Yeah, you weren’t kidding at all. Sometimes I didn’t even know what was going on. Not to mention that they skipped over several major plot points. Though I think the twist at the end was interesting, it was done very poorly. And not only that, but, several characters change personalities, even if it was just for short period time, which was very annoying. Overall, it was written out very poorly and chaotically. (like you said) Tho the plot was decent enough and there were several events I never even thought or expected to happen. Had it been written better than this, it probably would’ve been one of the best What If’s I’ve seen so far. Shame that it ended up so chaotic, though it was funny in a sense, and it did make me laugh a few times just with how stupid some of the scenes were, and how I imagined them going. 😂
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Love the story so far.Need part two please💚💚💚🧡🧡🧡
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This story is written very chaoticly
Yeah, you weren’t kidding at all. Sometimes I didn’t even know what was going on. Not to mention that they skipped over several major plot points. Though I think the twist at the end was interesting, it was done very poorly. And not only that, but, several characters change personalities, even if it was just for short period time, which was very annoying. Overall, it was written out very poorly and chaotically. (like you said) Tho the plot was decent enough and there were several events I never even thought or expected to happen. Had it been written better than this, it probably would’ve been one of the best What If’s I’ve seen so far. Shame that it ended up so chaotic, though it was funny in a sense, and it did make me laugh a few times just with how stupid some of the scenes were, and how I imagined them going. 😂
@@katerinaweathers3286 I did not finish this. I personally love fan fiction but sadly this one seems to have been written with too much haste.
I finished but it was in fact very chaotic