Imagine being a guard that's been used to all these creepy shit and working in that mall for years like these paranormal activity is just another tuesday, walking down the hallway while sipping a cup of coffee while being followed by mannequins
so you have a mannequin come to life and start following you, and your insticts tell you to go to the bathroom instead of running back to the security office and locking all doors?
This was good! The setting: a dark empty mall in the middle of the night, and the sequence of events, whether imagined or real, were creepy. The narrative was great, the kind of story that can get under your skin. The narration was perfect for this material.
@@CreepyStoriesJR Even though it's more cheesy than scary imo, I like the idea of the mall having good and bad entities instead of just ghosts and stuff
1976-1977 i worked from 9:00 pm - 7:00 am at a heat treatment plant . Only 2 of us in the entire plant . I worked at one end of the plant and my coworker was stationed at the other end . It was kind of creepy … but mostly hot and dirty .. especially in the summer . I really only saw him around 12 midnight when we would meet by the coffee ☕️ pot .
Seeing as how the janitor was never mentioned by the manager leading up to the start of the shift, the twist seemed fairly obvious. Especially after he fizzled out on camera, and disappeared from sight after rounding the corner. I was waiting for the "what janitor" line by the manager at the end. Now if the main character had also mentioned the list of rules the janitor gave him, only to not be able to find them, that may have added a little more impact, because then the main character, and by extension, us the audience would be left to ponder if the janitor was in fact an entity of the mall, or if the entire thing had all been in his head.
I've worked a lot of jobs on swing and graveyard shifts, including as a security guard. It's a time where a fertile imagination can drive you insane, and fighting that insanity is never easy. But the worst job, although I loved the work and the less crowded I-95, was driving an 18-wheeler. You see things nobody else would see. Sometimes it's beautiful, like a distant skyline, with lights. You know the city is still active in the small hours, but you go through a tunnel and find yourself bypassing the busy part. It's peaceful; even the static of CB channel 19 occasionally giving a blast from nearby truckers, but then you go a bit further. Nothing but darkness. No highway lights. No cars. Nothing but white lines flashing by. One night, travelling through Connecticut, I hit a route my directions had me exit onto, and even FM radio signals were mostly static. The lanes of each direction were separated by trees. I began to wish that my dispatcher had let me work local in Baltimore like I usually did, picking up loads at Lever Brothers in Dundalk and dropping them off at our terminal for the over-the-road drivers to pick up. I began feeling uneasy, but couldn't figure out any reason for it. Sometimes the feeling comes when there's a bad accident ahead. But again, no CB chatter broke the static, no emergency vehicles passed me. And this feeling wasn't like that anyway. Only a turn east on a route I can't remember (it was 1989: do you remember what that was like?? Neon was everywhere including rubber tubes for guys with spiked hair or mullets to fasten onto their sunglasses, bicycle shorts were a real thing, and music sucked) I began to breathe easier. Years would pass. Then I would learn how close I probably was to Dudleytown, a supposed haunted or cursed former town, claimed by woods. I know I had to have been off-route, but how'd that happen? Other creepy and tragic things happened. One night while approaching the Fort McHenry Tunnel from the south, where the interstate is elevated, I had a sickening, doom-like feeling in my gut. I slowed down, geared way down, and sure enough, blue lights were everywhere. I crept up and passed on the far right, and saw this car lying on its driver's side with the roof against the jersey wall. Toll cops were running along the wall, looking over it and down with their flashlights. Even driving a rig, I never thought that the north and south lanes were separate. I thought the concrete walls were what separated them. Not so: there's a big gap, and the driver had climbed out of her car through the passenger side window, climbed down to the wall, and then fallen 60-70 feet to an instant death. I did grow to finally hate night shit, which is responsible for a million horror stories, but none so horrible as real life. You've done a good job, though. I was keen to hear it all. I have no doubt that it has its roots in real life.
Very interesting, thanks for sharing. I couldn't do those kind of shifts because I fall asleep too easily and I always thought that people who have to drive at night for work should be paid more, at least. But if we put safety aside, it must be extremely fascinating to see things from such an unusual perspective
Years ago I was a night shift security supervisor at the second largest shopping mall in the Chicago /Bloomingdale IL area. I can relate to some of your story but one thing that wasn't accurate is that mall security won't have access to the internal stores the internal stores are owned/leased by companies. If I was on patrol and I came across say an American Eagle store and the back door or the front gate was not locked we would have to call that particular stores key holder or manager to drive back into the mall. We would then also contact the Bloomingdale Police Department and when they all arrived we would then with the police and the store employee check the store to make sure that nobody was stealing anything resecure it and then they would clear the scene and we would continue on patrol. But in general not a bad little story. There's many times where I would be on patrol in that dark empty mall at night and I would have similar thoughts to what your story was about.. funny thing was if that happened to me in real life I wouldn't have quit like your protagonist I would have embraced it I would have became friends with the entity lol
In all fairness as a security guard; companies will hire anyone with a pulse and always need guards. Some of the smaller ones hire pretty fuckin quickly depending on where it is. AUS you can be in the door at your contract within a week.
Fr. Even companies that don't really specialize in security. I was 17, and my sister's friends asked me If I was looking for a job. Her mother ran a small hotel, and needed someone for 2 night shifts. Just hanging at the reception desk, and making sure people didn't try to get in the pool area, if drunk people make noise past 12pm, just call the cops. Said yes, her mother called me a few days later. Started the night after my interview. 2 night shift of sitting at the reception desk. Tought I was only getting those 2 shifts, but the boss ended up talking to me at the end of that 2nd shift like she would be trying to find me a spot somewhere. Fast foward a week, i'm now the kitchen dishwasher. Did that for 3 years, ended up becomming a cook. Quit during the pandemic, and now i'm working at an alluminium casting facility. Eyeing a woodmill job next 😂 But to think that I got my first rope in the job buisness being a "security" night watch is odd in some ways. But it seems like a good job to start up something in this world.
Great story but what my question is What did the janitor mean by you’ll figure it out or not, because clearly he didn’t figure it out whatever it is,”😭💀
This Creepypasta is seriously spine-chilling! 😱 The story of working as a nightguard at a mall with strict rules to follow really pulls you in, especially as the tension builds with each new rule and mysterious event. The sense of isolation, the eerie silence of the mall after hours, and the strange happenings make for a terrifying combination. It’s the kind of story that makes you question what might be lurking in the shadows when you're alone. If you enjoy stories that play on your fear of the unknown, this one will keep you up at night! 🖤👀
i really enjoyed this video, the storytelling was gripping and kept me on the edge of my seat! but honestly, the whole idea of a nightguard at a mall seems a bit exaggerated to me. like, how often do creepy things really happen in places like that? i wonder if some of the experiences are just fabricated for the thrill. what do you all think?
I turned, and then I heard it. Then I turned and then I saw it then I turned around and there it was then I turned and then I saw it. I ran and then I heard it. Then I turned around. And that's when I saw it. Suddenly I spun and then I heard what I saw
I saw what I heard and felt what I Knew as fear. My heart thundering in my chest I knew what I felt what I heard was a ghost from what i saw. Spinning around rapidly I heard it. Then I saw, felt and smelled the piss in my pants
Who wrote this??? I LOVE stories!!! I'm studying narratology and cultural anthropology, mainly myth, legends and folklore! This is really good, I was just wondering if anyone knows.
Fun story, but a slower burn could have served it better. The mall being obviously haunted was revealed far too early in my opinion, what with the whole mannequin scene happening what seemed to be mere minutes into the main character's shift. I think the scene, while affective in the moment shouldn't have played out with the main character confirming the mannequins were in fact moving. I think the tension would have been ramped up, and sustained much longer that way. Showing the mannequins moving so early on in a way cheapens everything else that happens (or maybe doesn't happen) afterwards in the story. I also personally felt the "what janitor?" line coming from a mile away, so it's not the twist others here in the comments like to think it is. I think what could have been much more affective on top of the manager asking "what janitor?" would have been if the main character had tried to show the manager the list of rules given to him by the janitor to follow, only to not be able to find it. Leaving the main character, and by extention us the audience to ponder if the janitor was an entity of the mall, or if the events of the story were simply all in the main character's head.
Love the narrator voice but I would would also like if the background match the the mall at least. The convenient store in the background was nice but wish it was a picture of the Mall
this video was really engaging and well-made! i enjoyed the storytelling, but i can't help but wonder if some of the "rules" were a bit exaggerated for dramatic effect. i mean, it's a mall, not a haunted house, right?
really enjoyed this video, great storytelling and it kept me on the edge of my seat! but honestly, I don't get why people would want to work as a nightguard in such an eerie place. I feel like it's just asking for trouble, right? like, what’s the draw?
Worked as a night guard for years. Everything about this is a tall glass of nope. I'm locking myself in the office and waiting for sunrise. Your life is worth more than $15 an hour.
Why not get your phone out and film the walking mannequins and sell the footage for millions. There are a couple of Twilight Zone episodes involving mannequins which this upload reminded me of, they were a bit creepy. If you wrote the script well done it's easy listening.
Apparently all the rules were just “mind ya business and there be no problem.”
Imagine being a guard that's been used to all these creepy shit and working in that mall for years like these paranormal activity is just another tuesday, walking down the hallway while sipping a cup of coffee while being followed by mannequins
Night at the museum, horror ed😂
I would have enjoyed that ending better.
Working night shift right now. 1am in a deserted parking lot having a smoke break... listening to this and looking all around... just in case...
I always felt safer with a lit cig in my hand when I worked alone at night 😂😂
Me too. It's now 1:56. The timing is just bad 😅
@@martinhare6085lucky
"The rule said not to look directly at the sun...I looked directly at the sun. "
-Every rules protagonist
Man has the survival skills of a horror movie protagonist.
when someone says "dont look there", the first thing people do is look right there. Its a natural human tendency
so you have a mannequin come to life and start following you, and your insticts tell you to go to the bathroom instead of running back to the security office and locking all doors?
Natural selection doing it's thing.
Of all the possible places he can go to, he went to the toilet 🤦
If I was him I would of stayed in the office after my first sweep 🤣
This was good! The setting: a dark empty mall in the middle of the night, and the sequence of events, whether imagined or real, were creepy. The narrative was great, the kind of story that can get under your skin. The narration was perfect for this material.
Glad you enjoyed it!
@@Dr.Wicked_ltd Thanks Dr. Wicked!
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As a mall manager myself, my security staff always has creepy stories to tell. I personally have one too.
would you mind telling some or yours?
Please share it!
Would love to hear !
We would like to hear it :)
I would want to hear about them! Please share them!
Tell us all about... *whiplash*
The Janitor: The rules
The Guard: The rules?
The Demon: The rules
huh?
@@saltyfish7626 Look up Mickey Mouse, The Code.
Your voice is perfect for horror. This was so chilling!
Glad you think so!
Great plot twist, seems the Janitor was a guardian angel of sorts.
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Or maybe he was part of the "game"
You need to watch more movies. The “plot twist” was a cliche I could smell from a mile away.
@@wiltmarlonelao Well, I didn’t try to hide the fact that the janitor wasn’t really human, it was more of a revelation than a plot twist.
@@CreepyStoriesJR Even though it's more cheesy than scary imo, I like the idea of the mall having good and bad entities instead of just ghosts and stuff
1976-1977 i worked from 9:00 pm - 7:00 am at a heat treatment plant . Only 2 of us in the entire plant . I worked at one end of the plant and my coworker was stationed at the other end . It was kind of creepy … but mostly hot and dirty .. especially in the summer . I really only saw him around 12 midnight when we would meet by the coffee ☕️ pot .
Just in time at 2:30 am while I'm trying to sleep, wowsers!
Maybe you'll not be able to sleep after this one
Same here brother
What country?
Yoo it’s 2:31 for me😭 we on the same bull shit ay
@@Jimisjonesen 😭😭
Sounds like Night at The Museum but more sinister 💀👌
Creepy! My stomach would drop too upon hearing the phrase "What janitor?"
😂😂😂 I guessed it
@@munandstar
Seeing as how the janitor was never mentioned by the manager leading up to the start of the shift, the twist seemed fairly obvious. Especially after he fizzled out on camera, and disappeared from sight after rounding the corner. I was waiting for the "what janitor" line by the manager at the end. Now if the main character had also mentioned the list of rules the janitor gave him, only to not be able to find them, that may have added a little more impact, because then the main character, and by extension, us the audience would be left to ponder if the janitor was in fact an entity of the mall, or if the entire thing had all been in his head.
I wonder wht happens if he just stayed in the Security room until morning
In storytelling atmosphere is everything, and you, my man, nailed it perfectly! 👍👌
Thanks a ton!
I listen to these stories a lot and none scare me much anymore but this one had my heart racing
"The atmosphere you created in this video was spine-chilling. Great job!"
I've worked a lot of jobs on swing and graveyard shifts, including as a security guard. It's a time where a fertile imagination can drive you insane, and fighting that insanity is never easy. But the worst job, although I loved the work and the less crowded I-95, was driving an 18-wheeler. You see things nobody else would see. Sometimes it's beautiful, like a distant skyline, with lights. You know the city is still active in the small hours, but you go through a tunnel and find yourself bypassing the busy part. It's peaceful; even the static of CB channel 19 occasionally giving a blast from nearby truckers, but then you go a bit further. Nothing but darkness. No highway lights. No cars. Nothing but white lines flashing by.
One night, travelling through Connecticut, I hit a route my directions had me exit onto, and even FM radio signals were mostly static. The lanes of each direction were separated by trees. I began to wish that my dispatcher had let me work local in Baltimore like I usually did, picking up loads at Lever Brothers in Dundalk and dropping them off at our terminal for the over-the-road drivers to pick up.
I began feeling uneasy, but couldn't figure out any reason for it. Sometimes the feeling comes when there's a bad accident ahead. But again, no CB chatter broke the static, no emergency vehicles passed me. And this feeling wasn't like that anyway. Only a turn east on a route I can't remember (it was 1989: do you remember what that was like?? Neon was everywhere including rubber tubes for guys with spiked hair or mullets to fasten onto their sunglasses, bicycle shorts were a real thing, and music sucked) I began to breathe easier. Years would pass. Then I would learn how close I probably was to Dudleytown, a supposed haunted or cursed former town, claimed by woods. I know I had to have been off-route, but how'd that happen?
Other creepy and tragic things happened. One night while approaching the Fort McHenry Tunnel from the south, where the interstate is elevated, I had a sickening, doom-like feeling in my gut. I slowed down, geared way down, and sure enough, blue lights were everywhere. I crept up and passed on the far right, and saw this car lying on its driver's side with the roof against the jersey wall. Toll cops were running along the wall, looking over it and down with their flashlights. Even driving a rig, I never thought that the north and south lanes were separate. I thought the concrete walls were what separated them. Not so: there's a big gap, and the driver had climbed out of her car through the passenger side window, climbed down to the wall, and then fallen 60-70 feet to an instant death. I did grow to finally hate night shit, which is responsible for a million horror stories, but none so horrible as real life. You've done a good job, though. I was keen to hear it all. I have no doubt that it has its roots in real life.
Very interesting, thanks for sharing. I couldn't do those kind of shifts because I fall asleep too easily and I always thought that people who have to drive at night for work should be paid more, at least.
But if we put safety aside, it must be extremely fascinating to see things from such an unusual perspective
So.... five nights at Freddy's meets mall cop.
I would love to see Five Nights at Freddy’s starring Paul Blart.
The mall entity literally gave him a list that just said leave us alone
Years ago I was a night shift security supervisor at the second largest shopping mall in the Chicago /Bloomingdale IL area. I can relate to some of your story but one thing that wasn't accurate is that mall security won't have access to the internal stores the internal stores are owned/leased by companies. If I was on patrol and I came across say an American Eagle store and the back door or the front gate was not locked we would have to call that particular stores key holder or manager to drive back into the mall. We would then also contact the Bloomingdale Police Department and when they all arrived we would then with the police and the store employee check the store to make sure that nobody was stealing anything resecure it and then they would clear the scene and we would continue on patrol. But in general not a bad little story. There's many times where I would be on patrol in that dark empty mall at night and I would have similar thoughts to what your story was about.. funny thing was if that happened to me in real life I wouldn't have quit like your protagonist I would have embraced it I would have became friends with the entity lol
Really good narrative. the voice and background noises are also awesome
Glad you enjoyed it!
Oh my goodness!! That was spooky!!!
The suspense in this video was off the charts! I couldn’t look away!
I love how you build the suspense in this part, it gave me goosebumps!
My blood ran cold, my blood ran cold, my blood ran cold
Bro's a cold blooded animal, a reptile.
You do such a good job! Even tone, no blasts of sound or volume. Perfect for dozing off to 😊!!! Thank you ☺️!!!
♥️♥️♥️😊
Man this one is so good , listened to it while trying to sleep .
Did anyone else think of weeping angels
Yea
I love this. It was unique. It made me sleep right away after 10 minutes
In all fairness as a security guard; companies will hire anyone with a pulse and always need guards. Some of the smaller ones hire pretty fuckin quickly depending on where it is. AUS you can be in the door at your contract within a week.
Fr. Even companies that don't really specialize in security. I was 17, and my sister's friends asked me If I was looking for a job. Her mother ran a small hotel, and needed someone for 2 night shifts. Just hanging at the reception desk, and making sure people didn't try to get in the pool area, if drunk people make noise past 12pm, just call the cops.
Said yes, her mother called me a few days later. Started the night after my interview. 2 night shift of sitting at the reception desk. Tought I was only getting those 2 shifts, but the boss ended up talking to me at the end of that 2nd shift like she would be trying to find me a spot somewhere. Fast foward a week, i'm now the kitchen dishwasher. Did that for 3 years, ended up becomming a cook. Quit during the pandemic, and now i'm working at an alluminium casting facility. Eyeing a woodmill job next 😂
But to think that I got my first rope in the job buisness being a "security" night watch is odd in some ways. But it seems like a good job to start up something in this world.
I was hoping something would go wrong even after following the rules, like the ghost would slip through the door of the security office.
Wow beautifully narrated
This story hits the spot!
For sure, you wrote a good story and the narrator did a good job reading it to us. Very nice all around.
This narration gave me chills… i had goosebumps multiple times. Great story telling!!
First time listener but I will definitely keep listening! 💜✨
Its not horror but out of world ambience which makes me watch these videos
this channel is definitely worth subscribing
Im glad you like the videos!
This is good. Thank you!
Glad you like it!
this was good
The ambient in your videos is the most disturbing I have ever heard through years of binging horror content
Love it
I love the sound effects. Nice one! 👍
Great story but what my question is What did the janitor mean by you’ll figure it out or not, because clearly he didn’t figure it out whatever it is,”😭💀
That's a convenience store, not a mall.
This Creepypasta is seriously spine-chilling! 😱 The story of working as a nightguard at a mall with strict rules to follow really pulls you in, especially as the tension builds with each new rule and mysterious event. The sense of isolation, the eerie silence of the mall after hours, and the strange happenings make for a terrifying combination. It’s the kind of story that makes you question what might be lurking in the shadows when you're alone. If you enjoy stories that play on your fear of the unknown, this one will keep you up at night! 🖤👀
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i really enjoyed this video, the storytelling was gripping and kept me on the edge of my seat! but honestly, the whole idea of a nightguard at a mall seems a bit exaggerated to me. like, how often do creepy things really happen in places like that? i wonder if some of the experiences are just fabricated for the thrill. what do you all think?
its another rules story but this one is pretty well made. the story feels organic -- natural, must be the use of simple but effective wording.
I turned, and then I heard it.
Then I turned and then I saw it then I turned around and there it was then I turned and then I saw it. I ran and then I heard it.
Then I turned around. And that's when I saw it.
Suddenly I spun and then I heard what I saw
And then I turned, and then I saw it 😅
I saw what I heard and felt what I Knew as fear. My heart thundering in my chest I knew what I felt what I heard was a ghost from what i saw. Spinning around rapidly I heard it. Then I saw, felt and smelled the piss in my pants
Another great story. Thank you for sharing 🙂👍💖
I loved the Story, Doc U just keep Getting Better All the Time. Thx for the Ride ✌️💙
This was a great story. It could be a movie.
That gave me chills!
why would this mall ever need a night security guard? great story otherwise.
Kids, robbers, vandals etc.
Its fake. Everyone has smartphones
dr. rules to follow stories and absolutely nothing else under absolutely no circumstances whatsoever at any time ever, wicked.
Who wrote this??? I LOVE stories!!! I'm studying narratology and cultural anthropology, mainly myth, legends and folklore! This is really good, I was just wondering if anyone knows.
The best story
These creepy rule stories that always happen in night shift is ❤❤❤ because I also usually work night shifts. 😊💀👻
Oh wow!
What rules have you got?
@Verethill18 do not sleep at work which I usually break hahahhahaha 😅😆
@@ninami_ph😂😂😂
We need to send UA-cam ghost hunters there to record footages
It's a made up story
Im listening to this every night, please keep on posting 😂
Need a job like this 😅 i could handle that job
This was so good! Just subscribed🤝
Scary 😳
01:33am. Can’t sleep been like this for months I have to get up at 7am for school. Last year of Highschool feel kinda lost
That was good. A little bit of Twilight Zone Mannequin moving.
Very interesting story, author, keep up the good work!
I sent this story to the Fears to Fathom game developer team, hope they make a game from it.
Is it Ben Stiller? Was there a tablet involved in all of this ?😂😂😂
It's 4Am and I remember rule no 8.
This dude was living a FNAF game. 💀💀💀
Some jobs have more unspoken rules. Worked a few places like that.
Fun story, but a slower burn could have served it better. The mall being obviously haunted was revealed far too early in my opinion, what with the whole mannequin scene happening what seemed to be mere minutes into the main character's shift. I think the scene, while affective in the moment shouldn't have played out with the main character confirming the mannequins were in fact moving. I think the tension would have been ramped up, and sustained much longer that way. Showing the mannequins moving so early on in a way cheapens everything else that happens (or maybe doesn't happen) afterwards in the story. I also personally felt the "what janitor?" line coming from a mile away, so it's not the twist others here in the comments like to think it is. I think what could have been much more affective on top of the manager asking "what janitor?" would have been if the main character had tried to show the manager the list of rules given to him by the janitor to follow, only to not be able to find it. Leaving the main character, and by extention us the audience to ponder if the janitor was an entity of the mall, or if the events of the story were simply all in the main character's head.
Love the narrator voice but I would would also like if the background match the the mall at least. The convenient store in the background was nice but wish it was a picture of the Mall
Where is this mall? And What is the name of this mall? Or is it even real?
It's fiction. A creepypasta.
Those are some easy rules tbh if you had a timer and a habit of checking watch at certain areas
Oh i forgot to add maybe some headphones for music
this video was really engaging and well-made! i enjoyed the storytelling, but i can't help but wonder if some of the "rules" were a bit exaggerated for dramatic effect. i mean, it's a mall, not a haunted house, right?
nice story 💕
Nice story .
I also don't like mannequins😢
Good for a story on netflix lol
doctor, please make longer videos like 2 or 3 hours compilation!
really enjoyed this video, great storytelling and it kept me on the edge of my seat! but honestly, I don't get why people would want to work as a nightguard in such an eerie place. I feel like it's just asking for trouble, right? like, what’s the draw?
turns out the janitor was just an OOOOPTICAL ILUUUUUSSSION..... wut ?
ua-cam.com/video/9TNcvfTPX0g/v-deo.htmlsi=XXv5qwVHeAgxxYmK
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Are all your security guard stories linked going by the opening …?
Worked as a night guard for years. Everything about this is a tall glass of nope. I'm locking myself in the office and waiting for sunrise. Your life is worth more than $15 an hour.
Lmao this guys stomach is somewhere in his feet after all that dropping
Thank you for scaring the absolute sh*t out of me! I really needed that!
Cool story.
Ah yes, just in time for bed!
@@NightmaresEcho1 just gave you a sub, now I get to watch your channel grow 👍
This is really great. I really like it. I just wanted to know how you do it. Like do you have an app or? I’m just curious.
I’ve heard similar stories and that’s just creepy 😮
Wow the audio book spinoff series for fnaf is pretty good eh
Somepeople have no survival skills. Rule 1: Never leave the security room, stay inside and lock all the doors jeez
How do you go back out. I'm done
I’ll take a job like this.
I enjoyed this creepy story!👍 Thanks!
Glad you enjoyed it!
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This is on some fnaf type shit
First one was FNAF 😂
UA-cam ads keep breaking immersion
Why not get your phone out and film the walking mannequins and sell the footage for millions. There are a couple of Twilight Zone episodes involving mannequins which this upload reminded me of, they were a bit creepy. If you wrote the script well done it's easy listening.
Just finished this at 3:07 AM....