AI generated story and it is a massive AI FAILURE. 5:20 an explosion in council chamber everything in chaos debris falling yet at 6:00 every one acting as nothing happened as the story looped back. story repeats the same phrases WAY too many times.
Too many questions, what is the thing, where did it come from, was it always there and activated, or something new brought with the diplomat. minus 10 points from griffendor'
plodding on and on and on and on and on. This was excruciating!
too much unecessary explanation of every action and thought
That's why you stop listening !
So he's the forgotten Titan, with a Titan standing ne t to him, even though he's the LAST Titan.....jeez.
I liked it😊
AI generated story and it is a massive AI FAILURE. 5:20 an explosion in council chamber everything in chaos debris falling yet at 6:00 every one acting as nothing happened as the story looped back.
story repeats the same phrases WAY too many times.
all talk and no action, also repeats and twist the words around to make it sound new.
Yaaaaawn!!!
please add chapters to your titles if not a complete story... like the story but like stories complete
Too many questions, what is the thing, where did it come from, was it always there and activated, or something new brought with the diplomat. minus 10 points from griffendor'
This is incomplete story period
We come in Peace.
So...explosions then nothing?
Is anything interesting going to happen in this story? When?
Another load of rubbish!!!
Do not waste your time
It started well. Then went to shit.
Tis story is fractured. It sounds like someone asked ChatGPT to create a story then published it before listening to it. Don't waste your time.
Come on, get to the point thats why have these stories are always a disappointment, I'm done another drag out story!
too mnay allusions ot things not resolved, poorly written attempt at creating mystery and menace without forking it over.
Literaly way to much explination and repition sorry but thumbs down on this
Same old crape over and over. So freaking out of boring