Pokemon Creepypasta Abandon Lonliness RED

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  • Опубліковано 14 гру 2024

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  • @scarfdrawscattos4190
    @scarfdrawscattos4190 8 років тому +132

    Here is the story: Red woke up in his room, a while after... that happened. Red got his Pikachu back from him mother, and talked to his rival, Blue. Blue mentioned Loneliness and Leaf. He then mentions Pikachu having a spell tag on it. He says that, either way, the Prof. wanted him. Red goes into the lab, to find that the Prof. has been turned into a ghost. The Prof. then says to run away, which makes Red confused. Red leaves and heads to the Pokemon Tower, possibly to mourn a Pokemon, or maybe something drew him to go there. A lady says that somebody awaits Red up there, in which confuses Red even farther. Red starts climbing the tower, in which another lady tells him to go back because he isn't Blue. Red then heads back to Pallet Town, in where he encounters Blue, who says he looks terrible. Red then heads back home to rest, in which he encounters Loneliness' Ghost. It repeats, "Help us, Red.... Help us, Red..." Over and over. The last time Loneliness says it, they scream it out, making sure Red can hear the two. Red heads up his stairs, in which he finds Blue using his computer. Red tells Blue about what happened, and Blue responds that Loneliness was a curse, that Leaf was basically stupid to take him in. Blue says this is getting silly, and for the two to go to his house. They talk about Blue's dream, Pikachu's Spell Tag, and Leaf with Loneliness. Blue's Dream has to do with Red, because Blue challenges Red to a battle. Blue uses Raticate, whom doesn't even have a sprite. Red beats Blue. Blue asks Red to help him, and that he is scared. Blue screams out Loneliness was a curse, and that he abandoned him. Red goes to the tower to try and fix things. The signs say: "Blue was torn when Raticate died. Out of frustration, He abandoned that little eevee..." "He ran. He was scared. Eevee was confused... Eevee chose Leaf as a friend. But Leaf was lied to by Blue..." "Leaf... She murdered Eevee. Only because she believed he was nothing but a curse... But... I'm not... a curse... Im just... Lonely. Lonely... So alone..." "Leaf chose to ask for forgiveness... And she was forgiven... But what about Blue? Did he ask to be forgiven? .................... He asked to kill his friends. Loneliness.... Leaf.... And now... Red..." The signs end there, and Red meets Blue by the ghosts. Blue says that it is only them left now. Blue calls Red a curse, and says he will destroy Red. A battle then starts, and Raticate places a curse on Pikachu. A condition is placed on the battle field, where it says "Loneliness is crying." "Raticate cannot be hit." "Pikachu is in agonizing pain." Pikachu slowly dies, and so does Red. It ends off saying: "Loneliness' voice echoed in the darkness... But nobody heard it." And that is the end of this part of the storyline, have fun sleeping tonight kiddies! (3

    • @keeganbyrd5279
      @keeganbyrd5279 6 років тому +3

      Scarf Draws Cattos the longest sentence of my life

    • @owenncool
      @owenncool 5 років тому +1

      r/wooosh

    • @azurecolezlaw
      @azurecolezlaw 5 років тому +1

      Thats deep

    • @alguienrandomxd2847
      @alguienrandomxd2847 Рік тому

      that really sad :

    • @HammerCain-x1y
      @HammerCain-x1y 3 місяці тому

      Future Red says How _ dare you - Say that Leaf and her sweet little Eevee didn't deserve it and I really walk the World of Pokemon with a real hard level of PTSD

  • @kezzstar24
    @kezzstar24 10 років тому +226

    This isn't a creepypasta, it's a sadpasta. Poor Eevee.

  • @mattmayugatheidolmasterfan3474
    @mattmayugatheidolmasterfan3474 10 років тому +102

    Loneliness is crying. (It is raining.)
    Foe RATICATE cannot be hit... (It doesn't affect Foe RATICATE...)
    Tears fall on the Battle Field. (Rain continues to fall.)
    PIKACHU is in agonizing pain... (PIKACHU is afflicted by the CURSE!)
    PIKACHU Died! (PIKACHU fainted!)
    Player fell to CHAMPION BLUE! (Player lost against CHAMPION BLUE!)
    RED is seeing darkness... (RED paid [insert Pokémon Dollar symbol here] 100 as the prize money...)
    It[']s over! (RED whited out!)

    • @josecayetano2955
      @josecayetano2955 8 років тому +3

      good translation

    • @dbb1561
      @dbb1561 7 років тому

      MattMayugaThePuyoPuyoFan 038 AVGCP AUTTP o

    • @kakyoinconartritis
      @kakyoinconartritis 6 років тому

      K

    • @SchumiJr.
      @SchumiJr. 3 роки тому

      I think foe raticate cannot be hit it's because that raticate had the wonderguard ability, so a move that is not fighting type will always fail against him

  • @BlissfullyTired
    @BlissfullyTired 8 років тому +52

    Everybody die because of
    BLUE maybe he was a curse

  • @greengalaxy5597
    @greengalaxy5597 8 років тому +43

    Blue becoming a murderous maniac wanting to kill all his friends for no reason is hilarious

  • @twotonedearly
    @twotonedearly 11 років тому +49

    needs to be a part 4 with Blue getting what's coming to him from the ghosts of Red and Leaf and Lonliness.

  • @KittyEdwardLuver
    @KittyEdwardLuver 12 років тому +19

    Me too. (When I saw Blue all of a sudden in Red's room, I thought: "HOW THE HELL DID YOU GET IN THERE BLUE? YOU STALKER.")

    • @idontknow9801
      @idontknow9801 3 роки тому +1

      Barry: *allow me to introduce myself.”*

    • @kentguiller
      @kentguiller 3 роки тому

      Blue is obviously a simp

  • @llSuperSnivyll
    @llSuperSnivyll 9 років тому +25

    It's a bad creepypasta, that's for sure, but there is merit in actually trying to hack it to the game.

    • @EpicTyphlosionTV
      @EpicTyphlosionTV 5 років тому +3

      True. It is kinda wierd how it basically says that Blue ended up murdering everyone. Though the younger me still seems to like it, as with some of these other creepypastas, lmao

    • @idontknow9801
      @idontknow9801 3 роки тому

      @Brenden Dobbs when it said “someone is awaiting you at the top” I thought it meant buried alive

  • @Zombitology
    @Zombitology 11 років тому +13

    Please don't ever say that Red and Ash are the same person. Red is 10x the trainer Ash could ever dream about being.

  • @Revidescent84
    @Revidescent84 12 років тому +8

    If you were abandoned TWICE, you'd have a lot of "Loneliness" and feel pretty "Unwanted" too...Reading the story also helps. The game goes without being used for months, so a bit TOO realistically, the Pokemon become neglected and die.

  • @DarkSonic377
    @DarkSonic377 11 років тому +23

    I can hear the persons fingers clicking the buttons on the computer! :3

  • @chris_32195
    @chris_32195 Рік тому +2

    5:25 the transition from the final Battle Is too cool in this situation

  • @ribbon4796
    @ribbon4796 8 років тому +12

    ;-; I'm sorry Eevee I promise to play with u in Pokemon Amie

  • @BillNyeTheRussianSpy
    @BillNyeTheRussianSpy 13 років тому +8

    You know, unlike other Pokemon creepypastas this actually seems to make a decent game on its own. At the very least, it's grittier than Pokemon's gotten recently. Remember when the games had dying/dead Pokemon and a terroristic mafia?
    And now we have Leaf and Blue possessed by demons and killing Pokemon/people. Definitely beats Team Plasma. XD

    • @milesfarber
      @milesfarber 2 роки тому +1

      Man, this comment aged like wine.

    • @pavo116
      @pavo116 Рік тому +1

      ​@@milesfarberit's so funny reading comments from so long ago when people considered Plasma and Black and White in general to be bad, funny how things change over time like this

    • @milesfarber
      @milesfarber Рік тому

      @@pavo116 In black and white 2, Ghetsis literally actually tries to murder you. USUM literally points out how Plasma is by a country mile the most violent team ever created in history, way worse than Team Rocket. You can really tell how back in 2010 the new trend was spreading fake news about games they never played.

  • @trqshy
    @trqshy 8 років тому +12

    SOMEONE PRAY FOR ME IM GOUNG FULLSCREEN

  • @Baconboy20997
    @Baconboy20997 12 років тому +5

    I think the ending would have been more "effective" if the word "heard" wasn't misspelled. This was a herpy derpy creepypasta.

    • @MegaMegajennifer
      @MegaMegajennifer 7 місяців тому

      if you mean removing the e then it would spell hard

  • @GodsRighthandman
    @GodsRighthandman 2 роки тому +2

    Dude, imagine seeing this as a poke mon fan at an early age…

  • @ChazAndDaveGaming
    @ChazAndDaveGaming 12 років тому +4

    there should be a part 4 with trainers from other reigons like gold, lucas, dawn and hilbert.

  • @mansay500
    @mansay500 5 років тому +3

    1:11 wait, trainer leaf died????

  • @vampysesparker436
    @vampysesparker436 8 років тому +7

    my baby is hurt eevees not a curse hes the opasite...joy

  • @Zombitology
    @Zombitology 11 років тому +4

    I didn't know his name was Gold. I always named him Silver lol. It's hard to say who the better trainer is because we don't know what Red accomplished in the 3 years that passed since blue/red. Red is still considered the only true pokemon master in the series.

  • @SarahDavis-bx1zi
    @SarahDavis-bx1zi 9 років тому +7

    So sad I love Eevee even Loneliness :'[ 😿😿😿😿😿

  • @infinite_sun_rays
    @infinite_sun_rays 7 років тому +2

    "Hey, Professor Oak! You said you wante- OH GOD"

  • @polarisgemini52
    @polarisgemini52 7 років тому +1

    That increase in the sound of help us red tho. Fucking scared the shit out of me.

  • @Nikki_81
    @Nikki_81 9 років тому +3

    loneliness let's just say if anyone ever betrays you again they'll suffer the fate that was handed to you because they taught you were a curse your not your an amazing little eevee -amber one of the people that would never betray you

  • @mpwarrior-wr1yo
    @mpwarrior-wr1yo 2 роки тому +3

    i absolutely love this creepypasta! although i believe that loneliness isnt a curse

  • @TightSweaters4
    @TightSweaters4 8 років тому +6

    What happens if you use tail whip to let Blue win?

  • @IMGOATXD
    @IMGOATXD 5 років тому +1

    I love dark stuff

  • @KuroHinata0321
    @KuroHinata0321 10 років тому +1

    That 'LONLINESS is crying' cracks me up every time XD

  • @allisonmwcrisis92
    @allisonmwcrisis92 11 років тому +2

    My guess is as simple as: after Blue abandoned Lonliness, Lonliness approached Leaf, and Leaf took him in.

  • @Lordestic
    @Lordestic 10 років тому +1

    LONELYNESS,voice echoed in the darkness but no one heard it

  • @ianfinrir8724
    @ianfinrir8724 7 місяців тому

    Couldn't even attempt to slowly build up the spooky stuff. Came right out of the gate with the tv being weird.

  • @iNinjeek
    @iNinjeek 12 років тому

    You did a great job! :D i love this video!

  • @ShadowOnTheWall666
    @ShadowOnTheWall666 8 років тому +7

    I enjoyed this but the story was a bit difficult to follow because you scrolled through the text a bit too fast and placing the Italian translation over the top of the text boxes made the English hard to read.
    There were also some confusing elements. What was the significance of Pikachu's spell tag and how did Blue get his dead Radicate back?

    • @SyndicateOperative
      @SyndicateOperative 6 років тому

      Pikachu's spell tag was basically pikachu being superstitious - he was trying to ward off the ghosts.
      His dead radicate was a ghost - that's why pikachu couldn't hit it.

  • @13CrystalHeart
    @13CrystalHeart 13 років тому

    Thanks for uploading this!

  • @UltraAryan10
    @UltraAryan10 8 років тому +8

    Its a hack of FireRed or LeafGreen..... I know.....

    • @milez570
      @milez570 7 років тому

      It is but he won't let me download it

    • @Sand42992
      @Sand42992 4 роки тому

      Its leafgreen the story is about leaf

  • @HammerCain-x1y
    @HammerCain-x1y 3 місяці тому

    I really feel depressed and devastated to hear such sad and frustrating things that can ever In any Pokemon game

  • @RockmanZeroModernDay
    @RockmanZeroModernDay 4 роки тому

    Translation: It is raining. It doesn't affect Raticate... Rain continues to fall. Pikachu is afflicted by the Curse!
    Pikachu fainted!

  • @burninfire3878
    @burninfire3878 8 років тому +4

    Eevee got murdered me: o-okay WHYYYYYYYY

  • @BladeGamester
    @BladeGamester 12 років тому

    lol plus i love people like this who go and try and fix my grammar mistakes, cause when i'm raging i can care less for grammar and spelling :D

  • @PivotSeq
    @PivotSeq 11 років тому +1

    Well, Green/Gary abandoned Eevee (Lonliness) when his Raticate died.
    So Lonliness ran confused and stuff, it found Leaf/Blue (LOL) and they became friends, but then Green tricked Blue to kill Eevee because he thought it was a curse. She killed it, and then asked for forgiveness.
    Then Red got to know the truth and so Green killed him.

  • @supersaiyaninfinityunivers7193
    @supersaiyaninfinityunivers7193 2 роки тому

    And that’s why Blue stabbing and kill Red died with his knife 🔪 for killed them for taking revenge has an warrior. Rest In Peace Leaf. You will be missed.

  • @cry4823
    @cry4823 8 років тому +16

    what game please what pokemon version

    • @UltraAryan10
      @UltraAryan10 8 років тому +10

      Its a hack of pokemon FireRed or LeafGreen

    • @holyshotgun8248
      @holyshotgun8248 7 років тому

      Ikagura Shimon abonded loneleniss

    • @IcyShackBowlr27
      @IcyShackBowlr27 7 років тому

      Fire Red it's a Gameboy advanced

  • @USSR_BALL-e
    @USSR_BALL-e 5 місяців тому

    This is a creepy pasta since the first minute,cuz Gary is being nice to us

  • @8BitMisdreavus
    @8BitMisdreavus 12 років тому +3

    What happens if you purposely tank the Blue fight?

  • @hilmanihsan7403
    @hilmanihsan7403 8 років тому +4

    Dear Blue,Where Did You Get That Invisible TM/HM

    • @milez570
      @milez570 7 років тому

      That resembles raticate's death

    • @felipebarreto_
      @felipebarreto_ 6 років тому

      Is his dead Raticate...

  • @gtafan666
    @gtafan666 13 років тому +3

    You know when you cant use a move on the enemy you really should use a different one.

    • @chris_32195
      @chris_32195 Рік тому

      That Raticate Is a literal Ghost, he can' t be attacked in any way, you can only lower his stats but It's no use

  • @BladeGamester
    @BladeGamester 12 років тому

    thank you sir, you truly are a good man of youtube :D

  • @MusicOfAdam
    @MusicOfAdam 13 років тому +1

    "I'm sorry Red...I'll have to beat you down NOW!"
    Wtf? XD

  • @FlitteringSnowdrops
    @FlitteringSnowdrops 12 років тому

    Thank you sir. You are a good man of UA-cam too. Keep up the good work.

  • @BroilerTM
    @BroilerTM 11 років тому +1

    When you battle your rival at Lavender Town, he asks you if your Pokemon are dead. At this point on, he no longer has his Raticate he used in previous battles. Because of the luxury confusion on the S.S. Anne, he wasn't able to make it to a Pokemon Center in time, so the Raticate passed away.

    • @Vi3Voide
      @Vi3Voide 6 років тому

      no,Blue just traded raticate

  • @slaw9514
    @slaw9514 10 років тому +4

    Why they ALWAYS teleporting to POKèMON TOWER?

  • @Hugouuz
    @Hugouuz 6 років тому

    Man i really have seen that video on 2011 and 8 years after this UA-cam recommend to me WTF?!?

  • @VarthRock
    @VarthRock 10 років тому +6

    DEAD END

  • @angelguzman9010
    @angelguzman9010 7 років тому +2

    Why is it raining indoors

  • @Hrrmpf66
    @Hrrmpf66 11 років тому +4

    Poor leaf and lonliness

  • @sflahaut62200
    @sflahaut62200 11 років тому +3

    Poor LEAF, poor EEVEE...

  • @waterninten
    @waterninten 13 років тому +1

    LONELINESS' voice echoed in the darkness... But no one heard it.
    I started crying. So sad. Wonder what the last part will be like...

  • @izayahnonnenmacher8140
    @izayahnonnenmacher8140 6 років тому

    I find the champion theme of this game creepy now. All because of this series

  • @PlatinumX3000
    @PlatinumX3000 12 років тому

    In elementary school, they teach us that you are not supposed begin sentences with conjunctions. In actuality, you can begin a sentence with one if you use it correctly. They also teach us to use contractions in elementary school, but then later in life you find that people frown upon them. Yes, I am aware that I also used contractions in my previous comments. But if we are going to nitpick at tiny grammatical errors then by all means have a field day.

  • @NewbieTetris
    @NewbieTetris 12 років тому

    when my first time listening into a creepypasta, i could not sleep

  • @TheBlueBeatle3
    @TheBlueBeatle3 12 років тому

    2:14 - 2:30
    When he walked into the room and Loneliness cried "help us red" ........fuck. That scared the shit out of me!

  • @AkiraComplex
    @AkiraComplex 12 років тому

    People don't realize that you can just mod a rom, and that it's much easier to do for less complex games such as ones for older handheld consoles. You could just switch out the text and the sprites, creating your own events and conditions. Play through it, and record it. That's it. There you go. Everyone go home.

  • @BladeGamester
    @BladeGamester 12 років тому +1

    depending on the person on whether you find yellow a spin off or not, I think it is a spin off considering you can catch all the starters in it and you start with a pikachu, while every game after and before it you start with the standard 3 fire water or grass so ya its a spin off buddy.

  • @TheTediousTedd
    @TheTediousTedd 12 років тому

    The moment I saw raticate this video became pretty funny. The leaf making a Pokemon sound was pretty funny though.

  • @FlinnyWinny
    @FlinnyWinny 8 років тому +1

    BUT NOBODY CAME- *snorts*

    • @mitsaka6085
      @mitsaka6085 8 років тому +2

      Undertale I u I

    • @rockman7perez
      @rockman7perez 6 років тому

      "eevee's voice echoed in the darkness, but nobody heard it."
      That's obviously from EB (final battle)

  • @mmomario12
    @mmomario12 12 років тому

    we all know that when we played red and blue, we killed Blue's Raticate. Or at least I hope we all know. If you don't know, here is the theory behind it for anyone who doesn't know and is reading. in the last battle with blue before facing him in Pokemon tower, he had a raticate. when you fought him in the tower, he no longer had a raticate and said you had no business there since none of your pokemon have died yet he is there without a raticate. EVIDENCE >:D

  • @NicoTheCinderace
    @NicoTheCinderace 12 років тому

    Gary: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooo.... *Dies*
    Red: ...And that's what you get, Murderer.

  • @BladeGamester
    @BladeGamester 12 років тому

    ya i hate ppl that act like they know everything even tho they never read the manga, thank you for actually knowing your stuff sir :)

  • @RockmanZeroModernDay
    @RockmanZeroModernDay 5 років тому

    Loneliness voice echoed in the darkness... But no one heard it.

  • @jaypopple5004
    @jaypopple5004 8 років тому +1

    to me it happened to soon I mean wow tragic but most invigorating

  • @v0idspamz636
    @v0idspamz636 7 років тому

    Also, NICE! DISCO AT THE OAKS' PLACES!!!!!

  • @sahilhossian8212
    @sahilhossian8212 9 місяців тому

    Lore of Pokemon Creepypasta Abandon Lonliness RED momentum 100

  • @someguy2302
    @someguy2302 11 років тому

    Blue: I will destroy you! (My team consists of creepymon GHOST, Missingno, HURRY, and M$@?)

    • @SomerandomShiro
      @SomerandomShiro 9 років тому

      my team is only one............silvers faceless feraligatr

  • @sahilhossain8204
    @sahilhossain8204 Рік тому

    Lore of Pokemon Creepypasta Abandon Loneliness RED momentum 100

  • @theYeastBoi1332
    @theYeastBoi1332 2 місяці тому

    Red: calm down blue, we're your friends
    Blue: shut up red i'll kill you

  • @Thedarksenshi
    @Thedarksenshi Рік тому

    So I was right, this story does have to do with the Sadpasta "I won't leave you"

  • @JRC1325v2
    @JRC1325v2 12 років тому

    holy fuck the thunder at 4:20 happened right when the thunder here actually got loud

  • @starshifter5133
    @starshifter5133 9 років тому

    1:25 that'll give me nightmares...

  • @AtticusRh0des
    @AtticusRh0des 12 років тому

    Loneliness is eevee and leaf is the girl(optional to the male character you can play as)

  • @polishedrelish
    @polishedrelish 2 роки тому

    Why is it raining indoors lol
    "Loneliness is crying!"
    OH

  • @milez570
    @milez570 7 років тому

    I'm actually glad this guy didn't put any jumpscares in these vids....
    I shouldn't say that should I?

  • @SuperPhantomfox
    @SuperPhantomfox 12 років тому

    2 and a half mins in and this is already creeping my out >.>

  • @v0idspamz636
    @v0idspamz636 7 років тому

    No one noticed [Rival Name] is much nicer than reg. games?

  • @spaghetti5914
    @spaghetti5914 6 років тому

    video used confusion!
    it's super effective against spaghetti
    spaghetti is confused
    it hurt itself in confusion!

  • @Geortiz113
    @Geortiz113 8 років тому +1

    thumbs up to the indoor rain

  • @Cherry_and_ko
    @Cherry_and_ko 12 років тому +1

    Gary! you're the champion! Why is you're Raticate at level 8!?!? Gary: IDK

  • @KnAtiOn12
    @KnAtiOn12 12 років тому

    Blade is wrong. The game came first in 1996. His first pokemon was either a charmeleon, a squirtle, or a bulbasaur. When you fight him in gold, he has all three in their evolved forms. Pidgey would have been his second, and Pikachu his third.

  • @CadDriftarus
    @CadDriftarus 12 років тому

    best creepypasta storyline ever. i want to do an anime version of this

  • @boltdragon31
    @boltdragon31 12 років тому

    aww, it's ok. i still have trouble sleeping when i think about ao oni's face. the trick is in the sound. try putting on a small light, and falling asleep to a song that relaxes you. i listen to the end credits from ocarina of time, fall asleep like a kitten

  • @darryldownes5051
    @darryldownes5051 12 років тому

    its talking about gary, remeber he took the eevee that ash was gonna get then it say im sorry eevee and etc.
    i love eevees. thump up if u love eevees. >3

  • @puppybork3054
    @puppybork3054 6 років тому

    Did anyone notice that because curse worked that way Blue's Raticate was ghost type?

  • @FormerlyDoomed
    @FormerlyDoomed 12 років тому

    of course, but the small chance it does happen, all hell breaks loose.

  • @MAZZ0Murder
    @MAZZ0Murder 12 років тому

    same with the rain in every level of the Tower!

  • @alexebarnhart
    @alexebarnhart 12 років тому

    the idea is that red is abandoned and alone his real mother is dead and everyone is nice and cares for him since he is abandoned and lonely but when that care goes too far...

  • @idontknow9801
    @idontknow9801 3 роки тому

    Looks like Red forgot to take his schizophrenia meds

  • @burninfire3878
    @burninfire3878 8 років тому +1

    Why was raticate invisible and it said got killed but poped up last moment with blue dafuq ? This CREPPY PSATA makes no sence lmao

  • @jeweltara
    @jeweltara 12 років тому

    that actually makes since so this is more of a wtf raman then a creepypasta

  • @NicoTheCinderace
    @NicoTheCinderace 12 років тому

    5:35
    Red: ...YOU DAMN CHEATER!!
    Go! GHOST!
    GHOST used CURSE!

  • @snowspade3954
    @snowspade3954 12 років тому

    Dread, isn'it? Maybe because you see them always so joyful and full of life and here seem normal, but ...