🎯 Key Takeaways for quick navigation: 00:02 🎤 *Introduction and Workshop Overview* - Introduction to the session on essay writing for scholarship applications, highlighting its importance for those preparing to apply. - Welcome and introduction of speakers. - Invitation for participants to introduce themselves in the chat. 01:40 📝 *Essay Writing Workshop Details* - Explanation of the session's focus on essay writing for scholarship applications. - Overview of the upcoming segments, including a presentation on essay writing experiences and a Q&A session. 03:44 🌍 *Participant Introductions and Diversity* - Acknowledgment of the wide geographical distribution of participants, emphasizing the power of social media in bringing people together for educational opportunities. 04:29 🏆 *Speaker Introduction and Background* - Introduction of the speaker's background, educational journey, and professional experience. - Discussion on the importance of education and personal growth through diverse experiences. 06:35 📘 *Overview of Scholarship Application Process* - Detailed walkthrough of the scholarship application process, emphasizing the critical role of the essay in the selection process. - Insights into the speaker's personal experience with the scholarship application, highlighting the importance of aligning one's goals with the essay's content. 09:07 💡 *Finding Your Contribution Idea* - Strategies for identifying a meaningful contribution theme for the scholarship essay. - Encouragement to reflect on personal passions, goals, and the desire to effect positive change as the foundation for the essay's content. 12:07 🎯 *Setting Goals and Identifying Passions* - Guidance on how to define clear goals and passions that can drivethe content of the scholarship essay. - Tips for connecting personal objectives with broader social or environmental issues, emphasizing the importance of authenticity in the essay. 17:09 🤔 *Identifying Personal Goals and Observations* - Insights on how personal observations and concerns can shape educational goals and contributions. - Examples of deriving goals from education, work experience, volunteering, and personal background. - Emphasis on the importance of goals being closely related to personal experiences and the desire to address specific issues in Indonesia. 18:33 🌱 *Impact and Contribution* - Discussion on the dual nature of impact: internal (personal growth) and external (contributions to society). - Encouragement to consider both personal and societal benefits when planning educational and career goals. - Highlighting that contributions do not need to be nationwide but should be significant to Indonesian communities. 22:09 ✍️ *Essay Structure and Writing Tips* - Detailed breakdown of a successful essay structure for scholarship applications, including introduction (hook), background, study motivation, and choice of institution. - Strategies for making the essay engaging and reflective of personal aspirations and potential contributions. - Emphasis on authenticity and relevance in discussing personal background and achievements in relation to study goals. 29:08 🎯 *Personal Background and Motivation for Study* - Explanation of how to integrate personal background and professional experiences into the essay to support study motivations and goals. - Suggestions for highlighting relevant experiences, family background, and personal challenges to underscore the applicant's commitment and relevance of their goals. 32:50 🎯 *Goal Setting Strategy* - Discussion on setting achievable short, medium, and long-term goals post-study. - Short-term goals should be immediately actionable and not overly ambitious to appear realistic. 35:25 🌟 *Importance of Connectivity in Goals* - Emphasis on the connection between short, medium, and long-term goals. - Goals should be related but not necessarily linear, allowing for flexibility in their achievement and relevance to Indonesia. 38:04 🔄 *Goal Flexibility and Uniqueness* - Clarification that goals do not need to be grandiose or unique to be valuable. - The importance of goals being related to Indonesia and the allowance for goals to evolve based on new experiences and insights. 40:07 🎓 *Selecting Study Programs and Institutions* - How to align program selection with personal goals and demonstrate serious commitment through research on specific courses and faculty. - Importance of showing detailed interest in the chosen program to prove dedication and the significance of education beyond obtaining a degree. 44:26 🔄 *Feedback and Revision Process* - Encouragement to seek, accept, and thoughtfully consider feedback from others. - Importance of being open to criticism without being defensive, and the ability to discern which feedback to incorporate into revisions for improvement. 48:48 🔄 *Self-awareness in Feedback Selection* - Emphasizing the importance of being selective with feedback to ensure it aligns with personal conviction and goals. - Acknowledgment that while feedback is crucial, the final decision on essay content rests with the individual. 49:59 ⏳ *Focus on Controllable Elements* - Advice on focusing efforts on aspects within one's control, such as time management and preparation. - The significance of dedicating time and effort to the application process, including revision and practice for tests and interviews. 55:31 📝 *Essay Writing Specifics* - Discussion on the approach to including data in essays, recommending restraint to avoid excessive word count usage. - Highlighting the importance of using data to strengthen arguments without overwhelming the narrative or detracting from the essay's personal elements. 01:03:26 🌟 *Importance of Personal Branding and English Proficiency* - Debate on prioritizing English proficiency over personal branding in the scholarship application process. - Acknowledgment that while building a personal brand is beneficial, meeting the essential requirements, such as language proficiency, should be the initial focus. 01:05:39 🎓 *Prioritizing Essential Requirements* - Emphasis on focusing on essential requirements such as language proficiency before building personal branding. - Advice on utilizing time between application submission and selection process for personal development and branding. 01:06:24 🤔 *Choosing Multiple Study Programs* - Guidance on selecting and justifying three different study programs in an application. - Importance of ensuring all chosen programs are aligned with personal goals and adequately explained, avoiding the appearance of backup options. 01:09:06 🚀 *Transitioning Between Different Fields* - Discussion on the feasibility and strategy of transitioning from one field of study or work to another for higher education. - Highlighting the importance of framing the transition in the application essay to show relevance and commitment to the new field. 01:16:49 🌱 *Developing Skills and Experiences* - Suggestions for undergraduate students to prepare for postgraduate studies, focusing on participation in organizations, publication, and building relationships with faculty for strong recommendations. - Encouragement for engagement in activities that showcase leadership and teamwork skills, and the pursuit of relevant certifications or courses. 01:23:10 ✍️ *Writing a Strong Essay Without Direct Experience* - Tips for writing a compelling essay focused on future goals rather than past experiences. - Advice on how to demonstrate knowledge and commitment to a field through a well-articulated vision and goal setting, compensating for lack of direct experience. 01:24:52 🎯 *Maximizing Focus on Goals in Essays* - Advice on focusing the essay on goals rather than limited experiences to bolster the application. - Emphasis on the importance of clearly defined goals to compensate for any perceived lack of relevant experience. 01:25:44 🤝 *Selecting Feedback Providers* - Guidance on choosing individuals for essay feedback, suggesting either close trusted individuals or professional mentors. - Highlighting the balance between personal confidence and openness to feedback. 01:28:45 📚 *Application Process Insights* - Clarification on the LPDP scholarship application requirements and suggestions for frequent website consultation for updates. - Advice on how to demonstrate commitment and knowledge through direct engagementwith prospective faculty. 01:32:23 🚀 *Incorporating Career Aspirations into Essays* - Discussion on how aspirations like becoming a civil servant in a field related to the essay topic can be integrated as medium or long-term goals. - Stresses the validity of including such career goals as part of the contribution to the country. 01:34:13 🌟 *Closing Statements and Encouragement* - Final thoughts emphasize the importance of staying focused on one's goals and not fearing rejection or failure. - Encouragement to view the scholarship and educational journey as a means to an end, not the end itself. Made with HARPA AI
🎯 Key Takeaways for quick navigation:
00:02 🎤 *Introduction and Workshop Overview*
- Introduction to the session on essay writing for scholarship applications, highlighting its importance for those preparing to apply.
- Welcome and introduction of speakers.
- Invitation for participants to introduce themselves in the chat.
01:40 📝 *Essay Writing Workshop Details*
- Explanation of the session's focus on essay writing for scholarship applications.
- Overview of the upcoming segments, including a presentation on essay writing experiences and a Q&A session.
03:44 🌍 *Participant Introductions and Diversity*
- Acknowledgment of the wide geographical distribution of participants, emphasizing the power of social media in bringing people together for educational opportunities.
04:29 🏆 *Speaker Introduction and Background*
- Introduction of the speaker's background, educational journey, and professional experience.
- Discussion on the importance of education and personal growth through diverse experiences.
06:35 📘 *Overview of Scholarship Application Process*
- Detailed walkthrough of the scholarship application process, emphasizing the critical role of the essay in the selection process.
- Insights into the speaker's personal experience with the scholarship application, highlighting the importance of aligning one's goals with the essay's content.
09:07 💡 *Finding Your Contribution Idea*
- Strategies for identifying a meaningful contribution theme for the scholarship essay.
- Encouragement to reflect on personal passions, goals, and the desire to effect positive change as the foundation for the essay's content.
12:07 🎯 *Setting Goals and Identifying Passions*
- Guidance on how to define clear goals and passions that can drivethe content of the scholarship essay.
- Tips for connecting personal objectives with broader social or environmental issues, emphasizing the importance of authenticity in the essay.
17:09 🤔 *Identifying Personal Goals and Observations*
- Insights on how personal observations and concerns can shape educational goals and contributions.
- Examples of deriving goals from education, work experience, volunteering, and personal background.
- Emphasis on the importance of goals being closely related to personal experiences and the desire to address specific issues in Indonesia.
18:33 🌱 *Impact and Contribution*
- Discussion on the dual nature of impact: internal (personal growth) and external (contributions to society).
- Encouragement to consider both personal and societal benefits when planning educational and career goals.
- Highlighting that contributions do not need to be nationwide but should be significant to Indonesian communities.
22:09 ✍️ *Essay Structure and Writing Tips*
- Detailed breakdown of a successful essay structure for scholarship applications, including introduction (hook), background, study motivation, and choice of institution.
- Strategies for making the essay engaging and reflective of personal aspirations and potential contributions.
- Emphasis on authenticity and relevance in discussing personal background and achievements in relation to study goals.
29:08 🎯 *Personal Background and Motivation for Study*
- Explanation of how to integrate personal background and professional experiences into the essay to support study motivations and goals.
- Suggestions for highlighting relevant experiences, family background, and personal challenges to underscore the applicant's commitment and relevance of their goals.
32:50 🎯 *Goal Setting Strategy*
- Discussion on setting achievable short, medium, and long-term goals post-study.
- Short-term goals should be immediately actionable and not overly ambitious to appear realistic.
35:25 🌟 *Importance of Connectivity in Goals*
- Emphasis on the connection between short, medium, and long-term goals.
- Goals should be related but not necessarily linear, allowing for flexibility in their achievement and relevance to Indonesia.
38:04 🔄 *Goal Flexibility and Uniqueness*
- Clarification that goals do not need to be grandiose or unique to be valuable.
- The importance of goals being related to Indonesia and the allowance for goals to evolve based on new experiences and insights.
40:07 🎓 *Selecting Study Programs and Institutions*
- How to align program selection with personal goals and demonstrate serious commitment through research on specific courses and faculty.
- Importance of showing detailed interest in the chosen program to prove dedication and the significance of education beyond obtaining a degree.
44:26 🔄 *Feedback and Revision Process*
- Encouragement to seek, accept, and thoughtfully consider feedback from others.
- Importance of being open to criticism without being defensive, and the ability to discern which feedback to incorporate into revisions for improvement.
48:48 🔄 *Self-awareness in Feedback Selection*
- Emphasizing the importance of being selective with feedback to ensure it aligns with personal conviction and goals.
- Acknowledgment that while feedback is crucial, the final decision on essay content rests with the individual.
49:59 ⏳ *Focus on Controllable Elements*
- Advice on focusing efforts on aspects within one's control, such as time management and preparation.
- The significance of dedicating time and effort to the application process, including revision and practice for tests and interviews.
55:31 📝 *Essay Writing Specifics*
- Discussion on the approach to including data in essays, recommending restraint to avoid excessive word count usage.
- Highlighting the importance of using data to strengthen arguments without overwhelming the narrative or detracting from the essay's personal elements.
01:03:26 🌟 *Importance of Personal Branding and English Proficiency*
- Debate on prioritizing English proficiency over personal branding in the scholarship application process.
- Acknowledgment that while building a personal brand is beneficial, meeting the essential requirements, such as language proficiency, should be the initial focus.
01:05:39 🎓 *Prioritizing Essential Requirements*
- Emphasis on focusing on essential requirements such as language proficiency before building personal branding.
- Advice on utilizing time between application submission and selection process for personal development and branding.
01:06:24 🤔 *Choosing Multiple Study Programs*
- Guidance on selecting and justifying three different study programs in an application.
- Importance of ensuring all chosen programs are aligned with personal goals and adequately explained, avoiding the appearance of backup options.
01:09:06 🚀 *Transitioning Between Different Fields*
- Discussion on the feasibility and strategy of transitioning from one field of study or work to another for higher education.
- Highlighting the importance of framing the transition in the application essay to show relevance and commitment to the new field.
01:16:49 🌱 *Developing Skills and Experiences*
- Suggestions for undergraduate students to prepare for postgraduate studies, focusing on participation in organizations, publication, and building relationships with faculty for strong recommendations.
- Encouragement for engagement in activities that showcase leadership and teamwork skills, and the pursuit of relevant certifications or courses.
01:23:10 ✍️ *Writing a Strong Essay Without Direct Experience*
- Tips for writing a compelling essay focused on future goals rather than past experiences.
- Advice on how to demonstrate knowledge and commitment to a field through a well-articulated vision and goal setting, compensating for lack of direct experience.
01:24:52 🎯 *Maximizing Focus on Goals in Essays*
- Advice on focusing the essay on goals rather than limited experiences to bolster the application.
- Emphasis on the importance of clearly defined goals to compensate for any perceived lack of relevant experience.
01:25:44 🤝 *Selecting Feedback Providers*
- Guidance on choosing individuals for essay feedback, suggesting either close trusted individuals or professional mentors.
- Highlighting the balance between personal confidence and openness to feedback.
01:28:45 📚 *Application Process Insights*
- Clarification on the LPDP scholarship application requirements and suggestions for frequent website consultation for updates.
- Advice on how to demonstrate commitment and knowledge through direct engagementwith prospective faculty.
01:32:23 🚀 *Incorporating Career Aspirations into Essays*
- Discussion on how aspirations like becoming a civil servant in a field related to the essay topic can be integrated as medium or long-term goals.
- Stresses the validity of including such career goals as part of the contribution to the country.
01:34:13 🌟 *Closing Statements and Encouragement*
- Final thoughts emphasize the importance of staying focused on one's goals and not fearing rejection or failure.
- Encouragement to view the scholarship and educational journey as a means to an end, not the end itself.
Made with HARPA AI
terima kasih, semoga sukses untuk semuana
padat banget isinya, not even a second ever wasted, thank you so much for sharing, kak!
Semoga bermanfaat ya kak
Pembahasa esai dimulai dari 10:05
terima kasih kak
Halo Kak Wai dan Studentnesia, terima kasih ya, materinya sudah turut membantu aku untuk lolos LPDP
wah terimakasih kak wei dan tim studentnesia, jadi dapat banyak insight ❤
Keren bgt pengampaiannya, on point dan membuka insight!! Thank you kaaa
Semoga bermanfaat ya kak
terimakasih banyak Kak Wai dan Studentnesia untuk sharing2 nyaa!! alhamdulillah jadi tercerahkan bangeett
Yey, semoga lancar untuk persiapannya ya kak :D
Terima kasih informasinya kak
kalau ada info beasiswa lain mohon info juga kawan2 yang lagi cari beasiswa
aku hadir di seminar ini sebelumnya, tpi dibagian essay yg menjelaskan tentang alasan memilih kampus dan jurusan nya gaada ya?
Ada kaa
dalam essay boleh tidak mencantumkan foto/dokumentasi pendukung?
8 jam lagi ges ditutup