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- ะะฟัะฑะปัะบะพะฒะฐะฝะพ 16 ะปะธั 2024
Bonus part: ua-cam.com/video/ZXBRAinTWAI/v-deo.htmlsi=CZDhaeHn2Z_-al1o
Donโt call it a trash it was different from other ffโs .I like it so much โค
Thank you :)
Don't say that it's not trash it's masterpiece please give us bonus part please i request you โค
Sure I will make one :)
@@Cheekee thank you ๐
I don't know how can tae love a girl who portray him as abuser so that he will take her with him. He literally lost his respect because of her. He have every right to resent her. I wish tae had another partner who cherish him. If the role reversed definitely everyone will bash the male lead. Pure discrimination.
Please make a bonus part of this please please I request you please ๐๐ฅบ
It would be stretched so much. I will see if I can make one :)
Ok as your wish ๐๐
Dude you don't even know how best you are... Just awsome... I'm not talking about your masterpieces but also youโค๐ keep it up๐
Thank you so much. This means a lot :)
i had read some of your ffs i loved all of them but i like this one also ,the thing about accusing wasn't good ,she should confess all her sins she did evnen its her childishness because crime is crime so it would be better if you show where yn confess her sin infront of everyone including tae's fiance because its not her fault nor her family's if not then guilt is a type of thing no matter how much you say sorry or ask forgiveness guilt will chase you for wholelife its just ff but in real its something you cant even imagine if mens had done this act so no one forgive them its my opinion not a bad comment and thankyou for this ff
I understand it's your opinion and thanks for reminding me I forgot to add the scene where Y/n tells Cassian to call Seoa and her father. She tells them what she did and how they got married. My bad I forgot to add it :)
It was just amazing โคโค
I am new to your channel but trust me after many days I am getting to watch something new. Totally loved it.
A BONUS for this FF would be cherry on cake
Welcome to my channel and thank you. I will surely make the bonus :)
@@Cheekee Glad to be here author โค๏ธโค๏ธ
@@shrutigawand ๐ค
It wasnt trash or anything girl but it just felt a little bit rushed. Yk it could have been an anxious ff for thrilling readers but as a person who loves things to be done fast without much drama I'm glad you made it a oneshot๐ค
Thank you and yes, it is rushed. I thought it would be stretched a lot if I wrote more :)
This was a very unique idea!! I totally fell in love with this one!! And also, DON'T CALL IT TRASH!! YOU ARE SOO TALENTED!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!
Thank you so much. This means a lot :)
Its not trash its amazing what Y/N did was wrong but as tae said he is addicted to her that's mean he loves her to and besides these little things were making him jealous like cassian giving her ice cream and not wanting her to wear Estelle's leftover he was just confused on the two thing what she did to her and what he wants
Yup and I rushed it to make it worse๐
@@Cheekee its not worse nor trash its amazing even if u rushed its fine u have more works to do and in rush u made a masterpiece what would've u done if it wasn't a rush omg
Phew I'm flattered ๐
I am stunned how talented you are the way you think,and narrated your imagination, truly mesmerising, really loved it it was something very unique,i appreciate your work โค
Thank you so much. I just tried my best to write something different. The number of praise I got today made me speechless. You guys are so lovely :)
Wow you wrote Beautifullyโคโค Thank you๐๐๐.. Keep โ๏ธ writing Dear
@@attavarraghavadivya132 Thank you :)
This is a masterpiece not a trash and your English grammar level is superb duperb ๐
Thank you so much. This means a lot :)
I cried when you written she closed her eyes remembering her mother's smiling faceโค
Even I did while writing it. I don't know why ๐ฅฒ
It was not trash
It was good
Thank you :)
I cried so much and don't call it trash it was great I loved it ๐โบ
Aww thank you ๐ฅบ
It was amaizingggg!!! But I wanna know how actually Tae reacted after her accident like did he cry? Like how he went to hospital for her , how his mother reacted , how he took care of her when she was unconsious & how he felt when she again ran away..how much he struggled to find her..like everything..can u make a bonus part abt it? It would be satisfying
Thank you. Yeah sure. Tomorrow I will upload the bonus :)
@@Cheekee Thank you so much โค
@@purpleswan1209 ๐ค
It wasn't a trash it made me cry as if this is the real story or an incident happened earlier......
Aww ๐ฅบ
Cassian was an helping angel for y/n
That was some damn good shit
how dare you call it trah huh!๐ก
thatwas a fvcking mater piece i damn loved it ๐โคโค๐
Thank you so much :)
@@Cheekee โคโค
It was rather a unique idea than trash lol... it can be made into a mini series where yn does her part and clears the fake allegations off his name... then love slowly rekindles between them... ๐๐ซ๐ cuz yeah the relationship between them is still fragile.. it would be nice to see them overcome such a bad memory and bond with each other (just my thoughts of what could be added.. its fine either ways ๐โจ๏ธ)
I wrote a bonus for it. You're right it could be a mini-series but anyways the bonus will fill the holes in it I hope so :)
This is soo good story line
Thank you :)
MASTERPIESE as always ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ lovwd it soooooooo much
Thank you so much :)
Why I'm crying ๐ญ
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I loved it. Pls don't say it is trash.๐
Thank you :)
Hey ๐The story line seemed similar to a (indian )hindi serial named imlie. First time i read this type of ff โค. Literally the first part was so similar.๐ฎ
I see. I never imagined it would be similar to serials :)
@@Cheekee ๐yes not one serial but 2 serials first one was imlie second is jhannak๐๐...
@@PriyankaMishra-tp4su Yup. First I got the comments of the second show and then you said this one :)
I don't know why I'm crying watching this masterpiece at 4 am if you don't mind answer this question why do I always cry for no reason
Then You're too sensitive. That's fine. You may be the type of person whose eyes well up just by reading or seeing any kind of deep words or emotional scenes :)
Thank you for replying โค๏ธโค๏ธ
@@itzprettygirl7777 My pleasure :)
Masterpiece
Thank you :)
Soooooooooo gooooooooddddddddddโคโคโคโค
Thank you :)
Oii, don't call it trash ๐ it's so good. I die to find something soooo good ๐ค๐ป๐( chef's kissie ). I really do appreciate ๐
Purple you authornim ๐< 33
Thank you so much. I just rushed it that's why I'm not satisfied with it :)
@@Cheekee ๐ค๐ nahh, it's good even though you have rushed ๐๐ป
@@Jiya_is_yuki0127 ๐ค๐ค
this type of story and plot is my favrtt..but i can hardly find it on YT..please make more stories like this in futureโค
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Oh I see. Sure I will make :)
Masterpiece ๐๐๐
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This is so good and nice story author ๐๐
I'm glad you liked it :)
I cried because of this ff and you are calling this trash ๐ค the audacity
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Well its not a trash but u could have make more affectionate part of yn and tae at the ending
Yup. I rushed the ending :)
@@Cheekee but it was awesome ok it's not any trash or something
@@AfrozaJeons Aww thanks :)
Don't tell like that. Because this is written by you. You have confidance on your work ok.
Thank you so much :)
Wowo this was something neww... I really like itt.. Will u upload part 2??
I will upload bonus tomorrow :)
It's so good ๐
Thank you :)
It's amazing
Thank you :)
Hey Author
It was really nice ff but if you don't mind can I ask something ? Is it inspired from Indian TV serial JHANAK which airs on Star plus coz it's really similar to it
Thank you. No, actually I'm not Asian so I don't know about Indian serials. :)
Amazing...๐โค
Glad you like it :)
As always you slay๐ฅ
It was beyond amazing.
Thank you so much :)
@@Cheekee ๐
I love all of your ff! But this one is kinda not my style
I see :)
@@Cheekee don't be sad! All your ff's are amazing! Beside we are human so it's Alright
@@donttalktome3962 No I understand. It depends on everyone's taste :)
Just amazing โค๐
Thank you :)
Sis don't say it is trash because it was amazing and different from other ff's. But can u make a bonus where Yn will confess her sin and ask for forgiveness infront of those villagers and her father as they still think Tae did something which he didn't and in the end they both end together.
Sure I will make a bonus :)
@@Cheekee Thank u so much for accepting my request and making a bonus sis๐ฅฐ
@@taeesta3080 Anything for my people ๐ค๐ค
@@Cheekee Aww๐ฅฐ๐
@@taeesta3080 ๐ค๐ค
You are the best โ๏ธ Borahae keep going keep writing
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@@Cheekee ๐ฅฐ
It's masterpiece ๐๐
Thank you :)
The hell miss ? You are calling this masterpiece a trash dare you to doubt on your skills โคโค i lovee itt i had tears when all this happened with herโคโค keep it up waiting for another masterpieceโค
I'm just way too insecure with my writings these days. Anyways thank you so much :)
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Hey author nim....how're you?btw i've another ff plot suggestion for u....
Can you make something like
His mother pressurize you on the first day of your marrige to get physical with him cause she wants a grandchild as early as possible but you both are almost like strangers cause you both were arranged to marry each other and u're not that comfortable with each other as you're just newly married...so, you took a stand for yourself. And as his mother raised her voice againt you, you also told her your points strictly that you need alteast two three months to get comfortable with him and know him because you were introvert all through your life and can't get along with anyone so soon...and hearing your convo with his mother he supported you and tried to make his mom understand things that you didnโt expect from him....then slowly you guyz get comfortable within a month
Will you make a beautiful story on this plot?
I'm good. How about you? Sure I will make it. The idea is amazing :)
@@Cheekee aw thank you๐ธ....and i'm doing well
@@IsratJahan-zs2ys Good and is it Tae ff or Jk?
@@Cheekee umm...i think tae will look good on this
@@IsratJahan-zs2ys Alright :)
Caught u in 7 minutes
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Yaa how dare u call it a trash its awesome hehee love ya๐
Thank you so much. I love y'all so much :)
Can you change the voice over to different voice??? Because it is not clear at all to listen
I will try to improve it. As for this ff it can't be changed now :)
This is Indian serial just different little
I see now I'm curious because I got 2 comments about it :)
you are one of my favorite authors ๐ your every single FF is amazing
Thank you so much ๐ค๐ค
amazing๐
Thank you :)
plss make the ff
Pardon?
In 10 min
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First ๐