Motion Detected | Short Horror Film
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- Опубліковано 1 жов 2024
- After coming home from a business trip, a man discovers a strange figure in his home security footage that has been appearing every night at 9PM.
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Crew:
Writer, Director, Editor, DP, VFX Artist - Vincent Dormani
Composer - Frank Dormani
Cast:
Man in House - Frank Dormani
Computer Ghost - Vincent Dormani
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Watch "The Making of" here: ua-cam.com/video/47jtgWJfeBY/v-deo.html
She gave him a chance to run out of the house. Even opened the front door for him..lol
This guy is a moron!
Nah, it's just a fault hope. She shut the door when he actually tries to run out of the door.
She made it seem like she left.
@@shakeemsuarez9737
Why is he a moron? Hee tried to run out but she slammed the door on him. U musta missed that part.
@@shakeemsuarez9737 your a moron
Just to clear up some confusion, the person in the previous recordings is NOT the main character. As the description says, he comes home from a business trip so those previous days he was not there, and needed someone to watch over the house. He is simply looking back at those tapes of the dog sitter. Hope that clears up some confusion.
@Hugh Jaanus old school figure of speech ....ex. i will 'tape' the whole movie.....with a digital recorder
@Hugh Jaanus Take things literally much?
Wait.. Next your gonna tell me this was all staged and that guy really didnt just get killed by a ghost...
Yes it does thank you so much
@Hugh Jaanus calm down Hughbert
I would have ran out of that house so fast and hollering so loud my neighbors would have thought I was going crazy. That was really scary and creepy, good job you all!
I would have done the same 😳 Glad you enjoyed!!
What an amazing effort. This one genuinely gave me the creeps and the way you managed to maintain the level of suspense throughout is very impressive. Awesome work as usual ;)
Thank you so much, man. Very glad you enjoyed this one, thanks for all the nice feedback, I really appreciate it!
The ‘entity’ using the piano to build suspense is absolutely hilarious lol.
For sure! It’s one of my favorite ways we built suspense in this film, and was really fun to achieve.
Yeah that’s a killer touch!
i thought she was gonna play rush e 💀
Motion detected, had wonderful pacing. In addition, the music added tension to the overall ambiance of the film. Although it was short I can tell the film took a long time to produce, especially with the usage of your special effects.
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it, we appreciate the kind words:)
Pretty good. I like the lack of jump scares. Keeping the attention on the protagonist rather than on the scary thing really worked well for building suspense.
Thanks for the kind words! When writing it I was going for more of a big suspense build rather than unnecessary jump scares, so thanks for noticing that!
Yea i agree bro
I agree
Huge thanks to Cory for featuring this in SSS#49!
Came from Cory’s video and just wanted to say, great video! :D
Came from here too!!! This was scary
Had to swing by and drop a like and a sub, this was awesome!
@@KiIIua_ I appreciate that so much!
Had to swing by and pay my respects! Happy for you guys! Keep up the good work!
Оmg! Imagine this situation in real life! I would have escaped through the kitchen door as soon as I saw the ghost in replay.
I would’ve escaped through the kitchen wall after seeing that in the replay
Don't be surprised by what you don't see, something or someone is always around.
that was clean, man got dropped from the ceiling lol
If it was me the ghost would be surprised to see how fast I would run away from the house after I saw it in the video the first time
Sami Yusuf 1👺
me after first footage.
Me: yes 911 I'm going to need a police officer and trauma psychologist and a exorcist please as fast as possible
😂😂
.....call made from gas station 5 blocks away 🏃
👍🏻😂🤣🤣
He's so brave and stupid at the same time. * clapping *
Between the concept, the production, the acting, the scoring...I was holding my breath the entire time. The transition shot from the sitter being pulled away to the home owner jumping back was so clever. I loved it all
Thank you so much for the kind words, Talia!
Ig? 🌸
She’s taken buddy. By the Handsome lead actor.
I woulda just left knowing im going to be rich for having footage of a ghost
Your films have always been good! Always.. BUT I DID NOT EXPECT THIS ! I am totally in love with this film and it is now my 7th time watching it! Loved the soundtrack and pacing such an amazing wait! Good Job BHP💚
Thank you so much! Really appreciate the kind words guys, it means the world to us! Frank definitely killed it with score on this one, and it was so fun to make. We’ll have a making of coming soon too!
Can’t wait to see what you put out next:)
This was way better than most of the short horror film out there everything was on point, eagerly waiting for some more scary vids from your channel. Keep up the good work 😊😊😊
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it
man that was good talk about the ring meets home alone ghost edition
5:32 I thought he was about to run away and that idiot CLOSED the door :DDDD.
Wow, guys! This is seriously amazing. Well shot, super suspenseful, incredible score, and that final shot was insane! Easily your best work yet. It's crazy to see how much you improve with each short film!
Its shit....
@@michaelbmw1931 aight thats ur opinion buddy
Oh nah I am scared but this looking fire 🔥
This was a masterpiece, Vincent and Frankie are the most talented individuals I know, big things coming 😎
Thank you Paras.
You must be related! “Masterpiece”? 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
@@PaulysRide no response to my response on your other comment right? Thought so.
I’ve watched so many short horror films on YT over the past few years and this one is one of my new favorites, no cheap jump scares, very suspenseful and creative!
Thanks so much! I’m glad it’s one of your new favorites! Can’t wait to make more films soon!
I woke up early today just to watch this film and it didn't disappoint me! It was super suspenseful! Probably because the score and its obvious handheld camera moves. Talk about the score, I think this is the best one yet from Frank! His acting has improved a lot here I can say. Your direction is also one of the best things about this film too! You didn't waste any second and yet you still managed to stretch the tension as long as the film needed.
Im thinking of getting Dormani Home Security but after watching this I was like nevermind
Dude thank you so much! Your constant support keeps us wanting to make more. Frank definitely killed it with this score, and this project was super fun to work on. Thank you for all the nice feedback, we appreciate it so much!
Thank you so much, man. It truly means the world to us to have such supportive fans. You’re awesome man❤️
Dormani Home Security isn’t exactly something you can drop. Sign the contract, you’ll be fine 😉
Ghosts are so tech savvy these days, no more creaking doors, leaking taps, flickering candles, swaying chair, these days they go like-"I have given enough warning to this moron, now I will just run some codes, forcing him to restart the device."
this was fire bro amazing work you deserve so much more loved the scare at the end along with the piano
Glad you enjoyed
Can’t wait, been waiting on a buried hatchet film for a while now 😉
Creepy!!!! Love the scene where he’s looking at old recordings. Also, what do you use to record your sound? It’s fantastic.
Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed! I used a Rode NTG-2, and recorded into a Tascam DR-40X. Thanks for the kind words:)
@@BuriedHatchetProductions What do you mean by “record into”? Do you record with both at the same time?
So since the rode mic is a shotgun mic, it needs something to record into via XLR cable. You can also record straight into your camera but the audio is not nearly as crisp as it is when recording into a separate audio interface like the Tascam. So when using a male to female XLR cable, it connects the mic into the recorder. Hope that helps a bit, and any other questions let me know.
Yes you can also record with just the tascam. Definitely a less expensive alternative, and I have tested it before and the sound quality is still great, especially if you are close to the sound you want to record.
@@BuriedHatchetProductions Thanks for the info!!!
Dude was seriously calm through the whole thing.😳 coming home to find the stuff all over the floor? I'd have been watching replay in my car not in the kitchen.🕵
i would have shiit my pants the moment I see that image. The acting could have been improved though.
if “the guy gets scared, so does the audience.”
Music is right on. Great, simple and very unique technique story.
Thank you! Glad enjoyed, and thanks for the criticism as well! :)
@@BuriedHatchetProductions
It is very scary. Simple and short. But, Something different story line.
@@simplelangperorock Glad you think so, thanks for the compliments! I’m hoping to start working on a new short film soon
I was right! It WAS the cat!
I always enjoy a good pilk comment. Never fails to be an enjoyable comment to read
@@BuriedHatchetProductions I try to be as sporadic as possible 😉
Now, straight to business. This was absolutely WICKED, and if anyone is reading this comment before watching the film you’re absolutely lame, because I couldn’t afford looking away from this beautiful ride (I guess that counts as a spoiler warning?) That fall was UNBELIEVABLE. The editing in this one just outcompetes your other work, and I’m super jelly because I can’t edit shit! Great job guys! Also, that’s score 😌👌 Frank knows his way around music & sound.
Also that damn technology, it’s stealing our horror movies! Those viruses too!
Anyways, always remember: “You either watch, or get watched.”
The wait is finally over 🤩
Ong
I’m hyped
Awesome work, awesome work. Truly creepy. You remained SCARILY calm for finding out there was a bloody ghost in your house. I've seen people more scared for just finding out their stock went down 2% ;)
Thank you so much! Love the enthusiasm in this comment, and I must agree he did act strangely calm for such a situation 🤔
@@BuriedHatchetProductions You're welcome. Subscribed. Keep up the good work and have a great weekend!
I wonder where the demons come from or have they always been there it's just that he hasn't noticed till then
We have a backstory for her! Just couldn’t explore it in a short 7 minute film!
Witch of your friends did the acting.
For example.
Someone as The Figure
Someone as The Man.
Due to small crew, it’s just 3 of us on set for the security footage. Frank plays the main character, I play the dog Walker since I didn’t have to be operating the camera, and we had someone else play the figure.
@@BuriedHatchetProductions 😉
*Slams door back shut.* "I'll let this ghost kill me before I ever leave this house!"
Ghosts have gotten very smart.
Bruh I‘m not having the money to buy me a BigMac, and that dude is literally living alone in a mansion like.. dude seriously
On behalf of Buried Hatchet, we would personally buy you that Big Mac.
1:33 see, the moment I see that in my camera I’m moving the fuck out of that house
Nice.....I was half expecting a jump scare, but you resisted the temptation. When you see something weird in the security cam, scram or better still, upload to youtube:).
Yikes! This in no way should inhibit you from walking your dog. 🤭 Priorities in life should often be scrutinized though.
If I’m looking at the moral of the story that means the film was clean and delivered with high entertainment value.
Totally! Thank you for watching!
This is Fantastic 🔥🔥🔥
Why did he just sit there after he saw his dog sitter getting dragged? Lmao.😭😭😭I would've ran already. Love the film though!!!!♥️
dude this is amazing, fantastic job. Love it!!! Njothing beats creepy girl with black hair and mouth torn open.
thos looking good bro
I am going to sleep in my parents room😢.
Why the typical white dude behavior. Make a film where the protagonist nopes out of the place right away but can't escape nonetheless.
Can’t wait to watch tonight
i am coming from abo atwan 🙃🖤
فين هذه أبو عطوان ؟!!
Man, I hate it when my security device needs an update at the worst times.
Always the worst timing !
How the heck am I just now seeing this!? This is dope af guys! good stuff!
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it! It’s nice to see your name again, and I’m hoping to see a new short from you guys soon!
Is this just me or does the main protagonist look like the guy from TrixyBlox ( something like that - the guy who transforms the builds in Minecraft)
So short story shorter, she´s like B*tch get out of my house & he is like No mam but really should have listened cause next thing ya know snap! ;)
Nice one :)
If I was the ghost I would just start playing “Still D. R. E.” On the piano
I’m still waiting for some one to make an edit to match the song to the shot of the piano moving 😂
Bro I was thinking the same thing xD
I guess it was ok. I don’t know. I kinda wish I got to know more about the ghost girl. Who was she? What’s her reason for haunting the guy and being there at 9PM? She still looked creepy though.
I definitely wish I could’ve too expanded on it too. It’s just that with short films it’s hard to pack a good amount of backstory into it without flooding it with confusing information. With our short film “Bent Neck” I was able to provide more backstory, but still it doesn’t feel like enough. One thing I do though is make an extended script where I create a whole back story for our characters and I am still working on it for this one, and i have some cool backstory in mind why she comes at 9PM. So maybe one day I could release them as a pdf for those who are curious of a backstory to read. Thanks for watching!
I came from Cory and this is Amazing, I’m going to check out your other videos and subscribe
Magnificent
Yes! Wasn't expecting this to come out so soon. Can't wait!
Thanks guys! We actually made the trailer after being finished with the film so the wait wouldn’t be too long
First footage, I wouldve grabbed my keys and hit the highway
I think Something happened in the house, the spirit stayed on, and is Now taking revenge
Very good! The ambience and the music, gave it extra creepy feelings! Loved it!
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. Our composer Frank really did a great job capturing the paranormal essence of the film through the score.
omg! You guys are not going to believe this! It's Katy Perry!!!
Really looking forward to a making of!
Thanks Dylan! It will be up soon!
Nice work there,greetings from Greece...
Thank you! Greetings!
*Me posing for the walmart security screen* 1:41
Wow just image being able to see your homes security cameras drom your ipad or tablet wow such a genius
Me and my friend watched it during class and we screamed it was amazing
Better than 99% of feature films. This genuinely freaked me out.
That’s really high praise, thank you so much!
Directed by Dormani... I thought it was a play on a certain Italian brand name lol. Also very well done! I'm going to check out your other content
Thank you for watching! Dormani home security is our favorite Easter egg ;)
Ah yes electronics. Great until they stop working 😝
WOW. Guys, I'm blown away by this production. You actually had me shaking my leg with anxiety the whole video haha! This is amazing work and BHP is on it's way to do big things. You have my support all the way. great work.
Thanks for the kind words, very much appreciated!
Ant, my dude! Thank you so much!
This was a dope film👏
I recommend you title this 9:00Pm
Motion detected: Perfect and appropriate name..... No doubt that I watched the best movie of your channel!.... The concept was wonderful and super suspenseful!! Incredible score!🙌👏and the actor was great and wonderful too... I really loved and enjoyed it a lot......
Can’t wait to see the next one
Thank you so much 😀 Frank did a great job acting and doing the score as well. We really appreciate the kind words, glad that you enjoyed!
what a great short, super creepy. well done for the special effects too - makes you feel you dont want a motion detector.. lol
Glad you enjoyed it
scared the shit out of me (came from cory)
Scares aside, dude has a pretty sweet house.
This was pretty good! Something about girl ghosts I find creepy!
Thank you!
the sounds make it feel more like asmr than horror
I’ll take that as a compliment, I really make sure the sound design is always top notch
@@BuriedHatchetProductions it was definitely scary too i loved the sounds for some reason
Thank you! I’m glad the sound design was able to stand out!
That's what happens to people who buy Dormani Home Security products. You really are safer buying my Dorman Home Security Systems
I heard that’s the knock off version from Ali express though 🧐
@@BuriedHatchetProductions Lmao. In all honesty though, very well made short film
Why would he check it in the first place? I want a backstory as to why he is so suspicious.
Hopefully in the future I can expand on this story in a longer film, I have a lot of ideas for the backstory of the girl.
4:41 Imagine if the ghost actually plays megalovania on the piano
It's a Demoghost.😲No!Poor man.😞
This guy definitely invests in stocks.
He actually does haha
Love these films good work
Thank you!
I hate those sensors somtimes the slightest vibration can set it off. Used to have it my home.
Well luckily for you, you never encountered a ghostly computer virus in your system.
She could have stayed undetectable... with Dovato. Just sayin...
6:10 Thats an ending if I've ever seen one 10/10
Haha thank you very much! We specialize in crazy endings :)
@@BuriedHatchetProductions Quick question what do you edit these videos on?
@@HOURLYSNIPES premiere
@@BuriedHatchetProductions ok thank you time to take my comedy videos to the next level
I just saw this. Can we have a part two?
C'est très bien réalisé, mais le personnage est un parfait crétin.
Pourquoi les personnages sont toujours aussi stupides, je me le demande.
Les personnages sont parfois complètement stupides. mais si le personnage où partir, alors il n'y aurait pas de film. Merci d'avoir regardé!
OH SHITTTTT AHHHHHHHHHH😳😳😳FRANK
Wow this is a fantastic short, fully deserving of these views. The best shorts on UA-cam these days always seem to be the ones that explore new and modern technology, and then turn it against us, and this is no exception. Really well done, congrats!
Thanks so much for checking it out! I definitely think that modern technology is a new way of horror, and something that will be sticking around for a good amount of time for some horror filmmakers.
Your best short by far...
Watching this at 3am alone. big mistake
Now I shall play an original song entitled Motion Detected. 👻
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Fantastic!! Simply fantastic!! To deliver all that suspense and horror with so little resources is the sheer definition of talent. Although, we've seen this particular scenario played out in several full feature films it was masterfully performed in 6 min. Fantastic job guys!!!!
Once again, thank you so much Jose!! Truly means so much to us to get support!
This Is Amazing, I was tense the whole time because the character was not speaking so it made the audience almost try to guess his emotions
Apparently, she is German. She's always so right in time!
I guess so!
That was creepy
Thanks for watching !