@@aletheaxl error Flowey: want to watch this it’s really good. Can’t wait for the next episode though. error Chara: I can see the appeal what do you think star is going to do with the next episode? error Flowey: also got to think about how much everybody else knew individually I think Dalv is hiding something 0:51 i’m pretty sure he may have suspected himself error Chara: I wonder Ceroba chose now to act chose now she arguably could’ve done any time where other people weren’t watching or framed as an accident so why now and in this way error Flowey: good question There is also the matter of axis to consider he’s programmed to eliminate humans and he’s done it before. Why wouldn’t he do it again? error Chara: i’ll admit if I didn’t know Ceroba origin story I would have probably designated him as primary suspect especially since his human exterminations are as a designated secret that only Ceroba and Chujin who is now past were aware of Error gaster: you wouldn’t mind if I join the conversation would you I was told by somebody this show was good
@@miniwhiffy3465 I think they’re versions of the characters that wound up in the anti-void somehow and their code scrambled, since that’s how the anti-void works apparently?
I got ideas: Here are some random ideas I got from the frames, if we don't need to make things canon-compliant with fights and the like. Dalv was a prime suspect for the disappearance of the Integrity SOUL for the possibility of killing in self-defense, hence why he's surrounded by missing posters, looking visibly distressed. This is what made him a suspect for this case involving Clover's death, even if he was never declared guilty for the previous assumption. With how his character is portrayed in canon before you get to know him, this would add to the mystery factor and make it feel more worthwhile when Star proves his innocence, possibly proving his innocence regarding the end of the Snowdin Incident as well, giving him closure and opening up the option of making friends again. With his source inspiration being Vlad the Impaler, he may take a more defensive/protector position after receiving closure to protect others from the harm he was caused (a positive subversion). Martlet could have been a witness due to her scatterbrained nature, either physically being somewhere she wasn't meant to be, or being late to a shift that overlapped with a time that *could've* given her info if not for the fact she wasn't there. If we want to play up her Royal Guard sentry post duties, maybe she was meant to be patrolling the streets at the time. Her innocence is proven through another member of the Guard tesifying she was seen elsewhere in a hurry to get to her shift/a superior tesifying to telling her off for not being where she was supposed to be. She eventually quits, saying that her job just isn't what she's good at, especially with how it incriminated her here, becoming a woodworker post-case. With the frame of her looking at the syringe, she may get in/plan a physical confrontation with Ceroba, final boss against final boss, under the impression she's dangerous. After all, though Ceroba senses EXP in-game (pure soul talk) Martlet can sense LV ("You seemed dangerous..."). Ceroba is someone who was called in under terms of being a witness, later dubbed a suspect, which causes her confession to Starlo. At first, she seems like someone with valuable insight, especially with the fact she is Starlo's (the protagonist in this AU) childhood friend. This gives her credibility at first, since you're seeing things through his lens. First impressions of her are that she is a widowed mother grieving her child, and all the more tragically has bore witness to yet another death of a child she knew, Clover. However, as investigations escalate and search warrants are issued on both witnesses and suspects alike, with Starlo getting desperate to find Clover's killer, he finds something he isn't supposed to. Him *alone,* this time. ("You got more than you gave.") This leads into the bar conversation, into the alley one, and... you know the rest. Axis is a decommisioned security bot, hence the reason why he's a witness. If the Steamworks still leads to New Home, this may be where Axis is involved, taken in to see what Clover's status was when they passed through. Were they already being pursued? Did they pass through the Steamworks at all, or through another part of the Underground? This would provide insight into where the paper trail left behind by the killer would be, as long as they could trace the path to the scene of the crime. After all, Starlo is pinning up photos that imply he knows Clover was being chased. It is then revealed Axis and Chujin were accomplices to each other regarding the Integrity SOUL's disappearance, as Clover attacked Axis when *they* found out, hence the broken faceplate. This unknowingly seals their fate, as no one else was present or strong enough to stop Ceroba. Polaris is a solo detective, real name later revealed to be Starlo. He's the best detective in the Meadowed Alleys, stationed primarily in the Eastern Noir. Hm? Haven't heard these places? Well, since he's no longer a sheriff/Wild West fan, and New Home is the only place portrayed in the animatic (remaining exactly the same), the Dunes is the only place that changed. Clover and Starlo are shown duelling in winding alleyways instead of the clearing between the Wild East and the Sunnyside farm, implying certain settings have been changed (I think) so this could also affect worldbuilding. Buckle up, this is gonna be the longest paragraph(s) since he now gets main character privileges. And by that I mean angst. So! In this AU, considering a Noir setting, it's very likely this may have only changed *after* the Snowdin Incident. If it was so world-changing, what if the Lower Underground's security suffered because more Royal Guards were sent up to patrol after the attack, justifying Chujin's obsession with the serum and this setting change all at once. This could have been especially harsh for a quaint town, which I would dare call a legal drought (get it? because "drought"? hahaha) more specifically in the Meadows. This would also explain Mooch's kleptomania if the economy of the town suffered for its now notorious reputation. Instead of distracting people from a drought, Polaris now actively catches criminals and solves cases. This crime rate spike was what first warranted more alleys to be built, as more buildings needed to be made for people to hide in during shootouts. (And also for the Noir film aesthetic but... you know. People can have layered reasons for doing things.) A detective is always shown solo. Even if Sherlock had Watson, four is too many. They needed all hands on deck, so Starlo called upon the aid of his highschool friends, his most trusted confidants, to aid him in helping the town, if not the entire Lower Underground (like in canon, making ampiece of the surface for the entire Underground to not lose hope). However, as time passed, strains grew, and pressure set in. He's an entertainer in canon, not an actual lawman. He could act for years, yes, but this isn't a show. It's possible one day, he snapped under the pressure and got into a fight with his crew. From Dina's dialogue in the Neutral route ("They're like siblings. Mooch steals Ed's hat..." etc.) and the flavor text from Micro-Froggits in the saloon (*The leader is giving a speech about their brotherhood and unity.) It's very likely Star had never been the cause for a breakup before, hence why he feels like forgiveness is out of the question in canon. This also explains the FF's reactions, this being the first time they'd felt truly mistreated by him. This is what culminated in this fight being the worst of them. But with his good acting, it's very likely the townsfolk can't tell you why the disbandment happened unless a member of the FF told them. This is the reason for the distorted appearance of the FF in the animatic. His family would appear similar. Showdown happens because Star is under the impression he's lost everything. It's possible Star's wellbeing may have suffered a bit during the time he was alone, but he still had the favor of the town, however skeptical they were of the FF's now strained relations. This issue is this: it would be short-lived. The minute word got out, he'd be an outcast. He'd have nothing- he already left his family in their time of crisis to help the economy and chase fame. Sure, it helped *them* too, but they had to hate him (spoiler: they don't) and his friends were out of the question. Ceroba would side with them if she'd found out what he'd done. He'd have nowhere to turn to, and he'd already comitted social suicide by making a place that rode the controversy of the Snowdin Incident to gain revenue for the town. No one would take Polaris in, and no one would help a nobody like Starlo. He was contemplating joining the very people the town scorned (the Wild East is heavily anti-government coded in canon, I'm keeping as much as I can) for abandoning them in their time of need - the Royal Guard. To set aside his honor to live another day. That's when he found a human child, running around on the streets, that he took in when he had no one else. This also fuelled a bit more upset between the members of the FF if they were his Watson- how come he took them in and kept them around when he drove them away? This was a barrier that prevented them from reconciling. But to Star, Clover was a reason to keep his dignity. He had them, even if no one else. Now he doesn't. If we're to abide by the energy of Noir films, The Room Where It Happened, *and* canon character development, we're following Star as a man who's lost it all. He goes on a canonical disillusionment arc ("In the end, we're all just bandits" "Monsterkind's Hero is a title soaked in blood", etc) did you think I was going to omit crucial character arcs? If Clover doesn't get to have certain interactions because Ceroba killed them, we may only get Star's Showdown moment in the present. With the frame of Ceroba looming over Star, transitioning into Clover, and both of them being shown when a bullet shatters the screen, I'm convinced she tried shooting Star to get Clover's SOUL to Kanako, since he finds the tapes and confronts her. And without his powerhouse, he may actually get shot, even if not dying. Ceroba is shown holding a *smoking* gun in a frame *after* the screen shatters, and Clover is shown shot through the head even though the bullet hole is proprtionally in the chest of both their reflections. She defintely shot him. This could possibly be what allows the FF to reunite, even if in a bittersweet, very shocking sort of twist of fate. This may also be what fuels Martlet's confrontation with her since she has an ace up her sleeve (the serum). So yeah, if any of these fuelled your inspiration, I'd be honored! Thank you for scrolling this far lol.
Also just saw that description said that you needed some ideas and I have some type of idea. Specifically it's Starlo maybe contemplating absorbing Clover's soul to get enough power to bring Ceroba to justice, I mainly thought this because of the end bit with them both doing fingerguns at "click boom!"
Adding another idea to the pile: Based on a few details, mainly Ceroba’s dress and demeanor compared to the others, and Chujin sitting in a chair while the others bow, what if Chujin and Ceroba run a mafia-type organization? Depending on if Starlo’s in on it or not, it’d be a gut punch.
@@melissaquinn1463 Well they do have a nice estate, Chujin is a boss monster like the Dreemurrs, and also some of them were shown praying to Chujin, so this makes sense! nice one!
@@melissaquinn1463 imagine a au where starlo founds frisk and train her to destroy and eliminate the mafia of the chujing family frisk can try so many time she need (i said she cuz for my head canon, she its a girl, but just a silly girl not a p*rn actress like the fanon shows she) so basically the mafia of ceroba its cooked
THIS WAS SO GOOD LIKE. Seriously. Every single frame of this? So well done and the pacing- the way breaks in dialogue were used- the flow of everything was coherent and worked to the benefit of the animatic. And the scenes where it switched from Starlo surrounded by the four and Ceroba to Clover surrounded by the souls was just so peak!! Like!! The designs- I’ve seen them before of course but seeing them in action in the animatic ough…so wonderful…you’ve outdone yourself as usual, Cassandra! Peak as always!!!
this is absolutely AMAZING WTF!??? the interrogation scenes, the way the depth and inner conflict complexity of ceroba is portrayed so well within just the framings, just... AHHH SO GOOD
*deep breath* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! This was so cool! Ceroba just admitting to the crime and surrounding Starlo The Souls The musical-like ending That was amazing, gonna have to show my dad now
That scene with Ceroba holding the smoking gun and the scene where all the other souls are dancing around Clover… holy [[CUNGADERO]] I haven’t felt chills that intense in a while. I cannot WAIT to see more, this is quality content.
Holy mackerel, this is the coolest thing ever, and you even choreographed some of the parts?!? like? as if it's part of an actual musical? This is insane and I will gladly watch it a fifth time. This whole thing perfectly captures the energy from the song. I feel like I'm watching an actual show on the stage. Also I love how Ceroba was portrayed here. I feel like that whole family would translate well into the noir settings just because of how shady they already are. I could totally see them being a secret crime family of sorts, or even just accidentally getting mixed into crime and then committing to it.
Kind of surprised it took us this long for someone to use Hamilton and Undertale Yellow together. Also THE DESIGNS?! THE STORY?! THE ANIMATION?! This au and animatic are simply delicious. Thank you for the tasty meal
I’m usually a lurker but…. Undertale Yellow?? And Hamilton??? In a Clue-esque style Noir AU???? All put together in an extremely well-done animatic????? That’s it, you’ve earned a like from me, have a good day!
OMG THE FRAMING, THE IMPLICATIONS, THE FOILS OF CHARACTERS AND EVERYTHING?? I DIDNT THINK A JOKE POST COULD'VE MADE THIS MASTERPIECE. thank you for the uty content, it's scrumptious ^^
Okay Starlo looks so good I might be a simp- I was so into this story though, it's such a good AU Every frame of this animatic looked gorgeous ! I especially liked the scene with the humans dancing around Clover
Welp! This song is going to be stuck in my head for the next few weeks! :’D Other than that, this was an amazing animatic omgggg!!! I really can’t wait to see where this AU goes because holy mother of Asgore there was a lot to take it! 😅 THE CHILLS I GOT JUST WATCHING THIS OMGGG! ESPECIALLY THAT SCENE WITH CEROBA AND STARLO IN THE ALLEYWAY! Like DANG Ceroba! Get away from my boy Starlo geez!!! 😰 Also, I’m already sort of getting the whole premise and slight story behind this AU. Especially when Starlo was surrounded by the Feisty Four… Something tells me that they were apart of Starlo’s detective agency before Starlo messed something up, causing them to disband… And those subtle scenes with Martlet, Dalv and Axis… I might have to look into that too… Welp! Gotta get my detective hat on and start theorising! >:) EDIT: Also sorry for the lengthy comment! I would write more (aka writing a whole paragraph/essay of what I think is happening in the animatic) but uhhhh… That would be too much lol! XD
MAN this is good. Absolutely adore this. This Au seems very interesting, and I like how it seems like Ceroba tried to throw off the investigation as she used a flintlock when there was a revolver round at the crime scene. Once again, absolutely incredible.
OHFQKGNKSNF OH MY GOD I'M SCREAMING AND KICKING MY FEET???????? DUDE I'D DO A WHOLE ANALYSIS BUT I DON'T HAVE TIME 💔💔💔 might do one later today tho but HELLO????? THJIS IS SO GOOD????? The sudden burst of color during the human souls bit really caught me off guard LIKE.......... /VPOS I ❤️ DETECTIVE POLARIS OMG
OH GODS THIS IS SO EPIC FELL ON MY ADD, GOT UP AND FELL AGAIN I AM GOING INSANE THIS IS SO WELL DONE, SO BEAUTIFUL, AMAZING HOLD UP, LET ME WATCH IT A FEW MORE HUNDRED TIMES
What I could piece together watching this: So Clover is a detective investigating the dissapearence of the five children. This ends up leading him into a big conspiracy about a military boss monster serum(The thing Chujin was trying to do in the original game, basically). This serum was first being developed by Chujin, and like in the game, Ceroba takes the lead after his death. Ceroba finds out about Clover knowing and shoots him dead, stealing his soul while at it. After that, Starlo investigates his death and picks up where Clover left his investigation. And so he has to uncover the whole conspiracy while Ceroba actively tries to dissuade him from it and his past catches up with him(Are the Feisty Four dead or agaisnt him? I couldn't tell which from the scene). In the genocide route, Clover investigates and straight up kills suspects involved in the conspiracy (like Axis). In this run he isn't killed by Ceroba and at some point in time has a confrontation with Starlo. (That's all I could get from like the three frames that I suspect were the genocide route lmao). Anyways, this animatic is so lit. You turned the yeehaw game yeehawless, filled it with that sher lock and it worked perfectly. Would love to see more set in this AU, if you ever do more
i feel like i've contributed at least 33% of this video's views. i. LOVE IT. i am in love with it. i especially love the part where the other kids are circling clover while they run and ughh it's just perfect. please keep cooking
This was... very interesting. I could see this becoming a rather intriguing story. Starlo trying to figure out what happened, and then maybe try to get back at Ceroba for killing Clover, or otherwise bring her good side back out so she doesn't continue to be a deranged murderer or something. However, personally I think it'd be pretty sweet if being murdered in cold blood triggered Clover's SOUL of Justice so hard that either she couldn't use it because it refused to cooperate with her, or else it manages to kill her itself as justice for killing him and preventing him from finishing his mission with regards to the other five humans. Ceroba thinking she had everything she needed only to end up being constantly made to doubt from Starlo's attempts to reason with her while simultaneously not being able to accomplish anything from the stubborn resistance of Clover's SOUL, with it in the end somehow accomplishing his goal anyway out of determination for justice would be both ironic and amazing.
I can't stop watching this omg. Seriously this probably is the best uty animatic I've seen. And I've literally scoured all of youtube and tumblr. Amazing job! I am going to now make this my entire personality for five months.
This animation is a gem, seriously. How did I find this only a month after it was posted? Everything in this video is perfect, especially the animation, I simply loved it. ❤
hOLY PEAK CASS THIS IS SO GOOD??? your human designs are so good AAAAAAA also oh my gof axis's little head movement at 0:56 is adorable AUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I just want you to know that this animatic made me remember how much of a bop this song is and I loved how this looked so much that it made me think how this would look on a stage, and then literally the day after I got to see the actual musical. Detective Polaris got some crazy foreshadowing/jj
I keep being amazed at how much UTY just relit the entire UT/DR fandom with a true VENGEANCE. The amount of top tier content I keep seeing come out of this game's fans is outstanding. Anyways, back to writing UTY fanfiction I go.
Never thought I would've been hooked onto an UTY Noir concept, but this animatic definitely roped me in! I really loved how the further the animatic continued, the more it felt like a musical performance on stage. There's a lot more I would like to say but all I can really muster is that this is awesome! Great work!
BRO WHY DIDNT I SEE THIS BEFORE WTF i love this hamilton and ceroba my fave my yummers my AUGHHH!!! i love you dude or gal or whatever this is what i needed in my life (ceroba my beloved
OHHH THIS LOOKS AMAZING need to know more abt this au fr i love the character designs oooh every shot of this looks so appealing (also help clover peter death pose i giggles) I have no words this is absolutely stellar i love your art so much!!😭🙏
Ohh my god. CHILLLS!! I AM GEEKING OUT SO HARD!!! You have such incredible talent. Never stop!! Not only is your AU really interesting but your art and sense of rhythm and shot composition is just. gorgeous wow 💛!!!!
THIS IS THE SICKEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN? OOooooh the details, the shading, the designs, the fluidity of it all! THE VISUAL STORYTELLING! It's so badass!!!
this is absolutely insane i cannot fathom the work that got put into this because holy??!?!?!??!?!?! the lighting, the values, the compositions, the designs, the pacing, when and where u used color, everything about this is so masterfully crafted and amazing?????? just wow. breathtaking!
2 minutes left I’m excited Wow yet another masterpiece from cass I love the inclusion of the other humans I have no idea where to find this au but this will suffice for now Edit: there were a lot of moments that I wanted close ups of so I watched the video with the speed slowed down and BOY WAS THERE A TON OF STUFF I MISSED I dont want to spoil anything (and I’m also to lazy to list it all here 😅😅) so I recommend if you’ve already watched the animatic to watch it with the speed slowed it reveals a ton of stuff that I missed and I’ve been watching this thing non stop
i imagine that theres another possible ending where starlo discovers what ceroba is up to before she tries to take Clover's soul and in the near end of story Starlo and Clover pointing at Ceroba being the culprit like in the end of the animatic and beating her ace attorney style
This has lowkey made me download the game (I have NEVER played Undertale before). I'm writing this as it's downloading. I LOVE noir stories so this has me HOOKED. DAMN.
This was like a full meal with dessert! AND I WANT MORE! This was such incredibly video Cassandraa! Are you going to have like a wrap up doc for the AU? This completely slaps!
cant believe yhis posted at the funny number sub amirite chat. thanks for the 69 people who followed and watch my videos
The Peter dead pose of clover xD
you may have a bit more now LMAO, Lovely work and I can't wait to see more
Flowey: What? Reset? Nonono, i want to see next episode
This is like error sans watching undernovela
@aletheaxl Exactly what I was thinking after I heard you say it
@@aletheaxl error Flowey: want to watch this it’s really good. Can’t wait for the next episode though.
error Chara: I can see the appeal what do you think star is going to do with the next episode?
error Flowey: also got to think about how much everybody else knew individually I think Dalv is hiding something 0:51 i’m pretty sure he may have suspected himself
error Chara: I wonder Ceroba chose now to act chose now she arguably could’ve done any time where other people weren’t watching or framed as an accident so why now and in this way
error Flowey: good question
There is also the matter of axis to consider he’s programmed to eliminate humans and he’s done it before. Why wouldn’t he do it again?
error Chara: i’ll admit if I didn’t know Ceroba origin story I would have probably designated him as primary suspect especially since his human exterminations are as a designated secret that only Ceroba and Chujin who is now past were aware of
Error gaster: you wouldn’t mind if I join the conversation would you I was told by somebody this show was good
@@johay899 who the hell are error chara, flowey and gaster?
@@miniwhiffy3465
I think they’re versions of the characters that wound up in the anti-void somehow and their code scrambled, since that’s how the anti-void works apparently?
THE PETER DEATH POSE😭
my favorite part 😭😭
IT CAUGHT ME SO OFF GUARD
YEAH- I'M SORRY CLOVER BUT I LAUGHED 😭😭
I feel like by watching this I both learned nothing and everything about this AU at the same time
So it got your intrest, and gave no spoilers. Now that's genius
@@aethous9163 that's one way to think about it, wow
What i’m confused about is how clover and starlo were dancing with eachother at the end considering clover is dead
I mean they asked for ideas so many Starlo absorbed his soul
*maybe
I think Clover and Starlo being detectives really emphasizes the justice theme
Clover: "What is the worse who could happened?"
Also Clover : *Peter death pose*
no sight of the dreemurr family and yet the video remains the GOAT 🔥🔥🔥🔥
@@Diamond-kk9lj i mean we got asgore
@@cassandraa you mean we GOAT Asgore
I got ideas: Here are some random ideas I got from the frames, if we don't need to make things canon-compliant with fights and the like.
Dalv was a prime suspect for the disappearance of the Integrity SOUL for the possibility of killing in self-defense, hence why he's surrounded by missing posters, looking visibly distressed. This is what made him a suspect for this case involving Clover's death, even if he was never declared guilty for the previous assumption. With how his character is portrayed in canon before you get to know him, this would add to the mystery factor and make it feel more worthwhile when Star proves his innocence, possibly proving his innocence regarding the end of the Snowdin Incident as well, giving him closure and opening up the option of making friends again. With his source inspiration being Vlad the Impaler, he may take a more defensive/protector position after receiving closure to protect others from the harm he was caused (a positive subversion).
Martlet could have been a witness due to her scatterbrained nature, either physically being somewhere she wasn't meant to be, or being late to a shift that overlapped with a time that *could've* given her info if not for the fact she wasn't there. If we want to play up her Royal Guard sentry post duties, maybe she was meant to be patrolling the streets at the time. Her innocence is proven through another member of the Guard tesifying she was seen elsewhere in a hurry to get to her shift/a superior tesifying to telling her off for not being where she was supposed to be. She eventually quits, saying that her job just isn't what she's good at, especially with how it incriminated her here, becoming a woodworker post-case. With the frame of her looking at the syringe, she may get in/plan a physical confrontation with Ceroba, final boss against final boss, under the impression she's dangerous. After all, though Ceroba senses EXP in-game (pure soul talk) Martlet can sense LV ("You seemed dangerous...").
Ceroba is someone who was called in under terms of being a witness, later dubbed a suspect, which causes her confession to Starlo. At first, she seems like someone with valuable insight, especially with the fact she is Starlo's (the protagonist in this AU) childhood friend. This gives her credibility at first, since you're seeing things through his lens. First impressions of her are that she is a widowed mother grieving her child, and all the more tragically has bore witness to yet another death of a child she knew, Clover. However, as investigations escalate and search warrants are issued on both witnesses and suspects alike, with Starlo getting desperate to find Clover's killer, he finds something he isn't supposed to. Him *alone,* this time. ("You got more than you gave.") This leads into the bar conversation, into the alley one, and... you know the rest.
Axis is a decommisioned security bot, hence the reason why he's a witness. If the Steamworks still leads to New Home, this may be where Axis is involved, taken in to see what Clover's status was when they passed through. Were they already being pursued? Did they pass through the Steamworks at all, or through another part of the Underground? This would provide insight into where the paper trail left behind by the killer would be, as long as they could trace the path to the scene of the crime. After all, Starlo is pinning up photos that imply he knows Clover was being chased. It is then revealed Axis and Chujin were accomplices to each other regarding the Integrity SOUL's disappearance, as Clover attacked Axis when *they* found out, hence the broken faceplate. This unknowingly seals their fate, as no one else was present or strong enough to stop Ceroba.
Polaris is a solo detective, real name later revealed to be Starlo. He's the best detective in the Meadowed Alleys, stationed primarily in the Eastern Noir. Hm? Haven't heard these places? Well, since he's no longer a sheriff/Wild West fan, and New Home is the only place portrayed in the animatic (remaining exactly the same), the Dunes is the only place that changed. Clover and Starlo are shown duelling in winding alleyways instead of the clearing between the Wild East and the Sunnyside farm, implying certain settings have been changed (I think) so this could also affect worldbuilding. Buckle up, this is gonna be the longest paragraph(s) since he now gets main character privileges. And by that I mean angst.
So! In this AU, considering a Noir setting, it's very likely this may have only changed *after* the Snowdin Incident. If it was so world-changing, what if the Lower Underground's security suffered because more Royal Guards were sent up to patrol after the attack, justifying Chujin's obsession with the serum and this setting change all at once. This could have been especially harsh for a quaint town, which I would dare call a legal drought (get it? because "drought"? hahaha) more specifically in the Meadows. This would also explain Mooch's kleptomania if the economy of the town suffered for its now notorious reputation. Instead of distracting people from a drought, Polaris now actively catches criminals and solves cases. This crime rate spike was what first warranted more alleys to be built, as more buildings needed to be made for people to hide in during shootouts. (And also for the Noir film aesthetic but... you know. People can have layered reasons for doing things.)
A detective is always shown solo. Even if Sherlock had Watson, four is too many. They needed all hands on deck, so Starlo called upon the aid of his highschool friends, his most trusted confidants, to aid him in helping the town, if not the entire Lower Underground (like in canon, making ampiece of the surface for the entire Underground to not lose hope). However, as time passed, strains grew, and pressure set in. He's an entertainer in canon, not an actual lawman. He could act for years, yes, but this isn't a show. It's possible one day, he snapped under the pressure and got into a fight with his crew. From Dina's dialogue in the Neutral route ("They're like siblings. Mooch steals Ed's hat..." etc.) and the flavor text from Micro-Froggits in the saloon (*The leader is giving a speech about their brotherhood and unity.) It's very likely Star had never been the cause for a breakup before, hence why he feels like forgiveness is out of the question in canon. This also explains the FF's reactions, this being the first time they'd felt truly mistreated by him. This is what culminated in this fight being the worst of them. But with his good acting, it's very likely the townsfolk can't tell you why the disbandment happened unless a member of the FF told them. This is the reason for the distorted appearance of the FF in the animatic. His family would appear similar.
Showdown happens because Star is under the impression he's lost everything. It's possible Star's wellbeing may have suffered a bit during the time he was alone, but he still had the favor of the town, however skeptical they were of the FF's now strained relations. This issue is this: it would be short-lived. The minute word got out, he'd be an outcast. He'd have nothing- he already left his family in their time of crisis to help the economy and chase fame. Sure, it helped *them* too, but they had to hate him (spoiler: they don't) and his friends were out of the question. Ceroba would side with them if she'd found out what he'd done. He'd have nowhere to turn to, and he'd already comitted social suicide by making a place that rode the controversy of the Snowdin Incident to gain revenue for the town. No one would take Polaris in, and no one would help a nobody like Starlo. He was contemplating joining the very people the town scorned (the Wild East is heavily anti-government coded in canon, I'm keeping as much as I can) for abandoning them in their time of need - the Royal Guard. To set aside his honor to live another day.
That's when he found a human child, running around on the streets, that he took in when he had no one else. This also fuelled a bit more upset between the members of the FF if they were his Watson- how come he took them in and kept them around when he drove them away? This was a barrier that prevented them from reconciling. But to Star, Clover was a reason to keep his dignity. He had them, even if no one else.
Now he doesn't.
If we're to abide by the energy of Noir films, The Room Where It Happened, *and* canon character development, we're following Star as a man who's lost it all. He goes on a canonical disillusionment arc ("In the end, we're all just bandits" "Monsterkind's Hero is a title soaked in blood", etc) did you think I was going to omit crucial character arcs? If Clover doesn't get to have certain interactions because Ceroba killed them, we may only get Star's Showdown moment in the present. With the frame of Ceroba looming over Star, transitioning into Clover, and both of them being shown when a bullet shatters the screen, I'm convinced she tried shooting Star to get Clover's SOUL to Kanako, since he finds the tapes and confronts her. And without his powerhouse, he may actually get shot, even if not dying. Ceroba is shown holding a *smoking* gun in a frame *after* the screen shatters, and Clover is shown shot through the head even though the bullet hole is proprtionally in the chest of both their reflections. She defintely shot him. This could possibly be what allows the FF to reunite, even if in a bittersweet, very shocking sort of twist of fate. This may also be what fuels Martlet's confrontation with her since she has an ace up her sleeve (the serum).
So yeah, if any of these fuelled your inspiration, I'd be honored! Thank you for scrolling this far lol.
I did not expect to be seeing a noir-style detective animatic with UTY of all things today, but I'm living for it
HELP, THIS AU. ITS SO GOOD. STARLO BEING THE ONE TRYNG TO FIGURE OUT
CLOVER’S DEATH FITS SO GOOD.
💛💛💛💛
Also just saw that description said that you needed some ideas and I have some type of idea.
Specifically it's Starlo maybe contemplating absorbing Clover's soul to get enough power to bring Ceroba to justice, I mainly thought this because of the end bit with them both doing fingerguns at "click boom!"
Adding another idea to the pile:
Based on a few details, mainly Ceroba’s dress and demeanor compared to the others, and Chujin sitting in a chair while the others bow, what if Chujin and Ceroba run a mafia-type organization?
Depending on if Starlo’s in on it or not, it’d be a gut punch.
@@melissaquinn1463 Well they do have a nice estate, Chujin is a boss monster like the Dreemurrs, and also some of them were shown praying to Chujin, so this makes sense! nice one!
@@melissaquinn1463 imagine a au where starlo founds frisk
and train her to destroy and eliminate the mafia of the chujing family
frisk can try so many time she need (i said she cuz for my head canon, she its a girl, but just a silly girl not a p*rn actress like the fanon shows she) so basically the mafia of ceroba its cooked
THIS WAS SO GOOD LIKE. Seriously. Every single frame of this? So well done and the pacing- the way breaks in dialogue were used- the flow of everything was coherent and worked to the benefit of the animatic. And the scenes where it switched from Starlo surrounded by the four and Ceroba to Clover surrounded by the souls was just so peak!! Like!! The designs- I’ve seen them before of course but seeing them in action in the animatic ough…so wonderful…you’ve outdone yourself as usual, Cassandra! Peak as always!!!
Epic
this is absolutely AMAZING WTF!??? the interrogation scenes, the way the depth and inner conflict complexity of ceroba is portrayed so well within just the framings, just... AHHH SO GOOD
*deep breath*
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
This was so cool!
Ceroba just admitting to the crime and surrounding Starlo
The Souls
The musical-like ending
That was amazing, gonna have to show my dad now
That scene with Ceroba holding the smoking gun and the scene where all the other souls are dancing around Clover… holy [[CUNGADERO]] I haven’t felt chills that intense in a while. I cannot WAIT to see more, this is quality content.
I don't know what I just watched, but all I know is I wasn't happy before I watched this, and now I am. Very much so.
Who thought a joke of a post would bring us such masterpiece
Holy mackerel, this is the coolest thing ever, and you even choreographed some of the parts?!? like? as if it's part of an actual musical? This is insane and I will gladly watch it a fifth time. This whole thing perfectly captures the energy from the song. I feel like I'm watching an actual show on the stage.
Also I love how Ceroba was portrayed here. I feel like that whole family would translate well into the noir settings just because of how shady they already are. I could totally see them being a secret crime family of sorts, or even just accidentally getting mixed into crime and then committing to it.
Kind of surprised it took us this long for someone to use Hamilton and Undertale Yellow together.
Also THE DESIGNS?! THE STORY?! THE ANIMATION?! This au and animatic are simply delicious. Thank you for the tasty meal
@@Lady_ETHNE yeah i was thinking about satisfied for starlo lmao
@@cassandraa oh my gosh that’d be perfect
@Lady_ETHNE I was thinking "The World Was Wide Enough" from HAMILTONm.ua-cam.com/video/xcqQy4eOZvQ/v-deo.html
@@cassandraa DO ITTT
IM EXCITED
I’m usually a lurker but…. Undertale Yellow?? And Hamilton??? In a Clue-esque style Noir AU???? All put together in an extremely well-done animatic?????
That’s it, you’ve earned a like from me, have a good day!
Noir au of undertale looks so unique but intresting. Cudos to you very good looking animation
I have watched this 12 consecutive times. PLEASE never stop I love I love I love
I think no one realized the QR Code that appeared at 0:42 and I want to point it out before seeing what it has in it.
OMG THE FRAMING, THE IMPLICATIONS, THE FOILS OF CHARACTERS AND EVERYTHING?? I DIDNT THINK A JOKE POST COULD'VE MADE THIS MASTERPIECE. thank you for the uty content, it's scrumptious ^^
I heard this song for the first time a week ago and fell into the Hamilton rabbit hole and this comes out. It cannot be chance.
OH MY GOD
IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL, AHHHHH
SHERIFF STARLO IN THE FORM OF A DETECTIVE IS SO HOT, MY GOD AHHH❤❤❤❤
REAL THO HE'S SO,.,..,,.,. 🤑🤑🤑
Okay Starlo looks so good I might be a simp-
I was so into this story though, it's such a good AU
Every frame of this animatic looked gorgeous !
I especially liked the scene with the humans dancing around Clover
Welp! This song is going to be stuck in my head for the next few weeks! :’D
Other than that, this was an amazing animatic omgggg!!! I really can’t wait to see where this AU goes because holy mother of Asgore there was a lot to take it! 😅 THE CHILLS I GOT JUST WATCHING THIS OMGGG! ESPECIALLY THAT SCENE WITH CEROBA AND STARLO IN THE ALLEYWAY! Like DANG Ceroba! Get away from my boy Starlo geez!!! 😰
Also, I’m already sort of getting the whole premise and slight story behind this AU. Especially when Starlo was surrounded by the Feisty Four… Something tells me that they were apart of Starlo’s detective agency before Starlo messed something up, causing them to disband… And those subtle scenes with Martlet, Dalv and Axis… I might have to look into that too…
Welp! Gotta get my detective hat on and start theorising! >:)
EDIT: Also sorry for the lengthy comment! I would write more (aka writing a whole paragraph/essay of what I think is happening in the animatic) but uhhhh… That would be too much lol! XD
EATING FEASTING I LOVE THE WHOLE TRIAL AND JUDGMENT WHOA RHIS IS UNDERTALE YELLOW WHOOAAOAOAA
Literally in love with this. Beautiful. Amazing. Cassandraa never disappoints
MAN this is good. Absolutely adore this. This Au seems very interesting, and I like how it seems like Ceroba tried to throw off the investigation as she used a flintlock when there was a revolver round at the crime scene. Once again, absolutely incredible.
This could not have been better!!! Its like, seriously, a true peace of serious art!! Also, I ADORE how you draw Axis. He has a BOWTIE🧎♀️➡️🧎♀️➡️
I LOVE THE FACT THAT STARLO AND CLOVER JUST CLICK-BOOM TOGETHER AT THE END ITS SO TOUCHING💛🌟
These animatics from Undertale Yellow are absolutely amazing! ❤😭
The Starlo design in this AU IS SO BEAUTIFUL AAHHHH
GOD IM SO HAPPY TO SEE YOUR IMPROVEMENT OVER THE YEARS CASSYYYYY IM SO PROUD OF YOUUUU YOURE SOOOO COOLLLL
@@suniidazeee sunii :3
@@cassandraa Cassy :3
OHFQKGNKSNF OH MY GOD I'M SCREAMING AND KICKING MY FEET????????
DUDE I'D DO A WHOLE ANALYSIS BUT I DON'T HAVE TIME 💔💔💔
might do one later today tho but HELLO????? THJIS IS SO GOOD?????
The sudden burst of color during the human souls bit really caught me off guard LIKE.......... /VPOS
I ❤️ DETECTIVE POLARIS OMG
OH GODS THIS IS SO EPIC
FELL ON MY ADD, GOT UP AND FELL AGAIN
I AM GOING INSANE
THIS IS SO WELL DONE, SO BEAUTIFUL, AMAZING
HOLD UP, LET ME WATCH IT A FEW MORE HUNDRED TIMES
MMMAAAANNN!!! THIS IS PEAAAKKKK!!!! I LOVED HOW IT ENDED YIPEEEE
HOLLY STARS⭐! This Detective Starlo. UGH !!! I have no words to describe it !!! 🥰
seriously, there was no need for this to be so epic, BUT IT IS
Yo this is absolutely amazing, I love it so much :)
What I could piece together watching this:
So Clover is a detective investigating the dissapearence of the five children. This ends up leading him into a big conspiracy about a military boss monster serum(The thing Chujin was trying to do in the original game, basically). This serum was first being developed by Chujin, and like in the game, Ceroba takes the lead after his death. Ceroba finds out about Clover knowing and shoots him dead, stealing his soul while at it. After that, Starlo investigates his death and picks up where Clover left his investigation. And so he has to uncover the whole conspiracy while Ceroba actively tries to dissuade him from it and his past catches up with him(Are the Feisty Four dead or agaisnt him? I couldn't tell which from the scene).
In the genocide route, Clover investigates and straight up kills suspects involved in the conspiracy (like Axis). In this run he isn't killed by Ceroba and at some point in time has a confrontation with Starlo. (That's all I could get from like the three frames that I suspect were the genocide route lmao).
Anyways, this animatic is so lit. You turned the yeehaw game yeehawless, filled it with that sher lock and it worked perfectly. Would love to see more set in this AU, if you ever do more
Can't get enough of this animation. The pacing, the composition, the ideas for the AU, everything ties together beautifuly with the song. Bravo
I have no idea what happened but it was fire 🔥
mafiatale yellow sounds crazy ngl :0
i feel like i've contributed at least 33% of this video's views. i. LOVE IT. i am in love with it. i especially love the part where the other kids are circling clover while they run and ughh it's just perfect. please keep cooking
This was... very interesting. I could see this becoming a rather intriguing story. Starlo trying to figure out what happened, and then maybe try to get back at Ceroba for killing Clover, or otherwise bring her good side back out so she doesn't continue to be a deranged murderer or something. However, personally I think it'd be pretty sweet if being murdered in cold blood triggered Clover's SOUL of Justice so hard that either she couldn't use it because it refused to cooperate with her, or else it manages to kill her itself as justice for killing him and preventing him from finishing his mission with regards to the other five humans.
Ceroba thinking she had everything she needed only to end up being constantly made to doubt from Starlo's attempts to reason with her while simultaneously not being able to accomplish anything from the stubborn resistance of Clover's SOUL, with it in the end somehow accomplishing his goal anyway out of determination for justice would be both ironic and amazing.
This was absolutely FIRE! I am so glad that I managed to catch the premiere, I had a lot of fun!
I can't stop watching this omg. Seriously this probably is the best uty animatic I've seen. And I've literally scoured all of youtube and tumblr. Amazing job! I am going to now make this my entire personality for five months.
OMG! THAT PREVIEW LOOKS SO COOL! I AM SO EXCITED!!!
Just watched it and HOLY GOD, THIS IS AMAZING!!! I AM SUPER HYPED! YOU'VE DONE A GREAT JOB!!!
This deserves so much recognition!! The art and everything is top notch!!! Teach me your ways 🤧
This animation is a gem, seriously. How did I find this only a month after it was posted? Everything in this video is perfect, especially the animation, I simply loved it. ❤
OH MY GOD THIS IS MAGNIFICENT???
hOLY PEAK CASS THIS IS SO GOOD??? your human designs are so good AAAAAAA
also oh my gof axis's little head movement at 0:56 is adorable AUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
NAURRRR HELP NOT THE FAMILY GUY DEATH POSE HOW COULD THEY DO THIS TO THEM/lh
I just want you to know that this animatic made me remember how much of a bop this song is and I loved how this looked so much that it made me think how this would look on a stage, and then literally the day after I got to see the actual musical. Detective Polaris got some crazy foreshadowing/jj
THIS IS FANTASTIC I LOVE THE TRANSITIONS ITS SO CLEAN
can't wait to see where you take this AU, if I weren't already subscribed I'd do it again in a heartbeat haha
I keep being amazed at how much UTY just relit the entire UT/DR fandom with a true VENGEANCE. The amount of top tier content I keep seeing come out of this game's fans is outstanding. Anyways, back to writing UTY fanfiction I go.
Never thought I would've been hooked onto an UTY Noir concept, but this animatic definitely roped me in!
I really loved how the further the animatic continued, the more it felt like a musical performance on stage.
There's a lot more I would like to say but all I can really muster is that this is awesome! Great work!
Holy moly, this is so freakin' beautiful!
I keep coming back to rewatch this, and it always remains as fun and dynamic and epic as ever!!!
The cinematography is so cool and it's a fan au for a fan game I love this fandom
BRO WHY DIDNT I SEE THIS BEFORE WTF i love this hamilton and ceroba my fave my yummers my AUGHHH!!! i love you dude or gal or whatever this is what i needed in my life (ceroba my beloved
OKAY HEAR ME OUT GUYS 😭 THIS IS JUST AMAZING
OHHH THIS LOOKS AMAZING need to know more abt this au fr i love the character designs oooh every shot of this looks so appealing (also help clover peter death pose i giggles)
I have no words this is absolutely stellar i love your art so much!!😭🙏
Ohh my god. CHILLLS!! I AM GEEKING OUT SO HARD!!! You have such incredible talent. Never stop!! Not only is your AU really interesting but your art and sense of rhythm and shot composition is just. gorgeous wow 💛!!!!
CASSANDRAAAA I LOVE YOUR ANIMATIONS!! RAAAHHHHHHHH 🗣💥🗣💥
AGH.. MY HEART, NOOO!! This is so well done though!! favorite part was with all the souls and there cool ol moves
THIS IS THE SICKEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN? OOooooh the details, the shading, the designs, the fluidity of it all! THE VISUAL STORYTELLING! It's so badass!!!
This song matches perfectly with the animation. And the song is just a banger.
this is absolutely insane i cannot fathom the work that got put into this because holy??!?!?!??!?!?! the lighting, the values, the compositions, the designs, the pacing, when and where u used color, everything about this is so masterfully crafted and amazing??????
just wow. breathtaking!
I LOVE THIS! ❤ its the perfect combination , you did an amazing artwork!
Grahhh this is so cool! Wonderful animatic!
:bro how many times have you watched this???
me :I WANNA BE IN THE ROOM WHERE IT HAPPENED
(THIS IS GREAT OMG AOSJFEIR)
The animation, the style EVERYTHING ISBDO PERFECT!!I LOVE IT;
Woke up and made my day
(Yo you misspelled animatic btw) :D
2 minutes left I’m excited
Wow yet another masterpiece from cass I love the inclusion of the other humans I have no idea where to find this au but this will suffice for now
Edit: there were a lot of moments that I wanted close ups of so I watched the video with the speed slowed down and BOY WAS THERE A TON OF STUFF I MISSED I dont want to spoil anything (and I’m also to lazy to list it all here 😅😅) so I recommend if you’ve already watched the animatic to watch it with the speed slowed it reveals a ton of stuff that I missed and I’ve been watching this thing non stop
@@bethanyandcloe3589 oh i just made it on the spot lmao
if this gets enough recognition i might expand on this
i imagine that theres another possible ending where starlo discovers what ceroba is up to before she tries to take Clover's soul
and in the near end of story Starlo and Clover pointing at Ceroba being the culprit like in the end of the animatic and beating her ace attorney style
I’m usually not big on AUs for any media, but GOD is this animatic so good!!!!
I’ve watched this well over 10 times now it’s it slaps every time ❤
WOW I BLOODY LOVE THIS WTF?????
I AM SO CURIOUS ABT THIS AU (PS: I LOVE UR ART SMMM)
WHY IS THIS SO GOOD AAAA
Hamilton and UTY 🗣️🔥
This has lowkey made me download the game (I have NEVER played Undertale before). I'm writing this as it's downloading. I LOVE noir stories so this has me HOOKED. DAMN.
OH MY GODDD THIS IS SO AMASZIMG I LOVE THIS SMSMSMSMSMSMMSMSMSM
this is so amazing. so delicious taking smthn silly and making it pretty cool
This was like a full meal with dessert! AND I WANT MORE!
This was such incredibly video Cassandraa!
Are you going to have like a wrap up doc for the AU? This completely slaps!
Starlo is so ho- WHO SAID THAT??
I don't know what is it, but there is something that makes me want to watch it again and again
Oh, man! This au looks awesome!
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH ITS AMAZING I WAS WAITING FOR IT TO DROP BUT I WAS IN CLASS 😭
THIS IS SO GOOD!
WAIT OK IM ACTUALLY OBESSSED
HOPLY CRAP THIS GOES HARD
WHAT THE FUCK?? This animatic gave me goosebumps IT'S INCREDIBLE HOLY CRAP. 💛💛💛💛
SO COOL!! SO AMAZING!!
*blushes* im gonna eat this NOW 🤤
NO IDEA WHAT JUST HAPPENED BUT DANG WAS IT COOL