Know When to Quit [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Dark / Slice of Life)

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  • Опубліковано 25 жов 2024
  • Oh RD... You're always the subject of some of the most interesting stories... P:
    I want to give a very special thanks to Dusk-Spark for helping me with this one. He lent his voice for this one and drew the awesome art you see in this one. Make sure to check him out!
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    "Know When to Quit"
    Written by Konseiga
    Narrated by TheLostNarrator
    With Special Guest VA Dusk-Spark
    / @dusk-spark
    MP3 Download:
    www.mediafire.c...
    Summary:
    There's one particular pony who is unaccustomed to defeat. She has never backed down, never given up, and always plowed on through adversity with a shining determination. Even when detained and questioned about her friends whereabouts and actions, Rainbow Dash remains steadfast, loyal, and never knows when to quit.
    Artwork in video provided by Dusk-Spark
    dusk-spark.devi...
    Artwork in Thumbnail:
    game-beatx14.de...
    Music From:
    www.incompetech.com
    Lichtträger - Don't Fade Away
    • Don't Fade Away (Origi...
    #mlp #mylittlepony #mlpfanficreading

КОМЕНТАРІ • 248

  • @blaa6
    @blaa6 10 років тому +118

    A dark fic with a happy ending? How refreshing.

  • @SnoopyStallion
    @SnoopyStallion 10 років тому +83

    now that´s what I call loyalty. willing to die for your friend who deals obviously with the wrong pony´s but still loyal to death. awesome story

  • @ScribblerProductions101
    @ScribblerProductions101 10 років тому +120

    I think this may actually be your best reading to date. Also, major props to Dusk Spark for getting the intonations and inflections just right to make his two characters very distinctive. If you hadn't listed his name at the beginning, I would have thought it was two different VAs.

    • @Dusk-Spark
      @Dusk-Spark 10 років тому +9

      : D
      ...If you could only see, the huge smile I have on my face right now.

    • @purplepartytiger7621
      @purplepartytiger7621 7 років тому +3

      I got chills listening to this one. Definitely one of the best. :)

    • @NiteSteel000
      @NiteSteel000 2 роки тому

      are you subbed?

  • @stormchaser4249
    @stormchaser4249 10 років тому +38

    This was good. Never thought that Applejack would get a loan from the mob. Its amazing how Rainbow Dash will still stay loyal to her friends, even in the face of death. This is why she's my favorite pony. Nice work, Lost.

  • @fattyandboxmonster3457
    @fattyandboxmonster3457 10 років тому +131

    Lee Jenkins
    Roy Jenkins
    Leeroy Jenkins...... and that's where I fell on the kitchen floor laughing hysterically

    • @M4SOPMODII
      @M4SOPMODII 9 років тому +6

      You too?
      LEEEERROOOY JENKINNNSS!!!

    • @walkingonmusic6580
      @walkingonmusic6580 8 років тому +3

      XD😂

    • @comradewolfdog8171
      @comradewolfdog8171 8 років тому +4

      Yea when I heard they're names I knew it was familiar but I didn't know why

    • @calumbutler2871
      @calumbutler2871 7 років тому +3

      TheArtOfDragons 121 RICK! WTF WHY OUR YOU HEAR!!!!???? WHY THIS DIMENSION!

    • @ryeregular
      @ryeregular 4 роки тому

      LOL

  • @WebkinzWolfPackTv
    @WebkinzWolfPackTv 10 років тому +58

    Now this...this is true loyalty. Probably the best fic I've ever listened to.

  • @sournote8610
    @sournote8610 8 років тому +57

    I loved that ending. Badass Applejack to the rescue! xD

    • @amyahueuwu7433
      @amyahueuwu7433 8 років тому +2

      ikr. I listened to this like 20 times tbh cx

    • @michaelmiles9959
      @michaelmiles9959 3 роки тому +2

      So did I.

    • @gren8te319
      @gren8te319 3 роки тому +1

      aj saved scootaloo from rainbow in "if i can't have my dream" but rainbow had to save the cmc from aj in "apple sleep experiment"

  • @pinkdracula3681
    @pinkdracula3681 10 років тому +7

    I lol'd at the Leroy Jenkins reference. Lee and Roy, the Jenkins brothers. Kinda clever.

  • @applejack9852
    @applejack9852 8 років тому +30

    AJ the superwomen! XD

  • @furnacealexander8478
    @furnacealexander8478 7 років тому +10

    It's always RD getting some sort of abuse.

  • @ashley-fh2tg
    @ashley-fh2tg 7 років тому +7

    Lee and fricking Roy Jenkins...you know what this means!!!
    LEEEROOOYYYJENKINSSSS

  • @sethragrey9651
    @sethragrey9651 9 років тому +9

    now, THAT'S true friendship

  • @deathalchemist9484
    @deathalchemist9484 9 років тому +6

    You're good at these dark fics.

  • @zoeyschneider4014
    @zoeyschneider4014 8 років тому +10

    Loyalty is a promise kept

  • @sylviegaming697
    @sylviegaming697 9 років тому +11

    That was awesome I thought rainbow dash was going to die😱 and then at the end applejack came and rescue her and I was like yay 🙌

    • @raritygenerosity7041
      @raritygenerosity7041 4 роки тому +2

      When I first saw this I got so scared that I thought rainbow dash was going to die I didn't see the end yet.

  • @deadlyreg
    @deadlyreg 10 років тому +12

    Apples do not need crop rotation! That's only for annuals like grain!
    However your sound effect work was excellent.

    • @nekonyancer4707
      @nekonyancer4707 10 років тому +8

      You don't know that! For all you know, Equestrian apple trees need to be completely uprooted and moved somewhere else every few years for maximum crop yields! They did it with Bloomberg! :D

  • @ciiath
    @ciiath 7 років тому +5

    Finally one that has a happy ending, such a miracle!

  • @beatbrony3766
    @beatbrony3766 10 років тому +6

    Great story and cast, As always! Keep up the good work!

  • @steveistar6558
    @steveistar6558 10 років тому +11

    Amazing fanfic. Plz plz plz keep it up. I love your voice and stories.
    Love Johan

  • @peppwoni259
    @peppwoni259 7 років тому +3

    I wanna watch all of your videos right now so at once! I'm so excited!

  • @ashley-fh2tg
    @ashley-fh2tg 6 років тому +6

    THIS WAS MADE IN 2014!?
    GEEZ, I REMEMBER WHEN THIS FIRST CAME OUT!
    oh how time has past

  • @jenniferbalducci3401
    @jenniferbalducci3401 8 років тому +33

    Why always rainbow?!?!?

    • @timberstroke4128
      @timberstroke4128 8 років тому +8

      Jennifer Balducci heres your answer
      Rainbow factory 😡

    • @thegamemaster4452
      @thegamemaster4452 8 років тому +1

      yeah

    • @ChevybA-uu7wq
      @ChevybA-uu7wq 7 років тому +1

      Slamander Roar there's two of them I swear

    • @timberstroke4128
      @timberstroke4128 7 років тому

      Chevyb2004 A what's the second

    • @ChevybA-uu7wq
      @ChevybA-uu7wq 7 років тому

      Slamander Roar I meant rainbow factory dash and rainbow dash 2 not 1.

  • @lightningwing8962
    @lightningwing8962 10 років тому +7

    Wanna have a good life?!
    Don't be rainbow dash is a fanfic!

  • @gren8te319
    @gren8te319 3 роки тому +3

    12:06 cherries kinda look like teeny apples, so it's kinda fitting for the apples to grow such a similar food with such similar uses

  • @delayedhome
    @delayedhome 9 років тому +5

    And then THEY DIED!!! The end
    But seriously, I really enjoyed this :)

    • @raritygenerosity7041
      @raritygenerosity7041 4 роки тому

      Okay you guys are making me very confused I don't know if rainbow dash and Applejack are going to die or not just gonna have to see myself

    • @raritygenerosity7041
      @raritygenerosity7041 4 роки тому

      Ues they made it out alive

  • @sunwinds
    @sunwinds 9 років тому +7

    Atleast this one has a happy ending! :D

    • @Ieatpaste23
      @Ieatpaste23 9 років тому +2

      True, after all Rainbow Dash only gets killed by her nearest and dearest, not a couple of thugs.

  • @JacobMKeeneAKADrPepperKing
    @JacobMKeeneAKADrPepperKing 9 років тому +3

    This is a very interesting story, and you did a great job on the reading too!

  • @venomdash0339
    @venomdash0339 5 років тому +1

    That's awesome, I've never seen Applejack so badass and serious, screw you Roy

  • @spiritintosound865
    @spiritintosound865 8 років тому +2

    The click of the AJ's gun first made me think misfire, because that would have been golden. The original way things worked out was still good though.

  • @magimaldonado5775
    @magimaldonado5775 9 років тому +6

    Dark fic with a happy ending, yup Drak fic always need happy endings

  • @duden1ce485
    @duden1ce485 4 роки тому +2

    14:24 Idk why but the way he read that line had me dying. XD

  • @mahmoud6218
    @mahmoud6218 4 місяці тому

    So glad we got a fic where no one dies at the very least.

  • @minecraftwolf45
    @minecraftwolf45 10 років тому +2

    Duh duh duh duh! The Atom family! B3
    Good job, Lost!

  • @kingsombra4053
    @kingsombra4053 8 років тому +4

    Funny how apple jack could have asked Celestia for money

  • @TheSwordofFlames
    @TheSwordofFlames 10 років тому +1

    *Click* "If you're wise..."
    Me: OH SHIT!!! SHE'S PISSED NOW!!!

  • @creamykun7278
    @creamykun7278 7 років тому +4

    Imagine if the element of honesty was in the chair

  • @birdiebubbles6927
    @birdiebubbles6927 8 років тому +2

    Lee Roy Jenkins… really XD Great job though!!!!

  • @amyahueuwu7433
    @amyahueuwu7433 8 років тому +4

    Omg. I absolutely love this~!!!!

  • @webshoter
    @webshoter 10 років тому +16

    *phew* Amazing work Lost. ^_^

  • @sandsandlovesand3181
    @sandsandlovesand3181 8 років тому +6

    Lee and Roy Jenkins?
    *inhales*
    LEE ROOOOOYYYYYY
    *_JEEEEENKIIIIINS_*

    • @calumbutler2871
      @calumbutler2871 7 років тому +2

      SAND SAND LOVE SAND after that she collapses on the floor

  • @Dusk-Spark
    @Dusk-Spark 10 років тому +6

    Now, everyone, come sit by the fireplace. I have a story to tell you~
    It was a long, long time ago... like, almost yesterday!
    It all started after my weekly fight against an army of ninja gryphons. It was when a wild Losty appeared! I had passed their great test! A test that many take, but so few pass, even fewer come back sane. I was allowed to draw for them.
    But, I let my guard down, and one of the fallen ninjas turned into a bat. He threw poison darts at me with his bat/ninja magic. I realized, that I had little time to complete my task. I could've given up, I could've fallen and vanished into the realm of fail.
    ......
    BUT I SAID "NO!" With my soul ablaze with righteous fury and channeling the soul of manliness itself; I picked up my pen, and started to draw! It was more than just another test, IT WAS A BATTLE AGAINST TIME, WILL, AND FATE! AND, I, DUSKY THE MAGNIFICENT, WAS GOING TO BE THE ONE WHO COMES OUT ON TOP!
    The battle was long and brutal. It was one of the most difficult tasks I've ever faced, I'd lost my mind within moments, my bones ached as if they'd been aged several years, my body and minded demanded that I sit down and rest. To combat the battle within, I brewed a nice, warm, cup of tea....... AND THEN SPLASHED IT IN MY FACE! THE BURN REMINDED ME THAT I HAD STUFF TO DO!
    In the end... I survived. Against all odds, I succeeded where others have failed. I'll never forget everything that happened. All the friends I made, all the friends I lost, all the foes I have slain, all the things I could've done; everything lead up to there, and I won, at long last, I finally fell into a deep slumber, until the time where I am needed once more.
    My last thoughts: "What will I do now? Will I ever truly be the same? I don't know, but I know this much... I regret NOTHING!"
    And that, dear friends, is the tale of how I finished up the artwork for this.
    The good news, I eventually did find my mind. : )

  • @cathyjohnson8825
    @cathyjohnson8825 8 років тому +15

    came here after watching "if i cant have my dream,you cant either"so now i dont care what they do to dash

    • @idkanymore1410
      @idkanymore1410 8 років тому

      came after watching "CupCakes

    • @whispertheshiba5976
      @whispertheshiba5976 8 років тому

      +Cathy johnson omg I found this one after listening to "if I can't have my dream, you can't either" too

    • @tarynschellvanotterloo8188
      @tarynschellvanotterloo8188 8 років тому

      I did too. That last one really broke my spirit.

    • @timberstroke4128
      @timberstroke4128 8 років тому +1

      Rainbow factory

    • @lightningwolfmusic7341
      @lightningwolfmusic7341 8 років тому

      I came here after watching If I can't have my dream, You can't either too... At first I didn't care but, as time went on I forgot about it and I was hoping she wouldn't get hurt. XD

  • @pokewarrior4711
    @pokewarrior4711 10 років тому +1

    have to say this... "if that don't work, use more gun" -Dell C. aka the engineer

  • @pllmop
    @pllmop 9 років тому +9

    Lee and Roy Jenkins, LEEEEROOOOOY JENKINNNNNS

    • @calumbutler2871
      @calumbutler2871 7 років тому

      FoamDartFlinginDeath imagine if AppleJack came in saying that!

    • @pllmop
      @pllmop 4 роки тому

      Geovenox Funny how half a decade passes. This comment is from one of my early phases, lol

  • @randomgirl3288
    @randomgirl3288 9 років тому +2

    i love Roy's voice it's funny

  • @megananderson7454
    @megananderson7454 9 років тому +1

    Lee...Roy.....Jenkins brothers....LEEROY JEEEEEENKINS!

  • @777Rowen
    @777Rowen 6 років тому +2

    Spooky. 😱 but I really liked the ending though, and the story was great too. 😆

  • @superlemonsama8794
    @superlemonsama8794 10 років тому +6

    11:10
    Peaches.
    They should grow peaches.
    Peaches!
    OH MY GOD PEACHES JUST GROW PEACHES!!! D:<
    AH!

    • @puppyhowler
      @puppyhowler 10 років тому

      or pumkins! eggs! milk!

    • @sunshinecrystal2001
      @sunshinecrystal2001 5 років тому

      @@puppyhowler eggs and milk come from chickens and cows

    • @puppyhowler
      @puppyhowler 5 років тому

      @@sunshinecrystal2001 you can still grow them! just take good care of the animals!

    • @sunshinecrystal2001
      @sunshinecrystal2001 5 років тому

      @@puppyhowler they produce them not grow them producing and growing are very different things

    • @sunshinecrystal2001
      @sunshinecrystal2001 5 років тому

      @@puppyhowler you grow the animals not the stuff they produce themselves

  • @harveymartin98
    @harveymartin98 10 років тому +2

    that video was good I liked it and it was kinda funny too keep up the good work see you on your next video

  • @bernhardinek
    @bernhardinek 7 років тому +2

    Why did this make me cry?

  • @ExtinctTrain671
    @ExtinctTrain671 8 років тому +2

    Wow...... That was amazing. Enough said.

  • @PoppyTheSkyChlidren
    @PoppyTheSkyChlidren Рік тому

    SLAYED THE HAIR THUMBIAL

  • @SSj7Brokutanks
    @SSj7Brokutanks 10 років тому +1

    Alright lets do this. LEEROY JENKINS!!!!

  • @WolfX1120
    @WolfX1120 10 років тому +4

    wow this was good... very cool job keep it up /)

  • @crazymc98
    @crazymc98 10 років тому +5

    This was great!

  • @modderbad
    @modderbad 6 років тому +3

    This was amazing!!

  • @CrowbornChaos
    @CrowbornChaos 6 років тому +2

    Leeroy Jenkins! Lee and Roy, the Jenkins brothers.

  • @venomdash0339
    @venomdash0339 Рік тому +1

    LEEROY JENKINS! I GET IT!

  • @hailleejordan7815
    @hailleejordan7815 8 років тому +1

    lol listening to this with my pup by my side and every gunshot she at up barked and then
    went back to slerp

  • @burge2058
    @burge2058 10 років тому +2

    I think this was great reading and you should defineltly do more. (Honestly I'm OK with grims but id really like it if you read more comedy or some stuff that's less heavy).

  • @bristar808
    @bristar808 9 років тому +2

    Yay finally I saw a happy ending!!

  • @rainbowtato1190
    @rainbowtato1190 9 років тому +2

    Cool fanfic :3

  • @sana-vx9rp
    @sana-vx9rp 8 років тому

    Am I the only one that just fucking died when we heard "Wake Up Bitch!" ? And when we heard "Listen to Me Bitch!" Sorry, I just.. I am just dying right now.
    Ahem Ahemememme, Amazing work! This was quite amazing~

    • @lilitpatchwork
      @lilitpatchwork 8 років тому

      The way he says it is quite funny XD

  • @reverb2516
    @reverb2516 10 років тому

    wow that was cool! very nicely done! and so very dark!

  • @lorraine7672
    @lorraine7672 8 років тому +2

    I loved that story so much!!!!!!!

  • @thewiseoldowl219
    @thewiseoldowl219 10 років тому +5

    One of them sounds a lot like mindless gonzo

  • @jasminelandosky9063
    @jasminelandosky9063 8 років тому +1

    THAT WAS AMAZING

  • @dawg065
    @dawg065 4 роки тому +1

    Family?
    You mean the pony Mafia.

  • @holyalexander1737
    @holyalexander1737 10 років тому +1

    This reminded me of decay by Thyrai. A really good sad fic. Involving Rainbow Dash getting really sick, i think you would like.

  • @psyberblueflame5482
    @psyberblueflame5482 8 років тому +2

    that was scary and amazing

  • @Hibiki1660z
    @Hibiki1660z 10 років тому +2

    Nice read

  • @lokiwasbored3355
    @lokiwasbored3355 10 років тому +1

    Great work loved it!

  • @nickkurtz512
    @nickkurtz512 9 років тому +2

    Is it odd that Roy's voice sounds like Dr. Wolf?

  • @ashley-fh2tg
    @ashley-fh2tg 7 років тому +3

    Hashtag APPLEDASH!

  • @pifflesomepuffnadder855
    @pifflesomepuffnadder855 5 років тому

    Jenkins brothers?
    ...RANGO REFERENCE?!

  • @dawizad3598
    @dawizad3598 7 років тому +2

    amazing!

  • @moonarrow1066
    @moonarrow1066 5 років тому

    9:15 RD is missing her wings. Run so hard they fell like the leaves? So devoted to ' not cheating ' ? Illustrator's forgetfulness? WHO THE BUCK KNOWS~~?!

  • @lailablanchard4484
    @lailablanchard4484 9 років тому

    It would have taken 1 sight of a gun for a very well discribed disruption of the exact location of applejack.

  • @TheNachoKat
    @TheNachoKat 10 років тому +2

    LEEEEEEEEEROOOY JEEEEEENKIIIIIIIIINS!

    • @jvttblvck103
      @jvttblvck103 9 років тому +1

      Chan dat face thou thou xD know who I am?

  • @iamkibab
    @iamkibab 9 років тому +1

    Aww man... love this XD

  • @civndman
    @civndman 7 років тому +2

    If the eventually will kill you anyway don't tell them any thing

  • @isabellastar2902
    @isabellastar2902 9 років тому

    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She doesn't actually die this time!

  • @apocalypseinferno6666
    @apocalypseinferno6666 7 років тому +2

    first think i dat came to my mind bout the to voices was Sans and papyrus

  • @darianhaynes3465
    @darianhaynes3465 10 років тому

    Not dark like cupcakes, but still a really go fanfic!! :)

  • @br7078
    @br7078 9 років тому

    dayum these VA's are amazing, nigga!
    Here, take my soul
    *hands over his soul to +TheLostNarrator*

  • @kacietaber1632
    @kacietaber1632 7 років тому +2

    awesome!

  • @micahgaming4022
    @micahgaming4022 7 років тому +4

    why is rainbow dash always the victim why her !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

  • @mysticgirlplaysnel1751
    @mysticgirlplaysnel1751 7 років тому +1

    that was good but if AJ had come a few seconds late Dash would be dead

  • @pifflesomepuffnadder855
    @pifflesomepuffnadder855 5 років тому

    guns?
    HOW WOULD THEY EVEN USE GUNS?!
    This finger less logic is driving e bonkers!!

  • @skylessadim
    @skylessadim 8 років тому +3

    LEE ROY JENKINNSSSSSSSS

  • @Twinklethefox9022
    @Twinklethefox9022 6 років тому +1

    Lee Roy jankens? Like the song?

  • @silverackerman394
    @silverackerman394 9 років тому

    Wait...Roy? Lee? Jenkins... -3- I know I am gonna say some thing people have said before...screw it let me kick the dead horse (um no pun intended)....
    LEEEEEEEEROY JEEEENKINS!!!!!

  • @juliannacarlson5158
    @juliannacarlson5158 9 років тому +1

    A pecan's not a nut! Your a nut!

  • @razzi1357
    @razzi1357 6 років тому +3

    LEE ROY JENKINS

  • @T.MCG.28061
    @T.MCG.28061 Рік тому

    How do they fire a revolver and How do they reload it? i could imagine they cock it back with their other hoove or their chest but it rises so many questions

  • @Babyblue13BC
    @Babyblue13BC 10 років тому +1

    I loved it sooo cute

  • @mauricemarsh4183
    @mauricemarsh4183 8 років тому

    wow that's was great!!

  • @Topdoggie7
    @Topdoggie7 2 роки тому

    Nobody else noticed that their named are Lee Roy Jenkins? I was cackling.

  • @wingandwang5634
    @wingandwang5634 9 років тому +1

    Do you know magpiepony or pegasispitch

  • @datchico3004
    @datchico3004 10 років тому +1

    Come on now, we all know that some of us will not die for our friends.... just think.

    • @pinkdracula3681
      @pinkdracula3681 10 років тому +6

      Though that may be true for some, we all know RD would be the first to die for her friends.

    • @faithm4151
      @faithm4151 10 років тому +1

      I would die for my friends

    • @faithm4151
      @faithm4151 10 років тому

      CM Punk
      :) (\

    • @lucasfalk8526
      @lucasfalk8526 10 років тому

      I wouldn't die for most of my friends but some are worth dying for.

    • @sakenandersson7315
      @sakenandersson7315 10 років тому

      lucas falk like the furher