IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task2-Lesson-8 Problem and Solution essay

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  • @cemaltemiz1567
    @cemaltemiz1567 Рік тому +66

    Full essay:
    In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
    What do you think are the causes of this?
    What solutions can you suggest?
    It is true that the behaviour of school pupils in some parts of the world has been getting worse in recent years. There are a variety of possible reasons for this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.
    In my opinion, three main factors are to blame for the way young people behave at school nowadays. Firstly, modern parents tend to be too lenient or permissive. Many children become accustomed to getting whatever they want, and they find it difficult to accept the demands of teachers or the limits imposed on them by school rules. Secondly, if teachers cannot control their students, there must be an issue with the quality of classroom management training or support within schools. Finally, children are influenced by the behaviour of celebrities, many of whom set the example that success can be achieved without finishing school.
    Student behaviour can certainly be improved. I believe that the change must start with parents, who need to be persuaded that it is important to set firm rules for their children. When children misbehave or break the rules, parents should use reasonable punishments to demonstrate that actions have consequences. Also, schools could play an important role in training both teachers and parents to use effective disciplinary techniques, and in improving the communication between both groups. At the same time, famous people, such as musicians and football players, need to understand the responsibility that they have to act as role models to children.
    In conclusion, schools will continue to face discipline problems unless parents, teachers and public figures set clear rules and demonstrate the right behaviour themselves.

  • @ominaumarova9220
    @ominaumarova9220 Місяць тому +1

    In ChatGPT's opinion, this essay is band 7.5. I truly love this teaching technique. Thanks Simon.

    • @mortonlv3490
      @mortonlv3490 28 днів тому +1

      I feel like Chatgpt is underscoring essays by around 0.5-1.0

    • @ominaumarova9220
      @ominaumarova9220 27 днів тому

      @@mortonlv3490 Yes, I also think so)

    • @NahHaha
      @NahHaha 10 днів тому

      ChatGPT gives me score of 90 of my essay, but my teacher only gives me 61😢

  • @juhinars6146
    @juhinars6146 Рік тому +2

    Simon is my Saviour! Thanks man for getting me through ielts

  • @Ali-jg4og
    @Ali-jg4og Рік тому +2

    holy moly thanks for useful video,just ur ideas are only woww amazing u are linking them naturally

  • @gulnozaeshnazarova1985
    @gulnozaeshnazarova1985 Рік тому +2

    Very useful for every ielts candidate.Thank u

  • @dariusyonatannama1032
    @dariusyonatannama1032 Рік тому +3

    Hi Simon, can we answer directly the question in paragraph 1 by combining all points?

  • @RizaCadizza
    @RizaCadizza Рік тому

    it's really helpfull. Im waiting for new vidio

  • @meegrace599
    @meegrace599 4 місяці тому

    Thank You...

  • @umarbekboriyev6938
    @umarbekboriyev6938 Рік тому

    No comment. Very useful

  • @f.tahmasbi
    @f.tahmasbi 3 місяці тому

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  • @TendaiChukucha
    @TendaiChukucha 4 місяці тому +1

    I'm a student may you help in writing task2 essays

  • @МафтунаАминбоева-з6ю

    It was so helpful thank uuu👍👍👍

  • @NebulaNotesyt
    @NebulaNotesyt 2 роки тому

    Good day sir, Nicky from India, i m student of general ielts but always face problems in reading,pls sir , suggested me reading reading ,how can I do good

  • @sarvarbekjoraqulov-zs5lf
    @sarvarbekjoraqulov-zs5lf 11 місяців тому

    Gr8t ❤

  • @abinguyen2405
    @abinguyen2405 Рік тому +1

    is this causes and solutions essay?

  • @f.tahmasbi
    @f.tahmasbi 3 місяці тому

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  • @niloohoushmand
    @niloohoushmand Рік тому

    where can i prepare worksheet paper? on what website?

  • @RNRezamohammadi
    @RNRezamohammadi Рік тому

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  • @fame119
    @fame119 2 роки тому +1

    I know