Top 12 tips for IELTS Writing Task 2 | Band 7+

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  • @saraconsoli9122
    @saraconsoli9122 3 роки тому +38

    Hello Asia, I'm here to tell you that I devoured all of your videos and I achieved the score I wanted! I was below 6.5 at the beginning, but on the exam, I achieved a 7.5 score (7.0 writing & speaking 7.5 listening & reading). I am so grateful to you, I still can't believe I did it! Please keep doing, you are so helpful to all of us!

  • @kristotsirakou4300
    @kristotsirakou4300 3 роки тому +21

    Thank you a lot for your IELTS preparation videos! I got a band 7 today!😊

  • @Thormeen
    @Thormeen 3 роки тому +23

    Thank you so much
    I had only a month to prepare but i got a band 8 because of your videos
    Listening:9
    Reading:8.5
    Speaking:8
    Writing:6.5

    • @youwilldie14yearsagoedited2
      @youwilldie14yearsagoedited2 3 роки тому

      It is excellent. Congrats

    • @aruna8828
      @aruna8828 3 роки тому

      Wow😍

    • @fayy2222
      @fayy2222 3 роки тому

      How did you prepare yourself for writing like how did u study for it ? everything is easy to me but writing idk

    • @Thormeen
      @Thormeen 3 роки тому +1

      @@fayy2222 to be honest i prepared only for task 1 and tried my best in it while task 2 i kinda fluked

    • @balogunmedinat6356
      @balogunmedinat6356 3 роки тому

      OMG!!!
      Congratulations.

  • @Briz100
    @Briz100 3 роки тому +4

    I bet nowhere else in the whole UA-cam people use such sophisticated words to comment videos

  • @inna7798
    @inna7798 3 роки тому +39

    Got overall Band 8 in my IELTS (LR-8.5, SW-7.0) thanks to your videos!! 👏👏👏

  • @IELTSBandUp
    @IELTSBandUp 3 роки тому +2

    The advice about complexity and accuracy is absolutely spot on!

  • @arunthathigopalapillai7276
    @arunthathigopalapillai7276 2 роки тому +7

    Got my IELTS results yesterday. S 7.5 R 7.5 L 7.5 W 6.0 and Overall 7.0. Thank you so much Asiya. Your videos helped me alot. ♥️

  • @ieltshacking9658
    @ieltshacking9658 3 роки тому +8

    Thank you very much, Asia :) Now I'll know how to get my overall IELTS to band 9 because writing was my only lowest (7.5) section. Keep up the good work!

  • @ahmedalhamadi5640
    @ahmedalhamadi5640 3 роки тому +13

    Thank you for the consistent content

  • @robertiguico7285
    @robertiguico7285 3 роки тому +4

    Thanks Asiya! I got my results today i got 7.5 average! Your videos really helped me. Keep up the good work!

  • @hiyasharma2972
    @hiyasharma2972 3 роки тому +1

    Asia thankyou for helping me in IELTS . keep up the good work .

  • @roshnikhullar649
    @roshnikhullar649 3 роки тому +4

    Please make a video on complex grammar.

  • @ibrohimxursanov8089
    @ibrohimxursanov8089 3 роки тому +4

    woow
    I need these tips
    Thank you so much ♥️
    Asiya 💎💎
    I always wait your new videos :)

  • @emichong5159
    @emichong5159 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you for your video. I just got my score from the test on 8/5/2021 in Australia.
    My first attempt to do IELtS. It’s not super awesome but it’s good enough for me to take a further education.
    L7.5, R7, W6, S7, Overall7.

  • @abdulaxadnomonjonov7900
    @abdulaxadnomonjonov7900 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you a lot..I wish it will coming handy to my study

  • @zohreworld5998
    @zohreworld5998 3 роки тому +2

    Thank you Asiya . You're definitely the best❤

  • @ritikaritika727
    @ritikaritika727 3 роки тому +2

    Thank you Asia for these important tips..
    Please provide similar video for academic writing task 1.
    My exam is in coming weekend.

  • @adamsmitheugin9285
    @adamsmitheugin9285 3 роки тому +1

    thank u for helping me in preparation for my IELTS exam

  • @hamzaelouassif5912
    @hamzaelouassif5912 3 роки тому +51

    I just had my ielts exam , for the speaking section the examiner asked me about advertisement as first part , in the second part they asked me to describe my favorite movie/film and the third part was about movies in general .
    For the writing section , the first task was a comparison between two plans of a library and task 2 was about : to prepare for the future a country must invest resources on its young people , do u agree or disagree ?

    • @adriyaevans
      @adriyaevans 3 роки тому

      Thanks!

    • @balogunmedinat6356
      @balogunmedinat6356 3 роки тому +3

      I wonder why mine was so difficult. I felt as if they intentionally reserved the hardest parts for me yesterday.

    • @adriana9774
      @adriana9774 3 роки тому +1

      Hi! I'm preparing for the Ielts exam and I have a doubt in the writting, I hope you could help me:( I thought the standard structure for the Essay should be from 4 to 5 paragraphs, however, some people say it should be maximum 3 paragraphs. How did you do it?

  • @leafiadias96
    @leafiadias96 3 роки тому +2

    I love your videos and they have been helpful throughout my learning experience, I want to request if you can provide a checklist of things that must be present for a band 9 essay , Thankyou🦋

  • @indikaliyange509
    @indikaliyange509 2 роки тому

    Thanks Asia.. you are solved my big problem... thank you so much.

  • @oraz_tkm
    @oraz_tkm 3 роки тому +1

    it's nice to see you again thanks for beneficial video

  • @MillersLanguageSchool
    @MillersLanguageSchool 3 роки тому +1

    Very useful video! Thanks!

  • @ranamuhammadashfaq
    @ranamuhammadashfaq Рік тому

    Really a great mentor....

  • @rererv7
    @rererv7 Рік тому

    God bless you, thanks alot!!

  • @SurajSingh-ny5ju
    @SurajSingh-ny5ju 3 роки тому +7

    I am struggling in reading general it's hard to get 30/40

  • @alexanderliam9848
    @alexanderliam9848 Рік тому

    Instructor is so pretty! Specially her eyes. Fall in love ❤️😔

  • @mkp_1996
    @mkp_1996 2 роки тому

    Superb! Thanks a lot! 🙏

  • @shruthiminni7078
    @shruthiminni7078 3 роки тому +3

    Second 🙂😀
    Any way Nice haircut Asiya 👌
    Looking awesome

  • @FasTrackIELTS
    @FasTrackIELTS  3 роки тому +1

    Hi guys! Download PDF: IELTS Writing Task 2 Workbook bit.ly/task-2-workbook
    Join FasTrack IELTS on Telegram: t.me/IELTSFasTrack (Search for #FT6 to practice the tips from this video)

  • @Suman-or3ql
    @Suman-or3ql Рік тому

    Thanku for the information

  • @gayatrisai3364
    @gayatrisai3364 2 роки тому +1

    Hi Asiya, could you let me know for the below essay how much score I can achieve and what areas to be improved.
    Q/A: Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe its good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
    Essay:
    In present world, we meet numerous humans daily. However only less number of people would become friends. In my point of view its better to have friends of both same and different opinions.
    Basically, having friends of same point of view, gives confidence and one would feel, like that their opinion is correct. They act like pillars for our strength in many scenarios. In daily life, it is rare situation to find mankind, who interpret like ourselves. On other hand, we may not think any topic in other view. Our point of angle, often no need to be true. Cautiously, one needs to analyze any affair in all views, then only we can drive out a better option. This is one of the repercussions in this kindship.
    Several circumstances, happens in one’s life where one needs to take a strong decision. Real life situations, leads to some harder things. Merely, resisting on single idea, it is apt to have dissimilar ideas. For instance, we gone for shopping, with our friends. When we select one costume, it may be liked by similar kind of humane like us. Although, different perspective people may provide us suggestions on other costumes. It would definitely help us to explore new fashion. Therefore, the final decision would be in our hands. But our mind can interpret in novice way and take a good agreement.
    Finally, to draw a conclusion it is quintessential to have friends of similar, dissimilar perspectives. Consequently, we can develop, enhance our analytical ability capabilities. It helps mankind to turn into well matured human.
    Thankyou Asiya

  • @IELTSBandUp
    @IELTSBandUp 3 роки тому

    I truly love your channel but what you said at the beginning is not true. What IELTS tells examiners and the scores they give out are different. As an examiner, I was told that 6777 = 6.5. However, I later found out from my centre manager that this is not true. 6777 = 7 when a candidate receives their score. I have no idea why IELTS keeps this a secret. It seems rather foolish to me, but that's what they do. So to be clear, what the examiner told you is absolutely correct for examiners. It's just different for the real score. I actually knew someone I examined. I gave her 5666, then later she told me she received a 6. I asked if she had her test re-marked and she did not.

  • @via_kashi
    @via_kashi 2 роки тому

    you are amazing teacher.

  • @jagdeepsinghdhillon1500
    @jagdeepsinghdhillon1500 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you miss.

  • @mrjacobsidhu3625
    @mrjacobsidhu3625 3 роки тому +1

    You the best mam ! ☺️

  • @parisasattar3627
    @parisasattar3627 3 роки тому +5

    Hi, I watched your videos and followed the guidelines provided by your my practice.
    There were my topics
    Listening section 1: was about a job enquiry
    Listening passage 2 and 3: Art and museums and some painting (not remember exactly)
    Listening section 3: some thing related tire maintenance
    Reading Passage 1 was about advertisement for food promotion and child behavior
    Reading Passage 2: history of circus
    Reading Passage 3 : Ability of animals to predict earthquake
    Task 1: The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2005
    the graph is also available on some websites I can provide the link if you permit me.
    Task 2: Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
    Speaking part 1 almost all questions were about job, few questions was about studying mathematics and do you think it is used in our daily life
    Speaking part 2: Describe your favourite weather
    You should say
    What kind of weather it is?
    What you usually do during this weather?
    Explain how this weather affects you?
    Speaking part 3: questions related to clothing in different weathers (I used vocabularies for this specially because before my speaking test I watch your video about difficult question and it included that)
    Moreover, I will also ley you about my scores once I received them.
    Thankyou so much

  • @HarpreetSingh-cb2by
    @HarpreetSingh-cb2by 3 роки тому +5

    Can we give our own opinion in introduction if mention?

  • @suttichaitawkomwong4033
    @suttichaitawkomwong4033 2 роки тому

    Thank you so much

  • @tatacheikhmedvadel2140
    @tatacheikhmedvadel2140 3 роки тому +1

    I took the IELTS test and I appreciate all your tricks but I scored only band 6 😢 (speaking 6 , listening 7 , reading and writing 5.5) .. what did I do wrong 😭?

  • @SimranKaur-hn2pv
    @SimranKaur-hn2pv 3 роки тому +1

    I Asiya , I am struggling in reading and writing part because in writing task 2 I couldn't able to develop my ideas and reading is my weakness .. so I am trying hard to give my ielts exam in September ...so that I will be well prepared ...

    • @pratikchauhan8642
      @pratikchauhan8642 3 роки тому

      for help please watch the video with the title “ IELTS GENERAL WRITING : Surest way to go from band 6 to 7”

  • @muhammadismailcareertips3158
    @muhammadismailcareertips3158 3 роки тому

    great useful video tips

  • @hindavikadam3821
    @hindavikadam3821 3 роки тому

    When you say we should give direct answer, where should it be mentioned? In the paragraphs or in the conclusion?

  • @paneerin5181
    @paneerin5181 Рік тому

    Local brands have an advantage over imported products since people prefer buying domestic commodities over international goods. In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative aspects of buying domestic brands. Firstly, I will elaborate on how supporting small-scale industries can create an impact, and secondly, I will discuss why manufacturing costs are higher for local products.
    Nowadays, the public prefers purchasing local commodities compared to imported products. One of the reasons is that by buying local commodities, the general public is supporting small businesses and jobs, which are in fact contributing to the revenue of the nation and building a sense of trust and confidence among people. For example, most people in India tend to buy natural soaps like neem rather than soaps made out of chemicals, which have a devastating effect on the skin. Furthermore, domestic products do not have to travel as far, reducing transport emissions, which is vital in today's world. Another reason is that pollutants emitted from vehicles are reduced, thereby decreasing the carbon footprint. For instance, pollutants released from vehicles while transporting goods in electric trucks are more environmentally friendly than carrying goods in conventional trucks.
    The biggest disadvantage of regional goods is that their production costs are quite high. As a result, goods are expensive, leaving customers deeply sceptical about the product and gradually losing faith in the brand. For example, the price of shampoo in India is double that of shampoo made in Germany.
    In conclusion, purchasing goods from a regional supplier brings pride to a country and makes it self-reliant.
    What will be my band score and is there any scope for improvement in this essay?

  • @parmansidhu6154
    @parmansidhu6154 3 роки тому

    Please make a video on interrogative sentence in task 2

  • @manpreetdhaliwal4380
    @manpreetdhaliwal4380 3 роки тому

    you're doing great

  • @nirmalabachudasama6844
    @nirmalabachudasama6844 3 роки тому

    Very useful thank uuu so muchh tomorrow is my exammm

  • @Aryansigh123
    @Aryansigh123 2 роки тому

    Good going

  • @fishboneemma8563
    @fishboneemma8563 3 роки тому +1

    thank you for the video. I recently took the IELTS with an overall score of 7.5 but 6.0 in writing. How do I apply for remarking

  • @fayy2222
    @fayy2222 3 роки тому +1

    i’m getting 7 inshallah ❤️

  • @man9796
    @man9796 3 роки тому

    U r incredibly helpful... Plz talk about the strategy to write tsk 2. I mean is it necessary to use a specific strategy for every single Q type ??

    • @pratikchauhan8642
      @pratikchauhan8642 3 роки тому

      for help please watch the video with the title “ IELTS GENERAL WRITING : Surest way to go from band 6 to 7”

  • @josnajose5377
    @josnajose5377 3 роки тому

    Can you explain how to structure outweigh type questions especially the body paragraph... Waiting

  • @doctorammaraijaz9867
    @doctorammaraijaz9867 6 місяців тому

    How to proof read and correct in paper based test? Can we overwrite??

  • @aishwaryam6853
    @aishwaryam6853 3 роки тому

    Hi Asiya, I'm a beginner for ielts exam. Can u tell me which should I practice first in reading, writing, speaking and listening?

  • @preyanshseth2589
    @preyanshseth2589 3 роки тому +2

    I'm lil worried about Speaking any tips to increase the fluency 🥴

    • @incinerator7146
      @incinerator7146 3 роки тому

      There's literally one thing you can do - Practice more (I myself suck at it i have an exam soon help :/)

    • @syedsaddamhussain5590
      @syedsaddamhussain5590 3 роки тому

      @@incinerator7146 Hello , Anyone Interested in IELTS speaking Practice .
      Can connect on IG - Syedsaddmhussain_
      We shall do it on zoom meeting 👍🏻

    • @Thormeen
      @Thormeen 3 роки тому

      Watch more youtube

  • @buketurkgil9224
    @buketurkgil9224 3 роки тому

    Hey Asia! I have one small question. Do you think we should give our opinion in every question type. I mean sometimes they ask your opinion in the question and sometimes they don't. I thought I should share what I think when they asked so. What do you suggest?
    By the way, you give beautiful explanations in every video. Thanks for that :)

  • @lidaquan3351
    @lidaquan3351 2 роки тому

    Sorry, can i make an example to support my idea?

  • @paneerin5181
    @paneerin5181 Рік тому

    If I want to check how much band score I got for my essay during practice, how do I check?

  • @12352812
    @12352812 Рік тому

    can we write phrases such as : in conclusion, to summarise,etc in conclusion?

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Рік тому

      Yes, you can! 'In conclusion' or 'to conclude' are the most common

  • @farazraza2458
    @farazraza2458 3 роки тому

    Hey Asiya, good day!!
    Is it good to write bullet points in essay writing

  • @chinnichitikena5132
    @chinnichitikena5132 3 роки тому +1

    Is it necessary to Give examples in all essay types?

  • @joeyik806
    @joeyik806 3 роки тому

    don't overgeneralize your conclusion.

  • @mimisspace808
    @mimisspace808 3 роки тому

    I still dont get how much space should we give between paragraphs on the paper.

  • @meenakshisharma8453
    @meenakshisharma8453 3 роки тому

    Ma'am, Is it important to add example in every type of essay?

    • @pratikchauhan8642
      @pratikchauhan8642 3 роки тому

      for help please watch the video with the title “ IELTS GENERAL WRITING : Surest way to go from band 6 to 7”

  • @ranveerrandhawa6272
    @ranveerrandhawa6272 3 роки тому

    Hlo mam i have1 query.could u pls give me 1 example that how can we present survey example

  • @tsitsiyotam252
    @tsitsiyotam252 3 роки тому

    i discovered you today😊

  • @muskandeep9274
    @muskandeep9274 3 роки тому

    Hello mam. Can you send a sample answer for writing task 2 , that i can understand how to wright this.

  • @lunamiyura2147
    @lunamiyura2147 3 роки тому

    If in writing tast they asked you about experience (visiting meusume) what type of essay is this?

  • @dhrutinkhasetiya6091
    @dhrutinkhasetiya6091 3 роки тому +1

    Can't open telegram channel please can you upload latest link

  • @zabed1919
    @zabed1919 3 роки тому

    Hi
    Do you provide writing correction

  • @kamleshbhaikamleshbhai3677
    @kamleshbhaikamleshbhai3677 3 роки тому

    Mam PLZZ give me other link about writing task topics pdf due to I have not available tele gram now

  • @SurajSingh-ny5ju
    @SurajSingh-ny5ju 3 роки тому +2

    Struggling and heartache 💔

    • @Thormeen
      @Thormeen 3 роки тому

      Whats wrong

    • @SurajSingh-ny5ju
      @SurajSingh-ny5ju 3 роки тому

      @@Thormeen got 5.5 in reading

    • @Thormeen
      @Thormeen 3 роки тому

      @@SurajSingh-ny5ju im so sorry
      would you like my contact info and we can have classes togethwr for a while amd im sure youll do amazing if you try again

  • @nandinisharma7577
    @nandinisharma7577 3 роки тому

    hello ma'am can uh tell me , in which accent do uh speak ?

  • @muskandeep9274
    @muskandeep9274 3 роки тому

    Mam is there any fees to get tasks??

  • @utsavhachhethu694
    @utsavhachhethu694 2 роки тому

    Today September 03 2022 is my exam
    And i'm here🙄🤣

  • @lincypanorama2819
    @lincypanorama2819 3 роки тому

    I would like to join for online class

  • @anjanakumari1396
    @anjanakumari1396 3 роки тому

    Everyone is speaking about complexity and accuracy ..but no one explain

  • @Aryansigh123
    @Aryansigh123 2 роки тому

    Hi

  • @joanep5961
    @joanep5961 3 роки тому +1

    Just done with my exam, following were the topics-
    Task 1- Write an application to an international company for a job, advertised by them.
    •why are you interested in this job?
    •what makes you a suitable candidate?
    •ask them few questions.
    Task 2- Many people find giving presentations or public speaking difficult. And children should be taught this in schools.
    Agree or Disagree.

    • @deppiex
      @deppiex 3 роки тому

      what? isn’t task 1 based on charts?

  • @jayantisharma2991
    @jayantisharma2991 3 роки тому +1

    Hii mam how are you doing.👍😍😘

  • @ugyenjk
    @ugyenjk 2 роки тому

    After studying with Asiya for long long time, I’m like “do you are married or in relationship?” 😂

  • @adriana9774
    @adriana9774 3 роки тому

    Someone knows how many paragraphs should I write in the essay in computer form? Some say that 4 is ok, and other say 3 should be the maximum number :(

    • @DreamTravelWear
      @DreamTravelWear 3 роки тому +1

      introduction
      body paragraph 1
      body 2
      conclusion
      I believe that they mentioned it should be a maximum of 3 body paragraphs. I have never seen an IELTS essay with a total of 3 paragraphs. There is no difference between the computer-based or paper-based exam btw.
      In addition, task 1 academic
      introduction - overall - detail paragraph 1 - detail para 2
      you can find so many different examples for essays on the internet. Also on this channel, too.

  • @mohmisaghi9303
    @mohmisaghi9303 3 роки тому

    you wore this shirt last year tho

  • @jacintawong9738
    @jacintawong9738 3 роки тому +2

    How will the score fall to 6.5 if we get 7 in all criteria and 6.5 in one?
    LR-7
    CC-7
    GR-7
    TR-6.5
    =27.5/4=6.875
    It will be rounded off to 7
    Please correct me if I’m wrong

    • @pratikchauhan8642
      @pratikchauhan8642 3 роки тому +1

      for help please watch the video with the title “ IELTS GENERAL WRITING : Surest way to go from band 6 to 7”

  • @psikoterapistcem1586
    @psikoterapistcem1586 3 роки тому

    What is the telegram link, please?

  • @alansaiju7280
    @alansaiju7280 3 роки тому

    How can I improve writing???? Only getting band 5.5-6 ........ I want to get 6.5.. please reply

    • @pratikchauhan8642
      @pratikchauhan8642 3 роки тому +1

      I understand the frustration, for help please watch the video with the title “ IELTS GENERAL WRITING : Surest way to go from band 6 to 7”

    • @alansaiju7280
      @alansaiju7280 3 роки тому

      @@pratikchauhan8642 sir , I am trying for academic not for general...... If u have video related to academic please reply.....

    • @pratikchauhan8642
      @pratikchauhan8642 3 роки тому

      @@alansaiju7280 I am extremely sorry I wish I could help you. but I am not an english tutor, I have given IELTS 4 times recently and based on my experience I designed a course for general writing. Anyway I pray to god to score your desire score in your next exam.

    • @alansaiju7280
      @alansaiju7280 3 роки тому +1

      @@pratikchauhan8642 sorry bro I thought you upload videos......but that's ok bro.......only u reply me......so thanks bro for ur tip ❤️❤️......I will never forget u ❤️❤️

    • @pratikchauhan8642
      @pratikchauhan8642 3 роки тому

      @@alansaiju7280 best of luck 👍🏻

  • @RNRezamohammadi
    @RNRezamohammadi Рік тому

    ✅🙏

  • @lincypanorama2819
    @lincypanorama2819 3 роки тому

    I am planning to write exam on October, can you please help me

    • @pratikchauhan8642
      @pratikchauhan8642 3 роки тому

      for help please watch the video with the title “ IELTS GENERAL WRITING : Surest way to go from band 6 to 7”

  • @williamsm6500
    @williamsm6500 3 роки тому

    Hi Asia. Could you please speak a little bit fast?! You're teaching so many things related to ielts exam and those who are watching your videos are approximately in a high lvl and can understand clearly what you're saying thus would be better to speak normally.
    BTW you're doing perfect

  • @usamabinlaaltain1655
    @usamabinlaaltain1655 3 роки тому

    Mam I've been watching your videos these days although you've done a tremendous work but there is still my question arise that how to describe highest point and lowest point in task 1 like
    The highest proportion of electricity generated from coal,while the lowest percentage generated from petrol
    Can we use superlative ( highest) for comparing 1 thing to other or we have to use( higher) please tell me about this...thanks

  • @nbx8240
    @nbx8240 3 роки тому +1

    First

  • @celinatebaa1480
    @celinatebaa1480 3 роки тому

    My exam is today ..just few hours remaining🙁😢wish me luck

  • @lincypanorama2819
    @lincypanorama2819 3 роки тому

    Asiya

  • @alexseno5343
    @alexseno5343 3 роки тому

    Do we get deductions for erasures if it's paper based ielts?

    • @pratikchauhan8642
      @pratikchauhan8642 3 роки тому

      for help please watch the video with the title “ IELTS GENERAL WRITING : Surest way to go from band 6 to 7”

  • @learnenglishthroughstoryan9757
    @learnenglishthroughstoryan9757 2 роки тому +1

    🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗💋

  • @React.clips_
    @React.clips_ 2 роки тому

    Mam please 🙏 speak Hindi

  • @sanjanareddy3440
    @sanjanareddy3440 2 роки тому

    You're trying so hard to do speak in british accent

  • @mrazamat5767
    @mrazamat5767 3 роки тому

    Thank you very much

  • @lincypanorama2819
    @lincypanorama2819 3 роки тому

    Hi