DragonBall Z: History of Gohan - Chapter 3: A Mighty Super Saiyan [DBZ Fanfiction]
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- Опубліковано 29 вер 2013
- The mysterious fighter reveals his true power as he and the Z Fighters await Goku's valiant return!
READ LINK: www.fanfiction.net/s/8525749/3...
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I WRITE, THEREFORE I AM:
www.fanfiction.net/u/4253996/ - Ігри
Thank you for such a constructive comment. Through this in-depth critique I can clearly see what you disapprove of in my content, and such a productive bit of insight totally helps me to improve my work.
This is possibly the best series of yours ever.
OOh I liked how you spared King Cold. It'll add another intresting twist to the story. That's what i like to see with Alternate Universes. That things keep changing and while it might have some similarities its not a carbon copy. Nice job Storm
Each chapter is amazing!
Outstanding job on your fanfiction.
So Good! Can't wait for more!
so far this has been great and im interested in how king cold (dont know weather he'll still be referred to as ''king'') gonna contribute to the story. I cant wait for the next reading!
keep up the great work pow! im loving this fanfiction!
awesome stormpow keep writing i really cant wait for chapter 4
Hope you keep putting up more of these Stormpow.
Awesome acting! Keep up the good work, man!
Dam... This is amazing I'm speachless keep it up
Great so far
These are amazing.
These are great.
this is awesome!!
Greath story man like it how you kinda make your own version of it! i'm loving it!!!!!
I can't wait for chapter 4
awesome no ultra awesome you are rely good at fan fiction you might be the best stormpow if is ever going to be a wath if movie about future gohan this should be
I WANT MORE!!!!!!! great job keep up the good work: your my favourite youtuber:)
Nice seen all the chapters so far
Damn, dude. That was awesome.
also pow, i would LOVE to somehow see this in an actual show.
Yaaaay king cold a good guy
I always wanted a friza alien to be a z fighter and that was perfect how you put it in
he should make a dbz bt3 video of a fight between kid trunks ssj, vegeta ssj, and tarble vs ssj bardock, ssj1 goku and ssj goten
Because SSJ Bardock and Tarble are in BT3.
wow king cold is alive!
This story is good you should make a history of Vegeta
dude you are amazing damn dude your awesome
Damn Stormpow, your a really good writer.
Hurry up and make the new ones mane! :)
oops i wasnt trying to say ssj bardock my bad
Yes you are
Cool. love your fanfiction you should make more.
Raging Blast 2: SSJ3 Broly vs Kid Buu.
Kid Buu managed to keep up with SSJ3 Goku, but what if Kid Buu encountered the Legendary Super Saiyan at a whole new level. The stage would be Sacred World of the Kais.
Man stop teasing me, I want more.
true
Legit writing
wait ssj BARDOCK IS IN BT3?!?!?!?!?!?!
Please do more!!!!!
Fucking Yamcha
can you please write the rest of this story im really interested to see how it goes??
You know how to entertain
Say, i just read all the way to ch 17, will you make a chapter 18 and beyond?
can u do a fight between fat buu,super buu,kid buu vs full power freiza, meta cooler,king cold in bt3 pllzzzz
Dude what if fight... What if when cell came back from exploding and attacked trunks, vegeta turned super saiyan 2,then, attacked cell with all of his rage!
A lot of thought
For the record i dont just watch your dbz vids
why would you waste your time on such a simple comment . Sometimes I wonder what is goin' on in that mind of yours
Interesting
vegeta aproved
you should do this with ultimate tenkaichi
moreeeeeee
Sorry about that dude I didn't want to offense you, I just expected to see some animation or pictures to accompany the voice acting (and sound effects) which I think is pretty cool.
When is chapter 4 coming out
What would happen if vegeta turned ssj4 against super 17?
*sigh*
I....WANT....MMMMOOOOOOORRRRRREEEE!!!!!!!!!!! *super saiyan achieved*
Does it end at chapter 17? Are you gonna make more?
ur voice is so different from the last time I watch ur video
can u make a dbz bt3 video of kid trunks,vegeta and tarble vs bardock,goku and kid goten
more plz
Can u raging blast 2 SSJ 3 Broly vs kid buu
what if broly was good AND Goku and vegeta died and broly went ssj 3 and fought kid buu
Xd You did too.
I wonder if gohan will t
Wait what? And I thought i was bad at making jokes
hey man do your kinect sports part 2 you said your gona continue kinect sports but your not continueing
Oh really? Please, tell me more about how your opinion is wrong.
more
Raging blast 2
F
not funny
you have made me not like dbz as much as i used to man its just to much dragon ball z do you evan play other games