I loved the first sound with the first copy i wouldnt of kept changing it i wouldve left it as an loop and with the drums and everything those are all great
Coming from a fellow mobile producer, this isn’t as bad as you could do, but there’s definitely places to improve on. The last note of the first bassline sounds a bit too short, like you’re cutting the line off. And the added instruments just sound out of key with each other, like they’re all fighting for ear-space. My suggestion would be to lengthen things a bit and make sure everything is in the same key/chord register :]
I think its good but look at making a B section where there is a different bassline, maybe even a different set of chords. Itll recolutionise your songwriting
This is actually pretty groovy and has a lot of potential. I'd recommend messing around with the gain on some instruments, for example the strings sort of overpower the brass. With time though I'm sure you'll be producing bangers in no time
Why are you saying this? Everyone starts as a noob. There is no bad judge needed. If you would do something that's new and you are unexperienced in it. There is always Improvements that are needed. I think this person did great. The pro's also still do improvements.
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the hit hat man that sounds so garageband like just shape it up more no 1 and 2 and 1 and 2 typa beat cmon unbreakable
I loved the first sound with the first copy i wouldnt of kept changing it i wouldve left it as an loop and with the drums and everything those are all great
Coming from a fellow mobile producer, this isn’t as bad as you could do, but there’s definitely places to improve on. The last note of the first bassline sounds a bit too short, like you’re cutting the line off. And the added instruments just sound out of key with each other, like they’re all fighting for ear-space. My suggestion would be to lengthen things a bit and make sure everything is in the same key/chord register :]
80s synthwave coming back. Very tron esque.
really good man keep it up
I think its good but look at making a B section where there is a different bassline, maybe even a different set of chords. Itll recolutionise your songwriting
Hey that's pretty good
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This is actually pretty groovy and has a lot of potential. I'd recommend messing around with the gain on some instruments, for example the strings sort of overpower the brass. With time though I'm sure you'll be producing bangers in no time
I mentioned in the title, it’s not even close to being done
@@Lemons6509 Ah whoops, didn't see that bit my bad ^^'
Adjust your velocity on all instruments! Sounds like they are at different volumes because of the pressure sensitive input when you play notes in
There’s a higher frequency in the bass that is harsh, for my ears at least, other than that there’s potential
every intro to retro style cyber movie showing an army of robots marching to the beat:
its fire
hi it’s me jaden from orchestra class
Ok
i dont know if i'm hearing it wrong, but some notes feel a little bit out of the grade
but it sounds nice overall
never produce again bruh 😭😭
Why are you saying this? Everyone starts as a noob. There is no bad judge needed. If you would do something that's new and you are unexperienced in it. There is always Improvements that are needed. I think this person did great.
The pro's also still do improvements.
@@YuukiSystems huh?
Bro, it literally says in the title it’s not done it’s just a little thing I decided to make.
Never comment again bruh 👽😭
reverb on everything makes it sound kinda messy.
Change the drums up more, add more sounds to the drums and patterns
@@strangeone7198 I’m aware there are many things wrong with this song. It was one of my first ever, but I am now making much better music.
Noice this sounds good
it's not bad, but there definetly is room for improvement, otherwise pretty middle of the road, and a way of showing that you're slowly improving
For some reason this sounds familiar
It kind of has the atmosphere of one nation Army

luvit!!!
Pretty nice!
Id just like to say reposting the same video 4 times to get 40 subscribers is cheating 😅
kinda goofy tbh but good
cool but ur using the same melody over and over again try adding some variations to it
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This isnt it
Here’s another one of my songs that you should definitely check out
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Get fl
Wat?
@@Lemons6509he's talking about fl studio but ur on mobile so not sure u can do that
@@steveyawesome there is such thing as fl studio mobile
@appleoflife7606 you don't know that fl studio mobile exists???