offbeat tune - second song i made

[@MattPixelSpriteMaster]

Your song really ain't do bad, dude! It actually sounds really good! You even did it pretty quick since your first one as well! You shouldn't doubt yourself that much! (Especially considering it would take me so much more time to do something at this level.)
Awesome job pal! :)

[@zbrains1993]

Persevere! This song is pretty neat!

[@cheese18100]

My ears bleeding...

[@d_fr.3]

I just want to ask you... HOW DO YOU HAVE MUSIC THEORY. I DONT HAVE IT AT ALL