In my version Pete would decline Tony's offer and also have an actual spiderman suit then Tony says "OK fine then may will know what your doing sheild will know and the whole world will know" Peter is pretty mad cause he's getting blackmailed but still says "no I can't I have a responsibility to protect this city I can't leave to beat up captain America it's what my uncle would have wanted" and then Tony says "kid you don't know a damn thing about responsibility" and leaves Peter dawns the spidermab suit to follow tonys car to avengers hq were Peter would drop down while the avengers are leaving and say "wait I'm in" to which Tony would say "good choice" the airport fight "UNDERRUSE" Peter steals the shield Peter looks at the shield then at Tony then at cap then back to the shield and remembers Ben's words with great power comes great responsibility then Peter throws the shield at Tony throwing him off balance and throws it back to Steve and the movies stays the same from there but with spidey on caps side
Pretty decent fanfic! But if I could give some advice about videos like these. Try to have a script ready with your fan fiction written down, and just read from it. Because there are a lot of pauses and "um"s. Don't get me wrong, this video was great, but I think it could be better.
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In my version Pete would decline Tony's offer and also have an actual spiderman suit then Tony says "OK fine then may will know what your doing sheild will know and the whole world will know" Peter is pretty mad cause he's getting blackmailed but still says "no I can't I have a responsibility to protect this city I can't leave to beat up captain America it's what my uncle would have wanted" and then Tony says "kid you don't know a damn thing about responsibility" and leaves Peter dawns the spidermab suit to follow tonys car to avengers hq were Peter would drop down while the avengers are leaving and say "wait I'm in" to which Tony would say "good choice" the airport fight "UNDERRUSE" Peter steals the shield Peter looks at the shield then at Tony then at cap then back to the shield and remembers Ben's words with great power comes great responsibility then Peter throws the shield at Tony throwing him off balance and throws it back to Steve and the movies stays the same from there but with spidey on caps side
Who else think this should be a episode of the new marvel what if
Pretty decent fanfic! But if I could give some advice about videos like these. Try to have a script ready with your fan fiction written down, and just read from it. Because there are a lot of pauses and "um"s. Don't get me wrong, this video was great, but I think it could be better.