You had me right up till you unleashed a small specialist navy team against a large invasive space faring force. Still, never stand in the way of some good fun fiction.
A high school story level of AI. The author does not know what reverse engineering means. A world wide invasion is not going to to be disrupted by so gurilla tactics and some small local communications interruptions. Why would they have a single command center for the entire invasion on earth, but even if it was not space based, well out of humans reach, they still couldn't be very covert at the aliens biggest, most secure base. The whole story was low on detail and reason. If the aliens already had control of the earth then the humans level of communication would be extremely limited and not be very effective. The aliens would own the sky's and there would not be any air extraction. At worst the aliens could bombard us from orbit without even resorting planet killer type weapons.
not a bad start until we got to navy seals, typical America saves the world, sorry to pee on your bonfire you might like to think America is great! but you have been lied to! there is a Whole world outside America that most American's don't know about, and that think America is not that great. Maybe you need to do a bit more research on the world outside of America. hopefully this will bring more depth to your stories.
@@jamespseaman4136 not at all, but come on! America saves the world all the time! that is so 1950's. hell history has proved it cannot fight or win wars on its own. take Iraq and Afghanistan, it needed its European Allies to help out there! think about it, the size of the American military! its huge! but even then i could not fight on its own, why was that? American's are told they the best of the best, they are number 1 for military might, yet the couldn't fight these wars by themselves? how come? they have the best military in the World! what a great chance to shut people like me up! by proving it? but alas, they couldn't. just like back in the 50's with operation sky shield a exercise to test its air defence sold to the American's that they could defend America in the cold war. Well that was until the RAF turned up and practiced Nuking America, in which the 8 Vulcan bombers of little old Britain did! American military thought is was a fluke, so the following year they had exercise sky shield 2! and the RAF done it again with only 8 Vulcans. funny how America hid that fact from the Americans for the next 50 years! so the all singing and dancing Navy seals save the World? yeah right! but we won't mention the SAS! that American seal teams were based off.
You had me right up till you unleashed a small specialist navy team against a large invasive space faring force. Still, never stand in the way of some good fun fiction.
Maybe try putting some characters in it so people can relate to them.
I just substitute any other spec ops group and press on.
A high school story level of AI. The author does not know what reverse engineering means. A world wide invasion is not going to to be disrupted by so gurilla tactics and some small local communications interruptions. Why would they have a single command center for the entire invasion on earth, but even if it was not space based, well out of humans reach, they still couldn't be very covert at the aliens biggest, most secure base. The whole story was low on detail and reason. If the aliens already had control of the earth then the humans level of communication would be extremely limited and not be very effective. The aliens would own the sky's and there would not be any air extraction. At worst the aliens could bombard us from orbit without even resorting planet killer type weapons.
Good start but kinda weak try harder…
not a bad start until we got to navy seals, typical America saves the world, sorry to pee on your bonfire you might like to think America is great! but you have been lied to! there is a Whole world outside America that most American's don't know about, and that think America is not that great. Maybe you need to do a bit more research on the world outside of America. hopefully this will bring more depth to your stories.
Sounds like sour grapes to me!
@@jamespseaman4136 not at all, but come on! America saves the world all the time! that is so 1950's. hell history has proved it cannot fight or win wars on its own. take Iraq and Afghanistan, it needed its European Allies to help out there!
think about it, the size of the American military! its huge! but even then i could not fight on its own, why was that? American's are told they the best of the best, they are number 1 for military might, yet the couldn't fight these wars by themselves? how come? they have the best military in the World! what a great chance to shut people like me up! by proving it? but alas, they couldn't. just like back in the 50's with operation sky shield a exercise to test its air defence sold to the American's that they could defend America in the cold war. Well that was until the RAF turned up and practiced Nuking America, in which the 8 Vulcan bombers of little old Britain did! American military thought is was a fluke, so the following year they had exercise sky shield 2! and the RAF done it again with only 8 Vulcans. funny how America hid that fact from the Americans for the next 50 years! so the all singing and dancing Navy seals save the World? yeah right! but we won't mention the SAS! that American seal teams were based off.
@@jamespseaman4136 do you think hes a frog, a red coat, a crout, a commie, or a squint?