It's not bad, but if feels kinda rushed in some parts. The choral parts don't sound good, you can try to record your voice in different tones and put it together, that way you can try to replace those parts alone. I don't know how to explain this, but for these songs it's better if you sing with a soft voice, as if you're whispering. I tried to say something helpful, but my English is really bad (I'm Brazilian by the way)
It's not bad, but if feels kinda rushed in some parts. The choral parts don't sound good, you can try to record your voice in different tones and put it together, that way you can try to replace those parts alone. I don't know how to explain this, but for these songs it's better if you sing with a soft voice, as if you're whispering. I tried to say something helpful, but my English is really bad (I'm Brazilian by the way)
Thank you！I'll try my best！