A Long Chat With The Villainess | Villainess Series P4 | Audio Roleplay [F4M] | TW: Trauma | 2 HRS

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  • @anacristinasilva4757
    @anacristinasilva4757 Рік тому +26

    Not sure how much I believe her change of heart. The way she acted in the first two parts didn't painted a very good image of her personality, but there were some signs of a hidden more benevolente nature and troubled past.
    The Adept is in a very fragile mental state from everything that he done and everything that was done to him and he is a very hostile environment that is almost entirely in her control. It would be very easy for her to mold him into to her tool, even if that isn't her goal.
    Honesty, I don't think their relationship will ever be very healthy. The princess just have far to much power in this relationship and is very likely that the Adept will end up creating a unhealthy dependency on her.
    There is a reason that therapists aren't allowed to have that sort of relationship with their patients.
    While I'm sure this story will have happy ending, I really not sure if I trust her because she is the position to do the very same thing she acused Adept of: fixing people into to her own liking.
    Now, the true question is:
    Does she truly want him to became his best self or the self that suit her needs ?
    Only Shiaides know the answer...

    • @anacristinasilva4757
      @anacristinasilva4757 Рік тому +7

      For what it matter, she does sound genuine. Then again so do the best manipulators.
      Hopefully she is just what she make herself sounds like in this part: a troubled girl forced to grow up too quickly and that far too much weight on her shoulders. If she is truly like that, then maybe it will all work out... or not.

    • @DirkaDirkaX43
      @DirkaDirkaX43 Рік тому +8

      ​@anacristinasilva4757 I agree on the og post. If she was truly trying to change the first two parts make her an unreliable narrator and despite the "historical" evidence of her slightly telling the truth. It doesnt mean she changed from her mothers ways. I'd like a happy ending but mostly for adept, she isnt trustworthy

    • @NomfuI
      @NomfuI 3 місяці тому +2

      I think the reason she truly wants him is because of the latter.

    • @xSHIELDBREAKERx82
      @xSHIELDBREAKERx82 Місяць тому +1

      It's likely a codependancy thing. They're both broken but one has quasi-fixed themselves while, to the observer, is trying to help the other fix themselves as well. It can be an unhealthy relationship but if both retain a modicum of self awareness then it would be fine in general. Trust, but verify.

  • @SewerRatsarepeopletoo
    @SewerRatsarepeopletoo 9 місяців тому +22

    I'm not gonna lie, it's pretty easy to get lost in it. Until you remember it's a forced engagement, and he's essentially a puppet - you could write a really cunning fanfic whereby Adept is just trying to 'play the game'. And alot of Seia's words and inflections could be seen as masterfully manipulative - from a certain point of view.

    • @dylanhayden3823
      @dylanhayden3823 4 місяці тому +6

      Onfg she keeps saying how her life is hard mean while the MC has been kidnapped from his home and parents are fucking dead for all we know we don't know where the step mother or step sis is. And the brother killed himself, and u say your life is hard. Cap
      😂 love the story

    • @priyanshu.x03
      @priyanshu.x03 2 місяці тому +1

      starting to think this series is dead

    • @Actul_Trap
      @Actul_Trap Місяць тому +1

      @@priyanshu.x03just really rough upload schedule, i think she does one thing for ever series before putting another one out. Sucks cause this is honestly the best one with it being super convoluted and not a straight forward situation. 😅

    • @priyanshu.x03
      @priyanshu.x03 Місяць тому +1

      @@Actul_Trap feel the same brother

  • @Shiaides
    @Shiaides  Рік тому +75

    Hey hey y’all! Thank you so so much for 20k! This has been a dream! The Q&A will come out soon! I hope you enjoyed this new part of the Villainess Series! Those two are making some progress now! Hope you’re excited for the next one!
    Please make sure to check out the description for extra lore! If you want to check out character descriptions and more information go and visit: www.notion.so/coolit/Morena-Background-Characters-and-Additional-Lore-8d11d7bea32e4b038d9903afa92a2590?pvs=4

    • @ForgottenWorlds100
      @ForgottenWorlds100 Рік тому +3

      I don’t understand how it isn’t blowing up more. This is the first channel I’ve encountered that’s tempting me to donate, rich content.🤌

    • @Dingus_Mcbingused
      @Dingus_Mcbingused Рік тому +1

      congrates on 20k

    • @derekmederick1110
      @derekmederick1110 Рік тому +1

      What a great milestone! Congratulations on the great efforts you’ve put into this!

    • @darkv-0371
      @darkv-0371 11 місяців тому +1

      Despite being against seia all the way I am enjoying the series. I love the care and world building that goes into your stories, and how each character has so much depth. I can’t wait to see how the deities progresses.

  • @FNWendigo
    @FNWendigo Рік тому +10

    Poor Adept. Just wanted some friends. The road to hell is paved with good intentions. Excellent job Shiaides. Masterfully done.

    • @Shiaides
      @Shiaides  10 місяців тому +3

      Love the way you put it! It’s definitely true that Adept had good intentions at first until it warped him and his actions. Thank you for listening :))

  • @krusnik94
    @krusnik94 Рік тому +27

    I feel like Adept and Livius need to just go 3 rounds and get it out of there system

    • @kapitan19969838
      @kapitan19969838 Рік тому +2

      *their system, not there

    • @FNWendigo
      @FNWendigo Рік тому

      @@kapitan19969838Damn grammar nazis in 2023. I thought we were past that shit.

    • @kapitan19969838
      @kapitan19969838 Рік тому +3

      @@FNWendigo You said it like writing in proper English was a bad thing

    • @ForgottenWorlds100
      @ForgottenWorlds100 Рік тому

      @@kapitan19969838dude, the point was expressed. Let it be

    • @kapitan19969838
      @kapitan19969838 Рік тому +3

      @@ForgottenWorlds100 And so was mine

  • @ashergs1237
    @ashergs1237 Рік тому +10

    Listening to this in one go was worth ruining my already bad sleep schedule. Still the highest quality ASMR RP content out there.

  • @erwin7732
    @erwin7732 10 місяців тому +9

    Talking with her is almost a whole series of Princess Aera.
    I'm too late to say this but your so diligent to made this masterpiece Shia. Thank you.

    • @Shiaides
      @Shiaides  9 місяців тому +1

      Thank you for listening haha!

  • @nuclear37
    @nuclear37 Рік тому +7

    Nearly teared up on this video. I've been able to resonate with Adept more than any of the other listeners, and he's definitely my favorite by a long shot.
    Absolutely beautiful, thank you Shiaides.

  • @g.hblackwell4658
    @g.hblackwell4658 Рік тому +7

    It's great to finally get to listen to another audio in this series. I think it has to be the one I enjoy most and I feel I'm not alone in that statement. I think it's largely the the whirlwind of emotions that each character is going through, how they are all interconnected with each other and the way it is written so that the listener can understand the reasons and emotions behind the actions of all of the characters. I certainty loved this installment and I can't wait for another. Keep it up!

  • @MrUnironicEnthusiasm
    @MrUnironicEnthusiasm Рік тому +5

    Im gonna go rewatch the old videos so its all fresh in my mind. Two hours?!? Jeez

  • @7verdy
    @7verdy Рік тому +6

    I'm honestly baffled by how much work you've put into this audio and into Morena in general. You're definitely one of a kind when it comes to having audio series especially with how lengthy they are! Clearly glad I've come across your channel, can't wait for what's to come!

  • @Nixus237
    @Nixus237 Рік тому +2

    This is by far my most favorite of your videos your acting and writing are off the charts in this one and it just makes me happy

  • @Seviknoal
    @Seviknoal Рік тому +4

    Ah yes I love my regularly secluded 2 hour talks with people

  • @CT--ox2iu
    @CT--ox2iu Рік тому +2

    Not me rewatching every ep in the series, wonderful work!

  • @sneztchy
    @sneztchy Рік тому +15

    babe wake up, new Vilainess episode about to drop.
    Jokes aside, welcome bacc!! I hope you had a great time during your VA-cation (lol). It's great to have you back and listen to another one of your work!
    Also since it's the end of the month I wish you an amazing summer too!

  • @SerCase
    @SerCase Рік тому +5

    Your storytelling continues to be incredibly impressive and I’m excited to see where your story’s will continue to go.

  • @caseyhengstebeck1893
    @caseyhengstebeck1893 Рік тому +4

    I think this might be my favorite series of yours and I'm always excited to see a new update.

  • @darkwave8892
    @darkwave8892 Рік тому +2

    So many things I'd like to say...
    But thank you for so much for these audios not only are they great and interesting stories but they are really helping me work through things.
    This serries in particular has been like free therapy for me and I cannot thank you enough for that.

  • @Lowi_cant_sleep
    @Lowi_cant_sleep Рік тому +4

    Oh shieeet I've been waiting for this 😭✨

  • @Kenzo20000
    @Kenzo20000 Рік тому +15

    I really like the chemistry between Adept and Seia. She displayed tremendous amounts of kindness by giving him advice, keeping him company, and just being very concerned about his well-being. It really shows she cares deeply about him and wants to help him be the best version of himself.

  • @elishaj2977
    @elishaj2977 Рік тому +6

    About an hour and 17 or so minutes in and I must say the wait was worth every second (as it always is with content on this channel). Although I have to admit that this vid definitely struck a more personal chord with me; namely with some of the dilemmas Adept might be going through. Now while I can't say that my parents died, I had an evil stepmother (my parents were/are good despite their many failings), or started a war over a misunderstanding of perceived love I can relate to the idea of coming from a messy family and trying to grasp a love from others that wasn't really there...a fantasy in other words that those people could not and would not live up to no matter how badly I wanted them to. So needless to say, I definitely teared up a bit (which is surprising cause I rarely ever do), but like Adept I'm glad I've been given the chance to grow and thankfully in my case I've learned to grow by coming to terms with my life, thoughts, decisions, progress over the years, etc. Anywho, thanks for the vid and granting an opportunity (however unintentional) to confront a hard part of my life. Though it hurt a bit, it makes me smile and thank God to see how far I've come. Anywho overdramatic Ted talk over. Thank you for the awesome content as always 👍.

  • @ForgottenWorlds100
    @ForgottenWorlds100 Рік тому +3

    I’m glad this is getting the likes it deserves. It surpasses the typical UA-cam RP format, setting a bar that others should work towards. Your work, your imagination, it’s worth the investment.👍My compliments, Shiaides.

  • @joebobdacow7405
    @joebobdacow7405 3 місяці тому +1

    You are incredibly talented, I watch a lot of these types of channels the ones who aren't really "ASMR" in the traditional sense but make a lot of compelling stories. Your writing along with your voice acting are top notch. I've always been a sucker for romance novels and the like, and this series has definitely been a highlight. I hope success and recognition comes your way

  • @mushmonkey15
    @mushmonkey15 Рік тому +6

    I honestly didn't expect to enjoy Seia as much as her sisters; the first impression left a sour taste in my mouth (and the fact hers was the first series I clicked, and thus had no context on my role as listener). I think after this episode though, the accountability and apology for her earlier treatment and getting a deeper look at her character, she might be my favorite 😂 (probably helps that the 'unwanted/reluctant arranged marriage becomes genuinely loving relationship' trope is a favorite of mine)

    • @Shiaides
      @Shiaides  10 місяців тому +4

      Seia’s a very divisive character and definitely the first impression did leave a terrible mark on their relationship. So it’s totally understandable haha, Adept would’ve been left with a sour taste in his mouth too. I hope in the next part (coming sometime in the near future) you’ll discover even more to her character. Thanks for watching and your comment :))

  • @h6k7o5
    @h6k7o5 Рік тому +6

    i listened to the last part so much that i realized she doesnt have her usual mole in the art here 😭

  • @jokestermasteroflaughter7754
    @jokestermasteroflaughter7754 Рік тому +5

    This helped me more than you realize

  • @slicerneons3300
    @slicerneons3300 Рік тому +12

    It's been too long
    I wonder if we will find out what happened to her mother that allowed her to take over. Did not sound like a happy childhood. I imagine a great deal of closure is needed for Our Villainess, even if it is just her yelling at a Gravestone for a whole episode.

  • @ProblematicHuman
    @ProblematicHuman Рік тому +3

    Another wonderful entry in the series. You are amazing

  • @DrivenGrim
    @DrivenGrim Рік тому +3

    Still waiting impatiently for the nxt vid, I am so intrigued by this story

  • @ryanfairfoot263
    @ryanfairfoot263 Рік тому +3

    Absolutely phenomenal. Well done

  • @bradonbyrd8061
    @bradonbyrd8061 Рік тому +2

    Oh my gosh oh my god this is so incredible I really do love this

  • @oreoconsumer3128
    @oreoconsumer3128 Рік тому +4

    Love your videos, I'm constantly coming back to this villianess series. Hits harder than any other audio roleplays I've seen on UA-cam, hope it continues.

    • @Shiaides
      @Shiaides  10 місяців тому +1

      Thank you so much for returning! :))

  • @0verloud350
    @0verloud350 Рік тому +2

    Finally: the *two hour long Shia video*

  • @mr.vesper5659
    @mr.vesper5659 Рік тому +2

    Definitely gonna just vibe to this

  • @deadleague4342
    @deadleague4342 Рік тому +2

    Impressive, very nice.

  • @Junivi
    @Junivi 9 місяців тому +2

    Thiiiis is my new obsession, i've listened to the whole series like 3 times LMAO
    One of the best asmr series ever made, can't wait for the rest of this story

    • @Shiaides
      @Shiaides  9 місяців тому +1

      Haha I’m glad you like it! Hopefully another part will be released soon!

  • @MrSHADOWANGEL999
    @MrSHADOWANGEL999 Рік тому +3

    2 glorious hours

  • @argonsilvereye
    @argonsilvereye Рік тому +3

    Im reminded of a quite from The Lord of the Rings
    It was Sam's first view of a battle of Men against Men, and he did not like it much. He was glad that he could not see the dead face. He wondered what the man's name was and where he came from; and if he was really evil of heart, or what lies or threats had led him on the long march from his home; and if he would rather have stayed there in peace.

  • @fredjb261
    @fredjb261 Рік тому +2

    Woo 🎉 more to the story

  • @crosstail8656
    @crosstail8656 Рік тому +69

    WAKE👏UP👏SHEEPLE👏NEW👏SHIAIDES👏PREMIERE👏

  • @xleplayVA
    @xleplayVA Рік тому +1

    I'll have to watch this later, but again, welcome back

  • @xleplayVA
    @xleplayVA Рік тому +1

    Nice. Welcome back

  • @markolukic7824
    @markolukic7824 Рік тому +6

    It took me way longer than I would have liked to listen to this part. It was a really gripping take on depression wrapped up in a fantasy setting. Bravo miss Shiaides! 👏

    • @Shiaides
      @Shiaides  10 місяців тому

      Thank you very much for listening! I tried my best to convey what Seia’s feelings were like so I’m glad you found it gripping!

  • @Georgzkefallinoz
    @Georgzkefallinoz 16 днів тому +1

    challenging my short attention span like never before.
    I AM PREPARED IF ITS FOR THE VILLAINESS

    • @Shiaides
      @Shiaides  16 днів тому +1

      haha, sorry xd the videos will be more easily consumed from now on xd

    • @Georgzkefallinoz
      @Georgzkefallinoz 16 днів тому

      @Shiaides no need to worry. Your roleplays are actually good to challenge my attention span. I need to make it longer so this is pretty much a blessing in disguise. And as long as you keep making these kinds of roleplays I'll gladly listen to them all the way through every time.

  • @Wytchlord
    @Wytchlord Рік тому +2

    Great roleplay, even better than the previous parts!

  • @DandDgamer
    @DandDgamer Рік тому +1

    Been wating for this one. Didnt notice in the ol' sub box. Just "rang the bell" as you upload infrequently and I dont want to miss stuff.

  • @cowboywhitesmith58
    @cowboywhitesmith58 3 місяці тому +1

    I want to hear more of this story, I'm liking it despite the rough beginning. From the dialogue it sounds as if Adept (the listener character I think?) is still very aggressive towards Seia. I'm wondering if Adept will ever warm up to Seia. I'm also really liking the change in Seia. I also like your voice and think you are doing a great job with these videos. keep up the good work.

  • @gustavovillalobos8511
    @gustavovillalobos8511 Рік тому +2

    Worth the wait amazing as always 🎉

  • @kogatenebralux1128
    @kogatenebralux1128 Рік тому +9

    _Before watching_
    2 HOURS?!
    ...
    DAMN, I'm *not* gotta get bored one bit!
    (I'm gonna edit my comment after watching all of it)
    Edit:
    _After watching_
    Man...I wanna cry. Like, damn. MANY times I held back my tears. And if I was really in Adept's shoes, well...
    _“No matter how much time I'll need to heal,_
    _No matter how much faith you have in me,_
    _And no matter if Tiana is forgiving me..._
    _The wrongful things I've done,_
    _That miserable childhood I had,_
    _This war that I started,_
    _Those twisted feelings and mindset in which I drowned,_
    _The hatred from those I hurt..._
    _...It is my fault._
    _They deserved better_
    _Tiana deserved better_
    _I was the worst and I think death would be fitting for someone like me..._
    _...But it would be the easiest way to escape the reality._
    _Even if the day comes when I'll be a king worthy of the name,_
    _All the hurt I've caused..._
    _...To everyone around me..._
    _There's no way in hell I would forgive myself for it._
    _I can't._
    _I won't._
    _I shouldn't._
    *I won't allow it, because I don't deserve it.*
    _...Because this is my punishment._
    _...Because this is my curse to bear._
    *...Because this is my sin*

    • @xSHIELDBREAKERx82
      @xSHIELDBREAKERx82 Місяць тому

      That's real, but also what I believe to be the underlying message in this series. Forgiving ones self. Forgiveness and repentance begins with you. And I don't mean in a self-absorbed, narcassitic way but to be genuinely sorry for the "sin" commited. People believe forgiveness must come from others before you can forgive yourself but if you can't do it, why should they?
      It's hard to do because you feel you've crossed that one line; commited the unforgivable sin but you have to realize that some people are petty and holding on to guilt that is as ephemeral as the past it belongs to gains you nothing. Forgive yourself, learn from it, show you've changed via your actions and move on. I.e. repentance. Let the naysayers be. They were never going to do their part anyway.

  • @404huncho
    @404huncho Рік тому +3

    Adept Associates 🔛🔝

  • @franklinrourke2106
    @franklinrourke2106 Рік тому +2

    Shiaides That was a Awesome Premiere 😃

  • @silverethereal2715
    @silverethereal2715 Рік тому +43

    Feel like some people going by comments I read miss out that while Adept did show signs of some sort of budding feelings for Seia and is growing better. That is the very reason he is pushing people away, there was the very thing that caused a pushback.
    Adept isn’t just going to undo years worth of lies and misinformation that warped his worldview completely by just having emotions. If anything it’s probably moreso he’s trying to keep them in check, they got him into this mess to begin with.
    It’s likely he doesn’t want to just be some foolish idiot who falls prey to his feelings again. While its good he is trying to grow, his sister being safe is another burden and chance for him to heal. However, only when he can balance his feelings and his duty will he grow comfortable.

    • @Remsster
      @Remsster Рік тому +2

      This is a really good perspectives of the character and explanation.

    • @nano_biscuit
      @nano_biscuit Рік тому +5

      Honestly I've been hoping for more of a pushback from Adept. From what I've heard in these audios (and I may have missed something or misinterpreted another), Seia hasn't really earned any kind of trust or change of opinion from Adept. But it ain't my story and I'm enjoying it nonetheless, so oh well XD.

  • @ColdCryomancer
    @ColdCryomancer 2 місяці тому

    I know this is an asmr rp but Damn this spoke to my SOUL.

  • @Idlemage
    @Idlemage Рік тому +3

    Im late I didnt get the notification!!!

  • @yourstruly1257
    @yourstruly1257 Рік тому +3

    I have a gut feeling that, judging by what's in the description, something might happen to Seia before the wedding.

  • @SonNeko
    @SonNeko Рік тому +2

    This is an interesting story

  • @lol-2247
    @lol-2247 Рік тому +2

    A surprise to be sure but a welcome one 🍵

  • @Schicksal.Overseer
    @Schicksal.Overseer Рік тому +4

    WE WILL BE LISTENING!!!!

  • @my_dad_came_back_with_milk
    @my_dad_came_back_with_milk Рік тому +6

    Well this was phenomenal, p5 soon?

    • @Johnperson133
      @Johnperson133 Рік тому +2

      in description she said she will upload sometime in august

  • @animecraze556
    @animecraze556 Рік тому +2

    20K Sub around the corner. Let's freaking go! I do hope that things are going well outside of yt

  • @greenpinapple820
    @greenpinapple820 Рік тому +3

    Felt very meta in the middle there, no this isnt a good way to cope, is it?

    • @greenpinapple820
      @greenpinapple820 11 місяців тому

      @JohnCowan-cg5he Well, is that comment on this video? It's not my channel, so I can't look up comments by users.
      Never mind, I doom scrolled for it. It's fine.

  • @jokestermasteroflaughter7754
    @jokestermasteroflaughter7754 Рік тому +4

    I feel like the fade out at the end represents me leaving my old mentality behind. And moving on to be a better person with her

  • @pizzatime3723
    @pizzatime3723 Рік тому +2

    Time to go back to hibernation mode until the part 5 is out, please wake me up when it's released

  • @KuraiShogun
    @KuraiShogun Рік тому +2

    I’ve been watching you a lot.
    I’ve been inspired to create my own story. It’s a Cyberpunk High School Romance/Comedy story with a badass protagonist who attends a prestigious to live a normal life while being a Black Ops Agent.

  • @strobi100
    @strobi100 Місяць тому

    Forced or not,I believe her Feelings are true and both of them are hurt and traumatised.
    Maybe Adapt should hug her and start to go forward together and build a good Future for them and everybody Else. I had Tears in my Eyes at the End of your Audio.Thank you for your fantastic work !🥹🥰🫶🏻

  • @mirrorvoices2739
    @mirrorvoices2739 11 місяців тому +1

    Looking forward to seeing where this story goes next, thank you for the excellent story telling and portraying their complex emotions.

    • @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h
      @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h 11 місяців тому

      Prediction: When Adept returns to Clarus, Seia and Anissa would have created a bond with the girl at the orphanage,(Fleur) which would then cause Adept to adopt her.

  • @joelongstaff7601
    @joelongstaff7601 Рік тому +3

    Seldom do I tear up at such stories but with such a pasionate and heart felt orasion I found myself wiping my eyes. Well done my Dear and thankyou. I pray you find more of this spellbinding tale to captivate our souls. The warmth and love of the princess is something we would all like to have in our lives. God Bless.

    • @Shiaides
      @Shiaides  10 місяців тому +1

      Aw thank you. You’re far too kind. I do hope you’ll enjoy the rest of the story when it gets uploaded :))

  • @belm7448
    @belm7448 Рік тому +8

    Ok she's being uncharacteristically nicer than usual. And it has me VERY worried. I wouldn't trust her for jack shit after all she's done. That "you really mean alot to me" line would've made me laugh.

    • @DirkaDirkaX43
      @DirkaDirkaX43 Рік тому +2

      I commented on this in an earlier part and im sure we'll get answers but Seia comes off as a manipulator something which may come down to her mother. I'd love to believe its not deception but shes done worst in the past to people she "tries" to be close to now

  • @kristhetankhunter2730
    @kristhetankhunter2730 Рік тому +2

    Very nice!!!!!!

  • @dylanhayden3823
    @dylanhayden3823 4 місяці тому

    Love the story mind manipulated plot i like it 👌

  • @electrom_xd3069
    @electrom_xd3069 Рік тому +3

    I have long awaited your return ❤

  • @Im-Cyber
    @Im-Cyber Рік тому +2

    Welp, time to clear the next 2 hours in my schedule. Gotta take it all in.

  • @luxuking
    @luxuking 11 місяців тому +4

    Damn we don't got magic

    • @Shiaides
      @Shiaides  10 місяців тому +2

      Vorso (The species that Adept is) have “Spirit Magic” that empowers their natural super strength.

  • @johnMcheal115
    @johnMcheal115 Рік тому +5

    Hi Shiaides I hope that God will bless you with millions and billions of subscribers throughout the year ❤

  • @slickstingray15
    @slickstingray15 Рік тому +1

    The Return!

  • @szoltanmaraman
    @szoltanmaraman Рік тому +1

    wonderful! plz make a video about Circe

  • @Death9376
    @Death9376 Місяць тому +1

    Ok. I just finished listening to these up to this part. I do have to be honest and just say that the dynamic between these characters is, so far, very unhealthy. This just some constructive criticism on my part.
    First, my understanding is that these two are getting married for political and practical reasons, like protecting the listener character, but I don't see why there wouldn't be other ways to achieve that. There are plenty of legally binding agreements that could be reached to protect this character, which make the marriage seem unnecessary. Why use the most intrusive and personal of those options to do this, especially given these two's highly antagonistic relationship so far?
    Second: After trying to repair the damage after her early anger and vengefulness, this character, Seia, goes on to reveal that she has been concealing the listener character's sister for months. Now, correct me if I'm wrong, but if there's some sort of danger to her, why is it any less dangerous to reveal her now, than at any point before? Also, Seia's reasoning, that she didn't want to stress the listener out further due to Anissa's condition, doesn't really make sense, considering that for most people, not knowing the fate of a loved one is often much worse than knowing that they're dead or dying. In this case, the listener would at leasr have the benefit of knowing that Anissa is safe and being looked after.
    Third: Both of these characters are traumatised by their histories of being abused and doing terrible things as a result, yet they're being forced into extremely stressful political roles, and a marriage. Needless to say, they really shouldn't be. They should be in therapy, which might actually be a more compelling story as well. If, for example, the two met while both had stepped back from their royal duties to get treatment, and started out being bitter with each other over the war, but came to empathise with each other, eventually fallen for each other, and then decide to marry. No deception or lying necessary. It's also tragically rare to see male characters in particular going through an actually healthy healing process, especially when it comes to mental health and personal trauma.
    In all, I think that, if nothing else, you've missed out on opportunities to create a much healthier depiction of an enemies to lovers scenario. It's a shame because the world it's set in is quite good, but I have to give this series a miss. Sorry.

  • @Johnperson133
    @Johnperson133 Рік тому +3

    Hey could we have a story where a vorso shifts? We have seen lots of human magic, not rly much else

  • @dumbone7463
    @dumbone7463 Рік тому +3

    I love these series'. You have a beautiful voice and you use it very well. I love the story's and the writing as well as the world you have created. I especially enjoyed the perspective of the listener on this specific role. I haven't heard/read many stories where the listener/reader was in a position where they believe they were doing the right thing, but as the series goes on they receive more knowledge and begin to realize their actions weren't as right as they thought. They slowly realize they were the cause for many difficulties and unnecessary misery. After the understanding dawns on them they begin to adjust their perceptions to become a better person and strive to make right the wrongs they caused. The true virtue of man is the ability to adapt and progress towards a better future. I also appreciated the perspective of Princess Seia and how she recognizes the struggles Adept is going through as similar to her own, and is there to help guide him to down the path to a better future. I can't wait for the next part of this story and I wish you the best with your writings in the future!

  • @bill6
    @bill6 Рік тому +2

    2 HOURS ?!? LESGOOOOOO

  • @ofranngtea2176
    @ofranngtea2176 Рік тому +2

    Bruh im crying

  • @fearzilla9681
    @fearzilla9681 Рік тому +2

    I'm in 2 hours let's cook

  • @jake-senpapi
    @jake-senpapi Рік тому +8

    I hope Adept grows to love Seia, because she's a keeper.

  • @johnMcheal115
    @johnMcheal115 Рік тому +2

    Hello Shiaides I wanted to ask you, do you have a favorite historical military legend's

  • @xSHIELDBREAKERx82
    @xSHIELDBREAKERx82 Місяць тому

    Looking at this logically and emotionally, I am convinced this series is the voice-acted, play-like version of Disturbed's song Guarded. Pull up the lyrics and tell me I'm crazy.

  • @johnMcheal115
    @johnMcheal115 Рік тому +2

    Yessss

  • @oreoconsumer3128
    @oreoconsumer3128 Рік тому +2

    Yes

  • @yunqdrew
    @yunqdrew Рік тому +1

    Let’s gooooooooooooooo

  • @JuzooKukvh
    @JuzooKukvh Рік тому +1

    YESSSSS

  • @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h
    @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h Рік тому +7

    It is still possible that Adept could return to power even without the help of the nobles in Penkos. Most people would much rather be ruled by the true heir who is one of them rather than the royal family of another nation, or who are not of royal blood. This could be seen when Napoleon invaded Spain and deposed the royal family. Though life was much more difficult under the royal family compared to life under the rule of Napoleon, many people in Spain fought against the French as they would rather be govern by the Spanish royal family instead of the French.

    • @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h
      @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h Рік тому +4

      @@NovaCourier Even when Adept returns to power, the elder council won’t simply give up power and accept it. They might even stage a coup or cause a civil war to keep power.

    • @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h
      @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h Рік тому +5

      @@NovaCourier even if a civil war were to break out, Adept will probably win. It would also lead to a rise of Patriotism in Clarus and support for Adept over the Elder council

    • @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h
      @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h Рік тому +4

      @@NovaCourier it would be nice to see him return like Napoleon did to France from his exile in Elba. Majority or the army would defect to join his side and his Nation would welcome him

    • @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h
      @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h Рік тому +3

      @@NovaCourier Fun fact: Hannibal was able to kill 16 percent of the Roman male population at the battle of Cannae. During ww1, Germany lost 3 percent of its male population through 4 years.

    • @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h
      @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h Рік тому +2

      @@NovaCourier interested to see Livius and Queen Fylla’s reaction of Adept returning to power since he fought a war over Theina

  • @priyanshu.x03
    @priyanshu.x03 Рік тому

    when she say humm she use it like a weapon

  • @yuvigonmad8676
    @yuvigonmad8676 3 місяці тому +1

    Waiting for the new part 😔😅

  • @yuvigonmad8676
    @yuvigonmad8676 Рік тому +2

    Thankssssssssssssssssss 😭😭😭

  • @my_dad_came_back_with_milk
    @my_dad_came_back_with_milk Рік тому +4

    After 7 month of long waiting its finally here

  • @risenbow6592
    @risenbow6592 Рік тому +2

    At the beginning I thought of this scene: us going down to the dungeon of the castle and thinking "this is where I was supposed to spend the rest of my life, but she gave me another chance. I should be grateful but why? Why do I feel like I wish she hadn't?"

  • @JakeSm4sh
    @JakeSm4sh Рік тому +1

    HOLY HELL YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!! I MISSED YOU

  • @Damien-t1h
    @Damien-t1h Рік тому

    I can't wait

  • @NerfOpai
    @NerfOpai Рік тому +1

    lets gooooo

  • @destroyerrex1671
    @destroyerrex1671 Рік тому +11

    Dear Shiades, I am glad to see you and your content and your stories. You may remember me for I am the creator of the Curse that I gave you, I am glad you liked my story and my character. Since i didn’t finish making the original story I made I decided to go back and rewrite my story and try to fill in the gaps a little bit that I wanted to give you. Now I want you to remember that I’m not forcing you to change your lore or make changes to anything you don’t like. I’m doing this because I am you fan and I want to give you ideas and to an alternate story from a different timeline. I want to give you two words and those two words are thank you. Thank you for giving me these stories and thank you for giving me these ideas to make the Curse. If it weren’t for you I wouldn’t have made the Curse. Thank you for making this series and I will always love them and I will always thank you. The story will be in replies you may read it if you want. It may be long if you don’t feel like I reading I understand and you don’t have to read it. But if you do read it I say thank you for giving a fan his time for you. Please do tell what you like about the story and what is your favorite part about it. This will be part one and part two is in the works and won’t be done for a while. Feel free to ask questions if you want to know anything about the story or anything of part two. Even if some parts of this story never made it to your story I wouldn’t mind just know I will support every decision you make for your stories. PS: the story is a bit dark if you can’t read because of it I’m sorry but I hope it’s not too dark for you. And also since I’m not good with fight choreography some of that will be skipped so sorry about.Thank you for everything now then I hope you enjoy the story

    • @destroyerrex1671
      @destroyerrex1671 Рік тому +3

      Chapter 1: (Theinas nightmare)
      Theina was laying in her bedroom when she sees a seia with a black cloak descending in the middle of the room and the ends cloak grows covers the room and turned the light into darkness and says “I will show you your future of your fate of what will transpire” then Theina starts floating off from the bed and her whole room tears itself away into darkness, then fire appears and when then the place starts appear bright and theina sees despina sending her orc army to battle in a giant black castle and on top of the castle was a giant fiery figure she also sees the elder court council heads on pikes with a man in the mask chopping off one of elder council members head,then she turns and sees livius being tortured in front of a hole crowd and seeing castle Atticus on fire and tumbling, a giant dust storm blowing through her and while covering her eyes she sees seias black figure in the storm and she says “if you don’t change the future this will come to pass” and the dust storm settles and theina falls the her knees and she looks up to see herself in a place where dust covers the floor and dead trees all around with Atticus bodys all over and the light sky with the moon colored red, she sees livius with blood covering his eyes running towards her with his sword, he raises his sword upward and descends upon theina, but as the livius come close to her his body turned to dust and bones are left behind then she hears a familiar sound shouting for help, theina turns around to sees a distorted figure wearing a black cloak wearing a hood that shows a pitch black shadow coving it’s face ripping a persons head off and tossing the head to theina and hears a person laughing and slowly reveals the head the pale head of adapt laughing and his head saying “why did you leave me to die”, then the figure appears like it teleported to in front of her and says soon death will call upon adapts life, theina looks at the figure and when she looks at the figure she feels like the figure is impossible to paint of what it looked like because of the distorted look and blurry image in her mind but she can get a glimpse with of what it looked like and saw parts of its face, the figure wore cloak and his entire clothing was black with black hood with a face not like a human and looked like a monster, the figure had black skin with sharp visible fangs and his face had an angry expression, the figure lifts his blackened hand with claws on it and right as the figure touches theinas horrified face, theina lifts her body from a sleeping position to a sitting position with a her seeing her whole bedroom once again and while looking around theina says to herself the same nightmare has been back and she says “why can’t I get some normal dreams for once.

    • @destroyerrex1671
      @destroyerrex1671 Рік тому +3

      Chapter 2: (a reclamation of chaos begins)
      Theina talks to a wizard about her dreams and the wizard responds that she should hurry for the dreams of her mind are going to be true and the world will fall to darkness, theina goes to seia and start having a meeting, theina tells seia what’s happening and needs to see if adapts all right but seia looks sad and says “adapt left and I can’t find him anywhere, we had some complications the guards who were supposed to pick up Adapt from his carriage have never appeared and the guards who were stationed there have wound up dead and we are still trying to identify the guards who were stationed there, we are right now starting a search party for Adapt, I am still wondering what in the world happened to Adapt and on what’s going on. Anissa was also kidnapped and no one knows where she is?”news gets out on Adapts disappearance,Livius hears about this and secretly puts a hit on Adapt.while the search for Adapt is on going Theina tells Seia that she wants to help Clarus flourish once more.three years pass and Seia and Theina start having a conversation while going to a meeting with the elder council, they talked about the mask man killing the elder council and seia told theina that three years ago since adapts disappearance they were dead guards who were supposed to protect Adapt where near an abandoned house and all the guards who were who died near Adapt’s carriage were all identified as assassins and one of the soldiers had small amounts of blood on his spear which it might likely belonged to Adapt, it also most likely also happened to Anissa,so Seia and Theina both agree that this was a planned assassination attempt to kill Adapt, but they both ask the question what happened to Adapt and who put a hit on him, Theina asks Seia “any news on Adapt.” Seia says “No, knights that i dispatched have nothing, I’m worried that I they might find a dead body that belonged to Adapt, but I’m scared that we may never find him.”while having a meeting with elder council guards restrained Theina and Seia stating that they were given orders and that the reclamation has already begun and we’re arrested, the head of elder council says “by given orders of our future queen Despina we we place you both under arrest” right as he said that a masked man dressed in black comes into the room and slaughters people in the room then starts targeting the members of the elder council Seia runs out of the room and few surviving members start fleeing, Theina looked at the masked man terrified and remembers the same exact man from before in her dreams, after butchering a couple of members as he can the masked man comes up to her and says in his dark voice“keep quiet and don’t talk about this,” the masked man runs out of the room and vanishes, the theina says “it’s happening” then Seia ran straight back and grabs Theina and leaves back in a carriage and goes back to the castle in Targethon. A whole day has passed Theina thinks long about her vision and says to herself what’s going to happen next, a messenger comes into the room and tells Theina they located all the council members but all of them were dead, it’s predicted that the assassin who saved Theina and Seia ended killing every member in about hours with some of the members escaping to there secret houses and secure bunkers like the assassin was an expert and had this planned, then Seia comes running up to Theina that shows a note stating that an unknown man with Adapts handwriting has written a letter to Livius to have a private duel with him to the death and they need to get to him.Seia and Theina and a couple of guards race to the location and they see a tall man with armor that’s not like a knights armor with his face covered by the helmet,with another knight with Targethon colors and banners just watching the fight and a beaten up Livius covered in mud and on the ground injured. A peaceful village was minding its own business until an army of monsters such as orcs and goblins and many other monsters invaded the village and soon others joined in as well. A giant squid shell flies through the clouds like a plane and is the size of a mansion and lands in the area, squid people coming out of the shell and takes the captured residents who were captured during the raid. The squid people say “they will sacrifice for our lord.” The monster army starts preparing for their raid on Targethon castle.

    • @destroyerrex1671
      @destroyerrex1671 Рік тому +2

      Chapter 3:(The lost prince)
      Right as Theina and Seia and a couple of guards come into view the man with mysterious armor, the man’s armor was of red coloration and had big horns on its helmet,the mysterious warrior gets his sword then to his horse and flees, the guards start chasing after the mysterious man and arrest the other knight who was there while Seia and Theina grab an unconscious Livius and start giving him medical treatment and they put him on a the back of a wagon start riding back to the castle and they give Livius to healers to heal his wounds,Theina and Seia start waiting in another adjacent to the medical room where Livius is, the captain of the guard steps through the door and says to Theina and Seia “we tried catching that mysterious man but he managed to escape. We found his sword that he threw at a tree.” While Theina starts looking at the letter of the note that Adapt wrote to Livius of the duel, Seia says “captain what kind of armor was that man wearing.” The captain then says “to tell the truth Seia, I've never seen armor like that before, it's like it’s from a different world. We’re looking into the origins of the sword right now.”The healer comes walking through the door and says “Livius is partially healed and is now conscious you can speak to him.” Theina and Seia start going into the room and Theina starts making an angry face to Livius and says “what were you thinking, you nearly would have been killed if we didn’t intervene,” Livius responds with “like you had it worse, we could have been together if it weren’t for him,” Theina responds “no, you ruined our relationship and now this is ruining our friendship.” Livius says “at least we’re still friends, I deserve friendship, Adapt however deserves death, I’ve been hunting him down for at least Three years by now.” Seia responds with “no wonder why Adapt disappeared you tried to kill him this whole time.” Livius responds “before Adapt disappeared, I started putting a hit on him after he disappeared.”Seia responds with “if you did it after then who did it before Adapt left.ugh I’ve had enough guards put restraints on this monster we’ll be having trial soon after this.”Livius responds “what are you doing” Seia responds “I know exactly what I am doing we are charging you for attempted murder.”the guards put restraints on Livius bed so he couldn’t leave his own bed. Seia and Theina start integrating Livius. Seia tells Livius “this court will rule in favor of you soon enough, I will give you a lawyer to help testify to you in court only if you tell me all you know to us. And don’t lie to us this could have further consequences and could remove you from the throne.” Livius tells them “okay I’ll tell ya everything, so after Adapt disappeared I assigned a couple of assassins to hunt down, I had reports that Adapt stole a small boat and sailed off. And assassins sailing trying to catch up to him.” Seia responds “and where did Adapt and the assassins go” Livius responds with “I don’t know, after Adapt and the assassins sailed off both of them never returned, i hired explores and investigators to look into missing people in secret in the direction of where they headed and couldn’t find anything because they it would take to long and they would have to explore an unknown area in order to find them, so after a couple of months I created an exploration ship put some experienced mercenaries on the ship to explore unknown lands and after a couple of months one of the explorers came back on a small wooden boat with a sail and him rowing back exhausting himself to get back home and gave horrific news of how his men got attacked and out in trouble, I tried to ask him questions but the man died to overexhaustion trying to send help, I sent another boat with mercenaries to help them, but the same thing happened the boat never reported back until one day I received a disgusting bag with a suspicious letter when I read the letter who had a similar handwriting to Adapt, it has been stated that he was tired of fighting assassins and mercenaries
      And now wants to fight me so he asked me for a private duel to the death where they can settle things once and for all and it also says they could bring only one guard but he can’t interfere with the duel, it also added that if anyone tries to interfere or if he tries to capture him with an army he’ll kill me with assasination attempt instead and he can also do it in worst ways imaginable and he’s also smart and skilled so he won’t be easily fooled and at the bottom it sent the location of where the duel would be, to show proof of his skills he also sent a bag with it of people that tried hunting him down, I opened the bag and I saw heads of skeletons with clothing and items of each person who all were sent to kill Adapt and I recognized everyone as people I sent to kill Adapt, so i did what the letter told me I went to the exact location then a that man with an odd looking armor appeared he drew his sword and started the duel. Something was odd. The mysterious warrior I fought was taller than me and the last time I remember Adapt was an inch shorter than me. His fighting technique was so different he threw his sword at me and he disarmed me with his hands and we got into a fist fight and fought like with moves I never seen before. He defeated me in combat because of it. He would have killed me but instead he was throwing me to the ground and he threw me into a pit of mud, it was like he was humiliating me.” Seia responds with" Well now we have an assassin going to kill Livius. Since me and Theina have read the letter parts and some parts of the story holds up, alright we’ll get you a lawyer.” Seia and Theina talk in private they talk to each other about and they think the mysterious man wanted Livius dead. Seia says to Theina “Even though the handwriting does look like it could have been written by Adapt, however the assassin could have seen Adapts handwriting somewhere and mimicked it to disguise the letter as Adapts we do know that the mysterious man had some connections with the letter like he wanted to be sent there. So many questions yet no answers.” The general runs to Livius' cell and says “we’re being invaded by an army, and our forces are low.we're going to need your help.”

    • @destroyerrex1671
      @destroyerrex1671 Рік тому +2

      Chapter:4 (party crashers)
      The general opens the cell and gets him and starts preparing for battle. They see a whole horde of monsters about to raid the place then Aninum says to Livius “who’s that cloaked figure on the mountain.” Livius says “I don’t know he could be one of them.” The monsters invade and capture Targethon castle, Livius gets into a fight with a man in mysterious armor that nearly looks identical with the man he fought with that sent him a message, but he wore a mask where you can see his eyes, the man was 6 feet 5 inches and is blind in one eye. And he wore silver armor with steel claws on his fists.The man with weird looking armor says “Goliath get take care of the plucktary knight.!”a giant muscular monster that looks human but with four arms and his body is stitched together and was 8 feet tall. Runs to Anium with swords on each hand and says “I got him right where I want him!”Livius fights the man with the weird armor and Aninum fights the 4 armed creature that calls himself Goliath.When Livius and Aninum were about to get overrun a ton of arrows fly through air and hit a couple of monsters in the head the cloaked figure got on his horse and throws a smoke bomb at the man in weird armor and Goliath and protected Aninum and Livius so they can get their chance to escape while fleeing they hear a loud and ominous voice from the castle yelling the words “Miro!!!!!! I will find you and I will kill you!!!”Targethon was captured and the remaining forces had no choice but to flee to Clarus and take shelter there. Seia and Theina get to the celebration of Atticus while there having a party, a cloaked figure climbs on top of the castle and pulls out his bow. A strange black carriage came to the entrance. A tall 7 foot tall man came out of the carriage. The tall man looked of old age like a grandparent with wrinkles all over his body and has long gray hair that reaches down to his shoulders and a long white mustache,with very white pale skin that makes him look like a ghost with black eyes, he’s dressed nicely with a large black cape.He stepped out and gave a big sniff and then said “I pick up a familiar scent, he is here, he could jeopardize the mission.you wait here I’ll go get my prize.” He walks up to the guards and the guard says “can’t come in unless you have proof of your invitation.” The tall man says “that won’t be necessary.” He looks at the guard's eyes, the tall man’s eyes change to red deadshot eyes and the guard says “okay you may enter.” The tall man enters and sees people dancing at the ball. The cloaked figure pulls out his bow and when he’s about to fire he sees a ton of strange looking men slaughtering the guards and entering the castle. The cloaked figure puts his bow and arrow, then hands climbs on the wall and enters through a window without being seen. Theina tells her mother that she’s going to get a drink and will be back, the guard goes up to Theina’s parents and tells her that penkos has been invaded by monsters, Ellya says “to the guard that there going to lockdown Atticus and tell everyone that penkos is being invaded by monsters.”the tall man walks through the crowd and accidentally bumps into Arlan. Arlan spills his drink and Area goes up to him and cleans Arlans clothes and says “I am so sorry for that.” The tall man says “it’s fine, I have to watch for the little ones.” Area says “I never seen a noble like or seen you or a person that tall what is your name.” The tall man responds with “I am count Wampyr von Stroker.” Wampyr looks out in the distance and sees Theina in the distance. And Wampry says “ excuse I need to see someone.” And starts walking to the door where Theina went.Theina walks to a water hose and pours a cup then she sees guard at the window getting ripped apart by people dressed as bandits with visible mouths on their masks. Theina starts running back to the ballroom trying to call for help until she sees Wampyr holding a guard with Wampyr drinking the guards blood. Theina runs the other way yelling for help until she turns to the down to a hallway and sees the cloaked figure dressed in black down the hall with the cape covering his body.The figure was 6 feet 5 inches tall and had giant lumps on his shoulders, the cape had holes on it at the end of the cape from his feet he pushes the cape back to reveal the body,his body is covered head to toe with armor, and he shows the lump on his shoulder which reveal small fangs that curve to his head on each shoulder.he wore a metal gloves with metal claws on each finger like a tiger with two spikes on index finger,middle finger,ring finger and little finger with four mini blades on the palm of his hands, and he had two metal blades on top of his knuckle that curve that can reach the end of his extended fingers with two warthog tusks cut from the middle and attached to the blades making seem like the blades are part of his body with mini crossbows on the top part of his arm that when fired go in between the two blades on top of his fists,he had the small style on each arm and he had three large saber tooth fangs on the side of his lower arm and a ton of arrowheads glued to the sides of his arm.and two saber tooth tiger fangs on his upper arm.with boar tusks on his knees and large saber tooth fangs on his thighs and calves on the leg,He wore metal shoes with two blades that reach to the bottom of the ground on each side of his feet and back of his foot, he has three blades on the top of his toes and two coned shape spike at the front of toe of the shoe and two coned shape spike at the back of his foot and six spikes underneath his feet,he has a ton of small fangs that curve upward. He wore a black fur that had v shape that hook up to his shoulders with a belt strapped to his waist and his shoulders that’s connected to weapons and pouch pockets.and the black fur goes under his belt and to his buttocks that makes it like there’s a cape to the back of his legs. He has a red symbol of a monster on the middle part of his chest with an angry expression and his helmet looks exactly like the symbol on his chest but with more detail but it’s black instead of red on his helmet, with a black scarf around his neck and a small eyes holes in the helmet covered in a shadow and when light shines through reveal eyes that look like a snakes eyes.Theina sees the figure was the monster from her visions, the one that kills Adapt. The figure looks at Theina and made monstrous sounds.Theina looks with terror at the figure she throws a fireball at the figure but when the fire ball exploded the figure keeps walking unscathed, then Theina runs back around until she reaches at a door but then realizes it’s locked she looks in terror as the cloaked figure pulls out his bow and aims an arrow at Theina but instead of an arrowhead on the arrow at the tip of the arrow having a red ball at the tip of the arrow. The figure says to Theina in a dark voice that sounds like a monster and not human say, "Get down.” Theina ducks and the figure fires his arrow at Wampyr and Wampyr explodes. The party hears a big explosion inside the castle and everyone at the party gets into a panic.Wampyr lifts his body from the ground with fire all around him and looks at the figure. The figure hugs Theina’s back and Wampyr grabs a couple of knives from his pocket and throws them at the figures back but bounce off the figures back armor. Wampyr walks towards the figure and the figure uses his leg to kick Wampyr and they get into a brawl. The figure yells at Theina to get the guards in the castle and tell them what's happening, Theina starts running. And gets outside of the castle and runs to Seia’s parked carriage, and tells the guard whose the guard who was protecting it, “please help me, I’m being chased by a cannibalistic man who’s trying to-!!!” A knife flies towards the guards head and hits the guards head and the guard falls to the ground. Theina screams and sees the same bandits from the window, Theina gets inside the carriage and tells the man to jump on it. Seia sees Theina Getting into the carriage and yells at Theina “Theina, what are you doing to my carriage?!?!?!''Theina and the carriage guy start whipping the horses and the horses start racing and carry the carriage at high speed. Seia sees bandits turn into bats and Seia says”what did I just see.” A black horse jumps over Seias head and lands in front of Seia, Seia sees the figure riding the horse with the horse wearing black armor. The figure rides his horse in the same direction of the carriage.Seia runs back into the castle. The bandits turn human grabs onto the carriage. The bandits start devouring the carriage man and they grab the horses of the carriage and cut them off the carriage,there bandits start ripping through the ceiling of the carriage One the bats chasing the carriage grabs the carriages door and rips open the door and sees Theina hiding under the seat of the carriage the bandit looks at Theina with a smile, Theina uses a magic spell on the bandit the bandit grabs its face then removes his hand to reveal the humans face with skin chainring to gray with sharp fangs, then the bandit gets pierced by a lance from the figure. The figure throws star-like metals at three vampires who entered the carriage and bandits drop to the ground in pain. The figure throws what looks like a small scythe with a chain on it a bandit riding a horse with bloodshot eyes and drops a spike on the ground that stands up on it self for bandit on a horse to step on it and fall to the ground, then the figure grabs Theina and puts Theina on the saddle in front of him and drops a bomb on the carriage.

    • @destroyerrex1671
      @destroyerrex1671 Рік тому +2

      Chapter:5 (the figure reveals itself)
      The carriage crashes into a tree and explodes. The figure looks at the debris of the carriage then turns the horse in a different location. Wampyr looks at the terrified crowd and tells a his men dressed as guards to capture Theina’s parents and Area with Arlan and Anissa.Theina says to the figure “Wait,where are you taking me?” The figure responds with “I’m taking you back to the castle.” Theina hears the figure breathing like a monster every few seconds,Theina then says”okay then good, at least something good is happening. May I ask what your name is?” The figure stays silent,Theina then says “what are those things that chased us.” The figure responds “Vampires.” Theina says “I thought those were myths.” The figure replies “They're real, and they are hunting you.”Theina then says “why did you save me whoever you are.” The figure doesn’t say anything and Theina says “did you hear what I just said.” And the figure replies “I heard you, but I refuse to answer your question.” The figure rides his horse until he sees knights ride up towards him and says “halt, put down the princess and put hands behind your head.” The figure tells Theina to get off his horse. Theina gets off her horse and says to the unknown ``thank you for saving me, but I must ask you to accompany me back to the castle.” She looks at where the figure should have been but sees a puff of smoke and the figure is gone. Seia runs up to Theina and says “Theina are you okay.” Theina says “I’m fine, I’m sorry about your carriage.” Seia says “don’t worry about my carriage, I’m glad you're safe. How did you survive unscathed?” Theina says “The figure saved me. But we're my parents.” Wampyr gets back into his carriage with a cloaked person and says “I wasn't able to get Theina but I did get her parents and the pluctary knight's wife and child. But I’ve got news on a knight that I got into a fight with.” The cloaked person removes its hood to reveal Miro and she says “tell me about this knight.” A whole day has passed, Aninum and Livius go to Atticus castle and Seia stomps her feet toward Livius, I thought you're supposed to be in a jail cell.`` Aninum says “look Seia we need Livius more than ever, we’re desperate to stop this human and monster war and we need his help. Penkos is now a base for monsters.” Seia looks at Livius in a mad face until saying to Livius ``I've got my eye on you, once we deal with the monsters your back into a cell. You better not be putting a hit on Adapt again because we don’t have time for that.” Theina says “what happened to my parents, and Area, and Arlan.” The guard responds “sources say that assassins disguised themselves as guards and they took them to a different room to kidnap them. We did capture one of the assassin’s but he refuses to talk. The assassins left a ransom note that if Theina and the pluctary knight don't surrender themselves they’ll kill their family with the location on where they want you arrested.``The group enter the room where they were taken, they also see another room with guards guarding one of assassins dressed as a guard. Theina cries and says “I don’t want to give myself to the enemy nor do I want to see my parents die.” Seia says “don’t worry, we won't let them take you or let them kill your parents.”Livius says “man this will take forever to solve.” A knight says “have you ever heard of the mercenary that can solve cases in minutes. Theina says “do you know where this mercenary is?” The group heads towards Atticus mercenary guild. The head toward the guild master and Aninum says “we want to hire a mercenary.” The owner says okay, choose whoever you like.” The owner pulls out a box full of papers and Aninum says “we want the man that people call him the boogeyman.” The guild master says “I’m sorry but he isn’t here right now, and I suggest picking someone else, he can also get pretty expensive.” Seia says “do you know who we are.” The door opens and the guild master says “I’m sorry but I need to deal with someone.” The figure who weaved Theina walks towards the guildmaster and says “I did the tasks and completed it.” Livius, Aninum and Theina look at the figure in a surprised way.The guild master says “what kinds.” The figure replies “all of them.” The figure empties his bag and all the dead human heads come out. Then the figure replies “I would like my payment.” The guildmaster pulls out a small bag of gold and gives it to the figure. The figure pulls out the gold and counts and then says “this is not enough, this is not even half of the payment.” The guild master says “I expected your tasks to be done in three weeks, you did it in three days, you should have been waiting for later.” The figure says “yeah I did it in less time, that shows how good of a mercenary I am.” The guild master says “you did your job so well that you took all the other mercenary jobs.” The figure says “you shouldn't have put tasks up that you can’t afford. Now pay up.” The figure pulls out all the paper tasks and points to the money he owes him.The guildmaster says “like I owe you anything.” The figure takes his sword out and gets it near his neck. Aninum says “whoa whoa take it easy, let’s discuss how we can fix this. May I see if he paid like he promised.” Aninum counts the gold and looks at the paper he owns and says “yeah this is totally not enough.” Aninum looks at the guildmaster and says “I know how mercenary work goes and people who post these pay a fee in order to post it. So that means you are stealing this man’s money and not paying him the exact amount he wants, so pay him the money you owe him or be courted.” The guildmaster says “okay here’s your money.” The guildmaster pulls out a big sack of gold and gives it to the figure. The figure counted and then said “thank you for doing business.” The guildmaster says “don’t come back.” And the figure replies “I won’t, you just lost your best mercenary. And I bet you lost some of the other mercenaries.” The figure leaves with a ton of mercenaries walking behind him and all of them complain about being ripped off, Theina decides to follow the figure to see where he leads. Seia then says “okay, can you give us the boogeyman.” The guildmaster says “yeah the one I was just talking to. That’s the boogeyman.” Livius says “wait where did Theina go. The group walks around until Anium and Livius and Lio come across a guy on stage with a musical band starts singing “why hello everyone, let me tell you a story of the scariest being to exist that saved my life, he is like a monster that had originated and risen from the deepest and darkest pits of hell and would give shivers to everyone even the very plucktary knight himself, and even when your dead you hope you never see him coming after you, for he will even eat your soul for dinner and I tell you one thing he loves eating is people's souls and flesh, he loves eating his victims down to there clothes of what’s left of them, he loves to eat any victim, he loves his victims big and fat or small and skinny you name it and he’ll eat you. I tell you that he is 100% real and I crossed his path a short while ago and his appearance made me pee my pants. He is stronger than 30 men, and can outrun a horse. When he goes a joggen across the land holding his weapon in his weapon other demons take one look at him and run the other way. He has a list of people who are his targets that will satisfy his hungry stomach, and parents should tell their children to behave because he loves eating miss behaving children,and I would be careful to not be hit on his list if I were any of you, if any of you are on the list try make sure to please and have a reason not to kill you and a nice warning don’t try to run away from him because you will only die tired and plus you will die swiftly if you don’t try and fight back so don’t be on his list or face his wrath. And will ride to the edges of Morena to find his prey anywhere, and I will not like to get on his bad side because some of his targets he will chase for all eternity until he gets them and he is tired of some still living happy lives, and I heard that all that he has grown tired of are all now dead, and soon you’ll be dead to as well if you tried to make and enemy for he is a demon of death and he swears to the world to the end of time that he will get his targets, and while he saved my my life and I asked his name and he said that his name is the Curse, be careful when you hear his name because the moment you say his name he is already at your doorstep.``Seia was walking around until she sees Theina staring at a window of a restaurant. And says “Theina, what were you doing you could get lost here.” Theina says “quite I‘m spying on someone.” Seia looks at the window and sees the figure sitting down and waiting for a meal. Seia says “well you found the guy we’re looking for, but why are you looking at him.” And Theina says “because he is the one who saved me last night and is also the monster from my visions.” And Seia says “what did the monster do in your vision.” And Theina says “he kills Adapt.” Aninum says to the worker at the restaurant “we would like to book a table with the man in armor over there.” Theina says to Seia in a whisper “don’t say anything right now. We need his help.” Seia whispers back “I don’t like this, he could betray us, that vision could be anything he’s going to kill Adapt, let’s kill him and be done with it.” Theina says “we could change that so he doesn’t kill Adapt.''

  • @HELLOKAII
    @HELLOKAII Рік тому +5

    Man i miss this series,oh and btw...i wanted to ask for permission to do a fanfic abt this on wattpad. If thats fine with you.

    • @Shiaides
      @Shiaides  Рік тому +4

      Sure! As long as I’m properly credited for the characters! Have fun writing a fanfic!

    • @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h
      @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h 11 місяців тому

      Name pls

    • @HELLOKAII
      @HELLOKAII 11 місяців тому

      @@Shiaides Thank you so much! I'll be sure to put your credit for it!

    • @HELLOKAII
      @HELLOKAII 11 місяців тому

      @@Morbid_Curiosity-d5h Sorry,i haven't fully writing it yet. Let alone publishing it. So i will probably publish it during my school holidays :>

    • @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h
      @Morbid_Curiosity-d5h 10 місяців тому

      @@HELLOKAII let me know Whalen you have