Thanks Doc. Always a pleasure to hear a story from this channel. I'm in the Navy myself and noticed a few things. 1, there is no rank of private in the US Navy. 2, it is impossible to slip on a flight deck or any upper deck. There is a layer of nonskid I can describe as very course sandpaper preventing anything from slipping. 3, there is no way for a druggie criminal to get into the Navy.
Ranks in the navy are E1 seaman recruit, E2 seaman apprentice, E3 seaman, E4 Petty Officer 3rd class, E5 Petty Officer 2nd class, E6 Petty Officer 1st class. E7 Chief Petty Officer. There isn't any privates or sergeants unless Marines are on board ship. Drug use gains you a discharge and any prior drug use removes you from being able to enlist. Enlistment was more lenient in the late 70's with drugs but standards tightened up to a no tolerance policy.
I still remember when you could have an opinion on the internet without triggering an entire half of its inhabitants. What have we let ourselves become?
Army infantry here. Everything about the beginning is wrong. The writer didnt do his homework on the military. That being said, Dr. Creepen i always love your narrating!
Agreed there were many issues with the writers knowledge of even basic military operations... That and what the f is a sea bird? Mybe an hs11 sea hawk?
Got to love how the crew abandoned ship without being ordered to do so. Nor would random seamen be chosen as a boarding party, that's what MAGTAF is for even the Marines on the ship would be tasked with that duty before a run of the mill seaman. A little research by the author would have been warranted if your going to write about the military. But I digress very few actually get it even close to how it really is that's entertainment for you it's fiction so. Lol
@@insekta1701 the Sumarian Egyptian Greek Roman Ottoman Russian empires and others may have been on to something. Why have they been specifically targeted for so long I wonder, that's a completely rehtorical question I know the answer. #USS LIBERTY For the truth.
I thought the same, even as just a civilian from a military family. Some of the slang seemed off too. Example- even before introducing the british raised character, the narrator himself used both "mate" and "wang" as slang.....and not like "shipmate" kind of "mate" either, that I would understand given the setting. The narrator could have been the British american character and made it easier on the writer.
More please! I’m sorry about your back! Dr Creepen you’ve been such a source of not only entertainment but comfort I’ve been going through a lot over the last few years and you and these stories have raspy helped me through it!
Howdy! I'm the author and I'm glad to hear that you dug the story. If you did not know already, part 2 is also on the good doctor's channel. You can find the link in the description of this video. And if you'd like to hear part 3 it is up on my channel. I would include the link in this comment but then UA-cam would just delete it. 😅 Anyway, it's the video with the thumbnail of a big scary boat. Can't miss it! And I hope you enjoy. 🤘🧟👹👻
Hi! I just finished recording the second part to my story. If you wanna check it out, you can find it here on my new channel. Hope you enjoy! ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Hey Doc I just started watching your stuff and I have to say it’s easily the best content available. I’m a medic in the US Army so that shoutout in the beginning means a lot. So from one Doc to another, keep up the good work and God bless.
I really enjoyed this story. The idea of being so far out at sea that civilization is an after thought always puts a chill on me. I can't imagine living on a large ship day in and day out. Would drive me crazy. The writer did a good job with bringing up a sense of dread, horror, and disgust. It was easy to picture what the men must have been experiencing especially when the larger ship ran into them.
Howdy! I'm the author. I'm glad you have enjoyed the story so far. If you have already listened to part 2, just an FYI. Part 3 is up on my own amateur channel. ua-cam.com/video/VN3R_9wm2mI/v-deo.html
OMG..!! the story & narration were Epic..!! Yes, need a continuing Part 2..!! And Dr. C, Please take it easy on ur bike.. Glad just bumps & bruised...BUT...ur audience needs u to stick around... We appreciate ur talents ❤️.. God Bless...🌻🌻🌻🌻
Howdy! I'm the author. I got ancy and decided to record it myself. PT2 can be found here if you still wanna check it out. ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
@@lifestokens7469 you have to understand, for those of us that served all the inaccuracies throw us off pretty bad, literally from the "the judge gave me the option to sign up" but. That hasn't been a thing in quite a while, if you have drug or legal problems you're not getting in.
@RE fan yeah, but you're not gonna get in with it, and if you get caught you're fucked. Just to show you how serious they take this now, when I was going through the enlistment process I got a speeding ticket and my recruiter said that I might have to delay everything until it was settled
Jokes on them; 80% of MOSs are non combat. The writer also forgot those who enlisted b/c their parents were service members and saw all the good the structure was for them. It was difficult & fun & I would do it again♡ I just wouldn't deploy again; food on the boat is terrible lol.
@@tylercraig1314 Guessing you never had a restock shipment go late so you have to wait 2 hrs in line for 1 scoop of macaroni for dinner for a few days. Or have something go wrong with the water so for a week+ it's only available for 2 hrs at the beginning and end of a 12 hr shift?
Ooof. This is a bit of a late reply. Lol! But if you did listen to the first two parts and still want more part 3 is uploaded on my channel. It's the video that has a thumbnail of a big scary boat. Can't miss it! Hope you enjoy! I'm the author BTW so this isn't just a shameless self-promotion to try to get views on my channel. It's shameless self promotion to try to get views for my story.;)
Maybe MI finally got something right and they are using this as a way to confuse the facts. This was an overtly political episode but one thing he got right; we are the worlds police and we have got to stop that crap as well as sending billons to multiple nations that have plenty of their own (see Israel).
@@thetraveling-cowboy I doubt it, so much of it is so blatantly wrong to anyone who knows anything about how the military works. I mean, how hard is it to google the US Navy rank structure?
ssfbob456 There are many things wrong and most likely you are correct as what I said was tongue in cheek as it were but I’ve seen the intel community use social media and purposely use certain things to throw everyone off the trail but as I said before it’s tongue in cheek. Personally I’m just waiting for the whole system of crooks to pay for their crimes and Revolution to clean up this nation and the west .
Anything about the depths of the ocean scares tf outta me. The part about looking down and seeing something move in the abyss was easy to visualize and terrifying 😥 I love it
Very interested in hearing part two! Great narration, great story. Thanks, Doc, for the fantastic read. And thanks to the author. Also, take care of yourself.
Hi! The author was kind enough to do their own recording of the second part. And I'm trying to spread the word.;) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Hi! That's awesome that you're digging the story so far... You're in luck. PT 2 is already up on Doc's channel. The link is in the description of this video... Or you can type in the YT search bar. "I'm a sailor in the US navy. Things just got much worse." And if you get that far and still want more. PT3 is up on my channel . It's the video with the big scary boat for a thumbnail pic. Can't miss it.;) Hope you enjoy!
Thank you for a wonderful narration as usual. I enjoyed this story regardless if some of the details are not accurate I found it pretty interesting I’m expecting part two hopefully soon thank you!!!😀
Hi! I'm the author. I went ahead and did a second part myself. You can find it here on my new channel if you're interested. ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Great story, I loved it and it was described so well I felt I was there in the ocean. Please do a part two as I really enjoyed it. Thanks again Dr. Creepen, I hope you’re feeling better today. Coming off your bike as an adult hurts more than when you were a kid, maybe because pride is also hurt. Get well soon friend x🦋
Really sorry to hear about your accident. Will be keeping you in my thoughts. And praying for a smooth recovery. On the note of the story, It goes without saying that I would love to hear a sequel. As this one was extremely well done. :)
Hi! I'm the author. Thank you! And yes there is a part 2 coming up. In fact I'm torn right now between listening to this and staying up late and typing. I seriously can't believe it turned out to be 48 minutes long...
Roof Pizza Awesome! You should get some rest and write with a fresh mind because this is the best and most fascinating story I’ve listened to since I joined this community!
I'm stoked you dug it! I'm the author. Just changed my channel name to something more appropriate. You can find the second part here if you want to check it out. @Kari Howdy! Just wanted to let you know that I just posted the second part on my new channel if you want to check it out. I'm the author. Just changed my screen name.:) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
This one is just begging for a part 2! So many questions left unanswered! I vote yes! Must hear what happens with the landing party! Sorry to hear about your bike mishap,Doc. It can't have been easy for you to record this,but thank you. Thanks also for your appreciation for the US military. My dad was Canadian; did his basic training in Britain and saw the Blitz. My daughter married a Marine this past May. So yeah,veterans from both sides of the pond deserve our thanks and appreciation. Take care of yourself and I will be listening next time. Peace.
It's the laviathian, crazy story but you never know what you might see out in the expanse of the ocean. Great story. Love to you and your family ❤️💕😘 have a great weekend
My gfather my father my husband where all in the navy my son was nat'l guard. Now my daughter is talking about joining so it's in the family and seems to me will continue to carry on. love you doc keep 'em coming hun and I'll keep coming back for more -more-more.
You can tell the author never served and knows nothing about the military. Not to mention they no longer take criminals from the courts and have not for decades.
Not here to listen to how realistic the author can describe the military or its lifestyle. Here to listen to an OBVIOUSLY fictional story and hopefully be entertained for the next 48 minutes
To the good Dr. I thank you most humbly for your words of respect for the Armed Forces. I am a 27 year retired Lieutenant who also gave 15 years as an enlisted. I have seen action in Iran, Iraq and several other locations.
I've been listening to creepy pasta for a while, courtesy of my sons, who introduced me. You are, by far, my favorite narrator. Thank you for taking the time to read the stories. I hope this one continues.
Howdy! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I have done my own narration of PT3 if you'd like to check it out.:) ua-cam.com/video/VN3R_9wm2mI/v-deo.html Also, Doc Creepen has been awesome enough to narrate another one of my stories. Here's the link to that if you're interested. ua-cam.com/video/yq8e_dtIwp8/v-deo.html
Top notch as usual, Doc. Definitely needs a sequel. And a prequel. And maybe an appendix, too. I have to know if those were supernatural seagulls or just REALLY vindictive ones.
18 years so far Army. If it wasn’t the fact it says Navy, I would have wondered if it were some of the commanders I had served under that violated OPSEC and ended up narrated by everyone’s favorite Doc.
I found it funny that àn e4 army specialists would have much to do with anything navy. I might be enclined to believe if it was an e4 third class petty officer. Before i retied from the navy i very rarely ever had anything to do with the army and never on a small boy but all the same interesting story.
@@jordanschultz6497 hi! This is actually basically a Warhammer 40K fanfiction. If you dug part one and two, I do have the third installment up on my channel. It's not on the level of the good doctor, but I did have a lot of fun making it and if you're interested here is the link.:) ua-cam.com/video/VN3R_9wm2mI/v-deo.html
Doc it was just getting really good, totally was all in on this story, definitely keeping an ear out for part two. Great story so far. Picked s bad week to quit heroin.lol
I'm really glad you dug it. I've never had an audio narration of one of my stories so I'm really stoked about this. Yes there's a part 2 in the works. Hopefully will be wrapping it up and posting on reddit in the next day or two.
Roof Pizza yk, bringing politics into stories isn’t the best idea. I listen to stories to temporarily escape all the bs politics, not to face it again.
@@reharp2037 That's a bummer dude. I think similar to what you're saying, I write stories to temporarily escape from all the BS of life. But I really dig putting in politics as part of that escape. It's therapeutic for me. Sorry, but I guess we'll have to agree to disagree on what is and isn't a good idea to put into stories. ;)
Yay yay yay! Yes Part 2 please Chris Koleszar! Great story. Doctor, even in pain your production is Perfect (as usual : ) ! You've got us so spoiled 😍❤️
Hi! Thank you! I'm really stoked about the positive reviews here. Yes there is a part 2 coming up. Hopefully in the next couple days it will be posted to Dr Creepen's Vault.
Howdy! I'm the author. I'm glad you like the story so far! Here is a link to part 2. ua-cam.com/video/gMCeCucVYD8/v-deo.html And part 3 is up on my channel. ua-cam.com/video/VN3R_9wm2mI/v-deo.html Hope you enjoy!
I so enjoy listening to Military stories, especially Navy ones! It is so much appreciated that you took the time out to thank the women & men of the Armed Forces throughout the world. I met many fine Sailors throughout the years from varying countries...certainly an honour and a privilege! ⚓🌊
I just want more sea/ocean-based stories, I don't care if it takes place on a battleship or a floating plank of wood. Deep sea is scarier than deep space ☠️ Gimme more!
SiKE I definitely don't disagree with you! I spent 11 years in the Navy, mostly onboard ship with many 3 to 6 month cruises, so I like the military aspect of ocean creepypastas. (Well, when the author actually knows what they're talking about...) Anyway, It's unfathomable how much we do not know about our own planet. The oceans hold onto so many incredible secrets; we, as humans, don't have a clue! It's both exciting & frightening and I, too, would love to see/hear more stories about it. Got any ideas, Sike? We could collaborate!🐙
Hi! I'm the author. PT2 can be found on my new channel. I'm not on Dr Creepen's narration level. But you might dig it nonetheless.:) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Hi! I'm the author. I'm glad you're digging the story thus far. Here is a link to another one of my story's that the good doctor had seen fit to narrate. ua-cam.com/video/yq8e_dtIwp8/v-deo.html Also, in case you didn't know. Doc Creepen has narrated the second part to this story. And I've done a recording of PT 3 on my own channel. Hope you enjoy!;)
Brilliant narration Dr. Great chilling story 😍coming from a Navy family . Yes hung 🤤on every word. What to know what happens when he goes to that NANNY SHIP what ☠and horror awaits ☠all around that monster ship really bad. Would love a part 2. The frog makes any story worse when you can't 👀the unknown till it's right on you. 🤤 can't wait for more medicine Dr. With my drink to wash it down. Great writing from the author. 🖤
PT 2 narrated by the Author can be found here. He shared the link with me and I feel obligated to spread the love.:) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Hi! I'm stoked it made an impression. If you want, I posted the second part on my new channel. Though my amateur reading does not measure up to the illustrious Dr Creepen!;) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Howdy! I'm the author. I got ancy and recorded the second part myself. It's on my new channel if you're interested. :) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
I’ve never wanted a protagonist to die more than this guy
Thanks Doc. Always a pleasure to hear a story from this channel.
I'm in the Navy myself and noticed a few things. 1, there is no rank of private in the US Navy. 2, it is impossible to slip on a flight deck or any upper deck. There is a layer of nonskid I can describe as very course sandpaper preventing anything from slipping. 3, there is no way for a druggie criminal to get into the Navy.
I thought the whole thing about how he was barely over withdrawal was ridiculous
Ranks in the navy are E1 seaman recruit, E2 seaman apprentice, E3 seaman, E4 Petty Officer 3rd class, E5 Petty Officer 2nd class, E6 Petty Officer 1st class. E7 Chief Petty Officer. There isn't any privates or sergeants unless Marines are on board ship. Drug use gains you a discharge and any prior drug use removes you from being able to enlist. Enlistment was more lenient in the late 70's with drugs but standards tightened up to a no tolerance policy.
Listening to the author rant on about trump reminds me of one thing a whise person once told me:" Serve your nation, not its government."
me on the orange man bad syndrome. btw how many wars has this guys started... mmm zero so far.
Wise
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I still remember when you could have an opinion on the internet without triggering an entire half of its inhabitants. What have we let ourselves become?
Good one, even with the very iffy military knowledge. The open ocean is freaking terrifying.
Army infantry here. Everything about the beginning is wrong. The writer didnt do his homework on the military. That being said, Dr. Creepen i always love your narrating!
Agreed there were many issues with the writers knowledge of even basic military operations... That and what the f is a sea bird? Mybe an hs11 sea hawk?
The POS writer is probably living in his mom's basement and attends ANTIFA rallies.
Got to love how the crew abandoned ship without being ordered to do so. Nor would random seamen be chosen as a boarding party, that's what MAGTAF is for even the Marines on the ship would be tasked with that duty before a run of the mill seaman. A little research by the author would have been warranted if your going to write about the military. But I digress very few actually get it even close to how it really is that's entertainment for you it's fiction so. Lol
@@insekta1701 the Sumarian Egyptian Greek Roman Ottoman Russian empires and others may have been on to something. Why have they been specifically targeted for so long I wonder, that's a completely rehtorical question I know the answer. #USS LIBERTY For the truth.
I thought the same, even as just a civilian from a military family. Some of the slang seemed off too. Example- even before introducing the british raised character, the narrator himself used both "mate" and "wang" as slang.....and not like "shipmate" kind of "mate" either, that I would understand given the setting.
The narrator could have been the British american character and made it easier on the writer.
More please! I’m sorry about your back! Dr Creepen you’ve been such a source of not only entertainment but comfort I’ve been going through a lot over the last few years and you and these stories have raspy helped me through it!
Howdy! I'm the author and I'm glad to hear that you dug the story. If you did not know already, part 2 is also on the good doctor's channel. You can find the link in the description of this video.
And if you'd like to hear part 3 it is up on my channel. I would include the link in this comment but then UA-cam would just delete it. 😅 Anyway, it's the video with the thumbnail of a big scary boat. Can't miss it! And I hope you enjoy. 🤘🧟👹👻
I think I can say thank you, we are all proud to have served and done our part!!
Definitely would like to hear more , got to be a part 2 pls , can't leave it hanging there !!!!
Hi! I'm the author. PT 2 can be found here with my own amateur recording if you're interested. :) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
We absolutely need a part 2!!! Great story again.
Hi! I just finished recording the second part to my story. If you wanna check it out, you can find it here on my new channel. Hope you enjoy! ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
It was so awesome to hear you give all military around the globe that shout out!
Yes I would like to hear a part 2 of this story. Thanks for the video Doc. Feel better, have a great one!
Howdy! I'm the author of this story. I just posted the second part on my new channel if you're interested. :) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Hey Doc I just started watching your stuff and I have to say it’s easily the best content available. I’m a medic in the US Army so that shoutout in the beginning means a lot. So from one Doc to another, keep up the good work and God bless.
I really enjoyed this story. The idea of being so far out at sea that civilization is an after thought always puts a chill on me. I can't imagine living on a large ship day in and day out. Would drive me crazy. The writer did a good job with bringing up a sense of dread, horror, and disgust. It was easy to picture what the men must have been experiencing especially when the larger ship ran into them.
Please give us a part 2, i was absolutely captivated!
Howdy! I'm the author. I'm glad you have enjoyed the story so far. If you have already listened to part 2, just an FYI. Part 3 is up on my own amateur channel.
ua-cam.com/video/VN3R_9wm2mI/v-deo.html
OMG..!! the story & narration were Epic..!!
Yes, need a continuing Part 2..!!
And Dr. C, Please take it easy on ur bike..
Glad just bumps & bruised...BUT...ur audience needs u to stick around...
We appreciate ur talents ❤️..
God Bless...🌻🌻🌻🌻
Howdy! I'm the author. I got ancy and decided to record it myself. PT2 can be found here if you still wanna check it out. ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
That's not how that works... that's not how any of this works...
I kept saying that too
And yet, it just wouldn't stop..
It's a spooky not fact give it a chance
@@lifestokens7469 you have to understand, for those of us that served all the inaccuracies throw us off pretty bad, literally from the "the judge gave me the option to sign up" but. That hasn't been a thing in quite a while, if you have drug or legal problems you're not getting in.
@RE fan yeah, but you're not gonna get in with it, and if you get caught you're fucked. Just to show you how serious they take this now, when I was going through the enlistment process I got a speeding ticket and my recruiter said that I might have to delay everything until it was settled
I can't wait for Part 2! Hope you feel better for a fast recovery!
Jokes on them; 80% of MOSs are non combat. The writer also forgot those who enlisted b/c their parents were service members and saw all the good the structure was for them. It was difficult & fun & I would do it again♡ I just wouldn't deploy again; food on the boat is terrible lol.
Carrier food was pretty decent tbh. Not exactly 5-star, but definitely not as bad as army defac
@@tylercraig1314 Guessing you never had a restock shipment go late so you have to wait 2 hrs in line for 1 scoop of macaroni for dinner for a few days. Or have something go wrong with the water so for a week+ it's only available for 2 hrs at the beginning and end of a 12 hr shift?
Heh, y'all get screwed. I was a submariner. We got the best food. But we all became paranoid of sunlight. Lol. Worth the trade off.
@@Galith20 Serious question - what do you mean by paranoid of sunlight?
@@HonzoRich Ah, it's more of a joke. You're underwater for extended periods.
Definitely weird & wonderful. Yes to part 2. Hope you heal fast!
I love these at sea horror stories. Really can't wait to listen to this one Doc.
Ooof. This is a bit of a late reply. Lol! But if you did listen to the first two parts and still want more part 3 is uploaded on my channel. It's the video that has a thumbnail of a big scary boat. Can't miss it! Hope you enjoy! I'm the author BTW so this isn't just a shameless self-promotion to try to get views on my channel. It's shameless self promotion to try to get views for my story.;)
Thanks for the shout out! ^_^ Can't wait for a part two!
Once again unbeatable narrative skills.
Sorry to hear of your accident.
Best wishes for a speedy recovery.
Oh yes oh yes I wanna hear more I hope there is a part 2 coming another exquisite story Dr creepen bravo 👏👏👏👏👏
Yup. The author said je all probably have the second part on reddit my Fri or Sat. Not sure when Dr. Will get arpund to narrating it.
Imagine being the guy that violates OPSEC so bad it ends up on a UA-cam creepypasta account lmao
Loose lips sink ships
And he was never heard from again
Maybe MI finally got something right and they are using this as a way to confuse the facts.
This was an overtly political episode but one thing he got right; we are the worlds police and we have got to stop that crap as well as sending billons to multiple nations that have plenty of their own (see Israel).
@@thetraveling-cowboy I doubt it, so much of it is so blatantly wrong to anyone who knows anything about how the military works. I mean, how hard is it to google the US Navy rank structure?
ssfbob456 There are many things wrong and most likely you are correct as what I said was tongue in cheek as it were but I’ve seen the intel community use social media and purposely use certain things to throw everyone off the trail but as I said before it’s tongue in cheek.
Personally I’m just waiting for the whole system of crooks to pay for their crimes and Revolution to clean up this nation and the west .
5 years in the navy and not a single day on water. Gotta love dirt
Colton Campbell Seabee or Doc?
❤️the🐝's
^^^@Colton .. Wtf? Man how does that work or is that a Joke comment Ha!!! :P] .v (Nmcfmamf) ..
FMF? I was stationed at Lejuene.
I was on subs buddy consider yourself lucky
Anything about the depths of the ocean scares tf outta me. The part about looking down and seeing something move in the abyss was easy to visualize and terrifying 😥 I love it
Thank you for the dose Dr.
Cheers!🍻
A shout out to you Creepen.
Thanks in advance for this narration
Very interested in hearing part two! Great narration, great story. Thanks, Doc, for the fantastic read. And thanks to the author. Also, take care of yourself.
Really looking forward to the next part to this. I’ve been waiting...patiently
Hi! The author was kind enough to do their own recording of the second part. And I'm trying to spread the word.;) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Wow! That was fantastic! Yes yes please part 2 and doc I hope you feel better!
Love your videos and love how it’s late and dark in England makes it better
You tell fun stories Dr. Creepen! 🍷🕯
Author, if you're out there, I want a part 2 for this more than any other creepypasta or short story.
Hi! That's awesome that you're digging the story so far... You're in luck. PT 2 is already up on Doc's channel. The link is in the description of this video... Or you can type in the YT search bar. "I'm a sailor in the US navy. Things just got much worse."
And if you get that far and still want more. PT3 is up on my channel . It's the video with the big scary boat for a thumbnail pic. Can't miss it.;) Hope you enjoy!
@@greenwitchinc.1682is it true?
Thank you for the grate storey would love to hear part two or even three
Thank you for a wonderful narration as usual. I enjoyed this story regardless if some of the details are not accurate I found it pretty interesting I’m expecting part two hopefully soon thank you!!!😀
Hey dude! I'm glad you enjoyed part one. If you have already listened to part 2 just an FYI part 3 is currently up on my channel. Hope you enjoy! 🤘
Well written. I really hope we get part 2.
Yes, I would love to hear a part 2, please... Thank you.
Hi! I'm the author. I went ahead and did a second part myself. You can find it here on my new channel if you're interested. ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Love stories like this, sea stories are always the most interesting. Keep up the good work.
Hope you get feeling better and heal up soon, Doc. Take care of yourself first; we'll always be here. 💙
Great story. Is there more?? Great narration as always. More please. And feel better. Be careful doc. We can't loose u😘
My Best friend in high school was an Army brat! She is still such an amazing lady. Ice that shoulder, Doc! And thanks for the story!
Great story, I loved it and it was described so well I felt I was there in the ocean. Please do a part two as I really enjoyed it. Thanks again Dr. Creepen, I hope you’re feeling better today. Coming off your bike as an adult hurts more than when you were a kid, maybe because pride is also hurt. Get well soon friend x🦋
Excellent tale...needed it! It very much seems there may be more. I'm intregued...
Hi! I'm the author. If you want to check out PT2 I posted it on my new channel.:) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Really sorry to hear about your accident. Will be keeping you in my thoughts. And praying for a smooth recovery. On the note of the story, It goes without saying that I would love to hear a sequel. As this one was extremely well done. :)
This was fantastic! (I just wish I wasn’t trying to eat while listening...) I can’t wait to find out if there will be a part 2!
Hi! I'm the author. Thank you! And yes there is a part 2 coming up. In fact I'm torn right now between listening to this and staying up late and typing. I seriously can't believe it turned out to be 48 minutes long...
Roof Pizza Awesome! You should get some rest and write with a fresh mind because this is the best and most fascinating story I’ve listened to since I joined this community!
I'm stoked you dug it! I'm the author. Just changed my channel name to something more appropriate. You can find the second part here if you want to check it out. @Kari Howdy! Just wanted to let you know that I just posted the second part on my new channel if you want to check it out. I'm the author. Just changed my screen name.:) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
I would love to hear a second part to this story. Very well told, Doc, great job!!!!
This one is just begging for a part 2! So many questions left unanswered! I vote yes! Must hear what happens with the landing party! Sorry to hear about your bike mishap,Doc. It can't have been easy for you to record this,but thank you. Thanks also for your appreciation for the US military. My dad was Canadian; did his basic training in Britain and saw the Blitz. My daughter married a Marine this past May. So yeah,veterans from both sides of the pond deserve our thanks and appreciation. Take care of yourself and I will be listening next time. Peace.
Definitely would love to hear a part two!!!
The protagonist doesn't waste any time making me give up caring if he lives or dies.
Oh ya within four minutes I was certain that I want the “protagonist” to die
Because he has different views then you?
But it was all Trumps fault. Damn his 50 year low unemployment rate.
Repeating the negative myths of Service to one's nation.
Heidi Meyer this is a scary story channel, not a political scary story channel.
It's the laviathian, crazy story but you never know what you might see out in the expanse of the ocean. Great story. Love to you and your family ❤️💕😘 have a great weekend
Appreciate the shout out Doc 👌 Gotta say, your stories help me pass the dull time away, especially on these long nights of staff duty.
This author should avoid military fiction. The ignorance makes suspension of disbelief extremely difficult.
Very interesting story hope there's a pt2 hope u r feeling better doc
British Army veteran here whose just sitting back and relaxing with his favourite drink
Ste Trabs
Thank you, for doing what you do. Wish you and your loved ones many blessings. 🇬🇧
Cheers.
Pt 2 can be found here. Narrated by the Author.:) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
My gfather my father my husband where all in the navy my son was nat'l guard. Now my daughter is talking about joining so it's in the family and seems to me will continue to carry on. love you doc keep 'em coming hun and I'll keep coming back for more -more-more.
God Bless those that serve in our armed services. May you be safe.
Amen
The military is nothing how it was describe in the beginning lol.
1980 smitty AMEN!
You can tell the author never served and knows nothing about the military. Not to mention they no longer take criminals from the courts and have not for decades.
Yeah I couldn’t watch this with how inaccurate it is
Facts
Not here to listen to how realistic the author can describe the military or its lifestyle. Here to listen to an OBVIOUSLY fictional story and hopefully be entertained for the next 48 minutes
That was definitely a interesting listen. Good story. Thanks again good sir (Doffs hat) sorry to hear about your accident, mend up soon
To the good Dr. I thank you most humbly for your words of respect for the Armed Forces. I am a 27 year retired Lieutenant who also gave 15 years as an enlisted. I have seen action in Iran, Iraq and several other locations.
I've been listening to creepy pasta for a while, courtesy of my sons, who introduced me. You are, by far, my favorite narrator. Thank you for taking the time to read the stories. I hope this one continues.
Howdy! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I have done my own narration of PT3 if you'd like to check it out.:)
ua-cam.com/video/VN3R_9wm2mI/v-deo.html
Also, Doc Creepen has been awesome enough to narrate another one of my stories. Here's the link to that if you're interested.
ua-cam.com/video/yq8e_dtIwp8/v-deo.html
That was AWESOME!
“Sailor”? Haha definitely not someone from the navy.
Top notch as usual, Doc. Definitely needs a sequel. And a prequel. And maybe an appendix, too. I have to know if those were supernatural seagulls or just REALLY vindictive ones.
This is so good, I'm glad I'm listening while fully awake this time! On to part two, yay!
Oh no, stupid bicycle needs to taught a lesson!
Get well soon...we need your narrations to stay partially sane....yes we do want part 2 please
18 years so far Army. If it wasn’t the fact it says Navy, I would have wondered if it were some of the commanders I had served under that violated OPSEC and ended up narrated by everyone’s favorite Doc.
Army = Quantity Navy/AF/MC = Quality
I found it funny that àn e4 army specialists would have much to do with anything navy. I might be enclined to believe if it was an e4 third class petty officer. Before i retied from the navy i very rarely ever had anything to do with the army and never on a small boy but all the same interesting story.
Are there any more of these, would love to hear a continuation of this story.
Some one should give this the graphic novel treatment.
I spent three years on the USS Barry, DDG 52. As soon as I heard that I perked up 😂😂
God dammit! There better be a part 2. Fantastic story. Thanks again.
can't wait to give this a listen later tonight once it starts raining and I've got a cup of hot tea. This will be an amazing tale doc :D
I could never be a sailor out on the open water, much respect to those who can.
Makes me think their gonna run into Davy Jones and the crew of the flying dutchman🤣
Don't you mean Will Turner now?
Something like out of potc but less magical and more chemical??
@@laurasohn8332 don't you mean Patrick now? He is part of the ship
@Dave State-61 last time I checked, The Fresh Prince wasn't a pirate...
@@jordanschultz6497 hi! This is actually basically a Warhammer 40K fanfiction. If you dug part one and two, I do have the third installment up on my channel. It's not on the level of the good doctor, but I did have a lot of fun making it and if you're interested here is the link.:)
ua-cam.com/video/VN3R_9wm2mI/v-deo.html
I mean. So written //"and spoken!!!! That you. Was like. There. Yourself. And saw felt and almost even smelled everything ..great great work!!
Sequel coming out??
Bravo, as per usual
Soon to be Navy vet here loving the stories!
Hi! I'm the author. PT can be found here if you're interested. ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Good story! I am totally down for further parts!
Doc it was just getting really good, totally was all in on this story, definitely keeping an ear out for part two. Great story so far. Picked s bad week to quit heroin.lol
I'm really glad you dug it. I've never had an audio narration of one of my stories so I'm really stoked about this. Yes there's a part 2 in the works. Hopefully will be wrapping it up and posting on reddit in the next day or two.
Roof Pizza I’m loving it too. I’m extra loving how it’s making trump supporters squirm.
@@heidimariem8851 Haha! I was trying to not go too hard on the paint with that topic.;)
Roof Pizza yk, bringing politics into stories isn’t the best idea. I listen to stories to temporarily escape all the bs politics, not to face it again.
@@reharp2037 That's a bummer dude. I think similar to what you're saying, I write stories to temporarily escape from all the BS of life. But I really dig putting in politics as part of that escape. It's therapeutic for me. Sorry, but I guess we'll have to agree to disagree on what is and isn't a good idea to put into stories. ;)
Looking forward to the next installment of the story.
I have some strange stories from the army if you'd like.
Yes, please submit to Dr. Creepen's reddit page!
Military, especially if professional observers, are some of my fav :D
Did you notice how the writer keep referring to the crew with Army rank and not Navy rank?
@@jackdare I posted one, sorry it took a while. Im currently deployed and have little access to wifi.
So Onision did finish boot camp. He was even kind enough to grace humanity with this tale!
Yay yay yay! Yes Part 2 please Chris Koleszar! Great story. Doctor, even in pain your production is Perfect (as usual : ) ! You've got us so spoiled 😍❤️
Hi! Thank you! I'm really stoked about the positive reviews here. Yes there is a part 2 coming up. Hopefully in the next couple days it will be posted to Dr Creepen's Vault.
Got to hear part 2
Howdy! I'm the author. I'm glad you like the story so far! Here is a link to part 2. ua-cam.com/video/gMCeCucVYD8/v-deo.html
And part 3 is up on my channel.
ua-cam.com/video/VN3R_9wm2mI/v-deo.html
Hope you enjoy!
I so enjoy listening to Military stories, especially Navy ones!
It is so much appreciated that you took the time out to thank the women & men of the Armed Forces throughout the world.
I met many fine Sailors throughout the years from varying countries...certainly an honour and a privilege!
⚓🌊
I just want more sea/ocean-based stories, I don't care if it takes place on a battleship or a floating plank of wood. Deep sea is scarier than deep space ☠️ Gimme more!
SiKE I definitely don't disagree with you! I spent 11 years in the Navy, mostly onboard ship with many 3 to 6 month cruises, so I like the military aspect of ocean creepypastas. (Well, when the author actually knows what they're talking about...)
Anyway, It's unfathomable how much we do not know about our own planet. The oceans hold onto so many incredible secrets; we, as humans, don't have a clue! It's both exciting & frightening and I, too, would love to see/hear more stories about it.
Got any ideas, Sike? We could collaborate!🐙
WE NEED A PART 2! That was so well read and written.
Hi! I'm the author. PT2 can be found on my new channel. I'm not on Dr Creepen's narration level. But you might dig it nonetheless.:) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
This was a great story, I am definitely going to share this
Your videos have not been coming through my recommended lately. Glad this one did, because I forgot about your channel. One of the best narrators out
Still making vids every Monday, Wednesday and Friday!
Was it water ?
Wild story! Take care of yourself doctor ❤️
As another youTube personality would say, that boarding party is headed for Destination Fucked.
To Chris: MORE PLEASE!!!
Yes sir! I'm glad you dig the story thus far. Hopefully I'll have it posted on Reddit by Friday or Saturday.
Roof Pizza: YESSSSS!
Another terrific story. Loved the narration kind doc. I hope your bike accident wasn't that bad.
Wow, that was different! Deffo sounds like a follow on is needed!
Kept me in suspense to get to the end. The helicopter crash had me scared. But the mushrooms growing from fish corpses is the weirdest part.
Dear Lord, man! I'm less than 7 minutes in, and you did not pull ANY punches. 😄😄😄😄 I can see where you got flack, but I love it so far!
The 8-month long cold and now a nasty spill off your bike! I hope that you get well soon, Doc.
Would love to hear more from writer and as usual the narrator is super
Hi! I'm the author. I'm glad you're digging the story thus far. Here is a link to another one of my story's that the good doctor had seen fit to narrate.
ua-cam.com/video/yq8e_dtIwp8/v-deo.html
Also, in case you didn't know. Doc Creepen has narrated the second part to this story. And I've done a recording of PT 3 on my own channel. Hope you enjoy!;)
Brilliant narration Dr. Great chilling story 😍coming from a Navy family . Yes hung 🤤on every word. What to know what happens when he goes to that NANNY SHIP what ☠and horror awaits ☠all around that monster ship really bad. Would love a part 2. The frog makes any story worse when you can't 👀the unknown till it's right on you. 🤤 can't wait for more medicine Dr. With my drink to wash it down. Great writing from the author. 🖤
PT 2 narrated by the Author can be found here. He shared the link with me and I feel obligated to spread the love.:) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
This is one of the strangest stories that I have ever heard, and I have heard a few strange stories in my lifetime.
Hi! I'm stoked it made an impression. If you want, I posted the second part on my new channel. Though my amateur reading does not measure up to the illustrious Dr Creepen!;) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html
Can’t wait for part 2 if it ever comes
Author had said they will probably have it uplpaded on reddit by Fri or Sat. If you want to read it there before the Dr narrates it if he does.
Howdy! I'm the author. I got ancy and recorded the second part myself. It's on my new channel if you're interested. :) ua-cam.com/video/oXdleXujWrw/v-deo.html