinerose No problem..it was just my point of view.๐๐
There are only a few writer who do justice to the vmin .And I appreciate your writing skills you are too good and I love your writing plot your point every thing is perfect I already read it many times while I am jikook fan .๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐lots of love author
Thank you very very much โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
You deserve that .๐
CAN'T WAIT!!
OMG..... I hated taehyung for what he did to minie
The revenge was too much ๐ข
I couldn't stop reading until I finished it all
I swear I cried alot ๐ข๐ข
Mee too , how mean tae could be to mini๐ข๐ข๐ข๐ข
That was so Dawn awesome you are so super amazing writer plsss keep going on 'Fighting'๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Vmin u are best โคโค
Amazing โค
So beautiful โคโคโคโค
I dropped everything and read it in one go and the only thing I can say is WOW .. And I was right about the AI pic you uploaded when I look at it now itโs more emotional as I was thinking Jimin might get more furious at Tae after they are done but he rather silently walked out โน๏ธ .. Even more excited for the next chapters coz I got less clues about it. And may I ask when are you going to upload overall story video that you have mentioned previously? ๐
Well, I uploaded it along with the teaser one but it got flagged by UA-cam for copyrights so... I had to take it down unfortunately. ๐ฅฒ
I trust you so much
WoW ,,,How can your so so good with editing and writing...๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป
Good luck
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I am a new reader so I don't know. Can you please tell me how many days later you drop the chapters.. i mean how many days after after you drop a chapter
Generally after 14 days.
@@seraphinerose ah! Okay.. thank you ๐
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Jimin never loved her
Agree ๐ฅฒ