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  • How to write a short story outline Secrets From A Short Story Writer | Outline For Beginners
    There are a lot of different ways to plot out a short story -- this is the way that works best for me. When I have no idea what I want to write about, this outline formula works every single time.
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  • @kaden587
    @kaden587 2 роки тому +129

    I struggle with short stories because I always tend to flesh it out too much and include too many details which then makes it into an actual story rather than a short story. This video helped me a ton, thank you so much for being straightforward and detailed with your vidoe!

    • @frederickbrock2740
      @frederickbrock2740 2 роки тому +5

      I totally understand what you meant by making it into an 'actual story'. The original idea begins to take on a life of its own and from there goes where it wants to go yet not what you had intended.

    • @cameraspce22
      @cameraspce22 2 місяці тому +1

      I have this problem! You fall in love with all the little details of the plot, so it eventually builds up into more than you'd like for a short story.

    • @Triangleofsuccess-hu2hc
      @Triangleofsuccess-hu2hc 17 днів тому

      ❤​@@frederickbrock2740

  • @melissavalentinereadablemv1222
    @melissavalentinereadablemv1222 4 роки тому +95

    Thank you! All the outlining videos are for novels. I needed something for short stories, because I want to master that. It would be awesome if you had a generic, printable version of this outline that we could all use.

  • @alexandriakotsifas
    @alexandriakotsifas 3 роки тому +38

    its so difficult to find straightforward and genuinely helpful advice for writing on youtube. Thanks for this!!

  • @FrancisGo.
    @FrancisGo. Рік тому +7

    I didn't expect this level of writing wisdom. This is probably the best single piece of advice I've ever gotten on the process.
    But I did get other great advice over the course of years.

  • @SportsBoss999
    @SportsBoss999 6 місяців тому +13

    FACINATING! In under 10 minutes you taught me more about writing a short story - learning how to build characters, conflict and transformation - than I have from anyone else so far. Using an example like you did perfectly illustrated these elements of creating a successful short story. I'm 68 years old, but I've been haunted by a short story class I took in high school. I had to write a short story for the final grade, and I received a good grade for it. But personally, I was very disappointed in myself. I thought my ending was horrible and a cop-out. I have pretty good writing skills but it's bothered me for a very long time because in my mind, my creation fell "short" you might say, of my expectations and confidence I had for this project. I think your clear and encouraging video will give me the motivation to try again. Thank you for this video. Well done!!

    • @ficheye00
      @ficheye00 15 днів тому

      I thought so, too.

  • @spricegtr
    @spricegtr 2 роки тому +23

    This is really a fantastic lesson. In a lot of books, blogs, and videos, people talk about what the different elements are but in an abstract way. The concrete examples you give in this really make the concepts clear. I had several aha moments here. Thanks.

  • @helenstuart6277
    @helenstuart6277 2 роки тому +15

    This is what I've been needing. I'm going to watch this over and over because I have ADHD and I need to incorporate this genius lesson into my writing today.

  • @ashtonjaymes6133
    @ashtonjaymes6133 3 роки тому +76

    This was really helpful. I took notes while you're talking. I think for my very first short story I will use your priest scenario as a prompt :) thank you so much! My 2021 goal is to write 2 short stories per month for the whole year.

  • @JoeyPaulOnline
    @JoeyPaulOnline 4 роки тому +23

    Great tips! I've never been able to write a short story but may give this a go!

  • @justinstorm
    @justinstorm 18 днів тому +1

    bro dropped a banger and dipped
    hit us with that somebody that you used to know 🎶

  • @tysonpop19
    @tysonpop19 4 місяці тому +1

    I couldn't think of anything to write for a project and this helped me sooo much with the brainstorming process! thank you so so much for the help.

  • @jessemusic606
    @jessemusic606 3 роки тому +5

    Thanks! This really helps with writer's block. Anyone can think of a simple character, and the rest is intuitive. It makes writing seem less daunting with a simple outline.

  • @treborschafer3945
    @treborschafer3945 3 роки тому +5

    It is good advice, very relieved to recognise everything you just said in the story I have just written.
    I am still a fledgling story writer after years of dabbling so I am a bit unsure, but I seem to have picked up something over the years.

  • @rachelgregory9439
    @rachelgregory9439 Рік тому +2

    I use these videos all the time in my creative writing class. They are so super helpful with showing my students all the nuances as well as the mechanics of creative writing.

  • @thekyngsqueen
    @thekyngsqueen 3 роки тому +1

    This has been the best outline video I've seen so far… straight to the point. Thank you

  • @FOFPress
    @FOFPress Рік тому +1

    Well done. I've been looking for short story guidance and this is the first time I've found anything specific and helpful. I think I'll use your scenario as a writing exercise. I found a doozie of a way to double the irony!

  • @chaitanyakanoriaofficial
    @chaitanyakanoriaofficial 2 роки тому +3

    I enjoyed learning from you. I could sense a compassionate human being in you. Thanks for bringing yourself out for everyone 🙏😊

  • @Anthony-gq7dk
    @Anthony-gq7dk 3 роки тому +9

    Sydney ! Wow , what a presentation. Clear, concise and full of brilliant information and ideas. Easily as good as I have seen, heard or read. The ideas and how they rolled and changed with each plot twist would entice anyone to take up the craft. If you are a teacher, you are surely a great one, if not, you could easily be one ! Keep the videos coming , seems as if you have many talents in spades. Very best wishes. Anthony - a teacher !

  • @newtoatheism5968
    @newtoatheism5968 3 роки тому +5

    I’m dipping my pencil into short stories to unload my brain of novel ideas that could pose a threat to my current novel

  • @user-bn1wb1bo6p
    @user-bn1wb1bo6p Рік тому

    Thank you! I've been writing scenes not stories, I knew something was off. The transformations have not been happening, and that's the challenge for me. Look at me transforming :). Thanks for what you do!

  • @njsmooth83
    @njsmooth83 Рік тому

    The best short story outline on UA-cam!!

  • @juliepousson1348
    @juliepousson1348 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you! This was exactly what I needed!

  • @niapri
    @niapri 3 роки тому +2

    Thank you! This is so helpful, I have been struggling with plot so much lately and never thought of it like this.

  • @depressedtv
    @depressedtv Рік тому

    Great, simple, clear, and actionable advice! Thank you!

  • @klleptic
    @klleptic 4 місяці тому +1

    This was super helpful to listen to and such a clear story example to help illustrate your points!

  • @philihareg
    @philihareg 3 роки тому +1

    Very insightful; thank you! One of the best videos I have seen on the subject. Deserves more views and likes.

  • @yuvrajkol9392
    @yuvrajkol9392 3 роки тому +1

    thank you so much, it really helped me to get a better sense of plot line.

  • @mistbornallomancer3575
    @mistbornallomancer3575 3 роки тому +2

    This was so very helpful. Thank you!! ❤

  • @dianacrossman6740
    @dianacrossman6740 Рік тому

    Working up the courage to write my first. Love the transformation idea, I think I got it!

  • @lamarquentin2833
    @lamarquentin2833 3 роки тому

    definitely the very best I've seen recently! love it! 谢谢你!

  • @1blackfrend
    @1blackfrend 3 роки тому +1

    Great job and thank you for the advice.

  • @retrospaceangel_
    @retrospaceangel_ 3 роки тому +30

    Hi Syd. I'm doing a short story assignment for a college course and this video was so helpful! Your video just clicked (: Definitely subscribing. Thank you

    • @sydneyhegele
      @sydneyhegele  3 роки тому +5

      That's amazing! I'm so glad I could help. Thanks for watching :)

  • @Tibicena
    @Tibicena 2 роки тому +1

    Thanks a lot! It's helped me a great deal to organise my plots!!!

  • @mariaager1924
    @mariaager1924 3 роки тому +2

    That was actually very helpful! Great Info!!

  • @katevenhorst1723
    @katevenhorst1723 2 роки тому

    MASSIVELY helpful. Thank you so much!

  • @gracefulabundance
    @gracefulabundance 3 роки тому +2

    This was clear and succinct . I want to watch it again and have subscribed to see if I can learn more. Thanks.

  • @AnnaP-xj2ou
    @AnnaP-xj2ou 3 роки тому +11

    I haven't found a lot on plotting short stories so this video was super helpful!

    • @Whimm454
      @Whimm454 2 роки тому

      im your biggest fan i love lab 7 part 4 thk you

  • @cegegacuhi7189
    @cegegacuhi7189 3 роки тому +2

    Very precise and well presented Thank a lot

  • @lorenylima6582
    @lorenylima6582 Рік тому

    thank you so much! You're the first writer to explain it to me so on point!

  • @mattsager914
    @mattsager914 Рік тому

    Super helpful! Answer a few simple questions and you're on your way!

  • @stefanienici
    @stefanienici 9 місяців тому

    I recently published my first short story and love what you are saying.

  • @Fitplusfate
    @Fitplusfate 3 роки тому +4

    Great tips and very straightforward. Thankyou, now I can imagine how my characters to be and my story would be. 🤣🤣🤣

  • @Anonymouse2699
    @Anonymouse2699 3 роки тому

    This is great! Thank you!

  • @emorywhitehair1341
    @emorywhitehair1341 3 роки тому +1

    That was very simple and easy to understand. Thank you!

  • @cer0s
    @cer0s 3 роки тому +1

    Thanks! Your explanations are excellent. Subscribed

  • @nyoomyum
    @nyoomyum 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you so much this was very helpful !!

  • @DC-sk8jr
    @DC-sk8jr Рік тому

    Thank you so much for this video. I'm trying to write short stories, but haven't found an outline that works. YOurs gives me enough anchors to create a solid short story without having too many steps (I'm a pantser). and shutting down my brain. Better yet, there's nothing to memorize since you can understand how and why the progress works.

  • @maddiem763
    @maddiem763 3 роки тому

    Thank you so much this was really helpful!

  • @bcreed9348
    @bcreed9348 3 роки тому +5

    Thanks for the logical and simple framework suggestions. I've written poems and essays but I struggle with narrative writing. But guess what, in order to express some ideas I have, I really need to learn to write stories. Do you offer critique services? Thank you. Keep posting.

  • @iamjulia_od
    @iamjulia_od Рік тому

    Thank you so so much! So excited to binge your videos!

  • @punkv6739
    @punkv6739 2 роки тому

    This helped me so much! I hope to see more videos of yours soon! God Bless! 😊

  • @patriceduval1722
    @patriceduval1722 3 роки тому

    Amazing and with a keen insight into human nature

  • @mm277hb
    @mm277hb Рік тому

    i love it!! great structure with many possibilities.

  • @MeOfcourse12
    @MeOfcourse12 3 роки тому +2

    Thank you for being so succinct.

  • @Eternal-Student
    @Eternal-Student 2 роки тому

    Honestly, you are way better than others in this topic. You even wear a hat to match your picture. Thank you 😘

  • @PBCurtis
    @PBCurtis 2 роки тому

    Great information on short story outline, just what I needed, thank you

  • @diannewilliams1585
    @diannewilliams1585 3 роки тому +1

    Thanks Syd. You make it look effortless. After watching a few videos (aka #procrastination) I learned nothing useful until stumbling on your channel. Thank you. :)

  • @bigheartedgal833
    @bigheartedgal833 3 роки тому +1

    Really nice. Thank you.

  • @Shapelander
    @Shapelander 3 роки тому

    Great tips. I think I'll try these out today

  • @jarrodholcomb4535
    @jarrodholcomb4535 3 роки тому +1

    Great video, very well done.

  • @juliar.9811
    @juliar.9811 Рік тому

    I love the way you broke it down! Thank you :D

  • @kingedwards9561
    @kingedwards9561 2 роки тому +1

    Great job, think this was the most helpful video I've seen about plotting short stories, you get all the thumbs up :)

  • @jeffpaolino5171
    @jeffpaolino5171 3 роки тому +1

    Super helpful thank you!

  • @negativenumber
    @negativenumber Рік тому

    This is the best explination I've ever seen on this topic. Thank you!

  • @victorarnez7250
    @victorarnez7250 Рік тому

    Wonderful! Thank You very much!

  • @mudiagaoneil1384
    @mudiagaoneil1384 7 місяців тому

    I will try to use your plot structure. Thank you for sharing!❤

  • @arzumardalieva3874
    @arzumardalieva3874 6 місяців тому

    This is so clear and useful! I’m grateful! 🙏🏻

  • @HawkIjr
    @HawkIjr Рік тому +1

    Looks like you have got your 100 sub x 10, very well done! (almost x 20, keep it up) I like how easily you started with the one counter trait, and it snowballed into two just for that fact that stealing kind of go hand in hand. The bonus was when you added the part where the main char got away with it. Makes a great lead in to having a church official finding the accounting error, and the main char goes from the frying pan into another one! Best of luck in your writing, and thank you for sharing. I'm taking a writing course atm, and I think your outline technique is going to help with my first assignment!

  • @e.h.7482
    @e.h.7482 2 роки тому

    Thank you! This helped me a lot!

  • @thekid_younghoudini5733
    @thekid_younghoudini5733 2 роки тому

    This was so helpful. Thank you

  • @ASMRASCENDING
    @ASMRASCENDING 3 роки тому

    Thank you so much for your wisdom! :)

  • @RaviGhai
    @RaviGhai 3 місяці тому

    Thanks ... Awesome and God Bless !

  • @GPlaysCustodio
    @GPlaysCustodio 3 роки тому

    Thanks for the video. Loved it

  • @Ghritke
    @Ghritke 8 місяців тому

    This video is really awesome and I have rewatched it several times now. Well done

  • @basicallydeadbooks000
    @basicallydeadbooks000 3 роки тому

    This was soooooooo helpful thank you!

  • @TamaraWang
    @TamaraWang 2 роки тому

    Thank you this was sooo helpful!

  • @liviemillie6455
    @liviemillie6455 2 роки тому

    Thank you. I am really stuck on this.

  • @ricounknow6275
    @ricounknow6275 11 місяців тому

    Incredible, thanks!

  • @sanjay9300
    @sanjay9300 Рік тому

    I loved your video's narration, content, your style, your liveliness, AND that the video was of a very convenient duration. Will look forward to more such.

  • @devorahfriedlander9139
    @devorahfriedlander9139 3 роки тому

    Great video! Thanks Syd! :)

  • @sharelle7307
    @sharelle7307 2 роки тому

    That was so helpful. Thank you.

  • @kelsekaak8588
    @kelsekaak8588 3 роки тому

    Awesome video 🙏 thank you

  • @ambrosekelly3616
    @ambrosekelly3616 3 місяці тому

    This is so great!

  • @Baba6782
    @Baba6782 5 місяців тому

    Thanks for the advice ✨️ that was the cutest outro everrrr ❤

  • @kalinakubiniok5695
    @kalinakubiniok5695 Рік тому

    Thank You! What an awesome lesson! :)

  • @tmc1373
    @tmc1373 7 місяців тому

    EXCELLENT! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

  • @hisalexness8478
    @hisalexness8478 Рік тому

    That is excellent advice!

  • @jupiter4334
    @jupiter4334 Рік тому

    This has helped me so so much, thank you!!!

  • @NhiNhi-rn2zo
    @NhiNhi-rn2zo Рік тому

    It's absolutely brilliant. Thank u so much.

  • @chandralalcolombage5324
    @chandralalcolombage5324 3 роки тому

    Very good. Excellent tips

  • @jardinekelso
    @jardinekelso 2 місяці тому

    Excellent. Thank you

  • @kripa136
    @kripa136 3 роки тому +7

    I’ve always struggled with short stories cause I’ve always told myself I’m bad at English, and normally I’d write the same story in different versions. This video really inspired me to try harder tysmm!! Also do u have any tips on how to write a short based on a prompt or stimulus (within 40min and word limit of 430 words)

  • @Oli_Mili
    @Oli_Mili Рік тому

    Thank you, this video is really good and on-point!

  • @oneilanelson9231
    @oneilanelson9231 3 роки тому

    Great tips, great plot. I'm stealing it lol. Congrats, you're at 500 subs now 👍
    Oh I forgot to say, SUBBED

  • @advicebynaketha5567
    @advicebynaketha5567 8 місяців тому

    Thank you for the examples. They are helpful. ❤❤❤❤

  • @keenanwalker-mr2co
    @keenanwalker-mr2co 5 місяців тому

    Thank you..very informative..

  • @E5000E
    @E5000E Рік тому

    such a clear explanation, thanks :)

  • @niamscookery3442
    @niamscookery3442 3 роки тому

    Great example !

  • @davemampel
    @davemampel Рік тому

    I'll give it a shot. Good ideas!

  • @stefanienici
    @stefanienici 9 місяців тому

    You certainly surpassed your goal of one hundred subs. Congratulations! You deserve it.