We need more of this story to see how it ends with the people in the story it’s about a love story we’re is the love part of it they should win and have children and live happily ever after 4 or 5 children that would be nice
The plot is good. Writing style needs work and that the flow of the story sometimes doesn't make sense. Sometimes the story will take you back to a previous chapter, but then the story changes. What happened to the character. A lot of repetitive scenes and language. It seems the reader missed important scenes that obviously led up to the later chapters, but there's no consistent flow to the story.
Would love to hear a part 3 and with a little romance. Great story!
Great story
Please part 3!!!!
We need more of this story to see how it ends with the people in the story it’s about a love story we’re is the love part of it they should win and have children and live happily ever after 4 or 5 children that would be nice
The plot is good. Writing style needs work and that the flow of the story sometimes doesn't make sense. Sometimes the story will take you back to a previous chapter, but then the story changes. What happened to the character. A lot of repetitive scenes and language. It seems the reader missed important scenes that obviously led up to the later chapters, but there's no consistent flow to the story.
There is a lot of jumping and duplicate like the scout