IGCSE First Language English - NEWSPAPER REPORTS VS FORMAL REPORTS (EXTENDED WRITING Q3)

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  • @cakeshoe
    @cakeshoe Рік тому +77

    Here’s my penny’s-worth of News Reports.
    Features of Newspaper Reports
    1. Headline - e.g. a straight headline, a pun, a quotation / misquotation, question, alliteration, feature (see notes, below).
    2. Date (written out, e.g. Monday, 1st April, 2023).
    3. By-line (is NOT usually used for reports, they’re usually used with newspaper articles).
    4. Subheadings (especially if there is a sudden change of focus).
    5. Orientation paragraph (The 1st paragraph, containing the Who, What, Where, When, (Why, How) & usually only one or two sentences -- a summary of the main story.
    6. Direct speech quotes (eye witness / experts).
    7. Indirect speech (paraphrased for concision).
    8. Reorientation paragraph (usually the final paragraph & usually in present or future tenses, dealing with what will/may happen next due to the events of the news report).
    9. Related stories (sometimes an extra paragraph is added, dealing with similar/related stories that have happened, e.g. ‘While accidents like this are rare, a grade seven student was left with life-changing injuries in June this year, after a science experiment accident left her blinded in one eye, in Chepstow, Monmouthshire’).
    10. Extremely short paragraphs - Try to keep to one main idea/focus per paragraph.
    11. Photos (Captions for photos - obviously NOT required in FLE exams).
    12. Mostly past tenses (Past tenses throughout, except for the reorientation paragraph).
    13. Passive voice! (not: ‘The police arrested John Smith’ but ‘John Smith was arrested last night’).
    14. 3rd person.
    15. Impersonal and do not try to engage the audience! (no writer’s opinion - the ONLY opinion can be given by eye witnesses / expert’s quotations).
    16. Give facts, facts, facts.
    17. Succinct, direct style.
    18. Factual adjectives / descriptions (e.g. The usually quiet hamlet of Shirenewton was the scene of ...).
    19. (sometimes sensationalist vocabulary, e.g. ‘Residents fled from bush fires’. ‘Fled’ rather than ‘were evacuated’).
    20. Uses abbreviations (e.g. NOT ‘Ariana Grande will get married to Dalton Gomez’, but ‘Ariana Grande to wed Dalton Gomez’.
    21. Uses punctuation for concision (e.g. NOT ‘John Smith aged 34 who works in a secondary school…,’ but ‘John Smith, a teacher, 34,…).
    Notes on Headlines:
    Headlines are usually written in the Present tense.
    e.g. JOBLESS NUMBER FALLS - This indicates that the number of unemployed people has recently fallen.
    BUT, for future events, an infinitive is used.
    e.g. JOBLESS NUMBER TO FALL - This indicates that the number of unemployed people is predicted to fall.
    Also, the passive voice is expressed by the Past Participle ONLY.
    e.g. BUS DRIVER ARRESTED - This indicated that a bus driver has been arrested.
    Straight Headline - DOG BITES MAN - (we can clearly understand what the news report will be about).
    Quotation - TRUMP: “I’LL BE PRESIDENT AGAIN” - (often the speaker, followed by a colon, then the quote).
    Misquotation - ‘TO BEAN OR NOT TO BEAN?’ - (a recognisable famous quotation, but changed like a pun).
    Question - PRICES FALL? - (Written as a statement + question mark).
    Pun - FLU YORK CITY - (A simple pun - but do NOT use puns or light-hearted sounding headlines with serious or tragic new reports).
    Alliteration - POLICE PROACTIVELY PROTECTING PINs.
    Assonance - PETE EATS SWEET TREATS.
    Feature - OWLS ARE MUSHROOMS - (A feature headline is where the headline makes no sense until you read the new report. This was a real headline about sightings of rare snowy owls, which later turned out to be nothing more than overturned mushrooms).
    Best of luck, guys -- You got this!
    Oh, and just in case anyone is stressing out, just remember that the Grade Thresholds for some of the 2022 papers were really low: this means that in some of last year's papers, candidates only needed to get about sixty-something percent in order to reach an 'A' grade!

    • @IGCSESUCCESS
      @IGCSESUCCESS  Рік тому +8

      Thank youuuu!!

    • @FarhanAli-vy5xi
      @FarhanAli-vy5xi Рік тому +1

      Thank you so much for this! Especially the last note gave me a whole lot of hope and motivation for tomorrow's exam.

    • @willbrand6543
      @willbrand6543 Рік тому +1

      Im probably too late but do we have to include a date in the newspaper report?

    • @sabertooth6425
      @sabertooth6425 Рік тому

      ​@@willbrand6543not mandatory

    • @Gerryyyyyyyyyy
      @Gerryyyyyyyyyy Рік тому

      Thank you🫶🏾

  • @nemhoichinkuki9560
    @nemhoichinkuki9560 Рік тому +25

    Hello, I am an IGCSE external student and I just want to say, your videos are a lifesaver. I had been struggling to find video resources that break down the English topics but your channel has helped me prepare to the best I can. If it hadn't been for you, I'd be tearing my hair out right now. Your videos have helped me stay on track and prepare to the best of my ability without a tutor. Thank you so much for your help😊
    That said could you do a video giving a rundown of paper 2? I'm sure it would benefit a lot of us

    • @IGCSESUCCESS
      @IGCSESUCCESS  Рік тому +6

      Thanks for the support and best of luck!

  • @farbeyondcricket2.014
    @farbeyondcricket2.014 Рік тому +9

    Sir i have recently shifted to igcse and you have truly been a blessing. literally,I have learnt each and everything from A to z by watching you.

    • @IGCSESUCCESS
      @IGCSESUCCESS  Рік тому +6

      Wooooohooooo! 😉😘 Thanks for the support

  • @MphileShongwe-n7n
    @MphileShongwe-n7n Рік тому +1

    i’ve started writing my finals. this is much needed

  • @spidey1020
    @spidey1020 Рік тому +36

    The starting exam scene is my nightmare

    • @IGCSESUCCESS
      @IGCSESUCCESS  Рік тому +3

      😂😂😂

    • @ayaanmeezan8749
      @ayaanmeezan8749 Рік тому

      What kind of questions come under directed writing?

    • @naishakapoor-ez8cf
      @naishakapoor-ez8cf 6 місяців тому

      @@ayaanmeezan8749 for paper 2, letter, article and speech and for paper 1, newspaper report, formal report, speech, letter, journal, interview and article

    • @ayaanmeezan8749
      @ayaanmeezan8749 6 місяців тому

      @@naishakapoor-ez8cf thanks bro but a bit late I’m sitting A levels now😅😂

  • @aeqnta9861
    @aeqnta9861 2 місяці тому

    Dude you have genuinely saved my exams in English thank you soooooo much

  • @musakh_
    @musakh_ Рік тому +5

    I loved the skit, it would literally be me if it had come.

  • @abubakarehsan8939
    @abubakarehsan8939 Рік тому +6

    Man just gave me a heart attack at the start in just mere seconds

  • @charlotteshaw-gl7sb
    @charlotteshaw-gl7sb Рік тому +6

    Hey there, thank you for the tips. I am sitting the exam on Wednesday, I want to ask how to develop the points for formal reports?

  • @Ama-mh2ee
    @Ama-mh2ee 4 місяці тому

    Please keep posting more updated content. We want to see more of your quality work 🎉

    • @IGCSESUCCESS
      @IGCSESUCCESS  4 місяці тому +1

      Summer break for me ! Back to it soon 💪

  • @wajih228
    @wajih228 Рік тому +1

    i have my igcse in 2hrs. Will definitely be using this is if it comes up

  • @richav6937
    @richav6937 10 місяців тому

    Hey! This video was really helpful!!!! Please continue your wonderful work~ 😀

  • @mayc2417
    @mayc2417 Рік тому +2

    hi sir, do we need to put any address in writing the letter or no? if not would it be fine to just write "dear..." to start it off and then put "sincerely, ..(name)" in the end? thank you!

  • @KidAdrenalin69
    @KidAdrenalin69 Рік тому +4

    Hi, I love the content, please can you make a video for the other different text types?

    • @IGCSESUCCESS
      @IGCSESUCCESS  Рік тому +3

      Working on it... Hopefully tonight! 😬

    • @KidAdrenalin69
      @KidAdrenalin69 Рік тому +2

      @@IGCSESUCCESS Thank you so much, I can't wait for the new video. This channel has been tremendously helpful and all the content you've put out has just been of top quality ... Too bad you don't do videos for Igcse literature. 😂

    • @IGCSESUCCESS
      @IGCSESUCCESS  Рік тому +3

      @@KidAdrenalin69 that was my plan for this year, but not enough hours in a day 😉

    • @anaishasheth11
      @anaishasheth11 Рік тому

      it would be amazing even if you could do just a few videos for lit, love your content by the way@@IGCSESUCCESS

  • @anasmohammed3654
    @anasmohammed3654 2 місяці тому

    I'm writing tomorrow and u saved my day 😶😶

  • @april-chan1476
    @april-chan1476 10 місяців тому +1

    shouldn't the formal report be written in third person? That means i cannot use 'I, we' etc etc. also do i not have to adress who i am at the end like 'sincerely,[name]'
    can u please discuss oct nov 11 2023 paper, it has a report and i am freaking out!!!!!!!!

  • @shiva-mx4gg
    @shiva-mx4gg 7 місяців тому

    coolest IG teacher out there

  • @emanshahid2499
    @emanshahid2499 Рік тому +3

    Hi, in the 2018 formal report they gave a certain phrase to start the report, so in that case how do we give heading and subheadings. Are we supposed to write a heading and "introduction " before writing the given phrase?

    • @IGCSESUCCESS
      @IGCSESUCCESS  Рік тому

      Use the bullets to construct your sub-headings... There's flexibility in the wording, but generally they still follow the same format.
      Intro
      Problems
      Solutions

  • @CharmaineHove
    @CharmaineHove 2 місяці тому +2

    Me with an exam tomorrow

  • @adacao1119
    @adacao1119 Рік тому +1

    What’s the difference between an article and a report? I always get the two mixed up in question 3…

  • @helena4961
    @helena4961 Рік тому +1

    did my english lang paper 1 last week and the last question was! surprise! a formal report. honestly wish i had found this video sooner 💀

  • @ZyphRoX_
    @ZyphRoX_ Рік тому +3

    Hello sir do we have to use dates in journal writing?

  • @naishakapoor-ez8cf
    @naishakapoor-ez8cf 6 місяців тому

    hii, is it necessary to include the sub-topics for a formal report and also add "A formal report" in the headline?

  • @Darkknight86291
    @Darkknight86291 Рік тому +1

    Please do paper 2 as well

  • @rugarechikede9585
    @rugarechikede9585 Рік тому

    Am writting my English and am panicking your videos really do help l hope l pass

  • @KNJMYG
    @KNJMYG Рік тому +1

    Mr can you make a video to help 0510 students in writing too

  • @MphileShongwe-n7n
    @MphileShongwe-n7n Рік тому

    🤣🤣🤣🤣the starting scene!

  • @royalfalcon95
    @royalfalcon95 9 місяців тому +3

    IGCSESUCCESS: "I wasnt going to make this video because I do think its very unlikely that Cambridge are going to give you a news paper report or a formal report.
    Cambridge: Aight bet

  • @ftbl.f1_edits
    @ftbl.f1_edits Рік тому +1

    Ohio acting at the beginning, but still a good video

  • @ahmedalam5415
    @ahmedalam5415 Рік тому

    thank you

  • @frostbite-u8r
    @frostbite-u8r Рік тому

    lol my teacher just used the same ppt to explain this topic in our class!

  • @rugarechikede9585
    @rugarechikede9585 Рік тому

    Can you write a summary of 94 wrods

    • @ZyphRoX_
      @ZyphRoX_ Рік тому +1

      Too short in my opinion, try to keep it around 100 to 115 it is way better.

  • @anonymousguytakingLs
    @anonymousguytakingLs Рік тому +1

    EXAM IS TMR

  • @Vaneezakhan-o8b
    @Vaneezakhan-o8b Рік тому +2

    My exam is on the 3 of May😭
    pls wish me good luck !!

  • @zainhussain6741
    @zainhussain6741 Рік тому

    i love you

  • @arjbajwa
    @arjbajwa 7 місяців тому +1

    Hoping it doesnt come up today

    • @arjbajwa
      @arjbajwa 7 місяців тому

      @@angekahsuheb but it came up

    • @arjbajwa
      @arjbajwa 7 місяців тому

      @@angekahsuheb mums

  • @fahadqureshi7805
    @fahadqureshi7805 Рік тому +2

    2 days 😭

  • @musakh_
    @musakh_ Рік тому

    Okay only an article came. 0500/12

  • @paradox1515
    @paradox1515 Рік тому +2

    Less than 24 hours 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲