the reader seems to get into some strange mode , where it seems to be sounding out the words. Even words that it pronounced perfectly moments ago. Even so, the story was nice.
A terrific story. I liked how it showed off the good side of humanity. We are creatures of opposites: we hold destruction and savagery in one hand, and kindness and empathy in the other. "We do" could well sum up a lot about Humanity.
I had hoped one of those Marines in Battle Suits would have been the Officer that helped them in the beginning. Maybe I'm a softy but I saw another story of them becoming a family. Well Done....I enjoyed the story and I actually chuckle when words are pronounced all wrong.
I write what I see. There is an amazing world and people all around us if we learn to recognize it. What originally inspired me to writ this story was an evening when I got three Amber Alerts on my phone within a few hours. Elderly people with dementia , special needs persons, and runaways are most of what comes up in my area. It struck me just how amazing it was that in those moments, thousands of people all across the alert region had stopped what they were doing to go look outside or around wherever they were. I don't only write people as I hope we may be one day, I write them as I see them all around me. People are pretty amazing.
Human in heavy power armor puts their hand on her shoulder. "The Emperor protects." If the Imperium wasn't a bunch of xenophobic douche bags. Yes I know the xenos aren't any better. And they tried to exterminate humanity multiple times.
Please find a voice solution that can actually pronounce the words please! It is mispronouncing words in such a manner that sometimes I have to rewind and read the words to understand them.. English is NOT a second language to me. That is my only complaint about what your doing.. I LOVE these stories.. I'm subscribing DESPITE the severe mispronunciations. Fix that and I suspect that will increase your subscribers. IMHO - If I were ranking channels this one would make top 10 EASY!
Native American English speaker here, fluent and married to a professional editor of 25 years... I must agree. It's frustrating to be in the thick of a story and then get wrenched out with mispronounced simple words
Sorry, I wish I can narrate it but I can't because my speaking isn't the best. Though I think I might have found the solution in our future videos tho....
Find another "Narrative program" for these stories as the one's in use are horrific! The mispronunciation of so many words, improper grammar, and pathetic inflection of the character dialog makes the stories terrible to listen to.
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I liked the story. However, the computer who is reading this story got SOOOO many words wrong. It did throw me out.
Agreed... However, it did make me literally laugh out loud and garner some funny looks..
the reader seems to get into some strange mode , where it seems to be sounding out the words. Even words that it pronounced perfectly moments ago.
Even so, the story was nice.
yeah, I only managed to listen for a couple of minutes before I had to shut it off.
There's a much better reading of this story out there. I just can't remember under what title it's posted. If I find it I'll post a link.
A funny part xD
SECOND time through this story and I still get teary eyed.
its my first and i got sand in my eyes
A terrific story. I liked how it showed off the good side of humanity. We are creatures of opposites: we hold destruction and savagery in one hand, and kindness and empathy in the other. "We do" could well sum up a lot about Humanity.
Amber alert?
Now I _know_ it's a human space station.
I really enjoyed your story! I look forward to a lot more of them!
I loved this story as i am retired navy and many times we have helped the innocent in need.
Heartwarming. I'd like more stories with these characters and this race. ❤
I liked the story. Please do a sequel.
This was awesome. This is the essence and actual purpose of storytelling. Inspiring us to be better Human beings.
This was a great story, thanks for sharing it.
I really enjoyed this story. Enjoyed it so much that I have been able to hear it twice. Thank you all for a pleasant journey.
I really enjoyed this story and would like to hear more about these characters.
Awesome STORY !!
Just a good kind of story to leave you with warm fuzzy feelings
Love this story.
Nice story, very enjoyable. I hope to hear more of this refugee story. Finding a place to settle, maybe that Lieutenant returning.
that was GREAT. I truly enjoyed that story, a real tear jerker so to speak.
What a great story
i enjoyed this story. thanks
Great story! I find a lot of stories on HFY to be captivating. :)
I really enjoyed the story.
I had hoped one of those Marines in Battle Suits would have been the Officer that helped them in the beginning. Maybe I'm a softy but I saw another story of them becoming a family. Well Done....I enjoyed the story and I actually chuckle when words are pronounced all wrong.
I wished for the same but he was on a different cliff ship.
Nice story.
I loved the story
thank you for this chance to see ourselves maybe...
I write what I see. There is an amazing world and people all around us if we learn to recognize it.
What originally inspired me to writ this story was an evening when I got three Amber Alerts on my phone within a few hours. Elderly people with dementia , special needs persons, and runaways are most of what comes up in my area. It struck me just how amazing it was that in those moments, thousands of people all across the alert region had stopped what they were doing to go look outside or around wherever they were.
I don't only write people as I hope we may be one day, I write them as I see them all around me. People are pretty amazing.
I enjoyed the story.
I wish the story was longer
I like the story.
Thank you for this story. It was nice.
Glad you enjoyed it!
I Like this story. Please do a follow-up
I enjoyed the story, now I'd like to hear more of it!
You and me both!
Great story!
Thanks for listening ❤️
excellent story ty.
Our pleasure!
I loved this story, it made me feel good 😊
I'm so glad!
Please invest in a better text to voice product . This is very hard to listen to. Almost stopped listening. But the story is so good.
Great story
💜
in verr mental ... me look at "evironmental" and laughing
Nice!
Human in heavy power armor puts their hand on her shoulder. "The Emperor protects."
If the Imperium wasn't a bunch of xenophobic douche bags.
Yes I know the xenos aren't any better. And they tried to exterminate humanity multiple times.
Nice
I liked the story
Nice story, but what language was this?
The pronunciations are funny.
I’m lost. Wetter the storm? Straighten Ed?
Don't mess with humans.
Really don't kidnap a child on a human station. We don't like that.
A well-written story makes the AI's inability to pronounce so many words all the more jarring... 😬
Good, No GREAT story on what we Humans must stride to become. Ask the Author to tell us how the Mother and Daughter life on Earth.
Please find a voice solution that can actually pronounce the words please! It is mispronouncing words in such a manner that sometimes I have to rewind and read the words to understand them.. English is NOT a second language to me. That is my only complaint about what your doing.. I LOVE these stories.. I'm subscribing DESPITE the severe mispronunciations. Fix that and I suspect that will increase your subscribers. IMHO - If I were ranking channels this one would make top 10 EASY!
Native American English speaker here, fluent and married to a professional editor of 25 years...
I must agree. It's frustrating to be in the thick of a story and then get wrenched out with mispronounced simple words
mee-sures? -1
Ahh , the poor Rom people.
I want Ed Morplease! I woulded paid Ed money Ed for ewe to improv Ed you re arti fecal intelidance Ed. 🙄
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Sorry can`t bear to listen to the badly mispronounced crap
Get a better text to voice system. The mispronunciations are extremely distracting.
Good story .Worst narration ever!
Sorry, I wish I can narrate it but I can't because my speaking isn't the best. Though I think I might have found the solution in our future videos tho....
Find another "Narrative program" for these stories as the one's in use are horrific!
The mispronunciation of so many words, improper grammar, and pathetic inflection of the character dialog makes the stories terrible to listen to.
I enjoyed the story.
Great story!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Great story.