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In your revised sentence, "After breakfast, we got ready and went out," you're just telling. In the original author's paragraph, s/he is showing. Generally speaking, showing is better, but not always. A good author knows when to use one over the other.
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The story only consists of actions - this is how reading Tolkien felt to me 😅
In your revised sentence, "After breakfast, we got ready and went out," you're just telling. In the original author's paragraph, s/he is showing. Generally speaking, showing is better, but not always. A good author knows when to use one over the other.