I love the idea that all of these "set of rules" creepypastas are connected, and there are people who make sure they don't cheat. This would make for a great monster of the week style TV show
Hi, I've been thinking on the same lines. For the love of fiction as a manner of telling truths no one will admit to consciously. I'm hoping the rules will bind together and show me the path out of humanity's dark sole. ✌️
You are right, the right setting can be of utter importance and interest. Here are few more locations of interest for good horror: lighthouses, surveilance rooms, underground bunkers, ships, deep sea, space stations, trains, and my personal favourite; oil rigs (plus points for creature, eldritch and deep sea horror at said location) Locations set the mood as the horror unfolds and tells its story.
I drive public transit bus for a living. You have no idea how right you are. Put it to you this way. Most of the people on your vehicle aren't there because they truly need to get where they're going. Start with that, and the horror stories write themselves.
Is it just me that finds Elly’s personality really entertaining, sweet and well thought out? You can tell that he actually does care for the protagonist even though he continuously denies it, and he also has a sort of childish side with his adorable pouting and his little, “Fine, it’s your life.” lmao. But he also has another side of his personality that portrays his wisdom and strength. It’s obvious that he’s a great king with his level-headedness, his confidence, his knowledge etc. I don’t know, it’s just something about the way he’s written that makes you automatically respect and admire him. Anyway, can anyone tell me if he’s actually a little boy or if he just altered his appearance because i’m low-key simping ngl.
Ahhh, it’s The Silver King. What’s he doing in the city? I thought he was a woodland ruler. I’m digging Ellie and his boss style and non cruel, yet law enforcing ways. He’s the king, the Boss. I hope I see him!
One side of me wishes to meet him too... The other don't, because meeting him means something is wrong and my life is possibly in risk of ending in a very gruesome way...
Spoilers for the Silver King stories! But he does! It’s stated in a previous story that he can not choose to save a human by going against one of his own kind. So he has to pretend that what he’s doing was done solely to suit himself and his needs. That’s why he was so insistent that the girl did this all on her own and that he was only doing this for himself and not because he cared.
I love the Silver King stories. No matter how much he denies it. He is saving human lives left and right. Because he wants to. ^^ Lovely narration, as always.
Incredibly this is the third part of this series I have heard in the last week over different channels . Really cool and very well written. I can only hope they keep coming. Thank you for reading it.
Those bus inconsistencies hit home man. Once a few months ago a had a huge engineering presentation assignment for the end of the semester, and it was first thing in the morning. Of course that was the day that my bus had to get a stand in that did a double route. So I got dropped off about 2 minutes before my presentation started. Had to sprint across the entire campus since the engineering wing is the farthest building on campus from the bus stop. Made it a bit late, but fortunately the people we were presenting to were just a bit later than me, so I had time to catch my breath. That morning was my own personal horror story lmao
@@macariomartinez6209 parts of my country are very unsafe at night, but most of our behavior is self defense as a result of the high crime rate from when we were teenagers, so basically last decade, not this one. I find parts of my country to be way safer than the US, and at least no one will shoot your school here.
@@post_ian94 I am glad and lucky enough that I don’t have to remember being robbed. Important thing is that you’re okay and you’ll continue to be, I know it
For real! I had just heard the story of the strange boy in the forest yesterday and when I realized that's who it was, I became attached. I really hope this becomes bigger.
In Brazil the rules are: Have a cheap replaceable phone Never eye people Sit in front of the bus, near the drive Pay the man and take a seat Mask up, it's covid season Avoid getting public transport at late hours Good luck
Speaking of Brazil, I had an incredibly weird experience with a Brazilian girl in Portugal - I’m minding my own business at a bookstore and she suddenly comes up to me asking if she can take a video/picture with me. I accepted because I’m too polite to say “no” (being Asian), and she took a selfie with me while telling me to say “Hello Brazil!” to the camera Weird but oddly cute…
Yep, that sums it up real good! Just don't let people forget that after getting off the bus, the rules still work for the best! Even more if it's late at night, Brazil is dangerous in its own way...
If his name is spelled 'Eli' it could be a nickname for Belial, who is supposed to be a king of Hell in demonology. Or Eligos. I spent the better part of the story thinking he's an angel, but when he mentioned being a king, it had me second-guessing.
kinda neat for the first time to see a creepypasta rule story where the creature this time is the one who not only broke the rule, but also tried to cheat to win its kind of a sigh of relief to see creatures again who dont try to play fair and in the end are just monsters
Elly probably thinking at the end “This stupid human is really going to try to use a broken mirror to save me?! Humans really are too kind for their own good”
Hey bro just wanted to say I love your videos and listen to them all the time while I'm working! (I'm a UPS Driver) thank you so much and keep up the amazing job!
Kinda confused as to what you mean, MC was given a crash course yet still (not incorrectly) referred to it as a hulking thing. What’s the problem here exactly? A crash course isn’t a whole education and certification on how to do something. You could be given a crash course on how to perform open heart surgery and still kill the patient. I don’t mean to seem accusatory or bashful but like what
@@jacktibbett7062 It's creep factor. A *crash* would be bad. The bus is indeed massive, but a *hulking thing* could also maybe refer to the trenchcoat monsters.
@@terreliv while that is most definitely a problem that has developed , I do think the way you described it is right. I do agree that a murderous “trench coat” is an issue. It’s up in the air what OP meant, but at the same time it’s blatantly clear. Such is the intend meaning of CPs though, right?
I like l.e. stories. but I'm finding them all over on the horror genre. I wish they were labeled the silver king storys to make them easier to locate and listen to.
TL;DR better than I expected 6/10 has potential. Preemptions are the poison of horror. Alright I’m sick of these bs rule stories so I’m straight up critiquing this. 1. The dialogue seems pretty bland an inhuman (maybe for Ellie thats ok but for the main character its too stilted and unnatural.(specifically the part where she says Ellie should be in bed the wording isn’t panicked enough for someone who’s worried about this kid)) 2. Some things feel over explained like the bit where she asks Ellie’s name (it’s clearly meant to highlight either the paranormal aspect or the stress the situation is causing, but it goes on for too long in a way that isn’t impactful. 3. I feel like there could be a better title since there’s only like one rule. If they’re trying to turn this into a series or whatever they really should have gone with something else because the rule stories that I heard before this were all very cookie cutter over prompted lists without this recurring silver king character. 4. Having a guide like Ellie where you can know his whole deal from previous stories and immediately introducing him as some sort of supernatural thing really takes away from the tension. You would either have to keep him some innocent kid that she was worried for or double down on the fact that he wasn’t there to help her and she can’t trust him to get that back. Honestly it wasn’t as bad as it could have been. A rule list can ruin a story by basically leaving an outline in the beginning of it. This happens in smaller ways in a lot of scary stories. If you listen to enough you’ll notice a pattern. If the narrator says “what could be behind this door bees? An axe murderer? Blood?” You know it’s none of those things. That can ruin the tension when the Mc is running from an axe murderer. I think part of any story is making someone want something. In drama you have to make an audience want the characters to get better in romance you have to make them want the characters to fall in love. Horror is sometimes seen as easier because you don’t have to do anything to make the audience want to be scared. But the way you do that is with expectations if for a moment even two seconds before the reveal you know because of clichés of wording and expectation that something will or won’t happen the tension is gone. The whole twist thing was pretty good but again the tension wasn’t there. I feel like if Ellie wasn’t introduced as something otherworldly and the main character Just wanted wanted to protect him, she could have tried giving him the jacket before the monster gabbed him. Then when she learns he’s like the king of monsters or w/e she could be in shock after or something.
I agree! Ive heard of some damn peculiar events happening on a bus, just look at some wierd happenings on buses on Utube! My uncle drove buses for years & told us some pretty " out there" Experiences hed had, especially the late night or last bus Creepy snooky stuff alright! 👻
the person that just kept asking question really annoyed the hell out of me, after elly said to leave the first time i would have already pulled a batman on elly...
Every time I heard a 'But' it stabbed my chest because I could not believe I didn't noticed how often I used it. Thankfully this video made me realize my truly awful mistake and I removed all nearly of them the story that got posted after this one. So, progress!
There's a movie that has bad things happen to folks on the last ride, it's called Meat Train, with Vinny Jones, such a badass movie, weird but badass haha
Narrator: *Takes taxi instead next time*
Eli: *Manifests besides him in back seat* So, we meet again. Don't look in the trunk.
Then it's by train
Don't look out the window would be worse
Meets again on a airplane
Lmao
Narrator: *gets in their car*
Eli: *on the passenger seat* you are one unlucky bastard huh…
I love the idea that all of these "set of rules" creepypastas are connected, and there are people who make sure they don't cheat. This would make for a great monster of the week style TV show
Hi, I've been thinking on the same lines. For the love of fiction as a manner of telling truths no one will admit to consciously. I'm hoping the rules will bind together and show me the path out of humanity's dark sole. ✌️
omg yes some of these creepypasta stories would make such good shows/movies
@@pixieslover77
And make them animated movies with our favorite Creepypasta Characters in them together.
Elly needs his own series of creepypastas. Such an interesting and mysterious character.
So far I’ve come across two today
@@InconspicuousStranger what are these stories I heard this channel uploaded another one and two other channels had some but I can’t find them
He has one!
@@InconspicuousStranger please share
I completely agree
Not much beats a bus for a setting. A small group of strangers, isolated and traveling into the night, what could go wrong?
🤡😳😬😂😂 Anything❤
Having to take public transit in and of itself is quite the heart stopper. Especially at night.
You are right, the right setting can be of utter importance and interest. Here are few more locations of interest for good horror: lighthouses, surveilance rooms, underground bunkers, ships, deep sea, space stations, trains, and my personal favourite; oil rigs (plus points for creature, eldritch and deep sea horror at said location)
Locations set the mood as the horror unfolds and tells its story.
I drive public transit bus for a living. You have no idea how right you are.
Put it to you this way. Most of the people on your vehicle aren't there because they truly need to get where they're going. Start with that, and the horror stories write themselves.
I loved that recent one with the serial killer who gave the protagonist a snuff film
Is it just me that finds Elly’s personality really entertaining, sweet and well thought out? You can tell that he actually does care for the protagonist even though he continuously denies it, and he also has a sort of childish side with his adorable pouting and his little, “Fine, it’s your life.” lmao. But he also has another side of his personality that portrays his wisdom and strength. It’s obvious that he’s a great king with his level-headedness, his confidence, his knowledge etc. I don’t know, it’s just something about the way he’s written that makes you automatically respect and admire him. Anyway, can anyone tell me if he’s actually a little boy or if he just altered his appearance because i’m low-key simping ngl.
I would like to know as well
He’s the silver King in a series.
Ahhh, it’s The Silver King. What’s he doing in the city? I thought he was a woodland ruler. I’m digging Ellie and his boss style and non cruel, yet law enforcing ways. He’s the king, the Boss. I hope I see him!
One side of me wishes to meet him too... The other don't, because meeting him means something is wrong and my life is possibly in risk of ending in a very gruesome way...
@@pandakashi3302 I know what you mean. But, I’ve had a good run, if I’m going out, I’m going down fighting alongside The King!
Ellie is adorable. We need more stories of him
Actually there is one from mr creeps of finding a weird strange kid in the forest
Nice pfp, rip chuck
@@katan844 Cheers bro. Rip
@@armak7774 hell yeah, what's your favourite death album?
@honey b where?
There needs to be a lawyer for all these countless "rules" stories.
"The Devil's Advocate" - A Creepypasta Story
@@terreliv WRITE IT!
@@coffeezombie6032 Alright. No promises on quality.
@@terreliv yesssssss! 🐍
Let them fight
Is this a part of the Silver King's story? I like to think he cares more about humans than he'd like to portray.
That would be dope
Spoilers for the Silver King stories! But he does! It’s stated in a previous story that he can not choose to save a human by going against one of his own kind. So he has to pretend that what he’s doing was done solely to suit himself and his needs. That’s why he was so insistent that the girl did this all on her own and that he was only doing this for himself and not because he cared.
it's.... it's not like he's trying to save you or anything...
@@JulianDanzerHAL9001 Tsundere!
What’s the other creepypasta title?
The Silver King! This is the 3rd story so far and I'm here for it!
Ok I only know of two the werewolf one and this
What's the other?
What are the others?
PLEASE tell me the other stories you know of about Ellie/The Silver King! 🤲
I only know this one and the werewolf one
I love the Silver King stories. No matter how much he denies it. He is saving human lives left and right. Because he wants to. ^^
Lovely narration, as always.
"I didn't tear them off for you ,I didn'tlike them either".Love this kid
I’m really hoping to hear a Silver King origin story or something, they have become some of my favorite stories
Right?
Incredibly this is the third part of this series I have heard in the last week over different channels . Really cool and very well written. I can only hope they keep coming. Thank you for reading it.
Can you tell me the other two parts please?
PLEASE can you tell me the titles and narrators of the other stories you have heard?
I’d really appreciate it!
Those bus inconsistencies hit home man. Once a few months ago a had a huge engineering presentation assignment for the end of the semester, and it was first thing in the morning. Of course that was the day that my bus had to get a stand in that did a double route. So I got dropped off about 2 minutes before my presentation started. Had to sprint across the entire campus since the engineering wing is the farthest building on campus from the bus stop. Made it a bit late, but fortunately the people we were presenting to were just a bit later than me, so I had time to catch my breath. That morning was my own personal horror story lmao
In Paraguay the only rules are not looking at anyone, hide your phone, a large bill in one of your shoes and have one weapon 🤙🏼
Somtimes i forget how safe america is
@@macariomartinez6209 parts of my country are very unsafe at night, but most of our behavior is self defense as a result of the high crime rate from when we were teenagers, so basically last decade, not this one. I find parts of my country to be way safer than the US, and at least no one will shoot your school here.
I haven't been robbed since 2008 but I still retain that sense of constant fight or flight after 22:00 (10PM)
@@post_ian94 I am glad and lucky enough that I don’t have to remember being robbed. Important thing is that you’re okay and you’ll continue to be, I know it
@@jacktibbett7062 thank you ❤️✨ hope you'll be well too
The Silver King rides again
Ha! That sounds like a Western.
sounds like these creatures dont respect him
That's exactly who that is👍🏾
Are there more stories about him?
For real! I had just heard the story of the strange boy in the forest yesterday and when I realized that's who it was, I became attached. I really hope this becomes bigger.
Last time i was this early, the main character hadn’t broken any rules yet.
Announcing how early you are is against the rules..
Really enjoying these pastas about Elly the Monster Auditor
There's more than one?
@@rhunter42dragon yes! Mr. Creeps and light house horror both have some. Strange boy in forest, and strange boy on side of the rode.
The silver king is real and ..........
@@fuckedworlds4326 and he enjoys playing Undercover Boss with various monsters
@@samanthawhy5786 is there a Canon order these should be played in?
In Brazil the rules are:
Have a cheap replaceable phone
Never eye people
Sit in front of the bus, near the drive
Pay the man and take a seat
Mask up, it's covid season
Avoid getting public transport at late hours
Good luck
Another one, never get into a vehicle that doesnt look like a full size bus, and never get in a vehicle that doesnt have any locals in it.
Speaking of Brazil, I had an incredibly weird experience with a Brazilian girl in Portugal - I’m minding my own business at a bookstore and she suddenly comes up to me asking if she can take a video/picture with me. I accepted because I’m too polite to say “no” (being Asian), and she took a selfie with me while telling me to say “Hello Brazil!” to the camera
Weird but oddly cute…
@@jinhunterslay1638
Maybe she was a UA-camr?
Yep, that sums it up real good! Just don't let people forget that after getting off the bus, the rules still work for the best! Even more if it's late at night, Brazil is dangerous in its own way...
@@Kia044 maybe?
If his name is spelled 'Eli' it could be a nickname for Belial, who is supposed to be a king of Hell in demonology. Or Eligos. I spent the better part of the story thinking he's an angel, but when he mentioned being a king, it had me second-guessing.
Eli in this one seems very keen to tell everyone that he's not there to save human lives 🧐
This was frighteningly wholesome
kinda neat for the first time to see a creepypasta rule story where the creature this time is the one who not only broke the rule, but also tried to cheat to win
its kind of a sigh of relief to see creatures again who dont try to play fair and in the end are just monsters
When you literally just watched another Ellie creepy pasta story that was just released 😳 lol
Yes and the other one with the werewolves!
Mr creeps?
I just got done with the mr creeps one
@@XineyVisuals lighthouse horror has the werewolf one. I don't know if mr. Creeps does. I have only listened to this one and the forest one.
@@samanthawhy5786 it's does its about a forest
That's why you take uber the rules to survive in a uber is easier
Unless it's an 'Uber for the Paranormal'!
LOL
I rode a greyhound for 2 days this is 100% accurate.
Same, rode 1 twice, both to Texas, and man, some of the weird shit I've seen late at night while everyone was sleepin', crazy stuff haha
The number one rule to survive on the late night bus is to not sit near or make eye contact with any crackheads
I love the silver king stories, excellent work by the author
Elly probably thinking at the end “This stupid human is really going to try to use a broken mirror to save me?! Humans really are too kind for their own good”
Hey bro just wanted to say I love your videos and listen to them all the time while I'm working! (I'm a UPS Driver) thank you so much and keep up the amazing job!
This is like an episode of an anime.
Lol that’s partly because Elli has a series
Second story I hear with the little boy with this description. I like it. Is there a playlist for Elli?
PEOPLE have to RIDE the last bus for the night man. You're scaring these poor folks!
Anyone else glad Elly made it out alright? His demeaner is very King like. Well done, loved this story
Yes this is what I wanted, now all we need is a series on the sliver king
So happy for another story with the silver king! And its technically a rules story too! 😄
The silver king.... The saga continues. I love it!!!
Another Ellie story. Awesome!
What's this about Ellie he is the silver king ? And I love these stories about him I am excited to see his name once again
At work listening to this on my break, keep the awesome uploads coming
when the bus is sus 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
🤫🤫🤫
Sussy bussy
😀😛😉
Wow I really love these Silver King stories! Never heard of him until very recently! ♥️♥️♥️
Me who takes the bus everyday: Ooh this is gonna be good
I love the silver king!!! I hope the author keeps the series going! Thank you creepsmcpasta for narrating it!
No matter how terrifying the story your voice is so calming.
I'm getting a distinctly Fair Folk vibe from these creatures... I love it!
Great story! Makes me want to have to get the last bus home even less than I already prefer!
Well if nothing else at least the MC now has a new job skill to add to his resume lol
Just when I thought falling asleep and missing your stop was scary😳😳
"Crash course" in how to drive a bus
"Hulking thing" referring to the bus' size
Well done, author; very spooky wordplay
Kinda confused as to what you mean, MC was given a crash course yet still (not incorrectly) referred to it as a hulking thing. What’s the problem here exactly? A crash course isn’t a whole education and certification on how to do something. You could be given a crash course on how to perform open heart surgery and still kill the patient. I don’t mean to seem accusatory or bashful but like what
@@jacktibbett7062 It's creep factor. A *crash* would be bad. The bus is indeed massive, but a *hulking thing* could also maybe refer to the trenchcoat monsters.
@@terreliv while that is most definitely a problem that has developed , I do think the way you described it is right. I do agree that a murderous “trench coat” is an issue. It’s up in the air what OP meant, but at the same time it’s blatantly clear. Such is the intend meaning of CPs though, right?
@@jacktibbett7062 Yeah
This was my first creepypasta channel and I gotta say I love the content
I like l.e. stories. but I'm finding them all over on the horror genre. I wish they were labeled the silver king storys to make them easier to locate and listen to.
I love Ellie. I wish i had a kid like him. Though he seems to be a bit of a tsundere
I used to not care for these lists of rules stories, but they're really growing on me
@@cloverassassinscreed so it is, darlin. So it is.
someone who is actually helpful and knows what's going on? What sort of crazy Creepypasta is this??? :)
Just another reason to pay for rental car coverage on your car insurance ... the more you know
Loving that this Ellie character is in multiple pastas!
GUYS I NEED LINKS FOR ELLYS STORIES 😭 I only got this one and the time loop one so far...
I like these ellie stories
The Silver King strikes again!
Ahhh love these types of creepypastas
TL;DR better than I expected 6/10 has potential. Preemptions are the poison of horror.
Alright I’m sick of these bs rule stories so I’m straight up critiquing this. 1. The dialogue seems pretty bland an inhuman (maybe for Ellie thats ok but for the main character its too stilted and unnatural.(specifically the part where she says Ellie should be in bed the wording isn’t panicked enough for someone who’s worried about this kid)) 2. Some things feel over explained like the bit where she asks Ellie’s name (it’s clearly meant to highlight either the paranormal aspect or the stress the situation is causing, but it goes on for too long in a way that isn’t impactful. 3. I feel like there could be a better title since there’s only like one rule. If they’re trying to turn this into a series or whatever they really should have gone with something else because the rule stories that I heard before this were all very cookie cutter over prompted lists without this recurring silver king character. 4. Having a guide like Ellie where you can know his whole deal from previous stories and immediately introducing him as some sort of supernatural thing really takes away from the tension. You would either have to keep him some innocent kid that she was worried for or double down on the fact that he wasn’t there to help her and she can’t trust him to get that back.
Honestly it wasn’t as bad as it could have been. A rule list can ruin a story by basically leaving an outline in the beginning of it. This happens in smaller ways in a lot of scary stories. If you listen to enough you’ll notice a pattern. If the narrator says “what could be behind this door bees? An axe murderer? Blood?” You know it’s none of those things. That can ruin the tension when the Mc is running from an axe murderer. I think part of any story is making someone want something. In drama you have to make an audience want the characters to get better in romance you have to make them want the characters to fall in love. Horror is sometimes seen as easier because you don’t have to do anything to make the audience want to be scared. But the way you do that is with expectations if for a moment even two seconds before the reveal you know because of clichés of wording and expectation that something will or won’t happen the tension is gone. The whole twist thing was pretty good but again the tension wasn’t there. I feel like if Ellie wasn’t introduced as something otherworldly and the main character Just wanted wanted to protect him, she could have tried giving him the jacket before the monster gabbed him. Then when she learns he’s like the king of monsters or w/e she could be in shock after or something.
FINALLY! A creepy pasta with a happy ending! Lol Phewww! 😅
I'm 11 mins in, is this The Silver King ?
It was, awesome !
The “Rules” stories are some of the best
Why would you switch winter tires for all seasons? The point if all seasons is you don’t swap them for winters.
Ok, you didn't save me. I highly appreciate you providing me with the information to save myself. Lol
That feels like the opening episode of a supernatural shounen anime right there.
That's actually pretty wholesome
MY car got rear ended a while ago, but I got a new one. I feel the character's pain.
Who's silver king/Ellie [that everyone's talking about]?
It's the albino kid, he's been in some other pastas recently
One of the best stories I've heard
In a while
I hope his sister helped him get his new car after all that he went through on that bus ride.
This story was so good and it was narrated so well I’m at a loss for words truly amazing both the author and narrator
I agree! Ive heard of some damn peculiar events happening on a bus, just look at some wierd happenings on buses on Utube!
My uncle drove buses for years & told us some pretty " out there"
Experiences hed had, especially the late night or last bus
Creepy snooky stuff alright! 👻
Sounds like they’re not observing social distancing rules.
now i cant sleep tonight thank you
Get on to de' bus, got to get back to Bealzibub...
It turned from creepy to wholesome in seconds...
Ellie is such an awesome character wow.
the person that just kept asking question really annoyed the hell out of me, after elly said to leave the first time i would have already pulled a batman on elly...
I’ll take a creepy bus over a creepy subway any day
Interesting to see another part of this series.
See I like self contained story s with no cliffhanger
There's the postman for cryptids series that has Elly in it
Okay, this is my new favorite story
Wouldnt even scare my nephew. And he is 9
Anyone else picture the kid as killua from hunter x hunter?
True Ella could have her own stories to tell. Either way that’s a great story with a twist I didn’t think would happen
I love this story! BUT the word "but" is used so often it really stands out, better than I can do though! Keep up the awesomeness!!!!😍😍😍
Every time I heard a 'But' it stabbed my chest because I could not believe I didn't noticed how often I used it. Thankfully this video made me realize my truly awful mistake and I removed all nearly of them the story that got posted after this one. So, progress!
Iam not its BOSS
" *IAM ITS KING* "
Deeeeym😲
It reminds me of the times I actually had to ride last bus home from work. Got mugged only once. Always follow the rules, people.
There's a movie that has bad things happen to folks on the last ride, it's called Meat Train, with Vinny Jones, such a badass movie, weird but badass haha
This is written like an older anime and I love it
My fav story
That's good advice.
The silver king being an MVP once again although I must say they are kinda sus....
Wow! Just... wow!
Well that was interesting... . Awesome