Every once and a while, I'll come back to listen to this. This song strikes a core in me every time because it always reminds me of what I will always be. You wanna know what that is? Alone. I've only one advice to give to those who still have a chance: Don't tread this road. It's a lonely one...
Came back to visit this track had it saved in favorites the nostalgia the beat just eveyrhing about it keep your heads up men and women love your kids be good and kind respect all 💯 💪 🙏
Untouchable flow you have shown me to know. I feel like I know what you know. But I'll never know what you know. I feel like I feel like you feel. But I'll never feel like you feel. Can ya feel me? Expressing the stress pressed on my chest so I can rest. The rest of the world is infused with pop influences. Confucius. Confusing. Using green to turn me into a floating machine. I just float through, baby, just float through. Light it up and pass it, breh.
I know life sucks, but that's okay, we will all get through this one day. Just roll one up, take a big puff, lay back, relax, and think how life reacts. Let the rain pour just Rollin another 4, spark it up, till it's lit, burnin real slow like this beat its sick.
WOW i dont wanna be disrespectful but I'm high, not trying to diss or anything so read on, that rap u just typed out was so inspirational i think I'm ready to give my life to god knowing that he's all i got in a world cruel
things will get better soon or a later wont they weve made it through two years of this i dont know how but we accomplished it no more lonely nights no more liying and cheating on every other night its just each other forever
we all feel we all do cry but wipe your tears your beautiful in my eyes you may hurt you may be having hard times its alright tho its only a matter of time when everything washes by all your pain fades away you'll have the strength to push on another day you just gotta wait keep ya head up man cause over n above all/all this was just your fate.
hey man this is amazing so much emotion comes to mind with it, its beyond words...anyway you could thow it up to download and let me throw some lyrics at it?
i spent ages rollin the same pages like time passed by payn no attention was just a kid dreaming..tommorow was a fact but now i think about it..and i wonder how long is it gonna last past..too many to say ..many ask ..i say..was ok ..great beat man
how come everything happens to // i just lost ma bestfrend i dnt kno wat happend we just went our seprate ways // now im wrighting her diz letter nd hope it makes things a lil better// it talks about how much i would miss her if she left// if she make up this dessition den i wish you thee best
we all gotta move, stay strong// cause the current of the wind, would put us where we dont belong// gatta stand up tall with our head held up high// living life by the day, and no matter how much tears we cry// things will only get better in the end go with the flow of life, and let things do what they tend// never let your dreams fade away in the wind// keep them strong in your heart, like you did when everything began
I agree, i pray on the inside for a better future. :-) I doubt it will happen, but it's a nice-thought in my opinion. If peace cannot be attained, then for the thought of it, i shall keep sustained, in my heart.
I have absolutely no rapping skills but I rapped this to the beat and it sounded awesome, if you could extend it I'd love to hear what it would sound like. If it was good I'm making a short film about a mafia organisation, and it would be awesome for the trailer.
I used this beat long time ago to a song people told me was one of the most emotional songs ever and it just got 1,000 views and here I am 4 years later. I'm gonna remaster my old version because all I used was a phone mic to record it all, but now I have connections to a studio to remake it.
How can I live with the thought that you thought you weren't good enough? You holding me back? No, you were pushing me ahead. Now all I can do is think about what will always be left unsaid. And even though I should push on, I feel now I lack the power. These sad thoughts, and hatred are eating me alive, they devour.
Nice Beat. I have complete lyrics and want to use the beat with full credit given to you and completely personal use, no commercial use. Will reply with vid when i've put the finishing touches on it. keep up the great work.
Im Feeling so lonely, used to have alot of friends, but they ended up turning phony, so i had to cut them out my life and keep it rolling, somebody i used to know, i guess thats a feeling im used to tho, people in and out of my life, memory fading Feels like a dream so im debating, if i should hold on or let go...
when I get lonely I know my God is beside me, I let him hold me closely for he is holy, the holy of holies, so i dont need to smoke weed or go out and roll E because i surrendered control, sold him my soul and he gave it right back to me anointed with oil thats why i'm faithful and loyal, prayerful and joyful careful to trust in only thy holy ghost, and thy cup overflows pick up the pieces to my life as I, develop relationship and fellowship with Jesus Christ
Everyday he speaks. Everyday I dream. Jesus is with me everyday he reminds me. To focus on what the Father is doing in Heaven. And then speak it believe it receive it the bread is unleavened. So I pick up my cup and fill it with the blood. Giving thanks to my master then I drink it up. Holy spirit keep speaking in me blast out the syllables. And every time he works God performs many miracles. The dying process I recommend to all. Dying to self ain't what I call a ball. It's a process to pay a price. But the wages of renewal is eternal life
have been my self in days.... just put on a sad beat and slowly start to drift away .. held in everything i needed to say... tried to play my part but found out life isnt play and now im just tryin to finda way to get her back in my life... cuz without her things just aint right... everytime we kissed i took flight and held on tight... i guess loves like war and i refuse to sit around and not fight
even with people around me i still feel alone, even when my parents say they love me i still feel dis owned , i know im not the only one but i feel like im the only one thats not doing whats right, why am i the only one ? it hurts deep inside when people expect you to be all that you can be but it hurts your self when you try to be everything that you can be and fail in the process and end up losing all hope for humanity.
these problems that we stress always get into our head. right now im so depressed n i live my life with dread. at the bottom of the crest, n in my head i said. 'in peace i wont rest but fuck it i'll be dead.' damn i miss her by my side. she was what gave me pride. now at anytime i cry. when she enters in my mind. i got the image of her eyes. and they're starin into mine. damn i fuckin hate this life. n whoever made up lyin..
Looking at the past I having these nightmare, see back in school I was known as another fool fighting, but them cunts never fought fare, my heart is beating and this life is deceiving but I march on knowing that this shit has made me strong, ive giving up pip and weed its been a year since ive had a bong fuck man has it really been that long, one of my brothers took his life and I dedicate this to his last song Im crying the tears of loneliness cause my brother is gone rip see you soon though
Waiting for the end, got nothing left, not even a friend to call my best, life sucks nothing more nothing less, everyday i live i live depressed, stress causing my chest to feel tightly pressed, one of these days i'm going to slit my throat at my desk, teachers think they know best, but they don't do shit but just give us tests, i feel so suppressed in this world of conquest, but i'm blessed that this life gave me a request, but i feel i just don't belong like you rest. I just can't digest.
@CheifinOn lets make from this beat for that mother a funeral now your gone and your child gonna hustle by his own have a sister to grow God we all pray give him straight to roll on keep your head up never let him down u gotta keep ur fist tight and smash that crowd you are the one i applaud!
Thanks that is nice of ya u are like a angle that has fallen dreaming of ball en trying to get back into place as u pick the peaces that are missing like all of us that have been distance too learn the way of life trying to get our own hype as we are on the mic trying to take flight hoping one day we can say we made it so dated on the map showing we aren't crap so we don't have to snap on these haters no more Grahambam187 trying to live my life and make my own hype Grahambam187 records doing it
dont you hate when life sucks. and you feel like giving up. still life is what it is. how can i begin, people sin and hate on one another, doesnt matter if hes your brother of your own mother. life is rough without a father, he cant catch you when you fall or faulter, just know its not your fault, life may be a bit difficult with someone who aint there even the ones that are supposed care, you feel like your drowning going down, feeling like you dont want anyone around. and smiles turn to frowns
once again another night, all on my own, i think its gotten so bad, im the definition of alone, see im like the king on his throne, but i dont have a queen, i put on a strong front, but what cannot be seen, is that im crying inside, i still dont confess when i have the chance, i brush it off like 'yeah im okay, thanks', and that concludes my everyday, i said all i could, what more can i say...
I wana run away I wana go away I wana see a brighter day Am trying to hold on what’s left but it taking my every breath Am trying but stifling in this pain, I walk around with tears in my eyes One hand on my heart because it feels like am gona die It was never always this way but somewhere somehow everything changed I have dreams but they fade everyday because i can’t get away
Right now im at peace, but not usually at all/ i feel as if in life im in a forever at a downfall/ needa get big, say that i am not upset/ but knowing how messed up this world is, it is so hard not to fret/something most dont get/ feel like a baby throwin a fit/ but emotionally cuz i gotta calm down and go sit/
Bro remember our days/ hangin on the streets,as our lifes fade away/ cuz your gone and i miss you thats all there is to say / so this rhyme is for you, on my mind you stay / and i kept your old studio didnt give that shit away / and sometimes i rap in it as the record plays / i still visit your grave / and i worked like a slave / to find the guy who thought he was so brave / told your bro, to calm down, relax and just stay / but your bros a hot head now the dude is inpaved /
A million people standing, surely right by my side, but a heart that can't feel, don't acknowledge the crowd And the silence without you is just louder than loud Yeah, yeah, yeah it's louder than loud Never been the type to claim lonely, like an OG My heart wouldn't allow it, your smile, who am I without it I used to be a shark in this, how is it I'm drowning? used to play the games thought you'd play along, Now you're gone, a sad song And The wise once told me, quit b4 ur lonely - songwriter
I script with intricate precision, thoughts I envision The reflex of omission stirs when a heart is a missing Weep wisdom, paradoxical vision Scarred but still I listen, Unified in purpose, slip through the crevice of division Decrepit inhibitions, brawl with premonitions Quill emotions oceans deep Commotion my life does seep Wide asleep, stare down the barrels of defeat One can never be at peace when shackles grip his feet..
Nice beat, I do like it. I have to agree with other comments though....the melodic ping is not quite in tune, I think it's sharp. The rest seems to be in tune. The ping is only slightly off and sure u could quickly tweak it :) only criticising constructively. Nice work!!
listen everything i've ever done has been to fill in what's missin,i've tried dissin but im simply nothin when it comes to bein, see i'm missin the feelin that's needed , though i've pleaded, my life's had to many hard deelins, walls just keep turning to ceilings, as i stand on bridges and reside behind these lonly eyes, that have never cried, only lied, to those outside, cause inside it's anouther story, one of no glory, no hope ,
I am left behind as others move on to start their journey and I am left staring at the sun like a withered old plant with seeds that have yet to leave and leaves that have yet to fall despite their right to go and sway with the wind away and away until they find their happy place thus leaving me to discuss my inner hate without repercussions or distractions louder than percussions as I lay dying out in monotonous harmony as the gloomy sky wards off my happiness and I drift away forever and ever
i give 1000/5 great job man/girl/thing haha well i feel like rapping, shud i start now or before i start slapping, i feel a rush on my fingers shud i start snapping? i thinks i better to hush and start wrapping, cause imma beast, i live with my homies ona tha east, i better stop spitting this spit unreleased, before i get caught by tha damn police,
i know it isnt much but when you guys get on here and say shit like this it really lifts me up, gives me a boost, thank you.
Every once and a while, I'll come back to listen to this. This song strikes a core in me every time because it always reminds me of what I will always be. You wanna know what that is?
Alone.
I've only one advice to give to those who still have a chance: Don't tread this road.
It's a lonely one...
Not true. You will never be alone. Much love from me to you.
I've never heard anything like this - each melody line played over each other and in different keys. amazing!
i wish there were words to accompany this beautiful, melodic beat..
I have to say there's so many people on UA-cam with amazing beats. Great job keep up the hard work.
This is hands down the best beat you've uploaded.
Probably my favorite instrumental on youtube.
Came back to visit this track had it saved in favorites the nostalgia the beat just eveyrhing about it keep your heads up men and women love your kids be good and kind respect all 💯 💪 🙏
There needs to be a download for this. It's awesome!
thanks for sharing I love piano..plus I got a deep ass beat to scratch toooo
Untouchable flow you have shown me to know. I feel like I know what you know. But I'll never know what you know. I feel like I feel like you feel. But I'll never feel like you feel. Can ya feel me? Expressing the stress pressed on my chest so I can rest. The rest of the world is infused with pop influences. Confucius. Confusing. Using green to turn me into a floating machine. I just float through, baby, just float through. Light it up and pass it, breh.
i feel you man life is tough but you got potential keep spitting life will get better hold ya my g
nice lyrics.
i like how you didn't have to curse to express your self,
thats a skill that far too many lack. PEACE.
like best beat I ever heard in my life..
respect
this guy is spiting hell fire and brimstone!!
i rate that a 6.5 - 8. heart wrenching stuff. good song.
First rap (and arguably the best rap) I ever wrote was over 10 years ago to this amazing beat!
I know life sucks, but that's okay, we will all get through this one day. Just roll one up, take a big puff, lay back, relax, and think how life reacts. Let the rain pour just Rollin another 4, spark it up, till it's lit, burnin real slow like this beat its sick.
Songs tight, you have gift, keep doing what you do
It's great beat
I can't describe what arouses in me...
WOW i dont wanna be disrespectful but I'm high, not trying to diss or anything so read on, that rap u just typed out was so inspirational i think I'm ready to give my life to god knowing that he's all i got in a world cruel
things will get better soon or a later wont they weve made it through two years of this i dont know how but we accomplished it no more lonely nights no more liying and cheating on every other night its just each other forever
I dig this a lot, nice post.
this is awesome...keys are perfect
Cool Track!!
good freestyle bro... i feel ya
16seconds in i was feelin it nice one mate
mate you are sick so nice !!!
Clean beat bro
deadly beat keep it up,
this beat just made mahh day
we all feel we all do cry but wipe your tears your beautiful in my eyes you may hurt you may be having hard times its alright tho its only a matter of time when everything washes by all your pain fades away you'll have the strength to push on another day you just gotta wait keep ya head up man cause over n above all/all this was just your fate.
those high pianos ruuuuuuuuined this beat
hey man this is amazing so much emotion comes to mind with it, its beyond words...anyway you could thow it up to download and let me throw some lyrics at it?
great beat
ur an inspiration fellow brother
job well done. i'd like to use this beat for some lyrics i wrote. non commercial use. all credit given to you for the beat.
this beats amazing
i spent ages rollin the same pages
like time passed by payn no attention
was just a kid dreaming..tommorow was a fact
but now i think about it..and i wonder how long is it gonna last
past..too many to say ..many ask ..i say..was ok ..great beat man
I love this beat.
how come everything happens to //
i just lost ma bestfrend i dnt kno wat happend
we just went our seprate ways //
now im wrighting her diz letter nd
hope it makes things a lil better//
it talks about how much i would miss her if she left//
if she make up this dessition den i wish you thee best
Great work!
we all gotta move, stay strong//
cause the current of the wind, would put us where we dont belong//
gatta stand up tall with our head held up high//
living life by the day, and no matter how much tears we cry//
things will only get better in the end
go with the flow of life, and let things do what they tend//
never let your dreams fade away in the wind//
keep them strong in your heart, like you did when everything began
@CheifinOn deep lyrics man. keep it up
I agree, i pray on the inside for a better future. :-) I doubt it will happen, but it's a nice-thought in my opinion.
If peace cannot be attained, then for the thought of it, i shall keep sustained, in my heart.
I have absolutely no rapping skills but I rapped this to the beat and it sounded awesome, if you could extend it I'd love to hear what it would sound like. If it was good I'm making a short film about a mafia organisation, and it would be awesome for the trailer.
Thats pretty good bro
Beautiful
Finally, a good beat.
I love listening while i'm reading : ' )
you play piano? just courious this is so dope...thanks keep on!!!
BEATS MOVING dope
youll get there :) every one starts somewhere
I used this beat long time ago to a song people told me was one of the most emotional songs ever and it just got 1,000 views and here I am 4 years later. I'm gonna remaster my old version because all I used was a phone mic to record it all, but now I have connections to a studio to remake it.
I used that beat to make a rap song
Please tell me the original name
Of the so g
RoddOfficialMusic915 keep up the grind bro its all good in the end it will work itself out
Damn!! boy u can rhyme
This kinda reminds me of inception.. Dopeee
Mad props
different is better and you obviously know whats up keep it up!
killen it.
That was dope
@ghostft50cent sick that man, mind if if use em in a tune? fits in perfect
wow this is a great beat, can i use this for a song, and whats the speaking bit saying
How can I live with the thought that you thought you weren't good enough?
You holding me back? No, you were pushing me ahead.
Now all I can do is think about what will always be left unsaid.
And even though I should push on, I feel now I lack the power.
These sad thoughts, and hatred are eating me alive, they devour.
Dope beat
thanks man that one is nice, im not good just started :)
@WimpieTV i like that..nice job
yo this beat just made me tear up
Nice Beat. I have complete lyrics and want to use the beat with full credit given to you and completely personal use, no commercial use. Will reply with vid when i've put the finishing touches on it. keep up the great work.
I love your profile picture xD
Im Feeling so lonely, used to have alot of friends,
but they ended up turning phony,
so i had to cut them out my life and keep it rolling, somebody i used to know,
i guess thats a feeling im used to tho, people in and out of my life, memory fading
Feels like a dream so im debating, if i should hold on or let go...
nice lyrics man :)
DIS IS REALLY NICE LET ME USE IT
I'm loving this piece brother, great job. Mind if i use it, i'll shout you out in the song???? hit me back
you gotta love this,
when I get lonely I know my God is beside me, I let him hold me closely
for he is holy, the holy of holies, so i dont need to smoke weed or go out and roll E
because i surrendered control, sold him my soul
and he gave it right back to me anointed with oil
thats why i'm faithful and loyal, prayerful and joyful
careful to trust in only thy holy ghost, and thy cup overflows
pick up the pieces to my life
as I, develop relationship and fellowship with Jesus Christ
Everyday he speaks. Everyday I dream. Jesus is with me everyday he reminds me. To focus on what the Father is doing in Heaven. And then speak it believe it receive it the bread is unleavened. So I pick up my cup and fill it with the blood. Giving thanks to my master then I drink it up. Holy spirit keep speaking in me blast out the syllables. And every time he works God performs many miracles. The dying process I recommend to all. Dying to self ain't what I call a ball. It's a process to pay a price. But the wages of renewal is eternal life
have been my self in days.... just put on a sad beat and slowly start to drift away .. held in everything i needed to say... tried to play my part but found out life isnt play and now im just tryin to finda way to get her back in my life... cuz without her things just aint right... everytime we kissed i took flight and held on tight... i guess loves like war and i refuse to sit around and not fight
Awesome beat can I use it for a song ill give you credit and shout out your channel???
even with people around me i still feel alone,
even when my parents say they love me i still feel dis owned ,
i know im not the only one but i feel like im the only one thats not doing whats right,
why am i the only one ?
it hurts deep inside when people expect you to be all that you can be but it hurts your self when you try to be everything that you can be and fail in the process and end up losing all hope for humanity.
these problems that we stress
always get into our head.
right now im so depressed
n i live my life with dread.
at the bottom of the crest,
n in my head i said.
'in peace i wont rest
but fuck it i'll be dead.'
damn i miss her by my side.
she was what gave me pride.
now at anytime i cry.
when she enters in my mind.
i got the image of her eyes.
and they're starin into mine.
damn i fuckin hate this life.
n whoever made up lyin..
Nice bro
Looking at the past I having these nightmare, see back in school I was known as another fool fighting, but them cunts never fought fare, my heart is beating and this life is deceiving but I march on knowing that this shit has made me strong, ive giving up pip and weed its been a year since ive had a bong fuck man has it really been that long, one of my brothers took his life and I dedicate this to his last song Im crying the tears of loneliness cause my brother is gone rip see you soon though
Waiting for the end, got nothing left, not even a friend to call my best, life sucks nothing more nothing less, everyday i live i live depressed, stress causing my chest to feel tightly pressed, one of these days i'm going to slit my throat at my desk, teachers think they know best, but they don't do shit but just give us tests, i feel so suppressed in this world of conquest, but i'm blessed that this life gave me a request, but i feel i just don't belong like you rest. I just can't digest.
@CheifinOn lets make from this beat for that mother a funeral
now your gone and your child gonna hustle by his own
have a sister to grow
God we all pray give him straight to roll on
keep your head up never let him down
u gotta keep ur fist tight and smash that crowd
you are the one i applaud!
Haters in the building
sick beat tho. always nice to come across a slow and emotional beat
can i use this ? im feeling this beat bro!!
I like the beat can I maybe write something to this?
Thanks that is nice of ya u are like a angle that has fallen dreaming of ball en trying to get back into place as u pick the peaces that are missing like all of us that have been distance too learn the way of life trying to get our own hype as we are on the mic trying to take flight hoping one day we can say we made it so dated on the map showing we aren't crap so we don't have to snap on these haters no more Grahambam187 trying to live my life and make my own hype Grahambam187 records doing it
dont you hate when life sucks. and you feel like giving up. still life is what it is. how can i begin, people sin and hate on one another, doesnt matter if hes your brother of your own mother. life is rough without a father, he cant catch you when you fall or faulter, just know its not your fault, life may be a bit difficult with someone who aint there even the ones that are supposed care, you feel like your drowning going down, feeling like you dont want anyone around. and smiles turn to frowns
I LOVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!! CAN I WRITE TO IT!!!!?
once again another night, all on my own,
i think its gotten so bad, im the definition of alone,
see im like the king on his throne,
but i dont have a queen,
i put on a strong front, but what cannot be seen,
is that im crying inside,
i still dont confess when i have the chance,
i brush it off like 'yeah im okay, thanks',
and that concludes my everyday,
i said all i could, what more can i say...
I want this beat to do a quick freestyle too pronto
I wana run away I wana go away I wana see a brighter day
Am trying to hold on what’s left but it taking my every breath
Am trying but stifling in this pain, I walk around with tears in my eyes
One hand on my heart because it feels like am gona die
It was never always this way but somewhere somehow everything changed
I have dreams but they fade everyday because i can’t get away
Right now im at peace, but not usually at all/ i feel as if in life im in a forever at a downfall/ needa get big, say that i am not upset/ but knowing how messed up this world is, it is so hard not to fret/something most dont get/ feel like a baby throwin a fit/ but emotionally cuz i gotta calm down and go sit/
im a uk rapper. got mad bars for this man can you supply the beat?
Bro remember our days/ hangin on the streets,as our lifes fade away/ cuz your gone and i miss you thats all there is to say / so this rhyme is for you, on my mind you stay / and i kept your old studio didnt give that shit away / and sometimes i rap in it as the record plays / i still visit your grave / and i worked like a slave / to find the guy who thought he was so brave / told your bro, to calm down, relax and just stay / but your bros a hot head now the dude is inpaved /
A million people standing, surely right by my side,
but a heart that can't feel, don't acknowledge the crowd
And the silence without you is just louder than loud
Yeah, yeah, yeah it's louder than loud
Never been the type to claim lonely, like an OG
My heart wouldn't allow it, your smile, who am I without it
I used to be a shark in this, how is it I'm drowning?
used to play the games thought you'd play along,
Now you're gone, a sad song
And The wise once told me, quit b4 ur lonely - songwriter
I script with intricate precision, thoughts I envision
The reflex of omission stirs when a heart is a missing
Weep wisdom, paradoxical vision
Scarred but still I listen,
Unified in purpose, slip through the crevice of division
Decrepit inhibitions, brawl with premonitions
Quill emotions oceans deep
Commotion my life does seep
Wide asleep, stare down the barrels of defeat
One can never be at peace when shackles grip his feet..
Nice beat, I do like it. I have to agree with other comments though....the melodic ping is not quite in tune, I think it's sharp. The rest seems to be in tune. The ping is only slightly off and sure u could quickly tweak it :) only criticising constructively. Nice work!!
listen everything i've ever done has been to fill in what's missin,i've tried dissin but im simply nothin when it comes to bein, see i'm missin the feelin that's needed , though i've pleaded, my life's had to many hard deelins, walls just keep turning to ceilings, as i stand on bridges and reside behind these lonly eyes, that have never cried, only lied, to those outside, cause inside it's anouther story, one of no glory, no hope ,
I am left behind as others move on to start their journey and I am left staring at the sun like a withered old plant with seeds that have yet to leave and leaves that have yet to fall despite their right to go and sway with the wind away and away until they find their happy place thus leaving me to discuss my inner hate without repercussions or distractions louder than percussions as I lay dying out in monotonous harmony as the gloomy sky wards off my happiness and I drift away forever and ever
im gonna use it ;)
i give 1000/5 great job man/girl/thing haha well i feel like rapping, shud i start now or before i start slapping, i feel a rush on my fingers shud i start snapping? i thinks i better to hush and start wrapping, cause imma beast, i live with my homies ona tha east, i better stop spitting this spit unreleased, before i get caught by tha damn police,