So a student that was given extramly dangerous technology to literally fuck around with accidently commited the greatest terrorist attack their species suffered and also started an interstellar war.
@@stalwartteakettlepotato9879 Sounded like he had them convinced it would be a good idea, and the machine in the lab couldn't be turned off once it deemed the creature was viable, and it only took what was about a minute before it woke up and started destroying things.
I calculated and those aliens only live around 95 days if they said that 26 years is a hundred times the lifespan of one of them. There is literally no time to not fuck around so yeah.
Later: "Uh, master Boli? There's some soldiers from the IGA here to see you." Boli: "What is it? I told them I would need another week." Soldier: "You're under arrest." Boli: "What?!" Soldier: "A team was sent back to gather data from the xenobiology lab, and they found surveillance records. YOU were the one who made the thing that destroyed our home!" Boli: "WHAT?! That's preposterous, that's ridiculous, that's-" Soldier: [Slaps him] "It was corroborated with information from various shops. You bought all the materials and went into the lab just before that thing came out. You're coming with us." IGA head: "Well, now we're at war with a species that is huge, lives ridiculously long, has enough musculature to squish a thousand soldiers into paste with one swing, and whose body chemistry is highly toxic to us and produces enough waste heat to vaporize the ammonia out of our bodies. Because of ONE FLEKKING IDJIT." Military lead: "We must end the war. Let us deploy our carbon beast onto their planet!" Council member: "What? You want to compound this madness with more madness!" Military: "It's either us or them!" IGA head: "Then so be it." [IGA council watches remote feed as beast is unleased into Terran wilds] All: "..." IGA head: "Wh-what the flekk was that?!" Scientist: "According to the records the humans shared with us before the war, it's called a "coyote"." IGA head: "It ate our beast in one bite! How many of them exist on that forsaken hellhole?!" Scientist: "Millions, sir." Military: "Will, clearly we-" [Is immediately beaned with every loose object in the room.] IGA head: "Call in the diplomats. We're going to have to swallow our pride. If their wildlife is capable of doing this, I do NOT want to see what their weapons can do!"
Man, Boli wants to be the greatest doctor in history but cuts corners when creating a "fictional" super organism. If that doesn't scream incompetence then I don't know what does.
To be fair, they have a frankenstein machine that grows living beings capable of impregnating themselves.. Id imagine anyone could be an amazing doctor with shit like that..
@@falseprophet1024 of course, you need a good comprehension of biology and chemistry, along software knowlege to create and navigate all the complexity required to build-a-body.
Dude just casually commuted the greatest atrocity his planet has ever seen, lost most of his body but perfectly regenerated, genocideed host of his own people, started a war, became a massively important political figure and said "lets take his horror show on tour." This is what we humans call a _dark lord._
Every Lurvian physician-in-training knew the importance of splicing multiple samples of a carbon-based molecule to create a new individual rather than a clone, even though carbon-based life is preposterous.
@@robertstoneking7916 So, to clarify: the "D" in "DNA" is for "Deoxyribose," a sugar with the chemical formula C5H10O4. And the "C" in that chemical formula stands for... get this... carbon! And then there are these other chemical base pairs involved that also are carbon based, but I don't want to get too far ahead of you. I just want to give you enough simple chemistry to explain the joke that "samples of DNA" is also "samples of a carbon-based molecule."
@@jimschuler8830 the issue wasn't that he didn't believe carbon could be in trace amounts but used as a major structural component. CHON labels life here as the 4 most common elements in our structure.
@@robertstoneking7916Deoxyribose is the structural component. It's the strand on which the base pairs hang. And besides, that's not the issue when you're trying to "correct" the phrase "carbon-based molecule" with "DNA."
Did he splice the ENTIRE Terran DNA database. I think there was even wild hog in that abomination, one of very few creatures we don't make a habit of turning into pets.
I'm sorry but I need to disprove your point... Pigs are commonly kept as pets, and feral hogs in the US are just pigs that were let loose, and wild boar in Eurasia are in fact the ancestors we domesticated. No matter how you carve up that ham it's still pigs
It's because even if humanity COULD do something like that if sufficiently angry or drunk,it's the aliens at fault because it was THEIR mistake & they want a scapegoat.
@@ratzelbarreto2070 Well that's one way to destroy twitter. Public admission of Drumfler being a human actually, would cause more civil war than everything Beanie Man has ever predicted.
This was not satisfying. The student's overweening pride, his hubris caused the genocide of his race and the loss of his homeworld. The amnesia was a cop-out. If he had remembered, then decided to create another carbon beast to fight the one on the planet to fix his mistake, that I could get. He shouldn't get to feel righteous in his amnesia and start a crusade against humanity.
Agreed, the character was so unlikable and moronic, it boggles my mind someone would write scum into existence. The only upside is that if a species can create that kind of idiot, it fully deserves its genocide
It wasn't actually amnesia, his body was destroyed and they built him back up from just some heart molecules and and he didn't possess the memories of what he'd done. So he didn't forget, it's like he was rebuilt from a save point before the tragedy. But it sounds ridiculous that they couldn't figure out what happened. This guy has access to any and all DNA, goes around buying all kinds of weird biological stuff (and literally no one survives to snitch him out), but it's not one of them that did this stupid thing, no, somehow humans teleported a giant monster through space undetected. This story has more holes than a pasta strainer. I have difficulty believing this is their first dr. Moreauenstein.
A species this low on the IQ ladder and withouy any form of self awareness won't have anyone find it out. If their tech cant even flag him as being at fault, but CAN tell he was ground zero, but obv. that means its not this shithead's fault. Nobody is gonna find out the truth....
I doubt it will gt that far, it sounds like he's repeating the same mistake that cost them their world, so he probably just killed the rest of his people.
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It has been stated that that the human body is chemically equivalent to a mix of water (35 L), carbon (20 kg), ammonia (4 L), lime (1.5 kg), phosphorus (800 g), salt (250 g), saltpeter (100 g), sulfur (80 g), fluorine (7.5 g), iron (5 g), silicon (3 g) and trace amounts of fifteen other elements.
If I learned aliens drank ammonia I’d just piss in a bottle, put it somewhere where they can see, and see what they’d do out of sheer curiosity, and then likely proceed to be disgusted as they drink, and enjoy it
Well even though the Lurvians might not be our friends anymore at least they gave us siblings! Badass scaled fish deer snake people that might end up evolving into being… well… essentially “_furries_”
wait wait wait..''there was no way a planet was able to support multiple species specially not when one was supposedly advanced enough to join the iga''.... the idiot student instead of searching his web or certified sources.... he went and combined all kinds of species dident he ? ..seriously though.... considering all the warnings and watchlists stuff he triggered in the preparation it should soon make the iga start to pause stuff and follow that 'internal thread' of inconsistencies ...even if it only be to prove the stidents id been hijacked and find out how. ye.. i want to hear a follow up on this.. not so much of the battling ,but the crap storm when bloodied humans espionage and civilians that lost nearly all ther relatives either on the 'ground zero' planet.. or in the later desperate war with humans... finds out ,all this happened because not only did a supposedly mature student throw a over engineered temper tantrum instead of fact cheeking its doubts... but also that ther life weaving facilities hade ZERO safty guards agenst something made in it getting ...angry..
So, a student has the ability to create a lifeform from scratch, yet no security protocols except a simple warning on a screen? No override required by a member of faculty? I mean, he could of just as easily created a virus that could escape and cause a pandemic. Or is that too preposterous?
@@zuzax1656 i say its highly likely... so ,if the ign/federations other members and federal organisation not pounces on this hard more or lees making a second chapter about them halting the war they are ther own makers of , while also initiating a severe faculties cheek of all members of that species and society in its federal forces and more or lees re-locating all education of replacement personal for the near future to some other far more secure and ''regardless if you think someone is pranking you...DONT... go mad scientist in response!'' society... i'd say for all the fun bits... it falls into the ''to stupid to survive society/civilization' category of scifi :/ since this lvl of stupidity even if weighed agenst the argument of ''but he was just starting to learn & civilian'' simply means it be a question of daily risks that someone wiped out ther whole ship crew or the planet they where on by doing something just like that... making a virus to cure someone ,but some fluke thing combined with the zero safty guards etc means it escapes and now all is dead XD
@@Exile_Sky aye.. i mean ,at the momment was just thinking of honest 'mistake' ways this civilization leaving tech like that with so few fail safes around could exterminate itself... involve any kind of hostile exterior or interior polity with intelligent intentions actually planing it and well.. bye bye space docs XD
Hmm sounds like he might have made a Chimera girl with reptile and humanoid dominant genes. Probably has a bit of wolf in that considering it called the babies pups.
Then the Chimeric species over time evolves and creates its own civilisation without knowing about their dark past Also this species would mostly likely diversify and spawn multiple new species so you would have a entire planet of carbon based super life forms
@@inzyniertv9305 That sounds very possible. The real question is what will the human say/react when they see the "Carbon beasts" We could find the cute and feisty for we know.
Stupid aliens think carbon based life is unnatural and believes they can make a better carbon based organism, and then they get themselves killed by their abomination and then conveniently forget said creation and then that abomination runs rampant on their world and because it shares human DNA they think it’s a human creation! An abomination that can either self-fertilize or reproduce naturally released on their world overrunning everything and eating everything else they basically made Xenomorphs. Genetic engineering is a terrible power to be unleashed and this alien child wielded it like a child fighting their fathers gun thinking it’s a toy. They just destroyed their planisphere and then conveniently survived and forgot the whole incident.
One creature took out nearly the entire planet? How small is this world? Or is the creature as quick as the Flash, and could thereby cover massive ground quickly? Also, those little xenos seemed to be small but quite mobile, but how come much more didn't escape? And would such a creature mark out a territory for itself no more than a few miles squared? How would it have forced them off world unless the planet is little more than an asteroid? So many questions.
@@Rhino-Prime It was far bigger than a mouse. The story all but outright stated that the creature was about the height of a human, therefore MANY times larger than the blobs. Also, their size is the point. If they are tiny, and ONE CREATURE made them abandon their homeworld, how small would their world need to be for that to happen? A boulder in space? The story implies that it is an actual planet instead of some random asteroid. Also, it gives the impression that their world had a sizable population. And I don't care how small they are, if such a population was just 10,000 individuals, even a rabid honey badger couldn't end that many of them before they could evacuate at least half the population. I am just pointing out how the story brings up so many questions in such a way as to circumvent suspension of disbelief.
@@derekstein6193 Yes but also in the story it says 10 cm is large to them And if this thing was able to render a planet uninhabitable within A-day how small is their planet
Then the Chimeric species over time evolves and creates its own civilisation without knowing about their dark past Also this species would mostly likely diversify and spawn multiple new species so you would have a entire planet of carbon based super life forms
Uhm… yeah, the Lurvians kinda deserved to be removed from the universe’s gene pool if their Physicians in training are just allowed to do stuff like this without supervision. No camera footage, either? God damn…
They make another one send it to earth as a weapon. Humans: awe aren't you a terrifying monsters im going to take you home and call you stitch. Aliens:... did they just tame the monster who destroyed our world like it was a pet?
Not so clever to ignore warnings about multi-species gen-splicing. Hubris.... the thought he would be a great mind, while still being a Student. He thought he would know and understand everything... and within a Day, it destroyed his Civilization. He created something without knowing the Specs of the lifeforms linked to the DNA-Samples, ignored the Warning about self-replication. Not sure what Species he mixed, but the features mentioned didnt sound good. To me, it sounded like Samples from a Snake or reptile in general (scales), Frog (webbed fingers, gills), human of course, Feline (pointed ears),.... the Hooves im not sure, there are several animals with hooves.
Well… at least humanity will have some worthwhile friends/relatives when we find them, our chimeric cousins who will likely love meeting us considering they have the same pack mentality as us
Wants to be the greatest doctor known dismisses stuff from his instructors as a flaw and a joke from his instructors...(because cant be true) sounds like an earth doctor... its all on your head that cant be true/happening.. yeah he will never be known as the greastest doctor if he disregards things.
So a student that was given extramly dangerous technology to literally fuck around with accidently commited the greatest terrorist attack their species suffered and also started an interstellar war.
Oh I doubt that, i'm pretty sure by repeating his exact same mistake he just killed the rest of his people.
@@Nyghtking that is definitely possible. However will the rest of the species in the alliance be as stupid as them.
@@stalwartteakettlepotato9879 Sounded like he had them convinced it would be a good idea, and the machine in the lab couldn't be turned off once it deemed the creature was viable, and it only took what was about a minute before it woke up and started destroying things.
They can grow a person back from a heart so the machine is probable a pretty standard medical device.
I calculated and those aliens only live around 95 days if they said that 26 years is a hundred times the lifespan of one of them. There is literally no time to not fuck around so yeah.
Later:
"Uh, master Boli? There's some soldiers from the IGA here to see you."
Boli: "What is it? I told them I would need another week."
Soldier: "You're under arrest."
Boli: "What?!"
Soldier: "A team was sent back to gather data from the xenobiology lab, and they found surveillance records. YOU were the one who made the thing that destroyed our home!"
Boli: "WHAT?! That's preposterous, that's ridiculous, that's-"
Soldier: [Slaps him] "It was corroborated with information from various shops. You bought all the materials and went into the lab just before that thing came out. You're coming with us."
IGA head: "Well, now we're at war with a species that is huge, lives ridiculously long, has enough musculature to squish a thousand soldiers into paste with one swing, and whose body chemistry is highly toxic to us and produces enough waste heat to vaporize the ammonia out of our bodies. Because of ONE FLEKKING IDJIT."
Military lead: "We must end the war. Let us deploy our carbon beast onto their planet!"
Council member: "What? You want to compound this madness with more madness!"
Military: "It's either us or them!"
IGA head: "Then so be it."
[IGA council watches remote feed as beast is unleased into Terran wilds]
All: "..."
IGA head: "Wh-what the flekk was that?!"
Scientist: "According to the records the humans shared with us before the war, it's called a "coyote"."
IGA head: "It ate our beast in one bite! How many of them exist on that forsaken hellhole?!"
Scientist: "Millions, sir."
Military: "Will, clearly we-" [Is immediately beaned with every loose object in the room.]
IGA head: "Call in the diplomats. We're going to have to swallow our pride. If their wildlife is capable of doing this, I do NOT want to see what their weapons can do!"
Extrapolate on that comment to make a chapter II
Good little bit of fanfic.
Or worse, Humans social bond with whatever creature they create/unleash on us
I'd adjust Chapter 3 to make it so it WAS a threat to humans...but they tamed it
pack bonding, ya know?
Man, Boli wants to be the greatest doctor in history but cuts corners when creating a "fictional" super organism.
If that doesn't scream incompetence then I don't know what does.
Hubris, thy name is "Boli."
Oh look it's Dr. Boli frankinstien
To be fair, they have a frankenstein machine that grows living beings capable of impregnating themselves..
Id imagine anyone could be an amazing doctor with shit like that..
@@falseprophet1024 of course, you need a good comprehension of biology and chemistry, along software knowlege to create and navigate all the complexity required to build-a-body.
Off hand I would say he has more ego than Hitler and how come no one got a warning he created the original beast.
Dude just casually commuted the greatest atrocity his planet has ever seen, lost most of his body but perfectly regenerated, genocideed host of his own people, started a war, became a massively important political figure and said "lets take his horror show on tour." This is what we humans call a _dark lord._
Sauron blushed at this
And somehow I'm fairly sure his own 'carbon beast' will end up being something the humans look at and call "Cute!"
Space Fauci.
@@colinsmith1495or we can just stomp on it and win
SEQUEL QUOTE:
human: ohh what a cute little lizard I waaaant one.
Xenos: faint
genuinely thought they were going to accidentally create cat girls and create the strongest human xeno alliance every conveced in HFY storys
Someone needs to write that story now.
@Apsoy Pike who said they had to be slaves
@Apsoy Pike You’re not wrong
It sounds like he created a deathclaw
@@Ibian666 on it, anthro cat girl’s coming
Every Lurvian physician-in-training knew the importance of splicing multiple samples of a carbon-based molecule to create a new individual rather than a clone, even though carbon-based life is preposterous.
Multiple samples of DNA.
@@robertstoneking7916 So, to clarify: the "D" in "DNA" is for "Deoxyribose," a sugar with the chemical formula C5H10O4. And the "C" in that chemical formula stands for... get this... carbon! And then there are these other chemical base pairs involved that also are carbon based, but I don't want to get too far ahead of you. I just want to give you enough simple chemistry to explain the joke that "samples of DNA" is also "samples of a carbon-based molecule."
@@jimschuler8830 the issue wasn't that he didn't believe carbon could be in trace amounts but used as a major structural component. CHON labels life here as the 4 most common elements in our structure.
@@robertstoneking7916 Yep, humans are made of rocks. Or at least it seems that way some days.
@@robertstoneking7916Deoxyribose is the structural component. It's the strand on which the base pairs hang. And besides, that's not the issue when you're trying to "correct" the phrase "carbon-based molecule" with "DNA."
26 years is 100 times longer than they live. That means the creatures live to about 4 months
3*
That's their natural lifespan. With the medical tech they have, they are probably biologically immortal.
No wonder they're a debilitatingly stupid species. Fully without any positive aspects I could descern while reading
95 days
@@SoMuchFacepalm how do they even get that technology with their life being so short
Did he splice the ENTIRE Terran DNA database. I think there was even wild hog in that abomination, one of very few creatures we don't make a habit of turning into pets.
Who would ever have a hog as a pet!
Spat the human while petting the fin of a dolphin in a mobile tank with tracks.
Speak for yourself, two of my closest friends are ferrel hogs
Check that, forgot I eat one of them last week.
I'm sorry but I need to disprove your point... Pigs are commonly kept as pets, and feral hogs in the US are just pigs that were let loose, and wild boar in Eurasia are in fact the ancestors we domesticated. No matter how you carve up that ham it's still pigs
pigs are hogs... if you leave a squeeky pink pig up to itself it will grow back fur and go to its hog ways without any major problem
There's something about stories where humans are falsely accused of stuff that really annoys me
Johnny Depp be like:
False accusations are annoying? YOU DON'T SAY.
Trump be like, so are going to applagas to me for the crazy things you accused me off?
It's because even if humanity COULD do something like that if sufficiently angry or drunk,it's the aliens at fault because it was THEIR mistake & they want a scapegoat.
@@ratzelbarreto2070 Well that's one way to destroy twitter. Public admission of Drumfler being a human actually, would cause more civil war than everything Beanie Man has ever predicted.
@@ratzelbarreto2070 what does trump have to do with this
This was not satisfying. The student's overweening pride, his hubris caused the genocide of his race and the loss of his homeworld. The amnesia was a cop-out. If he had remembered, then decided to create another carbon beast to fight the one on the planet to fix his mistake, that I could get. He shouldn't get to feel righteous in his amnesia and start a crusade against humanity.
Agreed, the character was so unlikable and moronic, it boggles my mind someone would write scum into existence. The only upside is that if a species can create that kind of idiot, it fully deserves its genocide
It wasn't actually amnesia, his body was destroyed and they built him back up from just some heart molecules and and he didn't possess the memories of what he'd done. So he didn't forget, it's like he was rebuilt from a save point before the tragedy. But it sounds ridiculous that they couldn't figure out what happened. This guy has access to any and all DNA, goes around buying all kinds of weird biological stuff (and literally no one survives to snitch him out), but it's not one of them that did this stupid thing, no, somehow humans teleported a giant monster through space undetected. This story has more holes than a pasta strainer. I have difficulty believing this is their first dr. Moreauenstein.
@@mirzamay Bro even thought he would be on all the watchlists, maybe someone else will investigate him and figure it out?
I'm hoping for a part two where someone investigates the whole thing and figures it out.
A species this low on the IQ ladder and withouy any form of self awareness won't have anyone find it out. If their tech cant even flag him as being at fault, but CAN tell he was ground zero, but obv. that means its not this shithead's fault. Nobody is gonna find out the truth....
The truest form of "your scientists were too busy wondering if they could to think about if they should" I've ever seen.
*Sigh*
It's unfortunate, but cause of the f*** up of an amnesiac, let us begin the galactic exterminatus...
I doubt it will gt that far, it sounds like he's repeating the same mistake that cost them their world, so he probably just killed the rest of his people.
Here we go...
Legit reason to purge the galaxy of xenos.
@@VadulTharys fr
Lets purge the galaxy of these tiny xenos scums
His full heigth (little over 10 centimeters.)????? So he´s almost same lenght as my index finger. whoa, what a giant.
10 centimeter is actually quite average...
He's quite tall for his species too...
Mad respect....
The beast that he created might be even smaller than us
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- or at least an example of sacrificing the wisdom stat for raw intelligence.
Bless the Squerril
Bless the Author
Bless the Pups
A Hundred-Thousand Curses upon the "Doctor"
It has been stated that that the human body is chemically equivalent to a mix of water (35 L), carbon (20 kg), ammonia (4 L), lime (1.5 kg), phosphorus (800 g), salt (250 g), saltpeter (100 g), sulfur (80 g), fluorine (7.5 g), iron (5 g), silicon (3 g) and trace amounts of fifteen other elements.
People of culture, I see.
Edward?! Big brother Edward?
Hello full metal
Accidentally stumbled across these recently and have binged 2 days strait great story's superb narration
Same man 😂
Ok so, apparently the great filter is someone "knowing better".
It's alive, it's alive Igor!
Ah another person of culture
Don't give free and unsupervised access to your greatest technologyu to mere students XD.
Make Gain of function research great again!
If I learned aliens drank ammonia I’d just piss in a bottle, put it somewhere where they can see, and see what they’d do out of sheer curiosity, and then likely proceed to be disgusted as they drink, and enjoy it
Well even though the Lurvians might not be our friends anymore at least they gave us siblings!
Badass scaled fish deer snake people that might end up evolving into being… well… essentially “_furries_”
wait wait wait..''there was no way a planet was able to support multiple species specially not when one was supposedly advanced enough to join the iga''....
the idiot student instead of searching his web or certified sources.... he went and combined all kinds of species dident he ?
..seriously though.... considering all the warnings and watchlists stuff he triggered in the preparation it should soon make the iga start to pause stuff and follow that 'internal thread' of inconsistencies ...even if it only be to prove the stidents id been hijacked and find out how.
ye.. i want to hear a follow up on this.. not so much of the battling ,but the crap storm when bloodied humans espionage and civilians that lost nearly all ther relatives either on the 'ground zero' planet.. or in the later desperate war with humans... finds out ,all this happened because not only did a supposedly mature student throw a over engineered temper tantrum instead of fact cheeking its doubts... but also that ther life weaving facilities hade ZERO safty guards agenst something made in it getting ...angry..
So, a student has the ability to create a lifeform from scratch, yet no security protocols except a simple warning on a screen? No override required by a member of faculty?
I mean, he could of just as easily created a virus that could escape and cause a pandemic. Or is that too preposterous?
@@zuzax1656 i say its highly likely... so ,if the ign/federations other members and federal organisation not pounces on this hard
more or lees making a second chapter about them halting the war they are ther own makers of , while also initiating a severe faculties cheek of all members of that species and society in its federal forces and more or lees re-locating all education of replacement personal for the near future to some other far more secure and ''regardless if you think someone is pranking you...DONT... go mad scientist in response!'' society...
i'd say for all the fun bits... it falls into the ''to stupid to survive society/civilization' category of scifi :/
since this lvl of stupidity even if weighed agenst the argument of ''but he was just starting to learn & civilian'' simply means it be a question of daily risks that someone wiped out ther whole ship crew or the planet they where on by doing something just like that... making a virus to cure someone ,but some fluke thing combined with the zero safty guards etc means it escapes and now all is dead XD
Or hungry... or conscious at all..
@@Exile_Sky aye.. i mean ,at the momment was just thinking of honest 'mistake' ways this civilization leaving tech like that with so few fail safes around could exterminate itself...
involve any kind of hostile exterior or interior polity with intelligent intentions actually planing it and well.. bye bye space docs XD
It kind of sounds like since he was making the same mistake again, he simply ended up killing the rest of his people.
Hmm sounds like he might have made a Chimera girl with reptile and humanoid dominant genes. Probably has a bit of wolf in that considering it called the babies pups.
Then the Chimeric species over time evolves and creates its own civilisation without knowing about their dark past
Also this species would mostly likely diversify and spawn multiple new species so you would have a entire planet of carbon based super life forms
@@inzyniertv9305 That sounds very possible. The real question is what will the human say/react when they see the "Carbon beasts" We could find the cute and feisty for we know.
@@sephirothphoton3540 "Wow its a puppy! I want one!"
@@inzyniertv9305 hahaha 😆
@@sephirothphoton3540 It sounds like a cute chimera
I've never heard a better argument for xenocide.
Stupid aliens think carbon based life is unnatural and believes they can make a better carbon based organism, and then they get themselves killed by their abomination and then conveniently forget said creation and then that abomination runs rampant on their world and because it shares human DNA they think it’s a human creation!
An abomination that can either self-fertilize or reproduce naturally released on their world overrunning everything and eating everything else they basically made Xenomorphs.
Genetic engineering is a terrible power to be unleashed and this alien child wielded it like a child fighting their fathers gun thinking it’s a toy.
They just destroyed their planisphere and then conveniently survived and forgot the whole incident.
PREACH!
Purge the Xenos!
So he created the "newborn" version of the Aliens Xenomorph from that horrible Resurrection movie.
More like a anthro chimera a mix of reptilian, mammal and humanoid traits
I'm going to DM the author for a sequel. Boli needs to get his due.
So, sapient alien blob creates The Creature from the Black Lagoon. Cool. Call in the Colonial Marines.
Nah let the chimera destroy the xenos
I would like to believe that after this story ended they made another abomination and the rest of them died on the ship.
One creature took out nearly the entire planet? How small is this world? Or is the creature as quick as the Flash, and could thereby cover massive ground quickly? Also, those little xenos seemed to be small but quite mobile, but how come much more didn't escape? And would such a creature mark out a territory for itself no more than a few miles squared? How would it have forced them off world unless the planet is little more than an asteroid?
So many questions.
10 cm is large to These aliens created the equivalent of a mouse which means They're barely bigger than our pinky toe
@@Rhino-Prime It was far bigger than a mouse. The story all but outright stated that the creature was about the height of a human, therefore MANY times larger than the blobs.
Also, their size is the point. If they are tiny, and ONE CREATURE made them abandon their homeworld, how small would their world need to be for that to happen? A boulder in space? The story implies that it is an actual planet instead of some random asteroid.
Also, it gives the impression that their world had a sizable population. And I don't care how small they are, if such a population was just 10,000 individuals, even a rabid honey badger couldn't end that many of them before they could evacuate at least half the population.
I am just pointing out how the story brings up so many questions in such a way as to circumvent suspension of disbelief.
@@derekstein6193 Yes but also in the story it says 10 cm is large to them And if this thing was able to render a planet uninhabitable within A-day how small is their planet
Then the Chimeric species over time evolves and creates its own civilisation without knowing about their dark past
Also this species would mostly likely diversify and spawn multiple new species so you would have a entire planet of carbon based super life forms
Uhm… yeah, the Lurvians kinda deserved to be removed from the universe’s gene pool if their Physicians in training are just allowed to do stuff like this without supervision. No camera footage, either? God damn…
Is there a part 2
Where is the part 2
This is a very strange retelling of Frankenstein.
Life uh finds a way...
"Your scientists were so preoccupied with whether or not they could that they didn't stop to think if they should."
Did this tiny ooze boy just invent dragons, forget about it, and propose to invent more to release on Earth?
I want a part 2, were the truth comes out..
They make another one send it to earth as a weapon.
Humans: awe aren't you a terrifying monsters im going to take you home and call you stitch.
Aliens:... did they just tame the monster who destroyed our world like it was a pet?
12a.m Prefect time to start listening to a hfy story!
Hopefully, one day someone will get back into that lab and check the machine's records of what happened.
I can see this becoming a series from this one story but as it is a short story that may not happen.
Great story, algorithm, hope you're well... Are you going to get back to posting on Spotify?
bit of a strange trip this time but a good read as always.
Not so clever to ignore warnings about multi-species gen-splicing. Hubris.... the thought he would be a great mind, while still being a Student. He thought he would know and understand everything... and within a Day, it destroyed his Civilization.
He created something without knowing the Specs of the lifeforms linked to the DNA-Samples, ignored the Warning about self-replication.
Not sure what Species he mixed, but the features mentioned didnt sound good. To me, it sounded like Samples from a Snake or reptile in general (scales), Frog (webbed fingers, gills), human of course, Feline (pointed ears),.... the Hooves im not sure, there are several animals with hooves.
Its a Greek Chimera made into sci fi reality
Ha ha... nobody questioned it? That a biologist in training was at the epicentre next to advanced biological equipment?
What fools...
For the algorithm and the narrator.
Well… at least humanity will have some worthwhile friends/relatives when we find them, our chimeric cousins who will likely love meeting us considering they have the same pack mentality as us
Sounds a lot like Fachi, the guy who helped with covid-19
More like the lab director in Wuhan working under Winnie the pooh's orders😉
I've been waiting a year for part 2.
For the Algorithm, for the Author(s), for the Disembodied Voice!
lol "hubris" normally ends in 💩 but this dude is stupidly funny 😆
This guy may just start apocalypse.
I was just thinking about full metal alchemist the law of equivalent exchange
btw the beast is the size of a Squirrel
Boli could have been a human politician
Your artwork on the thumbnail is from a magic card
Carbon-beast together strong
9:00 ............ He’s making catgirls, isn't he?
Liked that one hope it's carried on
For the Algorithm11!
*Has FMAB flashbacks*
They made a critter?
For the Algorithm the story and the voice
Good morning
It's night bro
from the description of the created beast it sounds like he created a Deep One from lovecraft lore
Sounds like a Greek Chimera
Worse.
Sounds like boli lives in a basement
Let's a go!
Dr. Frankenstein I presume?
man is an alchemist
Oh boy this student is gonna get hurt.
It there a part 2
For the algorithm
And *THIS* is one of the reasons you "don't play god".
"Ed-ward"
So.... space werewolves?
Space mermaid wolf gators.
A Chimeric spiecies that combined lizards, mammals and humanoid dna
cool
FTA!
Another oops!
Weird story
213th, 1 February 2023
Listen buddy, human transmutation is never a good idea
Wants to be the greatest doctor known dismisses stuff from his instructors as a flaw and a joke from his instructors...(because cant be true) sounds like an earth doctor... its all on your head that cant be true/happening.. yeah he will never be known as the greastest doctor if he disregards things.
dislike this one