Well for being German you did a great job I liked this fanfic room in case you want to write more there is a website (it's also an app) that's called Wattpad you can write and read stories One Direction fan fictions are big
Recess so their in elementary school. You should have said free period, that sounds more like high school. Theres no recess in middle school or high school. We have electives. Good story though. Not trying to be rude in all. Just wanting to let you know. : )
one comment: a sneer is a neggative expression; it's sort of a disgusted look. I was so surprised when you said Anne sneered, but then when you said Louis sneered I realized you thought sneering was a positive expression.
![Say That You Need Me [One Shot]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/-ADKum55ZMk/mqdefault.jpg)
around 4:33 harry be like "so..nice meeting you?" and louis be like "Definitely" haha
7:02 im was like omfg and kept on saying WHAT WHAT
when they kiss at the first place i was just like shouting "BUT THEY JUST MET AND DOESNT EVEN KNOW EACH OTHER!" but then i realize "WELL ITS JUST OK"
Poor zayn me be like him he is my love and all others also
I love every one equally and I loved the story too😍😍😍
Kok Kklmmkll has roger the tho of no
7:41 yesssssssss omfg larry is larry af and niam is niam af!!!!!!
Zayn: VAS happein 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Wow for German you actually are good~!!! :)
Thank you :)
and im smiling like an idiot..this is so good😍👌
Well for being German you did a great job I liked this fanfic room in case you want to write more there is a website (it's also an app) that's called Wattpad you can write and read stories One Direction fan fictions are big
I really like your story!xx
#larrystylinson #niamhorayne
Plzz make more one shots 😇
I was Like Zayn!😂😂😂
But you all just met 👁👄👁
that was so good
I loved this! :D
love it u should make more
thank you :* we are glad that you like it
Richtig geiles Video
I love it
Hahaha Thx :*
Best end ever
HAROLD IS HARRY'S NICKNAME NOT HIS REAL NAME!! WHY DID TEACHER CALLED HIM WITH HIS NICKNAME
I was 15 when I wrote this 😂😂 i Dont even know Whats the Story about tbh hahaha
@@josystylinson3540 lmaoo
This escalated quickly
Aniya Brock people still Read my Storys? XD damn (let me say that both my english and storywriting is much better now)
Josy Stylinson
even for your first video I think it was amazing
Aniya Brock thank you !
Josy Stylinson
Your welcome
Recess so their in elementary school. You should have said free period, that sounds more like high school. Theres no recess in middle school or high school. We have electives. Good story though. Not trying to be rude in all. Just wanting to let you know. : )
one comment: a sneer is a neggative expression; it's sort of a disgusted look. I was so surprised when you said Anne sneered, but then when you said Louis sneered I realized you thought sneering was a positive expression.