I did enjoy this story a lot to the point that I'm saving it in my favorites. I like how the story doesn't go back and front with the usual severed ties novels. And some of the characters I really did like. The character does have a system but honestly I don't think he needed it. I like how the character wasn't just focused on revenge but also growth. If I have any complaints, I would say that I felt the ending was rushed and maybe a little love interest or something because some of the characters don't get mentioned again. 😂 But still love the story
i am at 4:32:00 until now 1/10 of the story was about ''the main character'' and 9/10 of the story was about his father being a **** and just in general doing everything to ruin his life aand our for having to listen to it. hope this ''arc'' ends soon bcuz i dont have much hope for this story...
Im at 14:23:08 and im still annoyed by the family bc of the contradicting 😂😂 he claims as family but then not then yes .. like .. and the MOM....... 😒 but other than that it's ok
The stories are good, However I do hate the fact that all these stories are bloated with over explanations, repetitive statements, and pointless monologues . Who the hell talk all that smack in a fighting , Really? just get to the point that's all I ask.
Why did he need the system? The story could have been better without it. There would need to be some adjustments of course. I don't think systems add to these stories, they are a crutch and a bit lazy.
It is very common in Chinese light novels. They will sometimes repeat the same sentence 3-4 times in a row worded a little different and go into the full description of something every time it is brought up.
I'm still wondering HOW, in stories like these, the boy ends up an orphan. They never talk about HOW the child gets separated, or WHY. These gaps make the story itself empty.
They do mention that during the beast tide that Jiang Chen's biological dad had to fight, and somehow became seperated from his wife and child. It sounds like Jiang Chen's surrogate parents found an abandoned baby in the streets and decided to raise him as their own.
who the hell lives in a world where doors get kicked every ten minutes?
😂😂😂😂😂
What kind of doors could withstand that on a daily basis is what I want to know. That craftsmanship is literally out of this world.😂
People in la
Just like worlds where all mountains are flattened....
Me
I did enjoy this story a lot to the point that I'm saving it in my favorites. I like how the story doesn't go back and front with the usual severed ties novels. And some of the characters I really did like.
The character does have a system but honestly I don't think he needed it.
I like how the character wasn't just focused on revenge but also growth.
If I have any complaints, I would say that I felt the ending was rushed and maybe a little love interest or something because some of the characters don't get mentioned again. 😂 But still love the story
Part 2 please
Dumb move, no? Dumping all body at the same place. 😂
Every conflict be like "I sent people to kill you, and you killed them"
This is the swallowed star outline with a bit healer outline. Its kind of interesting to see how each author handles the outlines
i loved swallowed star, is there a similar type of story to it you can recommend?
i am at 4:32:00 until now 1/10 of the story was about ''the main character''
and 9/10 of the story was about his father being a **** and just in general doing everything to ruin his life aand our for having to listen to it.
hope this ''arc'' ends soon bcuz i dont have much hope for this story...
Yeah, it happens sometimes.
Im at 14:23:08 and im still annoyed by the family bc of the contradicting 😂😂 he claims as family but then not then yes .. like .. and the MOM....... 😒 but other than that it's ok
Is his mother even a mother? 45:49
will there b pt2???
The stories are good, However I do hate the fact that all these stories are bloated with over explanations, repetitive statements, and pointless monologues . Who the hell talk all that smack in a fighting , Really? just get to the point that's all I ask.
Why did he need the system? The story could have been better without it. There would need to be some adjustments of course. I don't think systems add to these stories, they are a crutch and a bit lazy.
-Unimaginable!
-You keep using that word. I don't think it means what you think it means,
Thanks
If he could put dead people in a storage ring why not throw the ring into the ocean or river.
Exactly plus at least one of those villains must have had one he could afford to lose
i like it revenge revenge revenge part2
You would think they would learn from there mistakes lol.
Realms?
Mc, everyone else
Martial artist, martial gemeral, warlord, god/trancendent
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The fact that he still "needs to" attend that school thingy. I mean how forced can a plot be? Or are chinese just not that bright? 😂
Below bright
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Waste of time. Repeating same stupid lines over and over
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Trash fodder war god even the weakest bandit in immortal cultivation world one shots these so called war gods😂 what a pathetic father to be a war god.
1 for the algorithm
Why does the author ramble so much?
It is very common in Chinese light novels. They will sometimes repeat the same sentence 3-4 times in a row worded a little different and go into the full description of something every time it is brought up.
To increase word count @@Sullrosh
Trash novel .3/10
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I'm still wondering HOW, in stories like these, the boy ends up an orphan. They never talk about HOW the child gets separated, or WHY. These gaps make the story itself empty.
They do mention that during the beast tide that Jiang Chen's biological dad had to fight, and somehow became seperated from his wife and child. It sounds like Jiang Chen's surrogate parents found an abandoned baby in the streets and decided to raise him as their own.
worst novel i heard 2/10 😮💨
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