@@PhoenixTheAngel I wish I could do that more often, honestly, but it's just not something I'm equipped for. I can only write characters as the specific type of dumbass that I am, which unfortunately isn't the cute, silly kind. I'd give you a part two if I could, but I think she's just a one-time deal.
Even if bleeding out, the cleric has to be kept safe first. Not only is she too sweet to risk, if the cleric goes then the party falls apart. It's cute to hear her getting a little flustered when being seen together and then an admission of whats built up just to add a nervous L bomb and kisses at the end there. Great stuff and fantastic character development too 😁
I really appreciated the beautiful quality of your voice in this audio. It has a unique cadence that suggests a "prettiness" in this character. The feminine innocence couples well with the clear intent to overcome her anxieties in a vulnerable moment. In other words, her behavior is virginal in nature; devoted and pure. The transition from vulnerable to intimate was delivered as daintily as this fae creature appears in my mind. The icing on the cake was when the fae's role became even more illuminated upon running into her quirky friends. I'm glad I listened to this entire thing because you left out southern accent as one of your skills ;)
This is magnificent everything is perfect the ambiance, the vocals, the background, the characters its all perfect thank you for this! Would love for this to be a series thank you for all your hard work. This is a masterpiece and so very cute! Sorry if my comment is a bit scatterbrained
She's stressing too much. All we need is a long rest. All our wounds will heal and she'll have her spell slots back. It'll be fine! 😂 Edit: none of this nonsense about "wasting my mana on myself." An incapacitated healer is no use to anyone. The healer must be healed
Love your style, only tip I'd say is space out your conversations a bit, let a moment dead space for natural pauses between characters speaking. Otherwise it's awesome great work 🥰
@@DubiousCreatureVa nope got it right, dialogue just felt a bit rushed between the three characters 😊 just like in regular conversation folks pause after someone finishes talking, in case they aren't done 🤣
@@Jsellesinemporium Ohh! I understand. Got it! Sorry, this is one of my first audios to feature multiple characters so I'll keep that in mind going forward
If this doesn't become a series where they fight monsters together, I think I'll cry silver tears.
I agree with everything Storm says.
@@PhoenixTheAngel I like you.
@Stormcoming6 I like you too you bakkadere writer
@@PhoenixTheAngel I wish I could do that more often, honestly, but it's just not something I'm equipped for. I can only write characters as the specific type of dumbass that I am, which unfortunately isn't the cute, silly kind. I'd give you a part two if I could, but I think she's just a one-time deal.
Even if bleeding out, the cleric has to be kept safe first. Not only is she too sweet to risk, if the cleric goes then the party falls apart.
It's cute to hear her getting a little flustered when being seen together and then an admission of whats built up just to add a nervous L bomb and kisses at the end there.
Great stuff and fantastic character development too 😁
That was so sweet. You're a really good voice actor, I loved the voice and accent of the second party member.
I really appreciated the beautiful quality of your voice in this audio. It has a unique cadence that suggests a "prettiness" in this character. The feminine innocence couples well with the clear intent to overcome her anxieties in a vulnerable moment. In other words, her behavior is virginal in nature; devoted and pure. The transition from vulnerable to intimate was delivered as daintily as this fae creature appears in my mind. The icing on the cake was when the fae's role became even more illuminated upon running into her quirky friends. I'm glad I listened to this entire thing because you left out southern accent as one of your skills ;)
10:28 Loved how you hummed the Genshin theme.
This is magnificent everything is perfect the ambiance, the vocals, the background, the characters its all perfect thank you for this! Would love for this to be a series thank you for all your hard work. This is a masterpiece and so very cute! Sorry if my comment is a bit scatterbrained
Thank you so much!! This was a lovely comment to read
Gud job.
9/10 on VA skill
8.5/10 writing
7/10 recording
Overall great job, you did a marvelous job.😊
What a soothing hum, wonderful work Doobie!
Read the struggle to get this out and gave you a sub, heartfilled and passion projects should be rewarded, good work!
@@domaldo2261 that's so sweet of you, I really appreciate it
She's stressing too much. All we need is a long rest. All our wounds will heal and she'll have her spell slots back. It'll be fine! 😂
Edit: none of this nonsense about "wasting my mana on myself." An incapacitated healer is no use to anyone. The healer must be healed
shhh she doesn't know that don't break her immersion
Very romantical, immersive and ambient, quality stuff 👌
Thank you so much!! I really tried
This was fantastic. You did a great job, and more than earned a subscribe!
This was very well done, great job!
Omg this one is so damn sweet and your acting is fantastic!! More please 🙏
@@VoiceofJuany thank you so much!! This one was really fun to voice, even though everything else about it was a struggle ;w;
The accent ❤️❤️❤️
I swear, I’m only here for the lore 🗣️🔥
i appreciate my lore heavy fans
this needs to have a second part at least
Lovely
I swear thats the opening song to genshin impact 10:40
Hehe it is. Felt it was soothing, needed a song, so that's the one I went with :))
@@DubiousCreatureVa I agree frrrr
Love your style, only tip I'd say is space out your conversations a bit, let a moment dead space for natural pauses between characters speaking. Otherwise it's awesome great work 🥰
If I'm reading this correctly, the feedback is longer pauses? Sorry if I'm not understanding ;w;
@@DubiousCreatureVa nope got it right, dialogue just felt a bit rushed between the three characters 😊 just like in regular conversation folks pause after someone finishes talking, in case they aren't done 🤣
@@Jsellesinemporium Ohh! I understand. Got it! Sorry, this is one of my first audios to feature multiple characters so I'll keep that in mind going forward
@@DubiousCreatureVa for being so new you're doing great 😊 keep up the good work.
i was always meant to be with her, you could call it Faete ;)
ba dum tiss
don't mind me if i fall into a deep slumber in the arms of my cleric (im already healed, but im just eepy)
Not the genshin loading screen theme lol
it's a soothing song you can't lie
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This was so well done!
thank you so very much!