It's your first video and it's good better than my first. But there is some improvement needed to make it even better. I think you can try to follow up the story more but yeah I understood that you won't get much edits in the tiktok that follows up the story. And you can try to make them react more instead of same reaction. Sorry, if I offended you but I am just giving you suggestions. And I am waiting for next part.
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Guys Part 2 has alr come!
It's your first video and it's good
better than my first.
But there is some improvement needed to make it even better.
I think you can try to follow up the story more but yeah I understood that you
won't get much edits in the tiktok that follows up the story.
And you can try to make them react more instead of same reaction.
Sorry, if I offended you but I am just giving you suggestions.
And I am waiting for next part.
TYSM💗
part 2
Its alr out
Please part 2
@@GustavorussiaFreefirejogo part 2 is on channel
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Why Tohka have black hair?
@@KamijouTouchiTMT i will fix it in next part