I Tried - Sad Deep Storytelling Piano Rap Instrumental

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  • @evieclark5739
    @evieclark5739 3 роки тому +9

    i’ve been listening to this for three years now. it gets sadder every time.

  • @bdawg6999
    @bdawg6999 7 років тому +444

    "my mom killed herself back in 2004, I was barely 5, I thought my life was a mistake. I was misplaced, born at the wrong time, wrong place." Its hard when you lose your fate. My dad died when I was barely 10. I didn't get to say good bye. (Sing this Part) I'm on a lonely road, What what should I do.(x3) I don't know why, I don't know how but I have always been hurt. From the start. But that Pain is gone now one I pull this trigger so lets just leave it at this.(Sing this part) I'm on a lonely road, what what should I do.(x3) I guess this means goodbye to all my allies. That is my song that I made, leave a like it if you liked the rap!

    • @tanikainsight8271
      @tanikainsight8271 7 років тому +12

      b dawg get the pain out through the music and words share it with others - that how you heal and heal others along the way. Much blessings to you

    • @abdullahkaradza8681
      @abdullahkaradza8681 7 років тому +13

      From the bottom of my heart i have so much respect for you, cheer up stay strong stay on the right track to a successful happy future

    • @Abby-dq2yk
      @Abby-dq2yk 7 років тому +7

      b dawg keep writing kid. it’s the only way to escape. Good work

    • @donnelldews8633
      @donnelldews8633 6 років тому +2

      b dawg damm bro sorry

    • @emmaoneil1740
      @emmaoneil1740 6 років тому +2

      i would never have the guts to say that to the public

  • @saint_zach861
    @saint_zach861 7 років тому +6

    This made me realize how little time we have left on this Earth. I was rapping about me and my brother and how we would sit in a field and just have little picnics and it all feels like yesterday it was 7 years ago. It honestly hurts to think about it.

  • @victordia099
    @victordia099 7 років тому +2

    Okay Hey guys, I just want to thank everyone who shared their lyrics on this song! Everyone wrote beautiful texts and I want to take the time that I have read everyone's lyrics and they all gave me chills! This song is so sad but yet with your lyrics and this music together you made my day! THANK YOU FORM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART!

  • @Life_With_Dany1701
    @Life_With_Dany1701 7 років тому +829

    Spoken:
    This goes out to all the people out there, ya know the ones struggling with depression I know its hard but you'll get through it I promise
    Slow Rap:
    I walk around with a smile on my face
    When in reality all I feel is disgrace
    Life got me messed up on so many levels
    Everywhere I turn I see some more of my devils
    I try so hard to be nice and fit in
    But every time I try, I fail again
    I love my friends and I love my fam
    But still I feel like no one gives a damn
    Every night its just another nightmare
    Really by now I shouldn't be scared
    But I'm terrified of what could happen
    Sometimes I'm scared of just nappin
    I got all these problems in my head
    Sometimes I wish I was dead
    I know it's not the solution
    But sometimes the air around here is like pollution
    Every breath I breathe it gets harder
    While the good memories seem farther
    I know I got Dakota but I feel like I'm pushing him away
    I don't show it but all I want is for him to stay
    People don't understand what I go through
    I don't even think the ones who say so do
    I stuggle with anxiety and depression
    Sometimes I feel like I'm in a compression
    I feel so stuck and I feel so alone
    The choices I've made I don't condone
    I make stupid mistakes
    Nah, I don't think you can relate
    Most people try too hard but they just dont understand
    My emotions are like a tightly pulled rubberband
    Any moment I may break
    Trust me that'll be a mistake
    I take all these pills to try and be normal ha
    What is normal anyways
    I've always been stuck inside my own mind
    It's like a cage and I can't get out, I'm blind

    • @rubencasados373
      @rubencasados373 7 років тому +21

      Danyelle Ledford damn that's some deep shit I feel u cause I've been thru this

    • @Life_With_Dany1701
      @Life_With_Dany1701 7 років тому +22

      Yeah, I've been through so much it's killing me. I hate that anyone has to deal with this shit.

    • @daddy_lucifer4207
      @daddy_lucifer4207 7 років тому +8

      I like this alot im a rapper and write my own songs if you wanna hear something i wrote ill show you and im honestly thinking about having someone to write songs for me and ill even pay whoever does it if they are interested

    • @Life_With_Dany1701
      @Life_With_Dany1701 7 років тому +3

      Lukka Williams thank you and I would love to see something you wrote. :)

    • @justingash5703
      @justingash5703 7 років тому +10

      Don't let someone else write your songs. Ghostwriting, in my opinion, takes away from the meaning behind the lyrics of a rap. I say this because you have your own story to write, you can't tell someone else's story. Write your own stuff man. Tell your story, not someone else's.

  • @brose7611
    @brose7611 7 років тому +3

    whoever played this on the piano has some beautiful soul. love it

  • @-drak-8274
    @-drak-8274 7 років тому +60

    Every time I go away I miss your smile
    looking in your eyes I see the beauty of this life
    thinking 'bout the past I wonder
    where I'd be without you in my life
    going few years back
    I remember dreaming about the life I have right now
    every night I cried thinking I'll never find someone like that
    but I always knew that only love can heal a broken heart
    I Tried my best to escape this loop that we call living
    everyday felt worse I lost all hope but I kept wishing
    deep down I hoped that there will come a time when I find the meaning
    since I knew no one's born without a reason so i kept believing
    that one day I'll find a soul that would share my pain
    and give my life a new meaning

  • @alphaotr
    @alphaotr 5 років тому

    It’s beautiful to see people sharing different stories on here... it’s one of those things that really shows people still have emotions in this world

  • @amazingamyroser9177
    @amazingamyroser9177 7 років тому +151

    I tried to face all this stuff by myself and I promise I tried but it's impossible to do it feeling completely alone, and I am sorry I wasn't strong enough to face the world alone but now you are gone, you at least have a new family though, and I think that they do love you but I know that they actually hate me even though I brought you into this world that doesn't mean anything's them and they didn't know what I was going through in the end I don't blame them nor hate them because Maybe you will get truly loved by the system because when I got put in system I didn't get that same true love and I prayed since you two were babies that you didn't experience my experiences with it and you would make it

    • @josephcastillo418
      @josephcastillo418 7 років тому +3

      I love your lyrics because I went through the same thing...

    • @josephcastillo418
      @josephcastillo418 7 років тому +2

      Amazing Amy Roser lol I made it through though found my first love but lost it. It’s cool though... on the mob

    • @lezra5107
      @lezra5107 6 років тому +1

      Amazing Amy Roser I'm really sorry about your kids

    • @nazmushshaker1977
      @nazmushshaker1977 6 років тому +1

      my heart is calm down slowly.
      i fell the shatterd faces who is tired to fight with agony and take the toughest path without company.
      everyehere is somber
      take me with you.

    • @Orangeforever66778
      @Orangeforever66778 6 років тому

      Mmmmm...is that the s t o r y is it ohhhhhh.

  • @as-th4yt
    @as-th4yt 5 років тому +1

    I tried so hard to keep my older brother out of trouble it hurt me deep when i found out he was in jail again and im glad i found this beat so i can tell him how i feel 💛💛💛 thank u so much for making this beat

  • @waterwell4284
    @waterwell4284 7 років тому +8

    See me right know, in the confort of pain, I'm drained I'm ashamed betrayed by my pain, my fears hold me ,can't explain/ I tried and can't look back because my past laughs, last time I checked I was miles back...going towards a unsecure path hope it can spread some light to my past, but I can't my action dictate my chances so if I fall I better be still, until my moment comes I'll be sure to catch it, just to prove my WILL....

  • @ramazanuymaz581
    @ramazanuymaz581 Рік тому +6

    (Verse 1)
    I'm tired of running, tired of chasing dreams,
    Feeling like I'm stuck in a never-ending stream.
    Every day is a battle, trying to keep my head up high,
    But sometimes I wonder, how much longer can I try?
    I'm tired of pretending, putting on a brave face,
    When inside I'm drowning in this endless chase.
    The weight on my shoulders is getting hard to bear,
    I'm tired of the struggles, it's more than I can bear.
    (Chorus)
    I'm tired, so tired, of this constant fight,
    Searching for a glimmer of hope in the darkest night.
    But I won't give up, no, I'll keep pushing through,
    Even when I'm tired, I'll rise and start anew.
    (Verse 2)
    I'm tired of the pressure, the expectations weighing me down,
    Always striving for perfection, wearing a perpetual frown.
    The world keeps spinning, but I'm stuck in this loop,
    I'm tired of the routine, feeling like a shattered truth.
    I'm tired of the noise, the voices in my head,
    Telling me to keep going, but sometimes I'd rather be dead.
    But deep down, there's a fire that refuses to die,
    Even when I'm tired, I'll find the strength to fly.
    (Bridge)
    But in these moments of exhaustion, I find clarity,
    I realize that being tired doesn't define me.
    It's just a temporary state, a stepping stone in my journey,
    I'll rest, recharge, and come back with a renewed fury.
    (Chorus)
    I'm tired, so tired, of this constant fight,
    Searching for a glimmer of hope in the darkest night.
    But I won't give up, no, I'll keep pushing through,
    Even when I'm tired, I'll rise and start anew.

  • @CodyKingdon
    @CodyKingdon 7 років тому +704

    "Look, i always tried, i always cried, but when they asked me if i was fine, i lied, cause my homie was dealing with shit that made him commit suicide, i didn't even get the chance to say goodbye, it still hurts even though i know.. Your in the heavens with god, growing your wings and starting to fly, everyday i ask why, what was he dealing with? What type of bitch made him do that shit? You weren't watching! Every time he was talking, you ignored him, blocked it, was i the only one watching! He feel no pain, without you, nothing will ever be the same, sitting in the room, playing video games, but i look at your grave through this window pane, cuts through your arms, through the veins, i'm the only one to blame.. You only get one chance, Life will never be a game, You don't come back to life, you don't respawn, that night, i saw the knife.. Shoulda known you were reaching to God.. I couldn't prepare myself enough to know that you were going to take your life! I try not to cry, it's just knowing that you decided to die.. I'll never get you back... Imma say this now, through a song, I love you man.. Goodnight.. TK"

    • @savcordova748
      @savcordova748 7 років тому +5

      Trae King can i use this in a non profit song im making about life & the struggles people go thru

    • @slimygaming6857
      @slimygaming6857 7 років тому +2

      Trae King wow😒😒

    • @miltonbilankulu3791
      @miltonbilankulu3791 7 років тому +2

      Dude!!! Omg!!!😢

    • @scc6943
      @scc6943 7 років тому +3

      Can I make a rap with this it might get stuff of your chest

    • @-xMJ-
      @-xMJ- 7 років тому +1

      Deep shit Trae.. Really Deep.. My condolences bro..

  • @Docnbeans
    @Docnbeans 7 років тому +37

    look
    took me about a year to write this
    ever since youve been gone ive been so lifeless
    i wish i could go out like you but life is priceless
    i try to figure out an excuse to manifest
    but when it comes to you
    seconds turn to hours and hours to days
    i sit hear frustrated because my feelings stay the same
    here or not your to blame
    because i was there for you every single day
    but when i dont text you
    you think its time to end your pain
    and when i think about it thats when comes the rain
    i couldnt force myself to see you in the grave
    because words for you couldnt be spoken
    and if i saw your parents the pain would be awoken
    your drunk dad i wouldve chosen
    or probably you crack head mom who always plays the victim
    but they neglected your and sent you in a cave of depression
    so i think its time for a confession
    i loved you girl ever since elementary
    and now those feelings are just complementary
    around you my fears and scars seemed to dissipate
    you were the lover of my soul
    and the master of my fate
    a love like this i couldnt dream to create
    because you were an angel even before that date
    yeah you were lost and things went to waste
    you were heart broken and cold
    and that fake shit was old
    and when we fought it was a storm
    with you it was complicated
    but me i wanted it dated
    you were short and i was long term
    you stabbed punched and said things that truly burned
    at that time those feelings were deserved
    the punishment i earned
    because i fucked around even though i loved you
    but i never talked shit about you
    saying im a fuckboy because you didnt claim me first
    and then things made a turn for the worst
    like pow and brains did disperse
    but ur wrist were the worst
    or maybe the pills you had eatin
    you battling you demons but accepted defeat and
    the pain is just worst every day
    i cry over you but i sort the words in different way
    i aint a broke record im just a broke person
    a broken heart with a few missing pieces
    and you knew many of the reasons
    due to the mental diseases
    one second you sweet and my queen
    the next ur stone cold and cold hearted
    but that got my love restarted
    but i regret when we parted
    you went one way and i went the other
    but ik we were always meant for each other
    so i love you and sleep soundly
    sincerely a man who loves you proudly

  • @gummi3076
    @gummi3076 7 років тому +4

    Love the instrumental. Is there any sheet music available for this relaxing masterpiece?

  • @simonwilliams4552
    @simonwilliams4552 7 років тому +8

    i just can't hold on, you treated me oh so wrong, on so many levels, i should have seen the clues, it was your loss, you're the one to lose, chorus
    , your cheating has destroyed my heart, broken torn apart, why did it end this way? I gave you all my love, you can never say I did not, I tried and then cried,
    too many nights spent alone without you by my side, the pain the hurt the flowing tide, and now your gone what can i do, left alone with my dream the ideal you,
    your cheating has destroyed my heart, broken torn apart, why did it end this way? I gave you all my love, you can never say I did not, I tried and then cried,

  • @omarowaychi5970
    @omarowaychi5970 6 років тому +1

    people who listen to this kind of music you are the only good things in this world

  • @taylorjones152
    @taylorjones152 Рік тому +3

    I tried to be sombody but all I got was rejection thrown into my face god forgive me I know I'm a sinner lookin for repentance I'm just lookin for my place please show me your grace this life im livin is full of ups and downs with your faith I'll never fall in the end you'll be their for us all till then I'm gonna be standin tall and keep my back up off that wall every loss thrown in my way is just another reason to grind got answers I gotta find to bad u cant hit rewind gotta focus on the present gotta focus on the matter at hand I call out to god like I'm talkin to a friend this life that I'm livin it's been a long road I hate the devil broke my code how can I go back and make things right cause repentance doesn't happen over night i tried to be sombody but all I got was rejection thrown into my face god forgive me I know I'm a sinner lookin for repentance I'm just lookin for my place please show me your grace .

  • @seancarson2829
    @seancarson2829 7 років тому +1

    this is really pretty and amazing it puts me in a state of mind and lets me open up

  • @kevinzority6032
    @kevinzority6032 5 років тому +17

    REAL STORY: Its all started when i was 6, i was the second child .. i was really stupid then haha yea... but we were poor and we were happy all the time bit then my little brother came i was very happy that i can play with somebody because at school everybosy hated me .. they looked at me like i was a animal or just a weird kid.. after 3 years i was 9 and we did go to my grandma there i was in highschool.. i met 3 frieds but they were jist like me hated and stupid haha .. but when we started talking i just thought about changin.. because i was too lazy and i dint want to learn from school.. then my mom gone to netherlands and she met a man who is my 3th little brother father.. i loved my brothers .. but then we must go to netherlands.. my mom said there was hope to have a good life i know she is not lying so i said oke.. next 3 years we really jumped from poor to actually RICH and we loved the house but most of the family i did go to highschool and again.... everybody hated me.. there i was first in love with a girl.. but she never talked to me .. so i felt alone in the world i wanted to give up on it and just go... but when higschool finished i went to college.. there first 1 year was bad.. again.. but then somebody came a new boy hes name was alex he was really smart but he had no friends and then i walked to him i said "hey uhm whats your name ?" He said "hey my name is alex and your's ?" I was so happy that somebody talked to me.. we were talking hours to hours and then next year.. we wanted to get a future so we started studying and working but i left work i was lazyy.. he said.. what are you soing ?? If you keep up like this your future is gone.. at that day my life changed and now im a succesful man with my friend alex ❤🙏 never give up👌

    • @beamlaktesfaye5621
      @beamlaktesfaye5621 5 років тому

      Kevin Zority I’m glad to hear that ❤️❤️stay positive, and be happy. Everything happens for a reason ❤️😊

  • @miakathman3361
    @miakathman3361 6 років тому +15

    She's dying inside but people nowadays are too dumb to realize, she's about to cry but she waits until it's at night and now she says "I'm so done with these lies it makes my flames ignite, it makes me wanna cry, it makes me wanna die!"

  • @Shay-dl6cr
    @Shay-dl6cr 5 років тому +10

    I tried...
    To save my eyes from my tears.
    I tried...
    To save myself from the words I hear.

  • @KingSolrac
    @KingSolrac 6 років тому +2

    Was a pleasure using this melody/beat on my first song ever! THANK YOU EDOBY AND KEEP DOING YOUR THING!
    PS: Song on all stores called "True Love"

  • @steven_cfc7844
    @steven_cfc7844 5 років тому +4

    I like to listen to this when I sit on the roof and gaze at the endless amount of stars and think where did it all go wrong.

  • @アリサ-w9k
    @アリサ-w9k 6 років тому +1

    This really tugged my heartstrings. Thank you for producing this.

  • @nikolasholte3
    @nikolasholte3 2 роки тому +3

    Motivating my self Esteem
    Asking me to not be so hard on me
    Chasing something I cannot see,
    Lost cause and Found peace
    Then lost control
    And found a drink
    Lose your way
    And fight the beast
    Spiral down and it all repeats
    Past the Brink of life
    Throwing you to many things at once
    In between giving up
    And curious how much more you can take
    The cool breeze on a nice day, the warm breath from the right Face
    Soft kiss you can still taste
    Laughter with the ones you hold Dear and close
    Even when they go off and become the ghost
    Maybe it's good to no
    That we all fall down
    Years after we crawl
    And fine are selfs questioning all we ever known,
    How out of no where you can feel Alone
    Then feels like that feeling will never Go
    A random moment when the Return of hope
    You ever regret something you wrote?
    I have more than once
    And I've felt embarrassed about who I was .or what I felt, and couldn't find nothing that helped
    So i Remained in need of Help, cuz no one wants to admit when you can't help your self
    Pride is the cost of health
    When you keep putting others or your self down
    Then that weighs on your soul even when you don't no
    I can't tell you what happens when you get old
    I'm only 29 and this just a little that I probably think I no, and when I do grow old I'll sit and laugh at the stupid shit I thought and in my chair I hope to Rock
    And watch sunset in my favor spot with the people I saved a spot
    That's a nice thought
    I don't think this will be one those things I Regret I wrote
    That's a step towars some hope ya this was a good mental note

  • @maliksaleem4242
    @maliksaleem4242 3 роки тому +1

    In the beginning when I was little I used to have everything that makes me happy when I was a kid, I used to know everything, I used to get along with everybody, I used to be a smart person that I was, I used to have alot of friends that I thought they were my friends until they turned their backs on me and now everything was starting to fall apart, At first I thought I had it all but now I'm suffering from Anxiety and depression. It really hurts to have that type of feeling that just stays with you for the rest of your life and I feel like I can't breathe enough, I feel like I'm dying from the inside when it's comes down to your judgment and all of the mistakes that I made really affect me but not only that it affected me but it affected everyone around the world and I can't trust people because of who they are and to those who do me wrong. Having Anxiety and depression really sucks, it hard to control yourself even tho you can't help it and That's facts 💯 😪 😔

  • @carliilove931
    @carliilove931 6 років тому +6

    I remember feeling like I wasn't good enough
    Had me questioning myself
    I wasn't sure enough
    Had me looking in the mirror
    Tryna analyze my figure
    I ain't Perfect
    You want perfect
    So that figures
    You always put me in a bad place
    Said we were moving at a fast pace
    It was all my fault
    I fell in love too hard
    I loved you when I didn't love myself (yeah, yeah)
    Said you love me
    But you only loved yourself
    You rocked me so hard
    You played all your cards right
    You played with my heart
    (I might) I might not be the same way
    You were walking in that door you wasn't saying "Hi"
    You were walking out that door you wasn't saying "Bye Bye"
    Seems like you only got that way when things ain't go your way (oh, oh)
    How could you tell me you love and behave this way
    Sometimes I don't
    Know how I survived
    You picked me up
    You threw me in the sky
    And when I fell you let me hit the ground
    I still felt alone with you around
    I learned my lesson
    Yeah shit got heck-tick
    But all in all the experience it was a blessing
    You taught me patience
    Can't skip the basics
    It's like you only wanted me for that sensation (yeah)
    I remember all the lies (all the lies)
    All the night you made me cry (made me cry)
    When you controlled my mind (you controlled my mind)
    Had me wishing I would die (Had me wishing I would DIEEE)
    You will never know how I feel (How I feel)
    I gave my all to you my love was real (My love was Reaall)
    But you didn't love me
    But you didn't love meeee
    I loved you when I didn't love myself
    Said you love me, but you only love yourself
    You rocked me so hard
    You played all your cards right
    You played with my heart
    I might (I mighhhhtt)
    Might not be the same way, Might not be the same Lay

    • @itztamiratv7219
      @itztamiratv7219 6 років тому

      Carli Lawson WHO dont know this song by Layton Green- Myself

    • @carliilove931
      @carliilove931 6 років тому

      Queen T huh?

    • @itztamiratv7219
      @itztamiratv7219 6 років тому

      Carli Lawson nvm i just knew wat song u were referring to

  • @elonwiggins994
    @elonwiggins994 7 років тому

    They have so much time to make it. No stress.

  • @SKARGAMINYT
    @SKARGAMINYT 7 років тому +6

    I feel everything i got tears in my eyes
    Some deep shit dawg
    Thank you for making it😊
    Means too much to me
    I got so many bars for it

  • @darnellgrant6760
    @darnellgrant6760 2 роки тому

    Since the day you both left us
    I've been feeling this pain that seems so infectious.
    Everyone that has seen it seems to get infected
    The pain in my heart reaches out to those unprotected
    Our guardians have passed, who's left here to protect us.

  • @skythundersky1544
    @skythundersky1544 7 років тому +107

    I can hold it.. I can still hold it... FUCK SAKE HAND ME A TISSUE

  • @gagehague5469
    @gagehague5469 5 років тому +2

    We all have problems but you can't go around them you got to go straight through it won't get better trust me we all have problems you just can't go back

  • @huskkiee
    @huskkiee 7 років тому +34

    Do I really have to open up my mind? Stop and freeze the time?
    To tell you things were never right, I was never fine?
    Life’s getting crazier and crazier but it all seemed like a lie
    A big circle encircling the world that we live in; bearing no purpose of life
    Do I really need to rap this all out for you to finally realize?
    To finally pay attention to my feelings, to finally break the ice
    To see through the thin layers of cries, the silence of things that went wry
    I’m desperately prying this metal cage; I’m giving it all in one try
    I tried, to salvage this feeling that was long gone
    It was long lost, emotions always comes with a cost
    I’m stuck at this junction, this road that is crossed
    Memories paused, my heartbeat stopped just so I could feel my own pulse
    My own fault, things never went right cos I’m all wrongs
    All mistakes and missteps left not forgiven, we all beg and sob
    Tears painting our pain on the soil; this love is a lost cause
    You’re long gone, I tried to forget you but I guess I still lost

    • @bangsaid9295
      @bangsaid9295 7 років тому +2

      HusKKiee heyyyy i found you again 😂,, i really love your lines, do you have a blog or something like that? I want to read it,,

    • @huskkiee
      @huskkiee 7 років тому

      Hey there haha. Good to see you. I do have one but I only post my lyrics on the beats on UA-cam haha

    • @bangsaid9295
      @bangsaid9295 7 років тому +1

      HusKKiee hahaha it's okay I'll try to find it,, i really love your lyrics, it just like describe what i feel right now 😄

    • @huskkiee
      @huskkiee 7 років тому

      Andika Prasetya glad you like them. appreciTe it a lot

    • @bangsaid9295
      @bangsaid9295 7 років тому

      HusKKiee can you tell me which video that you've wrote your lyrics?

  • @janaeackenhausen8759
    @janaeackenhausen8759 6 років тому

    Gorgeous piano!
    As I’m getting ready to move back home to Texas, this just reminds me of my time here. Beautiful story, I can take with me wherever I go!
    Thank you for your work🙏🏼 👂🏼many blessings.

  • @prg1324
    @prg1324 6 років тому +4

    What's life? When you have demons in your mind? Does anyone notice or care when you try to fit in when you care
    I've tried over and over again
    A battle that I can't seem to win
    Who's to say it won't end
    Who's gonna be there when I'm dead
    I know suicide isn't an option but when you're stuck and have tried
    There's nothing left inside

  • @kyphapost20
    @kyphapost20 6 років тому

    Mỗi lần mình nghe những tiếng piano này, mình lại nhớ đến một người, hình bóng ảnh cứ hiện lên trong đầu mình. Một hình ảnh của 1 cậu thanh niên ngồi rap, ngồi hát trên nền beat có sẵn, khi nghe cậu hát mình cảm nhận dc sự đam mê, tâm huyết ở trong đó. Bên cạnh đó mình còn cảm thấy sự ấm áp, chân thành. Mỗi lần nghe beat này, mình lại khóc. Mình cứ bị ám ảnh bởi hình ảnh chàng trai đó. Chàng trai đó tên là Mai Quang Nam. Chắc mãi cậu ấy cũng chẳng biết mình là ai. Nhưng mà có lẽ mình yêu cậu ấy mất rồi... Tình yêu nó bất chợt đến khi nào ta ko hay biết, có thể chỉ cần 1 hành động cũng làm ta bắt đầu có cảm tình, dần dần rồi lại yêu. Mà chắc ko bao giờ cậu ấy biết mình đã yêu cậu mất rồi, mình muốn làm mọi thứ tốt nhất cho cậu, nhưng có lẽ chúng ta ko bao giờ có thể yêu nhau... Chúc anh hạnh phúc Mai Quang Nam!

  • @kaiyamartin1513
    @kaiyamartin1513 5 років тому +7

    You can do a cover to “Myself by Layton Greene” with this beat

  • @isaacmonson4403
    @isaacmonson4403 3 роки тому +2

    Man this beat brings out a part of me i never even knew was there 🔥🔥🔥

    • @isaacmonson4403
      @isaacmonson4403 3 роки тому

      The part of me that wants to be better, the part of me that doesn't feel weighed down by all his shortcomings, failures, & mistakes anymore... The part of me that tries so hard to be accepted... It brings out the part of me that shines the brightest when i aint abusing substances or committing crimes or hurting ppl 🙏🏽

  • @dr3ako
    @dr3ako 4 роки тому +4

    i can't breathe, im suffocating
    and all i ever do is think about you
    my mind is on weed
    my mind isn't free
    the pain that you've cause me won't let me be me
    the lies that you've sold
    i bought every one
    don't wanna let you go
    i've lost and you've won
    everyone tells me to follow my heart
    i can't even think
    just don't know where to start
    you've already hurt me one too many times
    while im thinking hello, you're saying good bye
    you're saying goodbye, you're saying goodbye
    while im thinking hello you're saying goodbye
    (while im thinking hello you're saying goodbye)
    you're already lucked up
    your ' love ' made me fucked up
    you played with my mind
    and now it's goodbye
    why do you have to hate me so damn much
    why can't you just love me
    im never enough
    you don't appreciate the love that i give
    you say sorry and don't mean it
    i don't wanna live
    my mind is on weed
    my mind isn't free
    the pain that you've cause me won't let me be me
    the lies that you've sold
    i bought every one
    don't wanna let you go
    i've lost and you've won
    everyone tells me to follow my heart
    i can't even think
    just don't know where to start
    you've already hurt me one too many times
    while im thinking hello, you're saying good bye
    you're saying goodbye, you're saying goodbye
    while im thinking hello you're saying good bye
    (while im thinking hello you're saying goodbye)
    (everyone tells me to follow my heart)
    (i can't even think, just don't know where to start)
    (while im thinking hello, you're saying good bye)
    (while im thinking hello you're saying goodbye)

  • @EON314
    @EON314 7 років тому +2

    A mask glued to my face with dotted lines
    Covering my true feelings like a window with blinds
    Envy those around me born with happiness in their soul
    While I’m just an empty shell that’s so fucking cynical
    I discover more of myself talking in the darkness
    Where the light has led me astray and heartless
    Love in my heart is what I deeply desire
    Despite saying I want nothin more than to burn in fire
    Guess its because I always believed I never deserved
    And even asking such would seem like a a lot of nerve
    This road I walk seems to be stretching longer
    Breaking apart piece by piece as I wander
    Wanna turn directions but its a one way
    God take me from this path one day
    So I may find something to cherish in this life
    Like giving happiness to two kids and a loving wife
    Or Drinking with my brothers late at night
    Instead of staring at this ceiling wondering...
    Whether its worth the fight

  • @maskedy-music7155
    @maskedy-music7155 7 років тому +6

    This slow rap is for my friends that drowned during Hurricane Harvey.
    The tragedy broke my heart.
    I felt like you were super safe from the start.
    All of my thoughts are filled with darkness.
    I need a little more time to be heartless.
    I could do other things but I write this.
    The weather had no sense of polite ness.
    And all the time I think of you.
    Because we make a group, 3 is better then 2.
    And I know that I know that I wasn't afraid
    Just to go to the door and then call out your name.
    And I miss all the memories that we have shared.
    Like when we made a nice stick lair.
    All the time, I looked up to you.
    When you need something I'll be there for you too.
    And I just wanted to have a better life.
    All the things are just strife.
    If you can hear me, Your the best of the friend.
    I wish your life would never end.
    I would hang out with you till the day was dead.
    Now it's goodbye like any time well read.
    Hurricane Harvey was really bad for Texas. And a lot of my friends lived in Texas and a lot of them died because of drowning.

    • @delmygonzalez5036
      @delmygonzalez5036 6 років тому

      Dam 😭

    • @andriesdimopoulos5778
      @andriesdimopoulos5778 5 років тому

      Maskedy - Music aye man, I’m sorry for your loss, and I know this is a year later, but i just wanted to let you know that I’m sure they’re in a better place now, and things should be lookin up man, you just gotta keep your head up thru all that shit. Never give up hope man, your friends wouldn’t want you to

  • @alexneil394
    @alexneil394 7 років тому

    Bro the piano on this is simply breath taking , truly amazing and God like !

  • @moriahautumnslyric9182
    @moriahautumnslyric9182 5 років тому +3

    As long as I'm in the time we'll stay strong and alright

  • @eeriekeebs
    @eeriekeebs 7 років тому

    This should have billions of views...

  • @drudenae
    @drudenae 7 років тому +15

    10 second mark start time -
    Listen; hear the words I do speak as I
    Stare at the ground beneath my feet
    Turn my gaze to the sky and wonder
    Is God even alive?
    I know that I try to believe but all I see is pain and suffering
    And it hurts to say but sometimes when I look at the sky in the day
    All I see is rain
    I truly do hate to say it but; sometimes I wish I could die just to see
    Is God even alive?
    This isn’t some form of Christian rap
    And I don’t want this to turn into a preacher’s trap
    Sometimes I wonder; Is God even alive?
    Well let me answer that question
    It’s all based on your heart; and your perception
    Always listen to what everybody says but ask questions with a; slight inflection
    Never; ever let someone else’s words on god put you into some sort of; self reflection
    Because if you wanna get to where you wanna go and be what you wanna be
    Then you need to understand you and choose if you wanna believe
    My name is SnV; and yes I’m only 18 but
    I bring a self awareness and knowledge that is rarely ever seen
    But with these words that I speak and these lines I preach
    I promise you I lay my head down at night and I dream
    No more negative self-obsession; no more negative self reflection
    Beating myself up over a mistake I made weeks ago that has no correction
    But I guess it’s a mind state have to deal with now after a
    Relationship where both sides are not supportive
    If you’re in one; love the other side and never do abort it
    It may have been perfect then but it’s not now
    Believe me; There is a place not so far off in space where it’s the ideal state
    The type of state where with her; marriage is the goal - you don’t contemplate
    Because to contemplate is to hesitate and that is not true
    Don’t you see, we can be what we wish to be if we were to come together - exclusively
    And I hate to say it but sometimes I think we may not make it
    I’m kind of confused when sometimes you say that we can do
    But then you turn around and you act like you never knew
    And I’m not sure if there’s something going on between me and you that’s
    Keeping us at an arm’s distance but I wish that
    We could find some sort of; common existence
    You see if we were able to do that then
    Maybe the problems that we face wouldn’t be so fat
    Maybe we could move on past what we have and
    Move on forward with our relationship that we think could be so great
    If we could stop fighting every single day
    And it’s kind of crazy the way that I look at you and I think
    I love you more than anything
    But then I look into your eyes and I realize that
    Maybe that love is not found and maybe we weren’t meant to be
    And yes on the inside it’s killing me but sometimes
    That’s just how it is
    Damn.
    I love you
    Putting this together right now, it's my first project

  • @gardeniaceja734
    @gardeniaceja734 6 років тому +1

    I love this beat! But can you please make a longer version of this?? Thanks!

  • @hannahlewis9645
    @hannahlewis9645 6 років тому +5

    This is just a little bit of what I wrote...
    I tried so hard that night,
    To forget the pain that was inside my body.
    I tried so hard that night,
    To forget that you have died.
    You left me all alone;
    Now I have nowhere to go.
    I have nobody to hold.
    I tried so hard that night;
    I tried so hard that night...
    Please give me some feedback on what you think. Thank you.

  • @monetaavao891
    @monetaavao891 6 років тому +2

    Sometimes nothing is worth doing
    Someone will always be there
    Tough within state
    Crimes within night
    As tried saying nothing but lines are broken
    With tears

  • @SHAWNWESTFreeBeatsRapHipHop
    @SHAWNWESTFreeBeatsRapHipHop 7 років тому +167

    uff nice what a beautiful piano good job

  • @thequestforwisdom
    @thequestforwisdom Рік тому +1

    This is a gorgeous piece of music (spoken word below)
    Ever woken one morning, as the day is dawning and before you start yawning there's booze on your mind and a bottle of wine enshrined by the bed and the first thought in your head is to drink it?
    Not with olives and cheese as an aperitif but to cork it, straw it and pour it down your neck and in less than 10 seconds its gone and you move on to the next.
    And as the day progresses your head gets progressively more fuzzy and warm, but your torn between two worlds in an alternate reality, the duality of a life lived unconsciously but with enough functionality to survive.
    Life flashes by like a bird in the sky so far from your eyes its unreachable.
    That’s the hold that alcohol enacts as it acts to crush your soul and pull you into a hole with rock at the bottom and the rotten remains of a life long forgotten.
    Now fast forward four years, raise your glass for a cheers cos I'm out of that hole, realigning my goals and cleansing the soul. And even with glasses clinking I can resist the drinking but I cant stop thinking, I'm on the brink of insanity, this calamity that’s life.
    Freed from desire but not from the fire within the immortal sin the yearning for more, just one more score, consume til you're raw then hit the floor like a punch in the jaw from Tyson.
    No rising from that like a cat sleeping all day then fiending for attention when awake, there's no redemption or respite from that life and the drive to get high capitalises your time and you're striving to find a new fix, to throw in the mix.
    Its not important the poison you’ve chosen. Sex, drugs and sausage rolls, alcohol or rolling a joint, that’s the point. We can’t escape our fate we must face it and make it through the struggle, burst the bubble of illusion and start choosing the life that´s right to lead.
    Then you're freed.
    But not from desire and greed but like a seed dropping from the sky by a bird passing by to start a new life and grow, from a seed to a tree with branches and leaves with new hopes and dreams it seems,
    Unachievable
    Bursting the bubble, staying out of trouble then crawling through rubble, gasping for breath as a million regrets hit you like a steam train
    And the pain you feel after the realisations of your narcissistic actions attack you, but its all part of the package.
    It seems an unachievable act, but in fact its not, we can give it a shot, give it all that we’ve got,
    Cos why not?

  • @jaspervalentine1625
    @jaspervalentine1625 7 років тому +11

    I tried and I cried but now I just wanna die I see my life set out in front of me and its just straight line that ran parallel to yours until you took your own life.
    not finishing this

  • @DoItLookLikeImLeftOffBadNBouje

    just something i thought of writing, not necessarily a poem or a song.
    your beauty strikes me like an ocean wave
    how your eyes glisten between our gaze
    how your smile brings out mine, hard to contain
    your buttery smooth angelic voice to delight the airwaves
    the touch of your soft skin sends all worries astray
    for all the ways your beauty is seen, theres much more to say
    about the person you are and the miracle that's made you this way
    i cant think of any better person for a role model to portray
    the confidence you showcase with every word you speak
    you have potential to do anything in this world at its peak
    your presence is a present to every person that you meet
    intelligence is admirable, while your heart remains sweet
    learning from you all the time while you unknowingly teach
    listening to you sing is absolutely nothing short of a treat
    the first voice to start my day as i awake
    the last voice to soothe my soul as i fall asleep

  • @derphysikboss5612
    @derphysikboss5612 5 років тому +5

    Ich bin grad' allein, ich kann nicht schlafen
    Sie schreibt mir vermiss‘ dich, hayatim
    Warum sie perfekt ist? Weil wenn sie in 'nem Benz sitzt
    Macht sie den Beat laut und rappt mit, ah
    Sie sagt Baby heut‘ ist Partnerlook
    Air Max Classic T-Shirt Camerun
    Und wenn sie Frauen in mein' Video sieht
    Guckt sie mich schief an
    Sie sagt mach nicht so, wer ist Latifa?
    Sie wird zu Diva, ihr Blick aggressiver
    Aufgeben? Niemals sie greift zu Fifa
    Ich nehm' FC Bayern, sie AC Milan
    Mitten in der Nacht, es ist Halbmond
    Sie raucht eine Shisha auf dem Balkon
    Sie sagt Baby, es macht bald boom
    Bald kommt…

  • @Mega_tron843
    @Mega_tron843 6 років тому +2

    Im in love with this beat. Is there anyway you can add A LITTLE bass? I will more than likely purchase if so.

  • @ryannicholls3750
    @ryannicholls3750 7 років тому +7

    I don't think I've ever felt so connected to a beat before. 1 up brother this is some deep shit right here it's inspiring me to get the pad back out 🖎👊

  • @erazenuni88
    @erazenuni88 5 років тому +1

    I remember feeling like I wasn't good enough
    Had me questioning myself
    I wasn't sure enough
    Had me looking in the mirror
    Tryna analyze my figure
    I ain't Perfect
    You want perfect
    So that figures
    You always put me in a bad place
    Said we were moving at a fast pace
    It was all my fault (fault)
    I fell in love too hard
    I loved you when I didn't love myself (yeah, yeah)
    Said you love me
    But you only loved yourself
    You rocked me so hard
    You played all your cards right
    You played with my heart
    (I might) I might not be the same way
    You were walking in the door you wasn't saying "Hi"
    You were walking out the door you wasn't saying "Bye Bye"
    Seems like you only got that way
    when things ain't go your way (oh, oh)

  • @nostatus1335
    @nostatus1335 7 років тому +11

    Just going through these motions
    Emotions I can't show it or control it
    I feel broke so I stay sipping this potion
    Until I lose my focus
    Waking up with sheets soaken
    I'm a product of an omen
    An anchor in an ocean
    I ain't floating
    I'm at the bottom like a slolam
    Crest approaching
    Bottom of a totem
    Slaving for a token
    Battered from a Roman with commotion
    As a slogan
    Sulphur for atonement
    The government condones it
    It's legal so I roll it
    It's legal so I smoke it
    If evil souls get roasted
    No one questions where we're going
    We're Smeagle so we're jones'n to our bones just for the notion
    Poison melatonin
    Foil in our deodorant
    Organics mismanaged
    Scrolls are not reopened
    But there's a toll on this road
    We can't pay but we owe it
    Never own it someone sold it
    Before we've been awoken

    • @CanTrigg
      @CanTrigg 7 років тому +1

      No Status u stole these lyrics u did not write them

  • @jonnybrabals
    @jonnybrabals 3 роки тому +1

    This is so beautiful. Thank you so much!

  • @nathanclitherow8360
    @nathanclitherow8360 6 років тому +6

    I really love you
    So why'd you have to go?
    You're so far away, and now I'm stuck here in the cold
    Im Stuck here on my phone
    I'm stuck here in the roads
    I feel so dead inside, I havent been like this since it snowed
    I've been told, I'll get there when I'm old
    But who gives a fuck, by that time you'll be sold
    By that time, you'll have strolled
    By that time it won't roll
    No one cares about me, but there's so much shit which was untold
    It was all untold, I just have to unfold
    Now I'm being stranded and I don't know where to go
    I don't know where to go, I don't know what to say
    When I finally get the courage, by that time it'll be too late
    It will be too late, I won't look that great
    I'm already a mess, I don't need this hate
    I don't need this weight, I just need some aid
    But now every time I speak, I just get turned away
    I just get turned away, I really want to faint
    All of my hard efforts, they never make the grade
    What can I do? I've already sat and prayed
    I've never got the answer, I think I'm getting played
    Why am I so in love?
    Im in desperate need of hugs
    I just wanna pull the plug
    Please lord, don't turn me to drugs
    I'm trying, I'm dying
    I can't figure out why
    Everyday without you is a struggle, I can't lie
    I wanna fly, go up in the sky
    Cause every time I'm with you now it feels like I'm just high
    If I had a rocket, would I still be crying?
    Or would I buy a ring, just to stop from lying?
    I just wish that I could be with you, every fucking day
    I wanna tell you why, but there's so much in the way
    There's so much in the way, and my path ain't getting clearer
    It feels like nowadays I'm always looking in the mirror
    Always in the mirror, our relation's getting thinner
    Will we ever sit down together, maybe have dinner?
    Or am I just a sinner?
    I wanna get back with ya
    I feel like you're in space, I might as well call you rinmer
    When will I stop dreaming?
    Your smile's always gleaming
    This is my dirty life, and it really needs cleaning
    I've got no way out of this shit, but I'm still beaming
    I want you in my presence, I want to stop dreaming

  • @thedomitabletraveler7198
    @thedomitabletraveler7198 7 років тому

    Soft, soothing and touches the nerves at just the right scale. Well done

  • @lxstsxulz7386
    @lxstsxulz7386 4 роки тому +3

    What would you do, if you was me, I was you?
    Would you move on, go and find someone new?
    I know it hurts, believe that i'm hurting too
    I guess I can't hide it as well as you
    Look, I woke up next to the baddest bitch I've ever seen
    But even then all I could think was you and me
    My friends tell me "Anth, homie, just let it be"
    Unless they've been through it
    They don't know what the fuck I mean
    So please girl tell me what do I do
    'Cus I know that nobody's perfect but I'm perfect for you
    And girl you're perfect for me
    That's something you couldn't see
    I tried to show you but what was the point if you won't believe?
    Now tell me why did you leave?
    Do you not love me no more?
    See I can hide all the pain, but what remains is the scars
    I was the best I could be
    I know that I have my flaws
    But I gave all that I had
    Spent more than I could afford
    I spent 5 thousand dollars on a ring to call you my Mrs
    And you still had the nerve to say I gave no commitment?
    There was no way that I could save ya'
    Three years is what I gave ya'
    And then you leave me and go and find a new man three weeks later?
    My sister thinks you cheated and honestly I don't blame her
    'Cus moving on that quick is way too strange of a behavior
    And I bet that's he's happy 'cus he sees your posting pictures
    But dawg I bet my life she thinks about me when your with her
    He don't want you like I want you
    He don't need you like I need you
    He don't see you how I see you
    He don't breathe you how I breathe you
    And you know it, so tell me, what the fuck you see in him?
    We both know that you still love me
    So you shouldn't be with him
    You should be with me
    Right here in my home
    Right here all alone
    Making love until the morn'
    You love how I turn you on
    And one thing that I love and hate the most
    Is people always change but the memories don't
    And lately I can't even eat
    Lately I've been feeling ill
    When you cannot sleep at night
    That's when you know shit is real
    You don't even need a gun
    You don't even need a pill
    If you ever wanna die
    Fall in love and you'll get killed

  • @gabigibs5182
    @gabigibs5182 6 років тому +1

    I literally wrote a song to this. It’s depressing but it sounds good. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BEING AN INSPERATION!!

    • @liimnu5629
      @liimnu5629 3 роки тому

      Can we write song and record with this beat? Or have to ask permission?

  • @idresskhan4511
    @idresskhan4511 6 років тому +6

    I tried to get away
    Every night I would pray
    But I could never win
    Cuz I would be thrown back into the bin
    I didn't want to end up like this
    Mum I never ever wanted to put u through shit
    ButI went on the wrong path
    But u never helped me you just watched it all happen whilst the haters laughed
    Im sorry I broke you heart in half
    But I promise one day I'll be a shining star

  • @mannytorrez2138
    @mannytorrez2138 4 роки тому

    I lost my love ones wife kids they left to be my best friend painful feeling I tried twice they came back but left again now alone.. beautiful music just relax and reflection ❤️

  • @mrgamer-940
    @mrgamer-940 4 роки тому

    You dont know what you have until you lose it,and when you do your gonna hurt,on the inside and the outside,put you gotta pull it together so you can hold onto what you have left,never let go because if you do,you'll lose everything.

  • @kiwislice1406
    @kiwislice1406 7 років тому +34

    I walk around with a smile on my face When in reality all I feel is disgrace
    Life got me messed up on so many levels Everywhere I turn I see some more of my devils
    I try so hard to be nice and fit in
    But every time I try, I fail again
    I love my friends and I love my fam
    Butter still I feel like no one gives a damn Every night its just another nightmare Really by now I shouldn't be scared
    But I'm terrified of what could happen Sometimes I'm scared of just nappin
    I got all these problems in my head Sometimes I wish I was dead
    I know it's not the solution
    But sometimes the air around here is like pollution
    Every breath I breathe it gets harder
    While the good memories seem farther
    I know I got Rachel but I feel like I'm pushing her away
    I don't show it but all I want is for her to stay People don't understand what I go through I don't even think the ones who say so do
    I stuggle with anxiety and depression Sometimes I feel like I'm in a compression I feel so stuck and I feel so alone
    The choices I've made I don't condone
    I make stupid mistakes
    Nah, I don't think you can relate
    Most people try too hard but they just dont understand
    My emotions are like a tightly pulled rubberband
    Any moment I may break
    Trust me that'll be a mistake
    I take all these pills to try and be normal ha What is normal anyways
    I've always been stuck inside my own mind It's like a cage and I can't get out, I'm blind

  • @Wadani_95
    @Wadani_95 7 років тому

    Oh my gosh this is really amazing it's taking me to another life also makes me remember a lot of things I missed it 💔

  • @boogielollipop8948
    @boogielollipop8948 6 років тому +3

    I'm sorry you missed out when I went to school for the first time,
    And you didn't have me tell you that you were all mine.
    I'm sorry you weren't there to take me to the mall,
    And you weren't there to tell me I have to stand tall.
    Sorry you weren't the one I saw when I came home that day
    Or the one I'd run to when I had a bad day.
    I'm sorry you didn't hear me write these; you'd have been so proud,
    And you weren't there to lift me up on a cloud.
    Sorry you weren't there to tell me there's nothing to fear,
    But then again you should have been here.
    I'm sorry you weren't the one to teach me to ride a bike,
    Or the one who took me on my first ride.
    I'm sorry you weren't the one who carried me on his back.
    That was my other daddy, the one I actually had!
    Or the one who held me tight when strength is what I lacked.
    I'm sorry you weren't the one to hold me when I cried
    Or tell me I did great when I really tried.
    I'm sorry you were never there to teach me how to cook
    Or there at night to read me my favorite book,
    I'm sorry me as a daughter is what you never had.
    You will always be my father, but you will never be my dad. 😔💔

  • @luisnoel5690
    @luisnoel5690 7 років тому

    Man I feel it so deep it's like reliving what I'm already living bro u got me there I'm mean wwwooooowwwww it's special man u got me almost tearing up love it bro

  • @odeceee
    @odeceee 7 років тому +10

    i love this!

  • @andrewlasvegascars3885
    @andrewlasvegascars3885 Рік тому +1

    This is a letter to my daughter she passed away at 1 month I have so much to express I’m laying at night thinking of how I could have saved her here if goes
    Mmmm
    Somebody once told me and said you never know a good thing until it’s gone
    When I first held your hand i was a little bit scared but knew you mine all along
    Sitting here at the hospital waiting for 12 to hit
    So I can see my newborn daughter and kiss those pretty lips
    I remember Watching you born and cutting that cord
    You just weight about 8 pounds
    Man it blew my mind
    I can still hear you make them grunts when use the number 2
    I found it really cool that would make you like me too
    You were a temporary blessing that left way to fast
    I ask god everyday for a chance to bring you back
    I hope he shows you how to tie your shoes
    Cause that’s something I didn’t knew

  • @jordanjohnson2531
    @jordanjohnson2531 7 років тому +8

    The pain that I opened kept me awoken, everyone saw and started joken, they saw my wounds and started pokin, this is from the heart the way these words are wroten, I just really don't like the way they had to come out and be spoken, I kept hurting my self without even knowing, I burned my pain so why is it still going, it's like a dark stream of water that just will not stop flowing, I'm just a lost little boat that keeps on paddling, I've lost the war so why am I still battling, it's like if a snake dies but it's rattle keeps rattling,

    • @mrssosaa
      @mrssosaa 6 років тому

      Jordan Johnson can I please use this for a song please if you didn’t already use it

  • @lavizzerdrix3573
    @lavizzerdrix3573 7 років тому

    This track is beautyful. Just beautyful

  • @THIAXISTV
    @THIAXISTV 7 років тому +29

    Clutching the jagged edge, I cut myself today,
    Seeking the knowledge, to see if I still sense pain.
    What if you could see, the darkest side of me?
    The needle, the rush, the release of endorphins,
    In and through my blood stream, demanding conformance.
    Friendships redefined, zero peace in the mind;
    Anything to cram back the broken piece’s inside.
    Lifetime of changing sometimes, into many a times;
    I know I’m killing myself, inside I’m dying,
    I don’t give a damn, as long as I’m still flying
    Death certificate signed, my new prenuptial;
    No way I’m going back, Makers Mark another cupful.
    Actavis, Ambien, Adderall, Xanax binge,
    Very Best friends with the thing that's killing me,
    Enemies with my best friend, there's no healing me.
    The worse it got, the less I feared a fatal blood clot;
    Attempting payments, laying, face covered with snot.
    Becoming more reclusive, and the pills becoming more abusive;
    Moved to the basement, deep depression's a rotten curse,
    Hiding in a dark space, my mind and body hurts
    Only dedication for what the dealer's supplying;
    Never hung up on how much I’m buying.
    Keeping valuable faith, could really use an eighth;
    Room spinning, ears ringing, thinking,
    I might've jut sipped a little too much…

    • @gamebash9656
      @gamebash9656 7 років тому +1

      THIAXIS TV bruh fr this shit is really deep. You should fr get into the music shit

  • @axelo4657
    @axelo4657 7 років тому

    Let these lyrics take you away, let my thoughts show you the way, dont follow a path astray, no i dont want the
    money or the fame, just to guide your soul make you a whole, the rhythym from up above, let me show you my thought
    this is a gift that no 1 brought, a battle that one fought, yes not everyone will understand but in time you can
    call me a lyrical god, life has its ups and downs, true music comes from the soul so dont let yours drown, you
    start at the bottom and climb thats the way of life, people who stay true to themselves are the ones that strive

  • @magetrapzz4140
    @magetrapzz4140 7 років тому +18

    Your Beats So Far Have Been Very Good 👍 Keep Up THE Good Work! But May I Ask If You Can Make Like A Fast Trap Beat?

    • @j_bergy
      @j_bergy 7 років тому +2

      Mage Trapzz He only does sad emotional beats i think

    • @magetrapzz4140
      @magetrapzz4140 7 років тому

      Ohh I just subbed to him a couple days ago so I wouldn't know lol but thanks 👍

  • @marleydubbs2021
    @marleydubbs2021 7 років тому

    Just bought this and Don't cry.

  • @5.5.Below.5
    @5.5.Below.5 7 років тому +6

    I tried...but I failed....miserably. I still can't be super mario 3 despite all of these.......YEAAAAAAAAAAARRRSS!...ohhh noohh. I give up....😔

  • @masonjeffery3035
    @masonjeffery3035 6 років тому +11

    How much for this beat it pay what you want my dad's dying I really need this beat to express my feelings

  • @djxzibitdominic3092
    @djxzibitdominic3092 6 років тому

    my simplicity take me too the ground.
    feeling like am not d best in town..
    mayb I won't b announced
    d self pain I felt.
    brought me a lost of regret.
    tear me apart.
    living a deadly life dats d fact.
    still I try just to differential my crime.
    all in ice.
    low in mile .
    not easy too smile..
    does dat seem to b life..
    no!! my soul was overtaken.
    even my joy cnt put a change..
    I always still v one word
    live to great..
    still pray to the master so amaze

  • @nightmerka
    @nightmerka 7 років тому +3

    Hey, I feel like I'm dying right now...
    I guess... I should say goodbye in case I won't be back here again.
    To Sad life - I loved you all, I'm sorry.

    • @Shilvic1
      @Shilvic1 7 років тому

      NightmareNoxX _ don't do it dude!

  • @kerlensfonthus3186
    @kerlensfonthus3186 2 роки тому

    Sold my soul at 20 one
    Look back at my life wonda was really I the one
    To change my family's story so mama don't have to worry
    But it cost me joy o Lord please mercy on me
    Look in the mirror but I can't see whose in front of me
    ... fr...

  • @ch3rry_cxla61
    @ch3rry_cxla61 5 років тому +4

    How do you play this on piano?

  • @CityChaser095
    @CityChaser095 4 роки тому

    Trying is way better than waiting for the perfect moment.

  • @senfschmade
    @senfschmade 7 років тому +14

    When the 8-2-6 jungler types a resigned "I tried" in all-chat after all his lanes lost...

    • @panger9648
      @panger9648 7 років тому

      100% me, lel

    • @GameurBlackOpsPS3
      @GameurBlackOpsPS3 7 років тому

      Ahahahaha made my day

    • @mewkai5022
      @mewkai5022 6 років тому

      When your support uses his braum wall to block a cait ult but is standing BESIDE you and types in chat "welp I tried"

  • @whatyousayy
    @whatyousayy 7 років тому +2

    Think I might have just found the perfect producer lol every beat is on point.

  • @sophsmithsmusic
    @sophsmithsmusic 7 років тому +3

    I must write...

  • @abelsk1882
    @abelsk1882 6 років тому

    i tried to carry on walking with a good heart around but still bad problems always hit me and when ive been there for the ones who needed support i gave them more advices than i give my self 🤧😪

  • @jeonvantae1796
    @jeonvantae1796 7 років тому +6

    Where can I get the song without it saying 'edoby'

  • @edgarcorado9237
    @edgarcorado9237 4 роки тому

    Trying to do right so God as I kneel n pray thankffor the guidance n let me seek the heavenly way
    Cause every day seem like a trip
    Life itself feels .curse .. still i seek for the blessings yerning seeking the true.

  • @JoseFlores-xq9dd
    @JoseFlores-xq9dd 7 років тому +4

    se puede usar sin fines lucrativos?

  • @isaiahthomas4689
    @isaiahthomas4689 3 роки тому

    I tried yeah,tried to take the pain away I tried yeah not worried about the fame no I tried yeah my friends have to much pain no I tried they got bad thoughts in they head I tried they tried to hurt themselves I cried yeah but god saved day yes glory to the most high ,my friends survived u should never lie.

  • @xdarkalikingofdarkness4644
    @xdarkalikingofdarkness4644 7 років тому +3

    nice piano music i like this

  • @mylesellis3163
    @mylesellis3163 3 роки тому +1

    How many times have we been down this road
    How many lies do you think we’ve told
    What happen to the girl I fell for
    Tell her I’ve been lookin for her
    Was I the first to make mistakes
    Or was it you that made me this way
    With all the lies you told with a straight face it’s breaking me
    letting go of all the things that held their grips on me
    With you being my first priority
    You turned me into a man I don't even recognize
    I don’t wanna take closure if I can fix tonight
    Don’t wanna be over if I can make it right
    I don't expect you to understand
    It's nothing less than true romance
    Or am I just making a mess
    It's for the best, it's over now
    It wasn't anyone's fault it didn't work out
    She's a good girl, just wasn't the one
    We wanted different things, we had a good run
    But she's better off and so am I
    It is what it is, man, it's alright
    I don't tell 'em how you broke my heart
    I just tell 'em that we grew apart
    It's time to move on, forget all the wrong
    Now that we both can see
    All that we say confused in our heads
    Left us so empty
    I don’t wanna take closure if I can fix tonight
    Don’t wanna be over if I can make it right

  • @bryanangeles7062
    @bryanangeles7062 7 років тому +3

    omg soo perfect

  • @miraclest.thomas3765
    @miraclest.thomas3765 7 років тому +2

    This song is beautiful and relaxing

  • @acidayuvia
    @acidayuvia 7 років тому +18

    Nu ma, si está bien sad :c

  • @jmizzy7013
    @jmizzy7013 6 років тому

    Dad died back in ‘09 didn’t even cry, dont know why!
    But I miss you.
    And I try yeah I try to move on but I need to be with you so as I say this back to my six year old self, treasurer.. treasure what you have in this life because nothing comes free to us. The forgotten. I try don’t forget, I tried, tried to call you... no answer just a play back of what once was but your gone now even thought it have been almost a decade there’s still never a day where your never with me always by my side deep into the night, I love you

  • @yuhuixue
    @yuhuixue 6 років тому +4

    Well I listen to this when my mom nags me
    She wants me to be perfect :c
    But I TRIED