Fiction Writers - Week 5 - Descriptive Writing and Imagery

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  • Опубліковано 6 лис 2024

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  • @ariyanpine6160
    @ariyanpine6160 4 роки тому

    This was so delightful, not in the least because you've such a charmingly chirpy personality! The 13 minutes and 19 seconds were well-spent, thank you!

  • @siddharthayyachamy872
    @siddharthayyachamy872 7 років тому +11

    I came up with these words.Check it out kindly.
    The waves hit the shore restlessly , moving in a supple like the curtains in a storming wind. Above all the noises the buzz of the sea echoed like a mistuned radio.
    The sand clasped against my toes with every step I made.The mid noon sun shed all its love on the sand making it seethe as every grain burned by its love , frying my foot in a pan of nothing.
    The beach was empty by the time we reached. The high Gray coloured beach resort seemed to be lifeless. There was a sign of pre disaster peace. More and more restaurants staged across the shore were closed.
    I look back at the sea again.
    The stillness of the waves were same hitting the shore in foams of white. It never crossed the border it has created with the previous waves. It was greatly humble today. No big or outrageous waves. It was all subtle and that looked mysterious to me as if something waited to hit the stage on a surprise note without a call , that could flip everyone upside down by its performance.

    • @von2782
      @von2782 5 років тому

      Siddharth Ayyachamy wow my goal is to be at your level

    • @scarletlady9870
      @scarletlady9870 4 роки тому

      Siddharth Ayyachamy this is really good

  • @marwa731
    @marwa731 4 роки тому

    I wish my teacher was this cool .. thank you u're so passionate ❤

  • @sebastianmachado9733
    @sebastianmachado9733 5 років тому

    What a lovely, LOVELY video. Thank you.

  • @4everachild
    @4everachild 7 років тому +3

    would love to know where the web page to these lessons are?
    These are great lessons!

  • @lindiwekhoza2963
    @lindiwekhoza2963 4 роки тому

    I like the metaphor 👌

  • @escapistreader3860
    @escapistreader3860 5 років тому

    Thank you so much! I tried the task.

  • @ReNeaLLPhantom17
    @ReNeaLLPhantom17 2 місяці тому

    Yes ma'am

  • @shanewalkingdead8258
    @shanewalkingdead8258 3 роки тому

    I want to write a novel only using descriptive writing

  • @maystone7966
    @maystone7966 7 років тому

    hi