No Even though he is canon to the rws his stories aren’t, he was just a loaned engine and sent away for causing trouble. That’s were Thomas fans made these stories up.
It’s a good story, though I found it a bit hard to hear the narration and anyone speaking. Maybe for future reference you can turn down the audio from the engines and bring up the audio for any speaking
"This film is crude and amateurish." -Is what I would've said if I didn't decide to stick around to watch it. This film is a masterpiece. I really love how a group of friends, a community teamed up to make this. Don't let it's amateurish filming and editing fool you. You'd be surprised at how well-thought and planned the story was, and adapted to Trainz. The ONLY thing I'd fix is the ending. It just undos all the buildup in 1 minute (which is pretty disappointing). Other than that, I'd watch this again. Hell, manybe save it to a playlist.
This is a very good story, this is much better then most stories, the storyline is great! 1:25 thats a close call dam alfred sounds like a child 8:26 Me: Boo Thomas: ... Me: Rawr thomas: ... Me: Alfred. thomas: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
A well-thought out story, which actually seemed pretty good. Some constructive criticism, however: if I were you, I wouldn’t say ‘THE END’ at the end of the video, it’s not really ideal - the audience knows it’s the end when you play the credits, or when they see the subtitles, so there’s no real need to say that for them. Also, I would advise getting someone older to play the characters, for them to be taken more seriously (though I do admit the engines’ voice actors, though young, show a lot of promise). But anyway, this is just a little feedback. What I’m trying to say is that there’s plenty of room for improvement, but other than that, good effort to everyone involved. I look forward to seeing what else you all have to offer.
I would also like to add that there are scenes where the music is louder than the spoken dialogue, making it hard to hear what they're trying to say. I would suggest lowering the volume on the soundtrack (and possibly have your actors speak up or turn their volume up higher) so that it doesn't overpower the characters. This is a Thomas The Tank Engine story, not a music album.
This was a good story! Seeing Thomas and Duck interacting like this was very enjoyable. Now I mean not to be too forward, I found the background music very loud and the lines quite at times.
4:28, an engine has fallen in the river! Send the new rescue helicopter! I'm sorry but I have to do this as well... 4:19, Alfred: I BELIEVE I CAN FLY, I BELIEVE I CAN TOUCH THE SKY!!! Nice story also!
1:50 excuse me Duncan. What are u doing here 10 / 10 fan made episode the story was realy cool and the action at the ending! I was screaming when i Saw Gordon it was wierd that on 1:50 we seen Duncan but the rest is realy cool
Here is some things I think, that could've been fixed throughout this video. It's all opinion. 1. The voicing. It is buried down by the music, and sound effects. 2. Some parts of the video seems a bit too long, which could've been cut down. 3. The chuffing, it was sometimes out of sync. And mainly the speed, it is VERY quick. 4. The crashes, and edits. That too could've been better, it would be realistic. It has looked as if Alfred DEFIED physics just for that crash. 5. There weren't any green screen edits of course, that includes the splash effect. Whatnot. 6. Some of the angles were oddly done, which can be used the other time. Overall, it's not that bad. The execution could've been better. I might personally give this a 6/10. / Sam
Whatever game/simulator you used looks 10 times better than the other channels that make thomas parodies! Only complaint, sometimes it was hard to hear the voices over the chuffing/music. Other than that,loved the video! 4.8/5 stars😂
Alfred: **buffers up to the express**
Alfred: *UNLIMITED POWAARRRR!*
Alfred is actually palpatine but as a steam engine. TOP 10 ANIME PLOT TWISTS
*HES TO DANGEROUS TO BE KEPT ALIVE*
For real
1:56
Alfred: *exists*
The fat controller: knife
Why does he have a knife?
@@randoburr5201 maybe he was playing Five Finger Fillet
Yep
Alfred is basically the Smudger of the northwestern railway.
Hes not canon.
No
Even though he is canon to the rws his stories aren’t, he was just a loaned engine and sent away for causing trouble. That’s were Thomas fans made these stories up.
But he doesn't get redeemed
Alfred makes Diesel 10 look like a saint
WHY DOES SIR TOPHAM HATT HAVE A KNIFE BEHIND HIS BACK
That is what I am wondering
That’s what I’m screaming
Maybe he was hungry and was making a pb&j sandwich with the crust cutoff
Me: (pulls a goods train and Thomas sees me and my brakes fails and I can’t stop and I goes in water but not dead just a little on side)
I JUST NOITICED THAT TODAY
Alfred: *buffers up to the express*
Alfred: UNLIMITED POWAARRRR!
Alfred: *Fly’s *
Thomas : wait Alfred?!?
Also Thomas : what the fu
When Alfred was falling he was flying just like a Galaxy railway engine.
Alfred the flymg
he looked like he was a plane
The trainz crashes should be realistic
So true
They just put invisible tracks no joke he was still puffing along
1:54 SIR TOPHAM HATT’S GOT A KNIFE!!!
GREAT SCOTT!!!!!!!!
@TNTMAKERFANXOX 88 yes why
*”Alfred is a villain again”*
*Me whose been here since Sodor Dark Times: “Ah shit, here we go again”.*
You can Say that again
At least Henry not died
Yeah like HISTORY REPEATS ITSELF HOT A NEW MEANING
Duck: alfred
Thomas: (ded)
Or
Duck: alfred
Thomas:(emptys his bunker)
New friend: okey Alfred i s villians
I’m sure we all know what happens when Henry pulls the flying kipper
Alfred: Hello Thomas
Thomas: Why are you a child?
19:42
I wish I could have said that
When Alfred flew off the track............................HE WAS SUPERNATURAL THE WAY HE DID!!!!
That’s what I was aiming for
Alfred said fuck this shit i,m out
'Fly away Alfie be free'
Like he flew on he's own like "nope fuck this place I'm out"
I believe I can fly I believe I can- AAAAAAAAAA
Thomas:*takes off faster than duck*
Duck: THOMAS WAIT FOR MEEE!!
*4:22** Its A Bird Its An Plane No Its An Flying Alfred*
Alfred: And guess what? I’m evil!
@@jaedenlyons
*:O*
Alfred broke the laws of physics!!!!
It’s a good story, though I found it a bit hard to hear the narration and anyone speaking. Maybe for future reference you can turn down the audio from the engines and bring up the audio for any speaking
Good idea I could not hear ether
*4:40** brah the water is so low the earth must have ate alfred*
Yus
lol
nom
*HE WOULD HAVE HAD TO GONE FARRRRRRR TO SINK*
@@davidmend3z
No.
when the sea starts it's very shallow once u go note far it's deep
4:23 Alfred: *yeets himself off a Bridge*
The evil version of Timothy the ghost engine: *HOLD UP, I THOUGHT THAT WAS MY FUCKING JOB!*
The way Alfred crashes into the sea is so lazy. How hard can it be to run the invisible track on the ground.
It’s supposed to Symbolize how he’s more supernatural than ever
"This film is crude and amateurish."
-Is what I would've said if I didn't decide to stick around to watch it. This film is a masterpiece. I really love how a group of friends, a community teamed up to make this. Don't let it's amateurish filming and editing fool you. You'd be surprised at how well-thought and planned the story was, and adapted to Trainz. The ONLY thing I'd fix is the ending. It just undos all the buildup in 1 minute (which is pretty disappointing). Other than that, I'd watch this again. Hell, manybe save it to a playlist.
4:20 that moment when someone says that they stole your mialk and they push you off the grand canyon:
This is a very good story, this is much better then most stories, the storyline is great!
1:25 thats a close call
dam alfred sounds like a child
8:26
Me: Boo
Thomas: ...
Me: Rawr
thomas: ...
Me: Alfred.
thomas: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
I Give This Video 10/10 Better Than All The Thomas Specials Together
OMG! Sir Toppham Hatt has a knife! 0o0
I always loved ducks theme
Alfred's crash: DAT BOI BE FLYING other than that, great video james!
This is my homie right here
A well-thought out story, which actually seemed pretty good. Some constructive criticism, however: if I were you, I wouldn’t say ‘THE END’ at the end of the video, it’s not really ideal - the audience knows it’s the end when you play the credits, or when they see the subtitles, so there’s no real need to say that for them. Also, I would advise getting someone older to play the characters, for them to be taken more seriously (though I do admit the engines’ voice actors, though young, show a lot of promise). But anyway, this is just a little feedback. What I’m trying to say is that there’s plenty of room for improvement, but other than that, good effort to everyone involved. I look forward to seeing what else you all have to offer.
Thank you for your feed back, it’s just I’m a kid and it seems weird talking to older users
Percys voice actually suits him because he is ment to be a younger character
I would also like to add that there are scenes where the music is louder than the spoken dialogue, making it hard to hear what they're trying to say. I would suggest lowering the volume on the soundtrack (and possibly have your actors speak up or turn their volume up higher) so that it doesn't overpower the characters. This is a Thomas The Tank Engine story, not a music album.
u epic memer
5:40 that “help me” lol 😂😂
Impossible! I've never seen thomas this upset in this story.
This was a good story! Seeing Thomas and Duck interacting like this was very enjoyable. Now I mean not to be too forward, I found the background music very loud and the lines quite at times.
yeah sometimes its hard to control the volume of the lines and music and thanks for the compliment!
My Lines sounded Like shit cuz of Your Editing
@@JamesTheRedEngineProductions Your Welcome. hope to see more soon!
no
Yes
the Ducks theme was amazing
4:28, an engine has fallen in the river! Send the new rescue helicopter!
I'm sorry but I have to do this as well...
4:19, Alfred: I BELIEVE I CAN FLY, I BELIEVE I CAN TOUCH THE SKY!!!
Nice story also!
4:14: How much speed did Alfred have in order to pierce through the air like that lmao
A few thousand
Quit commenting under comments, maggot! There's a Blu Spy in the base!@@MessiOlly8
This was amazing.
Gordon is a hero
Dude that was your best video! Great job👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 i really mean it
Duck: can you see what you done to this poor engine he is on on the verge on committing suicide
Thomas: What you talking about fool?!
Whoa! Why does Sir Topham have a knife in his hands?
Maybe he was making a sandwich upon Alfred's arrival 😁.
Toby: help me
😂😂😂😂
Has the Fat Controller been playing five finger fillet?
And nice!
Nice
1:58 Why is the Fat controller have a knife?
Monica Park aye
Fatty Was EVIL
*Alfred Owes him money*
He Barely Came
Thank you everyone for 60,000 views!
Kabuki Kitsune ok I’ve gotten better over time. Watch some of my other videos. There much better than this one
1:54 HE'S GOTTA KNIFE
20/10
I LOOOVEEEE ITTTTT!!!!!!!!!!! MY CUH (COUSIN) PLAYED THOMAS!!!!!!
4:16 Hahahah😂😂😂😂😂😂
Bro is just levitating and going for a swim .
Your so underratted
Bonus:thomas's reaction to alfred:OH MY CINDERS AND ASHES
Shut TFup
UA-cam will deal with u
No its for u
Awesome
2:00 why is the thicc controller is holding a knife
Nice video, I'd like to voice in one of your videos. I can do a pretty good Edward voice when I try.
666 likes.....
Eh it will probably be changed sometime soon.
Alfred casually flies into the sea
Bruh laugh until I cry when the engine's eyes shrink. Especially at 16:42.😂😂😂😂😂😂
1:50 excuse me Duncan. What are u doing here 10 / 10 fan made episode the story was realy cool and the action at the ending! I was screaming when i Saw Gordon it was wierd that on 1:50 we seen Duncan but the rest is realy cool
4:17
Even without wings, I can still fly!
Hé flying to the sky becuse hé Deraild
1:06 tobe le dog
This is The Best Video On Halloween ❤😊
How did he come off the rails though?
Dang, the voices for the engines sounded like kids. XD.
The voices for the engines is great! Just a question, would I be able to voife Anything? I don't mind if you say no.
8:25,
That is an "Oh sh*t" face. 😆😃😅
3:40 I already subscribed to Nicco’s trains
Fuck off
Also I saw the words help me above Toby's face on 5:39 or 5:40.
This isn't the script for the new story of alfred 3
No one ever said it was.
The sound of the engine and the music are too loud compare to the voice. It a shame, I have no dougt this a good story tho
Here is some things I think, that could've been fixed throughout this video. It's all opinion.
1. The voicing. It is buried down by the music, and sound effects.
2. Some parts of the video seems a bit too long, which could've been cut down.
3. The chuffing, it was sometimes out of sync. And mainly the speed, it is VERY quick.
4. The crashes, and edits. That too could've been better, it would be realistic. It has looked as if Alfred DEFIED physics just for that crash.
5. There weren't any green screen edits of course, that includes the splash effect. Whatnot.
6. Some of the angles were oddly done, which can be used the other time.
Overall, it's not that bad. The execution could've been better.
I might personally give this a 6/10.
/ Sam
No
then why do i have almost 1k?
NegroSkull The Fucking Zombie not true. I know almost all my subscribers on discord
I do hope you've taken my criticism to consideration. Nothing bad meant.
Yeah Ik. But this zombie guy has no idea what he’s talking about.
21:10 AHHHHHHHHHH
I love how the Alferd flies into the sea
It feels weird seeing duck before Thomas.
What about the intro
There's nothing wrong with it but it just feels weird seeing Ducks name before Thomas's that's all.
Interesting how you had Toby be one of the first engines on sodor
British topham hat doesn’t exist.
“He can’t hurt you.”
British topham hat : 1:54
Whatever game/simulator you used looks 10 times better than the other channels that make thomas parodies! Only complaint, sometimes it was hard to hear the voices over the chuffing/music. Other than that,loved the video! 4.8/5 stars😂
Thank you so much!
Cool.
It was but it was taking to long to process
Uh, ok.
oh sorry wrong comment
I give you 6/10
0/10 personally
1:59 a Knife???? Dont say hes a murderer
I mean He did Burn the Bank
Suprising to know that the crash happened in the day instead of nighttime which most ghost train crashes happen
4:17
10/10 physics btw
Alfred is a god he was FIYING
Ah the classic probblem of the sound effects and music being too loud so u cant hear what the characters are saying half the time
6:32 Ducks Theme touches my heart does it touch yours
Isee alot of people use this train model of the ghost train what is his lore pls tell me
I love you
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Alfred just doesn’t give up does he?
Who's idea with the knife? I love it! 1:53
It was me Foxred
Wow, 22 minutes of video. The video was good but to be honest you could have done Alfred's accident a bit better ;) (Also thanks for using my music!)
no problem! The Accident where he was "flying" was supposed to symblize that he would become more of a demon than a ghost.
Subscribe To Nicco’s Trains 3:41
XD
What train sim is this?
Or game?
Bruh Alfred got blue flying kipperalfred 😂😂😂
Gordon: ALFRED.
Alfred:what.
First, Duck bumped the freight train into Thomas into the sea, and second Gordon bumped Alfred into the sea
Not bad
did anyone else see jock the little engine?
20:27 Gordan be LIKE:TIME TO END THIS. HE HAS HAD ENOUGH
Seeingbthe tittle im like "HUNNY CALL THE GHOST BUSTERS ALFRED IS BACK"
It can be ok, fi the voice actor wasn't kids, but is ok
I take that as an offense
No, it whas a advice
Alfred went wheee, although he went too far