My thoughts: - It took 30 seconds to develop after the beginning. That seemed a bit too long. Maybe shaving off a measure would help. - I love the soft instrumentals in the beginning. Elements/sounds generally blend/fit together extaordinarily well in the track. You truly are a master of the chill/ambient style and bring your abundance of talent into more energetic tracks. - You incorporate sounds that are like vocal chops. I am a major sucker for those! So I liked it, including how you used them.
![kobato - Rain in the window / Breathe with you [放っておけないもの]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/E8kf4WwutBE/mqdefault.jpg)
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more than the best
包み込むような安心感あるメロディーが最高です。
ありがとうございます( ˘ω˘ )…
My thoughts:
- It took 30 seconds to develop after the beginning. That seemed a bit too long. Maybe shaving off a measure would help.
- I love the soft instrumentals in the beginning. Elements/sounds generally blend/fit together extaordinarily well in the track. You truly are a master of the chill/ambient style and bring your abundance of talent into more energetic tracks.
- You incorporate sounds that are like vocal chops. I am a major sucker for those! So I liked it, including how you used them.
introducing a new instrument after 15 seconds would be perfect. otherwise, this song is sooooo chill, nice job!!
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