When your ex Mafia Husband came to kill your daughter without knowing he is the father pt 1
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- Опубліковано 18 лис 2024
- Jungkook oneshot #btsff #jungkookff #oneshot #jk #ff #jungkookoneshotff #btsoneshotff
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man whatever his reason to be mad at her aint gonna change the fact that he want to killed an innocent kid . i hope y/n dont forgive him that easily
Literally he's so cruel no matter whose child that was how can he tried to kill an innocent child who just born
even though it was not his child how can he point a gun to a little , its not there fault 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 i loved it !
He doesnt deserve any type of forgiveness after what he was about to do😡😡😡
Jk is very cruel....whatever is reason, trying to killing a newborn is unforgivable and unfair thing...even itz a enemy's child,
Exactly ....He doesn't deserve forgiveness
@@dopesope2261 got the point
How can u leave us hanging in the middle.....next part plzzz..I'm so curious ☹️😟😟😟😟😣
Okay but the audio description had me rolling even in the serious scenes 😭
Mns if child is not his he will kill how pathetic
I dont know why I always have to wait for next part pls godd savee meeee a few minute ago I watched a ff where also the next part didn't uploaded my LIFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
He so cruel selfish
No matter you dont harm a baby
Its a no for me
No he doesn't yn at all
Ahhhh can't wait for the next part 😭😭💜🤌
I want to read it when it's done. Ppl here are so quick to judge 😭
this was intense, i guess and hope there is some plot twist or something and that he had no intention at all of doing such an atrocious thing
after watching ur ff for abt month on mute now tf when I unmute the audio I realized this author seem to be kid voicee
It's really amazing and fantastic. I love and enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for this ff of yours.
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You surely is a great author.. it's not your style but you still challenged yourself.. but I have a complain..why it's "to be continued" and not " the end" 😩😩😩😩
Don’t make yn forgive him easily he should know the truth but he abounded her and ready to kill a innocent soul please make him regret
It’s just a request 😊
Don't forgive him unnie he don't deserve her or forgiveness the child is his or not who gave the rights to hurt the innocent soul Don't forgive him he is so cruel
Curiosity kills the cat
This is extremely interesting. Please upload
the next part pls...
I was about to write something like this😢
I NEED A PART 2 PLS
Part 2 please 🥺🥺🥺
Omg so good by the way New subscriber here can't wait for next part ❤
Welcome!!
Please part 2
Hii unnie I love your all ff you are a best author
Thank you
Can't wait till next part
Next part please please please please please
I was gonna cry when he wanted to kill his own chiled
Next parttttt pleaseeee 😭😖
Make them together he was angry because of betrayal he don't wanna do it purposely 😢
Ohh really? Then you won't be surprised if he killed her one day in anger
Are you mentally sick???? He literally wanted to kill an innocent baby and you're saying he didn't do it purposely???
Its not playing for me😢
Went you upload next part
Next part plsssss
Next part please 😊❤
please next
next part soon please 😊
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Hmmm....
Your ff's are good but sometimes I find it difficult to understand, because you use some words that are difficult to understand.
Oh is that so?
Could you kindly mention some words so I have an idea. I will take a note not to add those and such words again 💜
@@moonlightbaby96 I can't mention in that way but I can say that the words we always use daily and everyone can easily understand, if you use them, it will be very beneficial for everyone, including me, to read your ff.
I will try my best even though I try to use regular words. But thank you, I hope you give your feedback again someday if your problem was solved or not.
@@moonlightbaby96 😊💜
It's perfect tho ❤
Jk is at fault but y/n also have fault. When she ran away from her family then why she called her brother for help. This kind of girls or boys should rotten in hell they can leave those people who really love them for some outsider they even forget that it is the family with u from the day u born, save u love u support u but no those things doesn't matter hahaha😂😂😂
Y/n got her karma
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