Critique of the Week | July 12, 2024

For this Critique of the Week, we'll move quickly through the oldest submissions in the queue. Tune in, share your thoughts, and learn a little in the process!
Participants are drawn from those who submitted poems for critique. If you'd like to have your own poems critiqued on live video, find the Critique of the Week category on our Submittable page: rattle.submittable.com/submit...
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[@vrflashnew]

Thank you, Timothy. BTW, in the Arthur's legend Lancelot and Guinevere lay together separated by Arthur's sword.

[@onecloudpoetry]

Mrs. Davis - i want to know more. ends abruptly.