The Alien Woman Stood Frozen When She Saw Me, and I Later Learned the Reason.

[@leejurkowski]

No human I know is sarcastically witty with his every comment. It's taxing to have to listen to this type of witticism (witlessness), especially during the story's serious parts.

[@snagel515]

I like the story, but needs less sarcasm, and less gen X lack of respect